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Dragon's Trail
"I didn't come here to sell my soul. I came here to buy it back."
Once dubbed “The Deadliest Man Alive,� Jarrod Torrealday is a former Olympic saber hopeful and medieval weapons expert banned from competition for killing another fencer in a duel. He now scrapes by as a stuntman and technical consultant for low-budget fantasy films.
A young sorcerer from another world offers Jarrod the gig of a adviser to the war council for a magical realm teetering on the edge of collapse, with a foreign army massing just beyond its borders.
Swept into a treacherous and deadly world of intrigue and conspiracy, Jarrod soon learns that the enemy mastermind is also from Earth, and has laid the foundations for a new kind of war.
Seamlessly blending hard science with sword and sorcery, Dragon’s Trail is an international bestseller that’s being hailed as the pioneering work of a new the Fantasy Technothriller.
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"Malik’s debut novel sparkles with a fresh take on some traditional epic fantasy tropes . . . showcasing Jarrod as James Bond in tarnished armor. Detailed descriptions of equipment and tactics don’t distract from the plot; rather, they add a layer of depth and dimension that carries the tale to the next level. This is a highly enjoyable story for fans of self-aware epic fantasy."
- Publishers Weekly
"Fantasy with a twist . . . executed with verve and intelligence."
"[Dragon's Trail] features immersive detail and hold-your-breath battle scenes."
- The BookLife Prize
"A book to savor and soak in all the details."
-- San Francisco Review of Books
Once dubbed “The Deadliest Man Alive,� Jarrod Torrealday is a former Olympic saber hopeful and medieval weapons expert banned from competition for killing another fencer in a duel. He now scrapes by as a stuntman and technical consultant for low-budget fantasy films.
A young sorcerer from another world offers Jarrod the gig of a adviser to the war council for a magical realm teetering on the edge of collapse, with a foreign army massing just beyond its borders.
Swept into a treacherous and deadly world of intrigue and conspiracy, Jarrod soon learns that the enemy mastermind is also from Earth, and has laid the foundations for a new kind of war.
Seamlessly blending hard science with sword and sorcery, Dragon’s Trail is an international bestseller that’s being hailed as the pioneering work of a new the Fantasy Technothriller.
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"Malik’s debut novel sparkles with a fresh take on some traditional epic fantasy tropes . . . showcasing Jarrod as James Bond in tarnished armor. Detailed descriptions of equipment and tactics don’t distract from the plot; rather, they add a layer of depth and dimension that carries the tale to the next level. This is a highly enjoyable story for fans of self-aware epic fantasy."
- Publishers Weekly
"Fantasy with a twist . . . executed with verve and intelligence."
"[Dragon's Trail] features immersive detail and hold-your-breath battle scenes."
- The BookLife Prize
"A book to savor and soak in all the details."
-- San Francisco Review of Books
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First published October 1, 2016
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Joseph Malik
2Ìýbooks69ÌýfollowersIn addition to fiction, Joseph Malik writes and lectures on advanced intelligence theory and asymmetric warfare for the U.S. military. He has worked as a stuntman, a high-rise window washer, a computational linguist, a touring rock musician, and a soldier in the United States Special Operations Command.
He has been a longtime panelist and demonstrator at fantasy conventions, speaking as an expert in swordsmanship, hand to hand combat, and military tactics and strategy. He has also lectured on fantasy writing and independent publishing at schools and colleges across the Northwest.
His first novel, Dragon’s Trail, became a Kindle Top 100 Bestseller in four countries in 2017, reaching #1 in Epic Fantasy in the U.S., Australia, and Canada and #1 in Sword and Sorcery in the UK.
A veteran of Operation Enduring Freedom, Joseph Malik lives in the Pacific Northwest along with his wife and their two dogs. He serves in the U.S. Army Reserve and is a member of SFWA.
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He has been a longtime panelist and demonstrator at fantasy conventions, speaking as an expert in swordsmanship, hand to hand combat, and military tactics and strategy. He has also lectured on fantasy writing and independent publishing at schools and colleges across the Northwest.
His first novel, Dragon’s Trail, became a Kindle Top 100 Bestseller in four countries in 2017, reaching #1 in Epic Fantasy in the U.S., Australia, and Canada and #1 in Sword and Sorcery in the UK.
A veteran of Operation Enduring Freedom, Joseph Malik lives in the Pacific Northwest along with his wife and their two dogs. He serves in the U.S. Army Reserve and is a member of SFWA.
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August 27, 2017
This is one of my SPFBO reads and I have to say this was a mixed one for me. At first, I thought it was an urban fantasy as it focused on our modern-day world, but as the story went on it became clear that this was actually a portal fantasy with the main character being essentially stolen from Earth into another world (a classic medieval one) where he is asked to train the people of that world for an upcoming war.
This book had a lot of potential, but I think for me it just never clicked. The humour of the story is fairly crude and brash and works quite well in a S&S kind of way. We follow Jarrod Torrealday, a famed duelist who turns stunt-man after he's banned from entering more duels after killing one of his fellow contestants, and his adventures in the new world of wizards, magic and war that he's pulled into. It's not a bad concept, except that I found it pretty jarring every time modern-day technology was used or spoken about in the medieval world - for me it didn't 'go' right.
One other very large element of this book is the war, planning for the war, training for the war, and fighting in or before the war. Fighting is a large part of this entire book, and I have said many times before, I'm not a big fan of when fighting and military techniques/training/talk take over the plotline and story. For me personally, I could have easily cut more than half of the fighting and duelling and taunting of this book. It doesn't mean it was badly done, it's just my personal preference that I would rather see character-building and emotion and plot and world-building than fighting.
In the end, this came down to an idea that just didn't work as well as I hoped, and a bit too much fighting. It's by no means a bad read, it was fine, and I read it all, but for me it just never really took off and the fun humour was probably the best part for me. I would give it 2*s, it's an okay read, but it's not a personal favourite of mine. However, I have no doubt that the things I disliked about it will very much appeal to others, so I would recommend it if you do like the things I've said I don't :)
This book had a lot of potential, but I think for me it just never clicked. The humour of the story is fairly crude and brash and works quite well in a S&S kind of way. We follow Jarrod Torrealday, a famed duelist who turns stunt-man after he's banned from entering more duels after killing one of his fellow contestants, and his adventures in the new world of wizards, magic and war that he's pulled into. It's not a bad concept, except that I found it pretty jarring every time modern-day technology was used or spoken about in the medieval world - for me it didn't 'go' right.
One other very large element of this book is the war, planning for the war, training for the war, and fighting in or before the war. Fighting is a large part of this entire book, and I have said many times before, I'm not a big fan of when fighting and military techniques/training/talk take over the plotline and story. For me personally, I could have easily cut more than half of the fighting and duelling and taunting of this book. It doesn't mean it was badly done, it's just my personal preference that I would rather see character-building and emotion and plot and world-building than fighting.
