Beatrix Ardora is trapped by her ex-boyfriend in a dungeon full of horny monsters and cursed with magical fertility! Any of the monsters can knock Beatrix up if she isn't careful and she has 13 levels to go before she can escape! Can YOU help her reach freedom?
In this humorous and steamy interactive erotic adventure, you guide Beatrix on her journey through the dungeon created by her wizard ex-boyfriend. She is young, beautiful, sassy, and she knows how to use a sword, but she's stuck on the first level of a dungeon and facing goblins, orcs, and talking beetles. The monsters are stuck in the dungeon too and they all know the only way out is to find one of Zimon's ex-girlfriends and knock her up.
Can Beatrix escape this fate? Can she take revenge on her creepy ex-boyfriend? She has a long way to go to reach the top of the dungeon! Each novella-length book in the Fertile in My Ex-Boyfriend's Dungeon series includes three interactive monster encounters. Will Beatrix attack? Will she guard? Will she try to bargain with the monsters? Or will she just offer them her body without a fight?
This was SO silly. It most definitely needs a bit of the red pen and some better descriptions of ladybits and anatomy (WTF was up with some of these?!) but the bones of it were fun and weird and gross so this is not me complaining, lol.
Mildly entertaining. I picked this up because it sounded like a fun naughty pick your own adventure book. Unfortunately I wasn’t too impressed. Spicy, but I felt like I was reading mid level 90’s porn with monsters and the choices to make it to the next level were extremely easy once you got the hang of the book (literally the answer is basically the same for every monster you encounter to prevent the book from ending to soon). I don’t see me continuing with the series.
I question all the questionable life choices I’ve made to end up reading this book, but I have to admit it was really funny. It’s like a trashy WoW fanfic, and I’ve never read an interactive book before, so this was quite the experience.
But this book also remembered me, that I really suck at (video) games, so I had to try several times to not end pregnant in the ex-boyfriend’s dungeon. I’ll definitely return for the other levels.
What the heck is wrong with me? Why did I enjoy this so much that I read it completely in one day and instantly downloaded the next level/book? This is pure entertainment and sinfully good. I have no shame reading this and I absolutely need to now read all of these. Guilty pleasure of books! I don’t even care, TikTok needs to blow these up now, everyone needs these.
When I was a kid I LOVED choose your own adventure books, and had stacks and stacks of them. When I saw this on TikTok, I immediately went to download it, and I honestly can't decide how I'm feeling.
The entire story could have used another round or two of editing. Not only was the character description continuity off (eye colors changing, overuse of descriptors, etc), but there were quite a few times where the point of view changed nd that got distracting.
I added a star because I can only imagine how difficult it is to write a book with so many different outcomes and have them all make sense in the end. The author built a interesting world, where humans and "monsters" live together.
I wouldn't re-read this book, but I will be reading the next installment to see how things turn out.
I was obsessed with “choose your own adventure� books when I was in elementary school � who knew this would be my return to that kind of storytelling. 😅 Honestly, it was a lot of fun and exactly what I expected from the title.
The book definitely needed someone to edit more closely. For example, one page she has green eyes, then blue, then green again. Also, how many times are we calling them “creamy mounds?� Honestly. I went with a 3 because I can only imagine the work it takes to make an interactive novel like this. Quick and easy read though.
Rating: 3 Stars Format: eBook Source: KU Prompt: Mood read Rec: Jenn from the Book Refuge
� Choose your own adventure � Erotic monster romance � Novella
All three of these stars fully go toward the creativity of this book. I hadn’t read a choose your own adventure book since I was 10 and reading Goosebumps, so this much more mature version was actually kind of fun and offered so much entertainment.
Die gelangweilte Menschenfrau Beatrix lernt den Zauberer Zimon kennen. Er verführt sie und Beatrix möchte ihn auf seinen Abenteuern begleiten. Doch anstatt ein die große weite Welt zu bereisen, entführt Zimon sie und sperrt sie in seinem Dungeon ein. Den hat er selbst erschaffen und viele verschiedene Monster/Wesen darin eingeschlossen. Diese können nur daraus entkommen, wenn sie es schaffen eine der vielen Frauen, die Zimon in den Dungeon 'wirft' zu schwängern. Was genau er davon hat, habe ich nicht so ganz verstanden, aber naja, es ist eben auch eher PWP als wirklich eine Story mit Handlung. Die Frauen müssen versuchen allen Monstern zu widerstehen und sich durch den Dungeon zu kämpfen, ob mit Waffen, Redekunst, Geschick oder was auch immer. Sollten sie das 13 Level des Dungeons erreichen, sind sie frei. Dieses Ebook umfasst das Kennenlernen von Beatrix und Zimon und Beatrix' Versuchen den Monstern auf dem ersten Level des Dungeons zu entkommen. Man bekommt meist an die 6 Wahlmöglichkeiten, die verschiedene passive als auch aktive Reaktionen darstellen und man kann auch gleich aufgeben und Beatrix gibt sich dem Monster sofort hin. Das geht auch meist auf zwei verschiedene Art und Weisen. Einige Pfade enthalten dann noch einmal eine Entscheidungsmöglichkeit, die dann allerdings weniger Optionen enthält. Dann kommt man meist schon zum jeweiligen Ende, wenn Beatrix verloren hat oder man kann den Pfad weitergehen. Interessant fand ich, dass man bei den negativen Ausgängen auch immer noch ein richtiges Ende zu Lesen bekam. Also Zimon taucht nochmal auf und man sieht wie Beatrix mit dem jeweiligen Monste(n) zusammenlebt und teilweise eben auch die 'Kinder'. Das war schon sehr kreativ und ausgefallen in diesem ersten Band und ich bin gespannt, was da noch so kommen soll. Man kann auch immer wieder zurück zur Auswahl der Entscheidung hüpfen und schauen, was bei einem anderen Pfad herausgekommen wäre. Das fand ich interessant und bei einigen habe ich da auch geguckt, was passiert wäre, wenn ich etwas anderes gemacht hätte. Wirklich vorhersehen kann man es eh nicht was passiert und man ist so manches mal wirklich überrascht. Ich fand das nicht nur spannend und unterhaltsam, sondern auch witzig. Mich hat es sehr gut unterhalten, auch wenn es natürlich einfach nur flach war. Ich werde definitiv weiterlesen.
