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498 pages, Hardcover
First published June 1, 2008
鈥淎s for your use of language: Remember that two great masters of language, William Shakespeare and James Joyce, wrote sentences which were almost childlike when their subjects were most profound. 鈥淭o be or not to be?鈥� asks Shakespeare鈥檚 Hamlet. The longest word is three letters long. Joyce, when he was frisky, could put together a sentence as intricate and as glittering as a necklace for Cleopatra, but my favorite sentence in his short story 鈥淓veline鈥� is this one: 鈥淪he was tired.鈥� At that point in the story, no other words could break the heart of a reader as those three words do.He also taught:
Simplicity of language is not only reputable, but perhaps even sacred. The Bible opens with a sentence well within the writing skills of a lively fourteen-year-old: 鈥淚n the beginning God created the heaven and the earth.鈥� 鈥� Kurt Vonnegut
鈥淕ive your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To heck with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.鈥� 鈥� Kurt Vonnegutand
鈥淓very sentence must do one of two things鈥攔eveal character or advance the action.鈥�Harkaway strives in the opposite direction on all of these, valuing word count and theatrics over simplicity, character and plot. If you think Harkaway similar to KV, I doubt you've read Vonnegut or if you have you are long overdue for a refresher.