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Dirty Martini Running Club #1
Faking Ms. Right
“When I kissed you last night, I wasn’t pretending.�
Everly Dalton is a walking, talking, martini-drinking dating disaster. Forget kissing frogs. She can’t even get past the first date. But at work, she’s a badass—the longest-running assistant billionaire Shepherd Calloway has ever had. Her coworkers wonder how she handles the big bad wolf—and never gets bit.
Shepherd Calloway isn’t interested in being anyone’s sugar daddy. Tired of women who only want him for his money, he swears off dating, determined to focus on running his empire. Until his gold-digging ex hits him where it hurts, putting him in a difficult position.
His solution—to have Everly pose as his live-in girlfriend—is obviously crazy. But the timing is uncanny. It just so happens Everly needs a favor from her boss—a big and awkward one—and this could ensure everyone gets what they want.
Besides, Everly can totally survive a few months of faux romance.
Except there’s a problem. Shepherd is supposed to be a single-minded, unemotional robot boss. Not an actual human with a heart and morning wood. Between the awkward bed-sharing and tingly fake dates, lines are blurring. And as Everly gets to know the real Shepherd, she discovers there’s more to the man behind the bank account.
And faking it gets all too real.
Faking Ms. Right is a hot, STAND-ALONE romantic comedy.
Everly Dalton is a walking, talking, martini-drinking dating disaster. Forget kissing frogs. She can’t even get past the first date. But at work, she’s a badass—the longest-running assistant billionaire Shepherd Calloway has ever had. Her coworkers wonder how she handles the big bad wolf—and never gets bit.
Shepherd Calloway isn’t interested in being anyone’s sugar daddy. Tired of women who only want him for his money, he swears off dating, determined to focus on running his empire. Until his gold-digging ex hits him where it hurts, putting him in a difficult position.
His solution—to have Everly pose as his live-in girlfriend—is obviously crazy. But the timing is uncanny. It just so happens Everly needs a favor from her boss—a big and awkward one—and this could ensure everyone gets what they want.
Besides, Everly can totally survive a few months of faux romance.
Except there’s a problem. Shepherd is supposed to be a single-minded, unemotional robot boss. Not an actual human with a heart and morning wood. Between the awkward bed-sharing and tingly fake dates, lines are blurring. And as Everly gets to know the real Shepherd, she discovers there’s more to the man behind the bank account.
And faking it gets all too real.
Faking Ms. Right is a hot, STAND-ALONE romantic comedy.
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First published May 23, 2019
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February 28, 2021
I hate friends-to-lovers books because I hate to see them date numerous other people while secretly having a crush on each other so I try to avoid friends-to-lovers books.
Why am I saying this? Well, this book is not a friends-to-lovers book but it has a similar problem. It is between a businessman and his assistant. I would've loved it if their banter / attraction / relationship started as soon as they met and started to work together but it DIDN’T.
Everly has been Shepherd’s assistant for 3 years.
She has been working for him for 3 years and NO attraction.
Nope, nothing.
He doesn’t even look at her, or answer when she says good morning or good evening etc. She doesn’t care about his bad manners and cold attitude because she knows she is a good assistant and earns good money. Therefore, she doesn’t expect more from him. She certainly doesn’t have a crush on him.
So no feelings, no chemistry, no attraction for 3 years�
It is not even 3 months� it's 3 years.
Both of them date with so many other people!
Everly has lots and lots of bad dates in those 3 years. They all turn out to be as*holes.
Shepherd goes through women of the same kind � beautiful face, rocking body and little soul. Nearly all of them are after his money. These relationships usually last for 2 or 3 months. Everly makes the dinner reservations etc. She even buys the parting gifts when he decides to break up with them nicely. It is usually a gift such as a trip to an exotic place.
One day everything changes�
Ha ha, like I would believe it now. What were you? Blind for 3 years?
And what happens is just plain dumb.
Here is the chain of dumb and dumber events:
The last woman Shepherd breaks up with, Svetlana, comes back from the exotic trip (that was a gift of Shepherd) with his father. They met there and started a relationship! His father doesn’t know that the woman in his arm is his son’s ex. She is kinda getting back at Shephard, it's a mixture of revenge and jealousy plan.