In the end, this came down to an idea that just didn't work as well as I hoped, and a bit too much fighting. It's by no means a bad read, it was fine, and I read it all, but for me it just never really took off and the fun humour was probably the best part for me. I would give it 2*s, it's an okay read, but it's not a personal favourite of mine. However, I have no doubt that the things I disliked about it will very much appeal to others, so I would recommend it if you do like the things I've said I don't :)
September 30, 2016
A thoroughly entertaining read!
Once a near celebrity between his skills in fencing competitions and the starlet he was dating, Jarrod's involvement in a duel left another man dead and his life in ruins. So when a sorcerer from another world drags Jarrod home with him and offers him and his friend jobs in their war, it's a bit of a dream come true.
This other world is beautiful, with it's different moons, mythical creatures, and medieval type society (with remarkably better hygiene), and it seems Jarrod was made for it. His mastery of the sword and some accompanying martial arts quickly earns him respect in a world where fighting skills trump nearly everyone.
But he's not up against them.
The true opponent is a sorcerer in the opposing kingdom, whose life on earth gives him much the same advantages that Jarrod has. This is the first rumblings of war, and as such Jarrod may just lose his life in his attempt to redeem it.
This book was incredible. The detailing (from the equipment used to the action in the fight scenes) made the world and characters feel so real and complete, that you don't question anything for a moment.
The action is a slow build at first, and I found myself a little lost among the names of the other world's kingdoms and equipment descriptions, but it's not so lengthy as to slow the pace and there's a map at the front of the book if you need help following along.
The fight scenes are epic, and I felt myself getting sucked in every time, like a fan rooting for a sports team (it would make a great movie!). It was just like "Yaaaasssss! Get him!" And half of that was sparring, but the way Jarrod analyzed the opponent, identifying weaknesses and playing into them, you couldn't help but speed through the scenes with rapt attention. At one point he fights his way out of a situation (that scene REALLY sticks in your mind), but he's not invincible, either.
This is an adult book with a lot of heart, a little humor, epic action, and plenty of swords and sorcery. A fantastic first book, which hits all the right notes.
I received a free ARC of the book, but my opinion is honest and unbiased, especially since this is not my usual read. :)
Once a near celebrity between his skills in fencing competitions and the starlet he was dating, Jarrod's involvement in a duel left another man dead and his life in ruins. So when a sorcerer from another world drags Jarrod home with him and offers him and his friend jobs in their war, it's a bit of a dream come true.
This other world is beautiful, with it's different moons, mythical creatures, and medieval type society (with remarkably better hygiene), and it seems Jarrod was made for it. His mastery of the sword and some accompanying martial arts quickly earns him respect in a world where fighting skills trump nearly everyone.
But he's not up against them.
The true opponent is a sorcerer in the opposing kingdom, whose life on earth gives him much the same advantages that Jarrod has. This is the first rumblings of war, and as such Jarrod may just lose his life in his attempt to redeem it.
This book was incredible. The detailing (from the equipment used to the action in the fight scenes) made the world and characters feel so real and complete, that you don't question anything for a moment.
The action is a slow build at first, and I found myself a little lost among the names of the other world's kingdoms and equipment descriptions, but it's not so lengthy as to slow the pace and there's a map at the front of the book if you need help following along.
The fight scenes are epic, and I felt myself getting sucked in every time, like a fan rooting for a sports team (it would make a great movie!). It was just like "Yaaaasssss! Get him!" And half of that was sparring, but the way Jarrod analyzed the opponent, identifying weaknesses and playing into them, you couldn't help but speed through the scenes with rapt attention. At one point he fights his way out of a situation (that scene REALLY sticks in your mind), but he's not invincible, either.
This is an adult book with a lot of heart, a little humor, epic action, and plenty of swords and sorcery. A fantastic first book, which hits all the right notes.
I received a free ARC of the book, but my opinion is honest and unbiased, especially since this is not my usual read. :)
September 28, 2018
I came across Malik's work through one of his writer's columns which resonated with my experience, and grew very curious to see the results of Malik's efforts. I picked up Dragon's Trail at the soonest opportunity, and enjoyed it tremendously.
What to Expect
An epic fantasy story, wherein a modern-day protagonist is taken from Earth to another world to act as a champion. We are with him as he learns about the politics, culture, and conflicts of the world. Occasional shifts to other point-of-views are interspersed for good dramatic effect.
While the technology is roughly migration-era medieval,Ìýsociety is different than Earth's (more modern attitudes to women's roles). Magic is there in the background, and isn't of the spell-slinging variety. These, taken with the protagonist's modern vernacular, lead to a classic epic fantasy combined with interesting twists.
What I liked
The realistic depiction of historical arms and armour, as well as fighting techniques. The violence is sudden and extremely gory, with the effects and after-effects of the associated adrenaline rush making it all very realistic.
I liked the details in the world-building, the light-touch of magic, and the occasional in-character humour (the scene buying the horse made me chuckle). It's interesting to see how someone highly trained with some limited access to modern tools approaches a medieval society, and the resultant mayhem.
The intelligent language and evocative descriptions lead to an immersive and entertaining read. The concise storytelling style leads to a fast paced adventure. Malik strikes an excellent balance.
What to be aware of
There is an almost fanatical obsession with arms and armour, and those subjects are discussed in depth. For someone with martial arts experience and interest like me this is very engaging, but other readers may find this very much a "guy story". There isn't a great emotional journey for the protagonist (in fact, at time he can be a jerk), but rather this is a very plot-driven epic story of a hyper-competent swordsman leading war in some unconventional ways.
Summary
If you love HEMA and want to see some realistic sword fighting in your epic fantasy, this is very much the book for you. Malik achieved his goal, and this book is just as good as many traditionally published epic fantasies. Though the book is self-contained, I'm looking forward to getting my hands on the just-released sequel.
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, author of : A story of Togas, Daggers, and Magic - for lovers of Ancient Rome, Murder Mysteries, and Urban Fantasy.
What to Expect
An epic fantasy story, wherein a modern-day protagonist is taken from Earth to another world to act as a champion. We are with him as he learns about the politics, culture, and conflicts of the world. Occasional shifts to other point-of-views are interspersed for good dramatic effect.
While the technology is roughly migration-era medieval,Ìýsociety is different than Earth's (more modern attitudes to women's roles). Magic is there in the background, and isn't of the spell-slinging variety. These, taken with the protagonist's modern vernacular, lead to a classic epic fantasy combined with interesting twists.
What I liked
The realistic depiction of historical arms and armour, as well as fighting techniques. The violence is sudden and extremely gory, with the effects and after-effects of the associated adrenaline rush making it all very realistic.
I liked the details in the world-building, the light-touch of magic, and the occasional in-character humour (the scene buying the horse made me chuckle). It's interesting to see how someone highly trained with some limited access to modern tools approaches a medieval society, and the resultant mayhem.