Ummm� so, despite some issues I had with this, it’s still one of the better erotic CYOA stories I’ve read. The author actually made an effort with the “story� (not something I’ve encountered so far with these types of books) and I appreciated that immensely. I also enjoyed some of the dialogue for the monsters/creatures (especially the goblins). It actually made me LOL.
This would have been a 4-star read for me if not for the prolific editing/proofing issues and the horribly laughable, cringy descriptions that completely destroyed the sex scenes for me. I just couldn’t get into it or find it hot. It was such a turn-off. :( (Eg., dewy folds, fluttering channel, pretty pink rosebud, aching cove, creamy mounds).
The descriptions, word choices, characterizations, and basically the entire tone of the writing was very reminiscent of some erotica I’ve read that’s written by men. It did make me wonder if the author is a man writing under a female pseudonym, or a woman writing primarily for a het male audience. (Just an FYI, in case that’s not your jam).
Not entirely sure if I’ll continue with this series or not� I may try one more with monsters/creatures that are more to my liking, and see if that would possibly make the sex scenes a bit less cringy for me.
«My brother tells me a girl isn’t supposed to learn how to swing a sword. My brother is also an idiot.»
Rating: 3 ⭐️ Genre: Paranormal Fantasy Romance Erotica Format: Ebook Pages: 213 Spice: 2.5 🌶� POV: First POV S/S: Fertile in My Ex-Boyfriend’s Dungeon #1 Check trigger warnings for any book
This is a cool concept and was well done. The «choose your own adventure» was enjoyable.
The fact that even when you finished an adventure you could easily go back and try all the different choices was nice.
Plot-wise, it was fun. Zimon is a weirdo for this whole thing but oh well. «Slightly small cock or not, when am I going to get a chance with a guy like him again?» Girl that was your first red flag, if he was meant for you he wouldn’t be sporting a smaller than average.
Might try the second book, who knows?
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I LOVE choose your own adventure/interactive books. Needed some silly smut & came across this gem! Love anime tropes dungeon or not and this totally has those vibes Its not for the faint of heart since it is monster erotica but if you were looking to dip your toes in this would be a good all rounder to check out since you choose and it has various monsters each book or level. Plus the overarching plot of revenge against the ex bf is a fun gold at the end of the rainbow sorta deal. Kinda reminds me of a more light funny version of desires/sins of the flesh series which is a sorta brothel with a different sin in each room that said chick has to conquer less adventure and more like dark smut in that series though. Anyhoo its my once in a blue moon taboo/monster erotica trash romance binge atm, so regular RH and what not will be back soon.
This was such a fun read! I especially loved the interactive aspect of the book and how you can choose the adventures the main lead goes through and you can do it again and again to your heart’s desire!
I had too much fun with this because I went through every playthrough and tried every option. The monster erotica was written so perfectly and the characters and smut really made it much more interesting! It’s best not to take the plot seriously and just enjoy the silliness and cheesines of it. I went in for the smut and not the plot so I was not disappointed!
Overall, if you love monster romance and erotica and you’re looking for something extra entertaining to read, then I highly recommend this!
So far, I'm having a lot of fun! Zimon traps her in his dungeon for trying to follow him. He curses her to be fertile and basically becomes horny to any monster in the dungeon. She will instantly fall in love once they do it! Zimon will release her when she mates and gets pregnant to whatever monster she actually screws...
So it's actually a quick read because I already made it out of the first level, and I did mess up a couple of times with the Orc..
But bro.. there's a beetlekin? A beetle monster which you can screw and it vibrates hahah! This book is just overall fun!
TWs~ There was SA, Pregnancy, and DubCon, and Sex magic.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
DNF at ~25% Idk what I was expecting but it wasn’t this. I’m usually oblivious to ways in which a book needs more editing but even to me it stood out. Lots of typos, grammar mistakes, reparative phrases, and extremely cringe dialogue and sex scenes. The sex was also too weird for me (I can enjoy romance with nonhuman love interests but not when the narrative is describing how vile and disgusting they are the whole time). Through in the fact that some of the outcomes involve dubcon/noncon, and I decided to DNF at my first “loss.� I love the concept of a romance chose your own adventure but the execution was a flop for me.
I really didn’t like most of this. Some of the words used were just absolutely terrible. Like I could have lived forever without reading “hot seam� “dewy fold� or “manly goo.� “Aching cove� and “plucked your pretty pink rosebud� was also just yuck. Also why was the fact that she said no and asked him to stop with the anal just skimmed over. Like that was absolutely sexual assault. It was so over the top which made it semi entertaining but I definitely won’t be continuing on.
TW: sexual assault, he literally traps her in a dungeon, magic that makes her want to have sex with the monsters which can be dubious consent
Katee Robert told me to read this and I did. It was very interesting. It's basically a choose your own adventure but for adults and with monster fucking. The idea is to try to escape the dungeon without breeding with any of the monsters. Fun, quick read. I pretty such messed up every monster encounter and had to start over but it was fun. The book could definitely use some editing and the story's definitely a little on the weird side but it was still fun and I will probably read the next one!