Shepherd wants to tell his father about this evil woman but his brother tells him not to as their father is too sentimental and he will feel bad if he learns he is being used.
WTF? What the actual f*ck??!!
So let her use him instead???? All because he is too sentimental?! Is this a joke?
As a solution to this problem of not being able to tell his father about Svetlana, Shepherd decides that his assistant Everly may fake as his new girlfriend so that they can make Svetlana see that he is not available any more.
How dumb is that?
Wait, wait, it gets even more stupid�
They learn soon that his father has cancer and is also suffering from financial loss. He needs a home and Shepherd gives him a room in his big mansion of a house. But of course, daddy’s new girlfriend Svetlana will also come!!!
How awesome is that, right??
And this smart adult businessman is too stupid to think of a better solution, like coming clean with his father etc., but he lets that snake of a woman reenter his house. Shephard’s idiotic solution is to ask Everly to move in with him and continue to pretend to be his girlfriend so that Svetlana gets rid of trying to win him back. And she agrees.
Yeah, dumb (Shepherd) and dumber (Everly), such a good match!
Wait wait, it gets even more unbelievably stupid...
Everly’s sister Annie has a wife and they want to have a baby but obviously they need a man for that and they have chosen Shepherd as the donor!!??
No, of course, Shephard has no idea about it, why would you think that? He even doesn’t know Annie and her wife yet.
Annie and her wife have seen his pictures and they think that such a handsome and smart man will have quality DNA.
Huh, smart, my as*! He doesn’t even know how to get rid of a woman with wicked intentions. Do you really want a child as dumb as him?
Whatever... And Everly thinks that if she agrees to be his fake girlfriend, she will have a leverage and she will in the end ask this favor from him. Yeah, she really considers this option. Oh God, how stupid is that?
What will she say?
"Dear Shepherd, I slept with you in your bed and pretended to be your girlfriend for all these months although it was not pretending anymore after a while but whatever, now I need your sperms. No, not for me but for my sister. You have lots of them. So what? Can't you give me a small cup of them for God's sake? You already owe me big."
Something along those lines...??
Yeah, good luck with that!
I mean this is not something you can just ask for. Like asking a cup of flour or a glass of milk from a neighbor!
And you know, the donor contract she prepares and keeps is like the gun you see at the beginning of a movie... someone will use that gun, or in this case, someone will see this contract in an inconvenient time. Huh, how original!
Well, maybe a stupid plot twist was what that stupid story needed, what do I know?
Of course, while faking, they start to get attracted to each other, bla bla�
Some kissing & sex scenes that made me feel nothing...
Also I must say that I hate it when the first sex between a couple is full of spanking and "Have I been bad? Oh so bad..." kinda things. So not my cuppa!
I hate stupid romance! I hate everything stupid. Whatever it is, it should make sense to me. Nothing in this book was the actions of a person with average intellect and reason, let alone that of a smart person.
The actual plot never worked me. I never believe in falling for a person after 3 years of ignoring them.
And Everly doesn’t turn into a princess from a frog or something. It is such a simple change. Shepherd asks her to come and fake as his girlfriend at a party and also asks her to wear something sexy. She comes in a sexy red dress and his mouth is wide open with shock.
Why? A little make up and a red dress and the woman Shepherd thinks as only “nice to look at� turns into a "goddess" and he is suddenly awestruck??? Oh come on!
And Everly sees him in casual clothes in a club where he plays in a band and literally jumps at him, saying he is too sexy.
It's always Everly who kisses him first or who jumps at him first.
Shephard later says, “I kept wondering how I’d worked with you for years, but I’d never really seen you. But I know exactly why. I didn’t let myself see you. Not because you worked for me, although that was part of it. But mostly because deep down, I knew if I did, I’d fall for you. And that fucking terrified me.�
Arghhh� What a stupid excuse for 3 years of ignorance!
Everything about this story is so very frustrating and annoying.