The intelligent language and evocative descriptions lead to an immersive and entertaining read. The concise storytelling style leads to a fast paced adventure. Malik strikes an excellent balance.
What to be aware of
There is an almost fanatical obsession with arms and armour, and those subjects are discussed in depth. For someone with martial arts experience and interest like me this is very engaging, but other readers may find this very much a "guy story". There isn't a great emotional journey for the protagonist (in fact, at time he can be a jerk), but rather this is a very plot-driven epic story of a hyper-competent swordsman leading war in some unconventional ways.
Summary
If you love HEMA and want to see some realistic sword fighting in your epic fantasy, this is very much the book for you. Malik achieved his goal, and this book is just as good as many traditionally published epic fantasies. Though the book is self-contained, I'm looking forward to getting my hands on the just-released sequel.
--
, author of : A story of Togas, Daggers, and Magic - for lovers of Ancient Rome, Murder Mysteries, and Urban Fantasy.
May 19, 2018
Dear God, please have someone make this into a movie or a TV series immediately.
Imagine Deadpool running amok through Game of Thrones. Dragon’s Trail combines the “magical-other-world� plot of Magicians, the political machinations of Game of Thrones, and the scientific and technical elements of Jurassic Park, and then turns a horrifically yet hilariously violent Deadpool-style antihero loose in the middle of it. This might be the most fun fantasy novel I’ve ever read. Maybe not the funniest � that honor goes to Discworld � but certainly the most fun. I read it twice, back to back, on KU, and then ordered a paperback.
The research and technical details are delivered in the same way as Michael Crichton and Tom Clancy, as if they had tried their hand at epic fantasy. It's worth reading just for the educational value. At first I kept thinking "that's not right, that's not what this other book said," and then I'd look it up and wow, it's Right. Every. Single. Time. Not just combat, but Malik delves into metallurgy, castle construction, politics, economics, celestial mechanics, and horsemanship. The book takes brief asides out of the story to explain it all, very Crichton/Clancy. I finally just gave up checking his work and let him take me to school. When I got to the end, I had the urge to read it again immediately, applying all I'd learned. It makes me want to go back through all of my fantasy books with a red pen and send them back to the publishers along with a copy of Dragon's Trail. I want to forcefully hurl copies at a more than a few authors.
The worldbuilding and research is what makes the humor even more outrageous. It manages to be side-splittingly funny without being satire. While the author obviously takes this world very seriously, his hero, Jarrod, clearly doesn’t, and the disconnect is genius. Jarrod takes armor and swords made of modern steel into a medieval world, but forgets to take any fucks along with him. The result is like watching someone drive a Hummer through a shopping-mall-sized H.O. train set. And yes, it's every bit as fun as it sounds.
This is my one complaint: he wins almost all his fights. However, it's often hilarious, very Deadpool/Hancock, and every time he wins, he keeps getting himself into worse and worse trouble, because there's a whole Game of Thrones-style political thriller going on around him that he finally gets involved in. What's really remarkable is that the world around him adapts to him as he goes through his own character arc, which is a plot device that I don't remember seeing in fantasy, at least not in other-worlds fantasy. I read a lot of LitRPG, where the hero just tries to adapt and survive the adventure. This book, however, has the world trying every bit as hard to adapt and survive it's encounter with the hero. As fun as this book is, it has surprising depth. It's worth reading several times.
I found Dragon’s Trail by accident on KU as an also-bought while browsing LitRPG. This is not a LitRPG book at all, and I don’t know why Amazon is advertising it as such. (Imagine my shock as Amazon screws yet another promising indie author.) Amazon’s legendary ineptitude may be the sole reason that it isn’t a bestseller. I can't recommend this book enough.
Imagine Deadpool running amok through Game of Thrones. Dragon’s Trail combines the “magical-other-world� plot of Magicians, the political machinations of Game of Thrones, and the scientific and technical elements of Jurassic Park, and then turns a horrifically yet hilariously violent Deadpool-style antihero loose in the middle of it. This might be the most fun fantasy novel I’ve ever read. Maybe not the funniest � that honor goes to Discworld � but certainly the most fun. I read it twice, back to back, on KU, and then ordered a paperback.
The research and technical details are delivered in the same way as Michael Crichton and Tom Clancy, as if they had tried their hand at epic fantasy. It's worth reading just for the educational value. At first I kept thinking "that's not right, that's not what this other book said," and then I'd look it up and wow, it's Right. Every. Single. Time. Not just combat, but Malik delves into metallurgy, castle construction, politics, economics, celestial mechanics, and horsemanship. The book takes brief asides out of the story to explain it all, very Crichton/Clancy. I finally just gave up checking his work and let him take me to school. When I got to the end, I had the urge to read it again immediately, applying all I'd learned. It makes me want to go back through all of my fantasy books with a red pen and send them back to the publishers along with a copy of Dragon's Trail. I want to forcefully hurl copies at a more than a few authors.
The worldbuilding and research is what makes the humor even more outrageous. It manages to be side-splittingly funny without being satire. While the author obviously takes this world very seriously, his hero, Jarrod, clearly doesn’t, and the disconnect is genius. Jarrod takes armor and swords made of modern steel into a medieval world, but forgets to take any fucks along with him. The result is like watching someone drive a Hummer through a shopping-mall-sized H.O. train set. And yes, it's every bit as fun as it sounds.
This is my one complaint: he wins almost all his fights. However, it's often hilarious, very Deadpool/Hancock, and every time he wins, he keeps getting himself into worse and worse trouble, because there's a whole Game of Thrones-style political thriller going on around him that he finally gets involved in. What's really remarkable is that the world around him adapts to him as he goes through his own character arc, which is a plot device that I don't remember seeing in fantasy, at least not in other-worlds fantasy. I read a lot of LitRPG, where the hero just tries to adapt and survive the adventure. This book, however, has the world trying every bit as hard to adapt and survive it's encounter with the hero. As fun as this book is, it has surprising depth. It's worth reading several times.
I found Dragon’s Trail by accident on KU as an also-bought while browsing LitRPG. This is not a LitRPG book at all, and I don’t know why Amazon is advertising it as such. (Imagine my shock as Amazon screws yet another promising indie author.) Amazon’s legendary ineptitude may be the sole reason that it isn’t a bestseller. I can't recommend this book enough.
January 25, 2018
A parallel world story more gritty than the usual fare that is very well written and entertaining throughout. Compared to most fantasy authors, Joseph Malik is very informed on fighting and medieval history; and it shows. While it doesn't reach the lengths of Tom Clancy-esque detailing, some readers might find themselves skimming at times as weaponry and armor is described with intricate detail. While I thought it was a little excessive, I also found it refreshing after reading many books where it was obvious that the author knew next to nothing about fighting or history and, after a few google searches, foolishly tried to use terminology as if they did.