And what is sad for me is that this book comes from the writer of His Heart (5 stars) and Remembering Ivy (4 stars). Such a shame�
SAFETY:
If you still want to try this book and wonder about its safety, they do not sleep with anyone else after the fake dating starts. I don't know how much it counts after f*cking other people for so many years and not seeing each other as a potential lover.
WRITING:
As I said earlier, this book's writer has written one of my all-times favorite books, His Heart. Its plot was unique and its writing was epic.
Here in this book, the writing is mediocre with dual point of view and the plot line is - as I said numerous times - is plain dumb.
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Why am I saying this? Well, this book is not a friends-to-lovers book but it has a similar problem. It is between a businessman and his assistant. I would've loved it if their banter / attraction / relationship started as soon as they met and started to work together but it DIDN’T.
Everly has been Shepherd’s assistant for 3 years.
She has been working for him for 3 years and NO attraction.
Nope, nothing.
He doesn’t even look at her, or answer when she says good morning or good evening etc. She doesn’t care about his bad manners and cold attitude because she knows she is a good assistant and earns good money. Therefore, she doesn’t expect more from him. She certainly doesn’t have a crush on him.
So no feelings, no chemistry, no attraction for 3 years�
It is not even 3 months� it's 3 years.
Both of them date with so many other people!
Everly has lots and lots of bad dates in those 3 years. They all turn out to be as*holes.
Shepherd goes through women of the same kind � beautiful face, rocking body and little soul. Nearly all of them are after his money. These relationships usually last for 2 or 3 months. Everly makes the dinner reservations etc. She even buys the parting gifts when he decides to break up with them nicely. It is usually a gift such as a trip to an exotic place.
One day everything changes�
Ha ha, like I would believe it now. What were you? Blind for 3 years?
And what happens is just plain dumb.
Here is the chain of dumb and dumber events:
The last woman Shepherd breaks up with, Svetlana, comes back from the exotic trip (that was a gift of Shepherd) with his father. They met there and started a relationship! His father doesn’t know that the woman in his arm is his son’s ex. She is kinda getting back at Shephard, it's a mixture of revenge and jealousy plan.
Shepherd wants to tell his father about this evil woman but his brother tells him not to as their father is too sentimental and he will feel bad if he learns he is being used.
WTF? What the actual f*ck??!!
So let her use him instead???? All because he is too sentimental?! Is this a joke?
As a solution to this problem of not being able to tell his father about Svetlana, Shepherd decides that his assistant Everly may fake as his new girlfriend so that they can make Svetlana see that he is not available any more.
How dumb is that?
Wait, wait, it gets even more stupid�
They learn soon that his father has cancer and is also suffering from financial loss. He needs a home and Shepherd gives him a room in his big mansion of a house. But of course, daddy’s new girlfriend Svetlana will also come!!!
How awesome is that, right??
And this smart adult businessman is too stupid to think of a better solution, like coming clean with his father etc., but he lets that snake of a woman reenter his house. Shephard’s idiotic solution is to ask Everly to move in with him and continue to pretend to be his girlfriend so that Svetlana gets rid of trying to win him back. And she agrees.
Yeah, dumb (Shepherd) and dumber (Everly), such a good match!
Wait wait, it gets even more unbelievably stupid...
Everly’s sister Annie has a wife and they want to have a baby but obviously they need a man for that and they have chosen Shepherd as the donor!!??
No, of course, Shephard has no idea about it, why would you think that? He even doesn’t know Annie and her wife yet.
Annie and her wife have seen his pictures and they think that such a handsome and smart man will have quality DNA.
Huh, smart, my as*! He doesn’t even know how to get rid of a woman with wicked intentions. Do you really want a child as dumb as him?
Whatever... And Everly thinks that if she agrees to be his fake girlfriend, she will have a leverage and she will in the end ask this favor from him. Yeah, she really considers this option. Oh God, how stupid is that?
What will she say?
"Dear Shepherd, I slept with you in your bed and pretended to be your girlfriend for all these months although it was not pretending anymore after a while but whatever, now I need your sperms. No, not for me but for my sister. You have lots of them. So what? Can't you give me a small cup of them for God's sake? You already owe me big."
Something along those lines...??
Yeah, good luck with that!
I mean this is not something you can just ask for. Like asking a cup of flour or a glass of milk from a neighbor!
And you know, the donor contract she prepares and keeps is like the gun you see at the beginning of a movie... someone will use that gun, or in this case, someone will see this contract in an inconvenient time. Huh, how original!
Well, maybe a stupid plot twist was what that stupid story needed, what do I know?
Of course, while faking, they start to get attracted to each other, bla bla�
Some kissing & sex scenes that made me feel nothing...
Also I must say that I hate it when the first sex between a couple is full of spanking and "Have I been bad? Oh so bad..." kinda things. So not my cuppa!
I hate stupid romance! I hate everything stupid. Whatever it is, it should make sense to me. Nothing in this book was the actions of a person with average intellect and reason, let alone that of a smart person.
The actual plot never worked me. I never believe in falling for a person after 3 years of ignoring them.
And Everly doesn’t turn into a princess from a frog or something. It is such a simple change. Shepherd asks her to come and fake as his girlfriend at a party and also asks her to wear something sexy. She comes in a sexy red dress and his mouth is wide open with shock.
Why? A little make up and a red dress and the woman Shepherd thinks as only “nice to look at� turns into a "goddess" and he is suddenly awestruck??? Oh come on!
And Everly sees him in casual clothes in a club where he plays in a band and literally jumps at him, saying he is too sexy.
It's always Everly who kisses him first or who jumps at him first.
Shephard later says, “I kept wondering how I’d worked with you for years, but I’d never really seen you. But I know exactly why. I didn’t let myself see you. Not because you worked for me, although that was part of it. But mostly because deep down, I knew if I did, I’d fall for you. And that fucking terrified me.�
Arghhh� What a stupid excuse for 3 years of ignorance!
Everything about this story is so very frustrating and annoying.
And what is sad for me is that this book comes from the writer of His Heart (5 stars) and Remembering Ivy (4 stars). Such a shame�
SAFETY:
If you still want to try this book and wonder about its safety, they do not sleep with anyone else after the fake dating starts. I don't know how much it counts after f*cking other people for so many years and not seeing each other as a potential lover.
WRITING:
As I said earlier, this book's writer has written one of my all-times favorite books, His Heart. Its plot was unique and its writing was epic.
Here in this book, the writing is mediocre with dual point of view and the plot line is - as I said numerous times - is plain dumb.
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April 7, 2021
***4 STARS***
This was an absolutely adorable romantic comedy and it had my favorite trope boss/employee billionaire.
Everly works as Shepherd’s PA. Through a series of odd and convoluted occurrences Everly finds herself the fake fiancée of her boss and she even moves in with him for appearance sake. Shepherd is the typical grumpy, non smiling, serious CEO that just doesn’t do relationships and has never thought of his PA in a romantic way.
This was a very well written story. It did drag in a few areas but the story line was excellently delivered. Has a little slow burn elements but overall a solid read.
This was an absolutely adorable romantic comedy and it had my favorite trope boss/employee billionaire.
Everly works as Shepherd’s PA. Through a series of odd and convoluted occurrences Everly finds herself the fake fiancée of her boss and she even moves in with him for appearance sake. Shepherd is the typical grumpy, non smiling, serious CEO that just doesn’t do relationships and has never thought of his PA in a romantic way.
This was a very well written story. It did drag in a few areas but the story line was excellently delivered. Has a little slow burn elements but overall a solid read.
December 7, 2024
╰� 3.75 stars!
this book was good!! it’s probably one of the best employee-employer trope i’ve read! the story wasn’t stretched to the point where there were so many unnecessary scenes, i think the pacing and the mentions of other characters were just right
౨ৎ everly. a woman who tends to be underestimated because she’s high-spirited? what’s wrong with being capable and always chooses to see the silver lining in gloomy situations? she’s the sunshine, and i definitely think that every grumpy person deserves to have their own everly. she’s independent, trustworthy, loving, and definitely knows her drinks. she’s just overall the personification of sunshine in sunshine x grumpy trope.