The characters are overpowered, but in a very realistic way that's justified by their backgrounds. So while the trope is present, to me it avoided the common pitfalls and maintained a good level of tension and suspense throughout. The main character definitely takes his share of lumps along with his successes.
I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys fantasy, medieval historical fiction, and parallel world stories. I would say it's a must-read for anyone who enjoys their fantasy with a dose of realism and action scenes that are written by someone who knows how to do the damn thing.
The characters are overpowered, but in a very realistic way that's justified by their backgrounds. So while the trope is present, to me it avoided the common pitfalls and maintained a good level of tension and suspense throughout. The main character definitely takes his share of lumps along with his successes.
I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys fantasy, medieval historical fiction, and parallel world stories. I would say it's a must-read for anyone who enjoys their fantasy with a dose of realism and action scenes that are written by someone who knows how to do the damn thing.
June 26, 2020
I enjoyed reading this book, a first time reading of this authors, strong writing skills. While not something I would ordinarily choose to read, as this book combines two timelines, a present world, and an ability to travel to another world and time. Joseph Malik does an incredibly creative and impressive job of conveying those conditions and abilities with impressive ease. I was immediately captured and enthralled by the story. The author succinctly wrote the story with impressive ease of establishing the worldbuilding, providing logical explanations, likeable characters and blending these elements into an imaginative and captivating story. I am a fan of this trilogy and will read more. Thank you Joseph Malik, impressive work indeed!
May 29, 2020
Ever wonder wandered around a RenFaire, or hang out with the Society of Creative Anachronism and wonder what you'd do if somebody offered you (or trapped you into) a jaunt into the midst of the real thing? In this novel, first of The Outworlders series, that's exactly what happens to Jarrod Torealday. He's a master swordsman who was forced to kill another fencer in a duel, and then barred from competition worldwide. He's also an expert on mixed martial arts as well as medieval weapons and tactics. Which comes in handy when he and his buddy, Carter Sorenson (another swordsman, but 7 feet tall!) are recruited to take a year-long sabbatical in Gatesrealm and help their king and his knights figure out how to deal with a sorceror hidden on Earth as a child and brought up knowing a lot of things the people of his home world don't. If they can't figure out how to defeat him and the armies of Gavria backing him, Gatesrealm is doomed. But the pair know their gear and their weapons, they're willing to work hard, and they're smart enough to think outside earthly boxes as well as Gatesrealm's. My favorite exchange between the two comes late in the tale: "I can't believe you brought a gun." "I can't believe you didn't." Well-written, fast-paced battle scenes, excellent descriptions of weapons and their various pluses and minuses.
October 13, 2020
I won this book in a goodreads drawing.
A fencing master/martial artist/stunt man/adrenaline junkie is summoned to a high fantasy world, where he is to defend the world against a wizard, who was originally from the fantasy world, but lived on our earth for a while, then went back, and took over a province, once ruled by his family.
Now he's scheming to take over the world.
Our hero bumbles around, killing the occasional mook, then the bad guy kidnaps the princess. Bad mistake.
Fairly good example of the genre, self-aware, but not to its detriment.
A fencing master/martial artist/stunt man/adrenaline junkie is summoned to a high fantasy world, where he is to defend the world against a wizard, who was originally from the fantasy world, but lived on our earth for a while, then went back, and took over a province, once ruled by his family.
Now he's scheming to take over the world.
Our hero bumbles around, killing the occasional mook, then the bad guy kidnaps the princess. Bad mistake.
Fairly good example of the genre, self-aware, but not to its detriment.
November 7, 2018
Realism in fantasy
I enjoyed this book a lot and found the gritty realism refreshing. I would even say i learned a little about medieval arms and armor along the way. I will definitely be reading farther in this series.
I enjoyed this book a lot and found the gritty realism refreshing. I would even say i learned a little about medieval arms and armor along the way. I will definitely be reading farther in this series.
June 24, 2017
So good I read it twice
I'll be the first to admit that I'm not your average reader. I've been around long enough to develop some unique preferences in fiction. But if,like me, you grew up with Star Trek and Lord of the Rings, this might be a book you would enjoy. It's got a flawed wise-cracking disgraced ex-Olympian and ex-stuntman hero - with issues - leaping into a world far, far away and leading a rag tag group of companions in an epic battle of good versus evil. What's not to like?
I'll be the first to admit that I'm not your average reader. I've been around long enough to develop some unique preferences in fiction. But if,like me, you grew up with Star Trek and Lord of the Rings, this might be a book you would enjoy. It's got a flawed wise-cracking disgraced ex-Olympian and ex-stuntman hero - with issues - leaping into a world far, far away and leading a rag tag group of companions in an epic battle of good versus evil. What's not to like?
September 5, 2016
Tense, intelligent, fresh, and very, very funny. There are shudder-up-the-spine moments and stand-up-and-cheer moments, all delivered with dialogue and descriptions so smooth and polished it’s as if they were turned on a lathe. The world he describes is so convincing that I expect we'll eventually see a subReddit devoted to finding it.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. My honest review is that five pages in I suspected that this might the work of an established author writing fantasy under a pseudonym, and by the scene where the protagonist is sleepless after the first duel I felt certain of it.
Dragon’s Trail is scary, violent, and laugh-out-loud funny, yet also philosophical and thought provoking, as the author seizes on the cross-worlds concept to spotlight the moral issues facing the modern warrior. As a veteran, he could have rammed this idea down our throats, but instead he frames it so deftly and artfully that it ends up making George R.R. Martin's “gray morality� look like it's done with a clown hammer. This promises to be an incredible series, a stand-up-and-cheer alternative for those (like me) who enjoy the tension and the vibrant world of “A Song of Ice and Fire� but find the constant murder grinding and noisy.
My one nit to pick is that he does a lot of technical exposition, although it’s very well done and it all gets worked in as part of the story so it never once lags. You get the sense that he’s explaining it as simply and painlessly as possible. It also helps that the author knows his stuff. This book had me googling local fencing schools about halfway through, and I’m taking my first lesson next week. :) Also, I’d like to see him do more with the female characters because they are awesome but underutilized.
I'm torn between 4 and 5 stars. I would give it 4 stars for the exposition and clearly being a guys' fantasy book (full of fights, casual sex and sword-nerdery) but 5 stars because it's a beautifully-written book with tremendous depth in spite of all that. I still find it hard to believe that this is a first effort by an indie author. It’s what I’d expect from a major literary figure who was starting a fantasy series. There are parts that I bookmarked because I knew I'd want to read them again. 4.5 stars, rounding up to 5. I’m holding my breath for the sequel.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. My honest review is that five pages in I suspected that this might the work of an established author writing fantasy under a pseudonym, and by the scene where the protagonist is sleepless after the first duel I felt certain of it.