౨ৎ shepherd. don’t you just love a man who shows his affection only for his woman? if you do, you’ll definitely love this man. i loved how he was portrayed, not toxic to the point where i’d wish for them to not end up together. he knows himself enough, and isn’t afraid to tell her about his feelings despite having trust issues with woman. his grumpiness was just the right amount because he wasn’t an asshole, which was goodi’m tired of seeing men who makes it being an asshole their personality seeing him having issues but not projecting it to his employees was nice, and just by simply keeping everything professional is nice.
overall, i don’t think there’s really anything “new� that i can mention with this book, but it was still definitely worth the read for me!
this book was good!! it’s probably one of the best employee-employer trope i’ve read! the story wasn’t stretched to the point where there were so many unnecessary scenes, i think the pacing and the mentions of other characters were just right
౨ৎ everly. a woman who tends to be underestimated because she’s high-spirited? what’s wrong with being capable and always chooses to see the silver lining in gloomy situations? she’s the sunshine, and i definitely think that every grumpy person deserves to have their own everly. she’s independent, trustworthy, loving, and definitely knows her drinks. she’s just overall the personification of sunshine in sunshine x grumpy trope.
౨ৎ shepherd. don’t you just love a man who shows his affection only for his woman? if you do, you’ll definitely love this man. i loved how he was portrayed, not toxic to the point where i’d wish for them to not end up together. he knows himself enough, and isn’t afraid to tell her about his feelings despite having trust issues with woman. his grumpiness was just the right amount because he wasn’t an asshole, which was good
overall, i don’t think there’s really anything “new� that i can mention with this book, but it was still definitely worth the read for me!
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May 20, 2019
Faking Ms. Right is a stand alone fun romance by Claire Kingsley. Claire has done it again with this book. I couldn’t have loved it more. I’ve decided that no matter what Claire writes, I know in advance it’s going to be amazing. She wows me every time. This was so different than anything I’ve read of hers so far and it was perfection.
Everly Dalton has the worst dating luck ever. She has had a horrible string of first dates. If you haven’t read the prequel to this book yet, Everly Dalton’s Dating Disasters, you need to. It takes you through six of her first date nightmares. Everly has decided to take a step back and give dating a rest for awhile. She loves spending time with her two best friends, Nora and Hazel. She is an executive assistant to one of Seattle’s richest men, and loves her job. Everly is one of those people that it just seems like the sun is shining down on her wherever she goes. Everyone she meets is like her best friend.
“I liked making people happy. It was my catnip. Getting someone grouchy to smile? Best high ever.�
Shepherd Calloway was Everly’s boss. Everly thought of him as an unemotional robot of a man. He could make a man shake with fear with just a look. He never showed emotion and spent every waking hour working. Before she started working for him, Shepherd went through assistants like water. She had been there three years and held the record for longest lasting assistant. She didn’t mind working for Shepherd at all. She was good at her job and did what was expected of her. They had a routine and it worked. Until everything changed.
Shepherd was tired of dating women that wanted him for his money. It was time for Svetlana, his latest girlfriend, to go. But then Svetlana finds a new way into Shepherd’s life, and he finds himself in need of an instant girlfriend, fake girlfriend that is. Who better to recruit than his assistant? But when Everly walks into the ballroom of the gala in that red dress, he actually sees her for the first time. And what he sees takes his breath away.
Shepherd and Everly’s relationship ruse requires her to move into his penthouse for a couple of months. During this time, they get to know each other and trust begins to grow. Everly soon learns that Shepherd isn’t an unfeeling robot at all. Maybe he doesn’t show his emotions easily but there is a sexy, sweet man underneath that buttoned up veneer. And a few more surprises that Shepherd has never shared with anyone. For some reason, he wants to let Everly in. He wants her to know the real him.
“It felt good to let go a little. And maybe that wasn’t such a bad thing after all.�
Now, let’s talk chemistry. Because these two most definitely have it. They literally burned up the pages. Shepherd may be all buttoned up on the outside and Everly all sun shiney and smiles. But these two were hotter than hot with a good helping of kink thrown in.
There are also plenty of amazing secondary characters. Everly’s two best friends who I hope we might get to know better in the future. Shepherd’s brother and Dad who I loved. And also Everly’s sister. They all added so much to this book to make it the amazing book it was. There was also a character later on, Cameron Whitbury, that I was VERY intrigued by that I want to know more about! Are you listening, Claire?!
Have I convinced you yet to read this? These two had so many layers and I loved watching them discover each other. These two have completely stolen my heart. I woke up this morning thinking about them and couldn’t wait until I could dive back in to the book. This was a fantastic read and I hope you decide to check it out and enjoy it as much as I did.
For more about this book and so many more, come and visit me at Carol's Crazy Bookish World.
Everly Dalton has the worst dating luck ever. She has had a horrible string of first dates. If you haven’t read the prequel to this book yet, Everly Dalton’s Dating Disasters, you need to. It takes you through six of her first date nightmares. Everly has decided to take a step back and give dating a rest for awhile. She loves spending time with her two best friends, Nora and Hazel. She is an executive assistant to one of Seattle’s richest men, and loves her job. Everly is one of those people that it just seems like the sun is shining down on her wherever she goes. Everyone she meets is like her best friend.
“I liked making people happy. It was my catnip. Getting someone grouchy to smile? Best high ever.�
Shepherd Calloway was Everly’s boss. Everly thought of him as an unemotional robot of a man. He could make a man shake with fear with just a look. He never showed emotion and spent every waking hour working. Before she started working for him, Shepherd went through assistants like water. She had been there three years and held the record for longest lasting assistant. She didn’t mind working for Shepherd at all. She was good at her job and did what was expected of her. They had a routine and it worked. Until everything changed.
Shepherd was tired of dating women that wanted him for his money. It was time for Svetlana, his latest girlfriend, to go. But then Svetlana finds a new way into Shepherd’s life, and he finds himself in need of an instant girlfriend, fake girlfriend that is. Who better to recruit than his assistant? But when Everly walks into the ballroom of the gala in that red dress, he actually sees her for the first time. And what he sees takes his breath away.
Shepherd and Everly’s relationship ruse requires her to move into his penthouse for a couple of months. During this time, they get to know each other and trust begins to grow. Everly soon learns that Shepherd isn’t an unfeeling robot at all. Maybe he doesn’t show his emotions easily but there is a sexy, sweet man underneath that buttoned up veneer. And a few more surprises that Shepherd has never shared with anyone. For some reason, he wants to let Everly in. He wants her to know the real him.
“It felt good to let go a little. And maybe that wasn’t such a bad thing after all.�
Now, let’s talk chemistry. Because these two most definitely have it. They literally burned up the pages. Shepherd may be all buttoned up on the outside and Everly all sun shiney and smiles. But these two were hotter than hot with a good helping of kink thrown in.
There are also plenty of amazing secondary characters. Everly’s two best friends who I hope we might get to know better in the future. Shepherd’s brother and Dad who I loved. And also Everly’s sister. They all added so much to this book to make it the amazing book it was. There was also a character later on, Cameron Whitbury, that I was VERY intrigued by that I want to know more about! Are you listening, Claire?!
Have I convinced you yet to read this? These two had so many layers and I loved watching them discover each other. These two have completely stolen my heart. I woke up this morning thinking about them and couldn’t wait until I could dive back in to the book. This was a fantastic read and I hope you decide to check it out and enjoy it as much as I did.
For more about this book and so many more, come and visit me at Carol's Crazy Bookish World.
Shelved as 'avoid'
May 23, 20191. H had numerous girlfriend during h’s employment. She booked their parting gifts
2. He claimed he fell in love with her at the beginning, yeah nah
3. As far as grovel goes, this was worse than no grovel. He ambushed her interview, embarrassed her in front of her future employer and left 500 messages as well.
This is a complete no go zone.