Dragon’s Trail is scary, violent, and laugh-out-loud funny, yet also philosophical and thought provoking, as the author seizes on the cross-worlds concept to spotlight the moral issues facing the modern warrior. As a veteran, he could have rammed this idea down our throats, but instead he frames it so deftly and artfully that it ends up making George R.R. Martin's “gray morality� look like it's done with a clown hammer. This promises to be an incredible series, a stand-up-and-cheer alternative for those (like me) who enjoy the tension and the vibrant world of “A Song of Ice and Fire� but find the constant murder grinding and noisy.
My one nit to pick is that he does a lot of technical exposition, although it’s very well done and it all gets worked in as part of the story so it never once lags. You get the sense that he’s explaining it as simply and painlessly as possible. It also helps that the author knows his stuff. This book had me googling local fencing schools about halfway through, and I’m taking my first lesson next week. :) Also, I’d like to see him do more with the female characters because they are awesome but underutilized.
I'm torn between 4 and 5 stars. I would give it 4 stars for the exposition and clearly being a guys' fantasy book (full of fights, casual sex and sword-nerdery) but 5 stars because it's a beautifully-written book with tremendous depth in spite of all that. I still find it hard to believe that this is a first effort by an indie author. It’s what I’d expect from a major literary figure who was starting a fantasy series. There are parts that I bookmarked because I knew I'd want to read them again. 4.5 stars, rounding up to 5. I’m holding my breath for the sequel.
October 7, 2016
Fantastical realism on an unprecedented scale. Hard fantasy of the first order. A masterful work.
Full disclosure: I met Joseph Malik a few years ago at a fantasy convention where he was demonstrating various combat techniques and speaking as an expert on military strategy. He is a brilliant and articulate speaker, with a seemingly endless reservoir of knowledge about the finer points of making war. I have also seen him shoulder-throw a man in full armor while wearing a jacket and tie.
When I learned from a mutual friend that Mr. Malik had written a fantasy novel, I hoped for that rare fantasy novel that gets it’s fight scenes correct. What I got was so much more: an epic-scale fantasy written in breathtaking detail by a master swordsman and brilliant military strategist.
It’s not just the fighting. The details, and the realism are startling. (Sword frogs! Di Grassi thrusts! Riveted maille!) I can’t imagine the amount of research Mr. Malik put into this novel. If you enjoy realism in your fantasy, you’ve been waiting for this book.
Just one example: one of the characters carries a greatsword with the swordbelt on one shoulder, like a purse. I own a greatsword and when I carry mine, I rest it on my shoulder like a spear. It is impossible to draw a large sword from behind your back (Conan-style), the way movies and books always show. But, hanging the belt on one shoulder, the way Mr. Malik writes it, a greatsword carries comfortably and very practically, and very easily-accessible. Here’s the thing: I OWN this sword and this has never occurred to me. That moment when an author knows more about your own sword than you do.
With hundreds if not thousands of details like this, the world turns like a jeweled watch around the characters. The story is an outrageously-witty, new take on the parallel-universes trope, masterfully-told by a man deeply-knowledgable, and obviously a man passionate about his work. This could only have been a leviathan effort and obviously a lifelong labour of love. I am glad that someone finally wrote this book, and I am very glad that it was Mr. Malik. Bravissimo, maestro.
Full disclosure: I met Joseph Malik a few years ago at a fantasy convention where he was demonstrating various combat techniques and speaking as an expert on military strategy. He is a brilliant and articulate speaker, with a seemingly endless reservoir of knowledge about the finer points of making war. I have also seen him shoulder-throw a man in full armor while wearing a jacket and tie.
When I learned from a mutual friend that Mr. Malik had written a fantasy novel, I hoped for that rare fantasy novel that gets it’s fight scenes correct. What I got was so much more: an epic-scale fantasy written in breathtaking detail by a master swordsman and brilliant military strategist.
It’s not just the fighting. The details, and the realism are startling. (Sword frogs! Di Grassi thrusts! Riveted maille!) I can’t imagine the amount of research Mr. Malik put into this novel. If you enjoy realism in your fantasy, you’ve been waiting for this book.
Just one example: one of the characters carries a greatsword with the swordbelt on one shoulder, like a purse. I own a greatsword and when I carry mine, I rest it on my shoulder like a spear. It is impossible to draw a large sword from behind your back (Conan-style), the way movies and books always show. But, hanging the belt on one shoulder, the way Mr. Malik writes it, a greatsword carries comfortably and very practically, and very easily-accessible. Here’s the thing: I OWN this sword and this has never occurred to me. That moment when an author knows more about your own sword than you do.
With hundreds if not thousands of details like this, the world turns like a jeweled watch around the characters. The story is an outrageously-witty, new take on the parallel-universes trope, masterfully-told by a man deeply-knowledgable, and obviously a man passionate about his work. This could only have been a leviathan effort and obviously a lifelong labour of love. I am glad that someone finally wrote this book, and I am very glad that it was Mr. Malik. Bravissimo, maestro.
June 4, 2017
The new king of worldbuilding.
This blows away every “hard fantasy� I've read. It feels completely real, even though there’s a good dose of magic.
I want to say that again: it feels completely real.
I approached this one with skepticism after reading a comment on a forum about readers contacting this author asking if the book was actually real. I’ve got to say, though, I get it, now. At some points, you do start to wonder if the author has been there. It's unsettling. The details are faultless. The worldbuilding makes perfect sense. The characters are people you want to meet and have a beer with.
It's a brilliant twist on the old chestnut, a boy from Earth goes to a magical world and becomes a wizard. The twist is, he's grown up to be the Big Bad, and our hero is brought in from Earth to advise a neighboring kingdom against him. There’s a taut political thriller under all the swordfights and snark, and the pacing is gorgeous. The writing is skillful and beautiful.
There are no editing errors in this book. It’s written in omni, which is super-old-school, but that gives it a unique charm. The story is told by a fictional narrator, instead of through the POV of the characters like we see in modern fantasy. The narrator injects his personality into the story at points, and he's hilarious, (“his horse, however, had apparently decided that this whole thing was bullshit, because he was long gone.�) All in all, it feels like someone is telling you the story in person instead of feeling like you're watching TV through a book. It's a shame that authors don't do this anymore. (Omni is indeed an elegant weapon, for a more civilized age.)
The key is that the worldbuilding details are told to the reader by the narrator instead of told from one character to another ("as you know, Bob . . .") so I can see readers thinking that this is being told from the author's personal experience. This is fantasy, masterfully done. It reads beautifully and goes by much too fast. This will be a binge-worthy series.
I went in a skeptic, and came out a convert. My favorite new author. Book Two, please.
This blows away every “hard fantasy� I've read. It feels completely real, even though there’s a good dose of magic.
I want to say that again: it feels completely real.
I approached this one with skepticism after reading a comment on a forum about readers contacting this author asking if the book was actually real. I’ve got to say, though, I get it, now. At some points, you do start to wonder if the author has been there. It's unsettling. The details are faultless. The worldbuilding makes perfect sense. The characters are people you want to meet and have a beer with.
It's a brilliant twist on the old chestnut, a boy from Earth goes to a magical world and becomes a wizard. The twist is, he's grown up to be the Big Bad, and our hero is brought in from Earth to advise a neighboring kingdom against him. There’s a taut political thriller under all the swordfights and snark, and the pacing is gorgeous. The writing is skillful and beautiful.
There are no editing errors in this book. It’s written in omni, which is super-old-school, but that gives it a unique charm. The story is told by a fictional narrator, instead of through the POV of the characters like we see in modern fantasy. The narrator injects his personality into the story at points, and he's hilarious, (“his horse, however, had apparently decided that this whole thing was bullshit, because he was long gone.�) All in all, it feels like someone is telling you the story in person instead of feeling like you're watching TV through a book. It's a shame that authors don't do this anymore. (Omni is indeed an elegant weapon, for a more civilized age.)
The key is that the worldbuilding details are told to the reader by the narrator instead of told from one character to another ("as you know, Bob . . .") so I can see readers thinking that this is being told from the author's personal experience. This is fantasy, masterfully done. It reads beautifully and goes by much too fast. This will be a binge-worthy series.
I went in a skeptic, and came out a convert. My favorite new author. Book Two, please.
October 26, 2017
First published on my blog: .
Dragon's Trail is book 1 of The Outworlders series by from .
Scratch beneath the surface of any hardcore LARPer/SCAdian/fantasy/dragon bookworm and you'll likely find someone who deep down really wants to believe that it's possible to hop worlds into a dragon/magic/fantasy realm. Frankly most of us would be up for being a peasant in one of those stories and I bet you most of us would allow ourselves a 5 minute freak out and then say 'I KNEW IT!!'
This book is a with a world class fencer/martial artist who's working off a bad load of karma after a duel leaves another competitor dead. He's been drifting from job to job, picking up consultant gigs in the movies, training other martial artists and trying to find his long lost self respect.
Written in 3rd person omniscient, it has such a classic vibe that the entire book almost resonates with pure epic fantasy. The background info and worldbuilding is unparalleled in my experience and I have never seen any novel (letalone a first novel) with such exquisite detail.
This book is intelligently written with complex and believable characters. The dialogue is smooth and the pacing and plotting are beautifully paced and well rendered. I honestly can't find one single quibble and in 472 pages there wasn't one negative note from me. That's not easy for an (almost) 500 page book. I was not yanked out of the story even once.
I really really loved this book and impatiently await the next book(s). Write like the wind, Mr. Malik!
5 stars. Classic fantasy, perfectly executed. A true delight to read!
Disclosure: I received an ARC at no cost from the author/publisher.
Dragon's Trail is book 1 of The Outworlders series by from .
Scratch beneath the surface of any hardcore LARPer/SCAdian/fantasy/dragon bookworm and you'll likely find someone who deep down really wants to believe that it's possible to hop worlds into a dragon/magic/fantasy realm. Frankly most of us would be up for being a peasant in one of those stories and I bet you most of us would allow ourselves a 5 minute freak out and then say 'I KNEW IT!!'
This book is a with a world class fencer/martial artist who's working off a bad load of karma after a duel leaves another competitor dead. He's been drifting from job to job, picking up consultant gigs in the movies, training other martial artists and trying to find his long lost self respect.
Written in 3rd person omniscient, it has such a classic vibe that the entire book almost resonates with pure epic fantasy. The background info and worldbuilding is unparalleled in my experience and I have never seen any novel (letalone a first novel) with such exquisite detail.
This book is intelligently written with complex and believable characters. The dialogue is smooth and the pacing and plotting are beautifully paced and well rendered. I honestly can't find one single quibble and in 472 pages there wasn't one negative note from me. That's not easy for an (almost) 500 page book. I was not yanked out of the story even once.
I really really loved this book and impatiently await the next book(s). Write like the wind, Mr. Malik!
5 stars. Classic fantasy, perfectly executed. A true delight to read!
Disclosure: I received an ARC at no cost from the author/publisher.
October 20, 2016
Dragon's Trail is such a great fantasy novel! I really enjoyed it! It was captivating from the first page and what really pulled me in was the language used in the book. It really made me feel in that medieval time period. I do think though, that there was a lot of stuff happening at once in the beginning, which was a tad overwhelming.
Jarrod is a wonderful main character, he is courageous and strong with some humor to him which really lightens up the story. There is so many well-developed characters, it's really nice to see that! Dragon's Trail is also filled with so many awesome mythical creatures!
Anyone who wants a short fantasy-thriller-adventure book should definitely check this one out! Overall I would give Dragon's Trail five stars!
Jarrod is a wonderful main character, he is courageous and strong with some humor to him which really lightens up the story. There is so many well-developed characters, it's really nice to see that! Dragon's Trail is also filled with so many awesome mythical creatures!
Anyone who wants a short fantasy-thriller-adventure book should definitely check this one out! Overall I would give Dragon's Trail five stars!
January 25, 2019
Received from Oxblood books and Netgalley for honest read and review.
The premise looked really good for this, but I got a bit confused with going back and forth all the time between world's and different characters.
I could not finish this one,not for me
The premise looked really good for this, but I got a bit confused with going back and forth all the time between world's and different characters.
I could not finish this one,not for me
July 18, 2021
Portal fantasy at its finest -
May 19, 2018
Originally published at .
Joseph Malik's debut novel, Dragon's Trail, is the first novel of The Outworlders fantasy series. It's a captivating independently published novel that takes readers on an exciting journey into another world.
When I began to read this novel, I wasn't quite sure what to expect from it, because Joseph Malik was an unknown debut author to me, but I soon found myself enjoying what I was reading. In my opinion, this novel is surprisingly compelling, because it's refreshingly different from other stories that tell of people who travel to fantasy worlds and become heroes.
Dragon's Trail is a combination of different elements ranging from epic fantasy and science fiction to sword and sorcery. It can be classified as hard and realistic portal fantasy, because it features gritty realism. I think it's good to point out that this novel is not children's fantasy fiction, because it has adult language, adult situations and depictions of violence that are suitable only for mature readers.
Dragon's Trail tells of Jarrod Torrealday who is taken to another world by a sorcerer called Crius Lotavaugus. The wizard has also taken Carter Sorenson there. At first Jarrod doesn't believe what he hears from Carter and thinks that they're in a reality show, but then he realises that everything about their situation is true. Carter tells Jarrod that a war is about to begin in the world and there are people who need both of them to participate in it. Soon Jarrod meets Crius and learns that he has to counter a threat caused by another Earthling who is a great sorcerer.
The story gradually grows from this interesting premise to an enjoyable tale of action, politics, magic and war.