2. He claimed he fell in love with her at the beginning, yeah nah
3. As far as grovel goes, this was worse than no grovel. He ambushed her interview, embarrassed her in front of her future employer and left 500 messages as well.
This is a complete no go zone.
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June 4, 2022
R A T I N G: 3.5/4 to Faking Ms. Right � � � �
�'Outside these walls, people took me for a sugary-sweet, plain as vanilla, boring blond girl with a big smile. But my coworkers saw me as something else entirely. They looked at me in awe, wondering how I could possibly handle the big bad wolf. How I never got bit.'
'What is that?� “Hmm?� She walked over and picked up her drink. “This? Oh, it’s my bean bag chair.� “You brought a bean bag chair? And you’re putting it in my living room?� She smiled. “Yes.� “Why?� “Because it’s comfortable, and a great place to read, and my favorite color.� I glanced at it again, a big yellow blob sitting among my carefully chosen furniture. “It’s fuzzy. And yellow.� “That’s very observant of you, Shep.� My gaze snapped to her.
I'm in the pleasant position to say that I've done it. I've finally read a Claire Kingsley romance! Somehow, this managed to cut its way up the cue that is my reading list. But I'm also in the pleasant position to say that for the most part, Faking Ms. Right glides right on by with sweet simplicity, an easy writing style and plain adorable grace. There were some beautiful subtle touches, a feel-good tone and an easy delivery imbues the first standalone instalment in the Dirty Martini Running Club series with a wonderful personality. As does Everly Dalton, the sunshine even-steven half of a trope to a romantic companion who is her truly twilighted other. This book doesn't have complicated turns or unpredictable developments - and many of them can be easily spotted as laid in motion - but perhaps the power (for me) lies in the simplicity of Everly and Shepherd's development and the substance of that simplicity. That which unbuttons and undresses a relationship between a removed boss-employee dynamic to one where eyes finally lock, sights shift, feelings thrive in close proximity and results in a big yellow beanbag chair in the centre of a stoic man's private penthouse. There's always something truly delightful about a bright heroine who disrupts a stoic man's sense of structure.
Shepherd Calloway is a man who doesn't believe in mincing his words, or even using too many to get his point across. All it takes is a glare, unnerving silence and perhaps the fear of God will enter the body of one who clears breathing distance. He's a man of poor tact, brute silence and has one tone within the office space: clean, mean silence that promises nothing in return. Shepherd's entrance to a work day is the night to Everly Dalton's day, because every day that he walks into the office with the shadows of intimidation smoking at his heels, Everly walks in with the beams sunlight trailing hers, and very few are impregnable to her glow (with the exceptions of her apathetic boss). As Shepherd's assistant, Everly may very well have been little more than pleasant office furniture to him but she's also lasted longer than any assistant that came before her, and three years under her belt as his second hand and she remains fully intact with a bright morning smile, excellent prowess and aglow at a daily job well done. Through her occupation at his side, she's learned the art of administrating her automaton boss, and as familiar as she is with his working routine, she knows little more about the man behind the desk. As we thirst for, the discovery's about to begin...
While Faking Ms. Right doesn't flesh out an emotional connection to its full depth, it has a slow, easy and delightful romantic development and I loved being a part of Shepherd and Everly's. Their on page relationship and slow burn chemistry is something I always found myself looking forward to. An opposites attract this definitely is. A grumpy/sunshine romance this also definitely is. Another thing: this is that romance where the brooding hero loses the battle with a historical straight face and smiles only for his heroine. I wouldn't expect a showstopping outcome or a romance that turns heads at first sight, but Claire Kingsley may very well have my admiration for deciding to not fall into the overzealous trapping of a superfluous delivery. I loved the seamless match of a hero and heroine that just seem to fit together. I also really appreciated the characterisation because while this was light-hearted, sweet and spicy with the mildest of comical bones, I really believed in the development of the couple. It was natural, easy and gave in the right places. And I think that's what I took a shine to, along with luxuriating in the transformation of a hero who can't stop the process of defrosting for a heroine he can't stay away from. And one who steadily chips at his emotion-resistant thaw.