Jarrod Torrealday and Ulo Sabbaghian are intriguing characters. Joseph Malik has created both of them well and writes realistically about their lives, because he fluently advances the story by writing about their deeds and tells of what happens to them. Jarrod was once dubbed "The Deadliest Man Alive", but his life has changed. Although he now has a bit different kind of life, he's still a great and talented swordsman. He has his own strengths and weaknesses that manifest themselves in his character as he prepares himself for war. Ulo Sabbaghian is a powerful sorcerer who was banished to Earth before birth. His father's magic runs strong in his veins. He has used his gift and abilities to achieve many things, including power and stature, after returning to his original homeland.
One of the best things about this novel is that the author has paid attention to several details and has researched many things. His attention to details throughout the story is remarkable. The fight scenes are exceptionally good and detailed. I admit that I'm not an expert on elements related to combat, swordsplay and horsemanship, but the author's way of writing about these things feels realistic and his expertise in them is evident in the story.
The worldbuilding is impressive, because the author has created a vast fantasy world with its own countries, races, creatures and magic. The various areas and places are described surprisingly fluently as the story begins to unfold. The fantasy world is intriguingly beautiful and vibrant place with quite a lot of realism.
The fusion of medieval and modern elements works perfectly in this novel. The author has created an interesting concept and uses it to his advantage by writing about how magic and technology meet each other in a secondary world. The political elements are also handled well and it's interesting to read about them, because things advance at a steady pace.
The author writes intriguingly about behavioural and cultural differences between Earth and the fantasy world. Things concerning sex, sexuality, contraception and violence are handled in a fluent way. The gritty and violent elements spice up the story in a cool way, because the author doesn't shy away from realism.
This novel has bits of humour throughout the story that lighten the story and increase its entertainment values. The protagonist's comments and other characters' remarks are often quite amusing and made me chuckle out loud. It's great that the humour works well, because it's one of the reasons why the story is enjoyable.
There's something about this novel that slightly reminds me of Tom Clancy, John Grisham and Michael Crichton. It's kind of like an exotic hybrid of Clancy, Grisham and Crichton. It's distinctly different from the works written by these authors, but it also has a few things in common with them, because the author builds up atmosphere in a way that echoes the atmosphere featured in them.
Although I enjoyed Dragon's Trail and found it entertaining, I have to mention that it has a few flaws and imperfections regarding character development and the action-packed storyline, because I would've liked to see more in-depth character development and a bit less action. These flaws are, however, easy to overlook due to the author's enthusiastic storytelling and effortless worldbuilding.
I give this novel strong four stars on the scale from one to five stars, because it's good fantasy entertainment with a focus on fast-paced and action-packed storytelling. I look forward to reading the sequel, because it'll be fun to see what happens next. The story has all the makings of a future classic, so I'm excited to see where the author takes it next.
My final words are:
Joseph Malik's Dragon's Trail is delightfully fast-paced and intriguing fantasy entertainment for adults who are looking for something exciting to read. It's easy to like the story, because it's entertaining and moves swiftly forward. This novel is great and immersive fun for adult readers who enjoy gritty and action-filled fantasy stories.
Joseph Malik's debut novel, Dragon's Trail, is the first novel of The Outworlders fantasy series. It's a captivating independently published novel that takes readers on an exciting journey into another world.
When I began to read this novel, I wasn't quite sure what to expect from it, because Joseph Malik was an unknown debut author to me, but I soon found myself enjoying what I was reading. In my opinion, this novel is surprisingly compelling, because it's refreshingly different from other stories that tell of people who travel to fantasy worlds and become heroes.
Dragon's Trail is a combination of different elements ranging from epic fantasy and science fiction to sword and sorcery. It can be classified as hard and realistic portal fantasy, because it features gritty realism. I think it's good to point out that this novel is not children's fantasy fiction, because it has adult language, adult situations and depictions of violence that are suitable only for mature readers.
Dragon's Trail tells of Jarrod Torrealday who is taken to another world by a sorcerer called Crius Lotavaugus. The wizard has also taken Carter Sorenson there. At first Jarrod doesn't believe what he hears from Carter and thinks that they're in a reality show, but then he realises that everything about their situation is true. Carter tells Jarrod that a war is about to begin in the world and there are people who need both of them to participate in it. Soon Jarrod meets Crius and learns that he has to counter a threat caused by another Earthling who is a great sorcerer.
The story gradually grows from this interesting premise to an enjoyable tale of action, politics, magic and war.
Jarrod Torrealday and Ulo Sabbaghian are intriguing characters. Joseph Malik has created both of them well and writes realistically about their lives, because he fluently advances the story by writing about their deeds and tells of what happens to them. Jarrod was once dubbed "The Deadliest Man Alive", but his life has changed. Although he now has a bit different kind of life, he's still a great and talented swordsman. He has his own strengths and weaknesses that manifest themselves in his character as he prepares himself for war. Ulo Sabbaghian is a powerful sorcerer who was banished to Earth before birth. His father's magic runs strong in his veins. He has used his gift and abilities to achieve many things, including power and stature, after returning to his original homeland.
One of the best things about this novel is that the author has paid attention to several details and has researched many things. His attention to details throughout the story is remarkable. The fight scenes are exceptionally good and detailed. I admit that I'm not an expert on elements related to combat, swordsplay and horsemanship, but the author's way of writing about these things feels realistic and his expertise in them is evident in the story.
The worldbuilding is impressive, because the author has created a vast fantasy world with its own countries, races, creatures and magic. The various areas and places are described surprisingly fluently as the story begins to unfold. The fantasy world is intriguingly beautiful and vibrant place with quite a lot of realism.
The fusion of medieval and modern elements works perfectly in this novel. The author has created an interesting concept and uses it to his advantage by writing about how magic and technology meet each other in a secondary world. The political elements are also handled well and it's interesting to read about them, because things advance at a steady pace.
The author writes intriguingly about behavioural and cultural differences between Earth and the fantasy world. Things concerning sex, sexuality, contraception and violence are handled in a fluent way. The gritty and violent elements spice up the story in a cool way, because the author doesn't shy away from realism.
This novel has bits of humour throughout the story that lighten the story and increase its entertainment values. The protagonist's comments and other characters' remarks are often quite amusing and made me chuckle out loud. It's great that the humour works well, because it's one of the reasons why the story is enjoyable.
There's something about this novel that slightly reminds me of Tom Clancy, John Grisham and Michael Crichton. It's kind of like an exotic hybrid of Clancy, Grisham and Crichton. It's distinctly different from the works written by these authors, but it also has a few things in common with them, because the author builds up atmosphere in a way that echoes the atmosphere featured in them.
Although I enjoyed Dragon's Trail and found it entertaining, I have to mention that it has a few flaws and imperfections regarding character development and the action-packed storyline, because I would've liked to see more in-depth character development and a bit less action. These flaws are, however, easy to overlook due to the author's enthusiastic storytelling and effortless worldbuilding.
I give this novel strong four stars on the scale from one to five stars, because it's good fantasy entertainment with a focus on fast-paced and action-packed storytelling. I look forward to reading the sequel, because it'll be fun to see what happens next. The story has all the makings of a future classic, so I'm excited to see where the author takes it next.
My final words are:
Joseph Malik's Dragon's Trail is delightfully fast-paced and intriguing fantasy entertainment for adults who are looking for something exciting to read. It's easy to like the story, because it's entertaining and moves swiftly forward. This novel is great and immersive fun for adult readers who enjoy gritty and action-filled fantasy stories.
July 11, 2017
When I read the synopsis: a sorcerer from another world hiring a hero from ours, I knew this was a book I had to read. I'm a fan of portal stories. There's something appealing about being able to step through into another world and travel back and forth at will. My own novels are portal stories, although very different from this one. This book reminded me a bit of Michael Sullivan's novels, in that the characters are humorous and likable, the dialogue is witty, and the situations the characters find themselves in are action-packed and entertaining. The author's knowledge about military tactics and weaponry, particularly medieval weaponry, added a lot to the story. There isn't a dull moment in this book, and despite having it's share of bloodshed and violence, which I typically avoid, I really enjoyed the story and look forward to the sequel.
June 24, 2018
Honestly, I’m torn between a 4 and 5 star here, call it a 4.5, LOL. It’s strength is in some ways its weakness... badassery. It’s a bit like watching John Wick, I find myself enjoying those movies even as I roll my eyes at parts of its over-the-top nature. And yet, like the Wick flicks, that’s exactly what they’re intended to be, so I try not to judge against the author succeeding in writing the story as intended. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn’t, but by the end I was kind of used to the “god of war� language. The technical elements are a lot of fun if you are into such things, like myself. And the Indiana Jones moment towards the end was nice, it was pretty much to the point of not wanting to see another fight anyhow.
The modern language of the portal fantasy was also something to get used to... I’m not typically a portal kind of reader.
The modern language of the portal fantasy was also something to get used to... I’m not typically a portal kind of reader.
April 17, 2018
Fantastic! The perfect meld of Medieval and 21st century technology, fighting, and politics. Have you ever wondered what would happen if a modern knight became a medieval knight? Well you need to read this book.
The fighting scenes were vivid with the perfect attention to detail.
The pace is a bit slow-going at first but gradually builds and picks up speed with some unexpected twists and turns.
I absolutely love books that have the small details that paint a picture for you but without going crazy and describing the details of every freaking leaf on a tree. The book walks this fine line the whole time and delivers the story from a unique vantage point.
The fighting scenes were vivid with the perfect attention to detail.
The pace is a bit slow-going at first but gradually builds and picks up speed with some unexpected twists and turns.
I absolutely love books that have the small details that paint a picture for you but without going crazy and describing the details of every freaking leaf on a tree. The book walks this fine line the whole time and delivers the story from a unique vantage point.
June 19, 2017
A rare find indeed
It's been a long time since I have enjoyed an epic fantasy as much as this one. Malik has a great knowledge of not just medieval combat but of the weapons, the metallurgy, the armor, and as far as I can tell, personal combat experience to back it up.
He kept me reading without a break until it was done. That doesn't happen often either. I really hope he's going to be around for a long while because he shows every sign of becoming one of the best. I think I'm going to go read it again. Gotta make sure it really was that good, right? Go read it. Great fun!
It's been a long time since I have enjoyed an epic fantasy as much as this one. Malik has a great knowledge of not just medieval combat but of the weapons, the metallurgy, the armor, and as far as I can tell, personal combat experience to back it up.
He kept me reading without a break until it was done. That doesn't happen often either. I really hope he's going to be around for a long while because he shows every sign of becoming one of the best. I think I'm going to go read it again. Gotta make sure it really was that good, right? Go read it. Great fun!
June 9, 2020
An interesting merge of the current world to a medieval world via a magician created portal. It is fast paced page turner that I wanted to keep reading. A bit of a military techno thriller meets sword and sorcery (well more sword than sorcery). A little struggle with keeping some of the various characters and locations straight as there are may along with the political slant that runs through it. Overall a great book in a little bit of a hybrid genre. Look forward to seeing where he takes this world and can he build it out further and keep the stories unique that is does not become sword fight after sword fight.
February 17, 2018
This book does what it sets out to do, and it does it nearly flawlessly. The understanding of sword and armor work gives the writing an authenticity that cannot be faked. Is this a wholly new idea? Absolutely not, but as a "man out of time" fantasy work, it is close to perfect. I look forward to the next effort, as the pacing and detail was right on.
April 17, 2018
This was a Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ e-book giveaway. When you read a lot of fantasy it can become stale and formulaic, but not this story. Fun, fresh, totally unexpected. I’ve heard it being compared to “A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur’s Courtâ€� and that’s close. Engaging characters, great world building. Will read more from this author.
December 28, 2019
Well that was fun. I have thoughts about the book, but they will wait until the morning. But here are the short point I want to make
- great world building
- great concept
- fun and fast passed
- to many detailed fight scene for my tastes
- not enough women who was not there as rewards or arm candy
- glorifying of violence
- protagonist who is good at everything and a dude bro
Somehow I still enjoyed it.
- great world building
- great concept
- fun and fast passed
- to many detailed fight scene for my tastes
- not enough women who was not there as rewards or arm candy
- glorifying of violence
- protagonist who is good at everything and a dude bro
Somehow I still enjoyed it.
June 3, 2017
This book really surprised me. It was litRPG/not-litRPG, or maybe soft litRPG, but either way the storyline was engaging and original. There were a few typos and editing issues, but not enough to detract from my enjoyment of the book in any meaningful way. I could not put the book down and I am eagerly awaiting the next in the series. I highly recommend this book.
July 30, 2017
Taking names
Wow this story not only kicks a@@ it takes names too. Weapons, armor, horses, dogs and battles. Heroes, heroine, princesses, elves and kings. Bloody brawls and battles. Brass knuckles, rapier and bastard swords too. If you like action you'll love this story.
Wow this story not only kicks a@@ it takes names too. Weapons, armor, horses, dogs and battles. Heroes, heroine, princesses, elves and kings. Bloody brawls and battles. Brass knuckles, rapier and bastard swords too. If you like action you'll love this story.
July 1, 2017
A really great book. Adult themes, magic, elves, great warriors, humor. Can't wait for the next one. Perhaps more fighting gear descriptions that I had never heard of, but pretty damn cool overall.
March 16, 2018
Fantasy or sci-fi?
This story combines 2 of my favorite genres . The surprise twist is interesting and some times funny but good to the end !
This story combines 2 of my favorite genres . The surprise twist is interesting and some times funny but good to the end !
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