I admit to pausing with reservation when I began Faking Ms. Right. There were admittedly a few things, mainly in tandem with thoughts/feelings and situations pertaining to Kingsley's hero that I might have grimaced at. There are some situations that feel unrealistic such as Annie's inappropriate request in profiling a certain someone for donor material. The rationale with that plot particular was a poor judgment call on Everly's sister's part to even entertain the idea. And there's also the addendum fake engagement which didn't feel needed on top of a fake relationship. But, there's also a lot of believability and fondness to be found in this story and with these characters. I especially loved getting to know the other Calloway men, giving weight to Shepherd's difference of character and his distanced personal relationships with even them, but always being there for them without fail. And as someone who similarly struggles with personal connections, maintaining personal relationships and being emotionally misunderstood, it was heartening to see - through Shepherd - that internalised some us may be, the feelings are still in the right place, even if they look different on the surface. I would have liked some follow up with this though, to perhaps address how Shep might tackle his emotional redundancy within his relationship with Everly. Especially as he seems so resigned to the state of his emotional status quo, which is where his character suffers.
For as many collected tropes as there are, Claire Kingsley works the ones included really well. The delivery isn't overblown and I appreciated that the inevitable conflict scenario isn't propelled on the heels of miscommunication, even if it was duly misjudged on Shep's part to wait as long as he did to make amends knowing that he played a poor part in the situation. While I would have liked a bit more grovel from him, he was so unexpectedly endearing for a man who would never be accused of anything less than emotional irresponsivity, that within situations where he was defenceless, it was clear that he didn't wear the role of a hardened man for the sake of being a hardened man. He just doesn't know how to be himself around people, how to leave that place, and believes he's not capable of being anything other than his mother's example. There are a few layers to Shep, and his receptivity and draw towards Everly spoke louder than any two-minded refusal did.
As for Everly, she's truly rainbow-esque, and one colour in her inner rainbow radiates the biggest: yellow. She's a kind, warm and caring heroine, and while these buoyant sweet-on-the-surface heroines can sometimes fail to assert their own strength, Everly definitely has her own. She's fun, easy in every way, a real social butterfly who cares, shares and sees the best. Very little could mar her sparkle and with a bit of Everly attitude she holds her own. While she's capable and carries herself well (and I know I'm mimicking an earlier point), I did want her to push for some more grovel during the conflict phase considering how distraught she was when Shepherd resorted to his typical withdrawn Shepherd way. I did need and want more shared moments between her and her untouchable hero though.
This does follow the lane of a contemporary romance more than it does the rom-com It's said to be. To get into a bit of backstory, Everly's been a remarkable assistant to Shepherd the past three years, and there isn't a particular attraction to each other until the book really begins. In that time, Shepherd's had multiple short-term, surface-deep relationships with outrageously beautiful women which usually amount to monetary advantage on their part and intentional distance on his part. Everly's had a self-professed parade of 'dating disasters' and has had her fair share of atrocious romantic adventures but It's not clear if she's been in actual relationships during their three years only bound by a professional relationship. While there's definitely some grounded relatability in backsplashing Everly's comical romantic history, it was also hard to believe that a gorgeous, smart, bright and successful woman with a flagrantly attractive personality hasn't managed to have even one relationship in that time? So they haven't been on each other's radar beyond practical operations, especially Shepherd, who rarely acknowledges Everly's existence bar a curt borderline. There is an OW situation, which is called upon as a plot device for Shepherd to pull Everly into a fake relationship scheme, and this becomes the basis of the a big lie, fake frontage and a very real chemistry.
I’m not too sold on the idea of the beauty trip; where one night of finery and a familiar woman in a beautiful dress grows from a bud to a blossom by the hero’s estimation. Especially when Everly’s clearly an attractive woman in more than just appearance. The story did feel a bit depthless in places and I really believe that with a more integrated emotional connection, the relationship could have reached some beautiful heights. But as is stands, it still sparkles with ease. And I really need to pave into the sexual chemistry here because I never expected that Shep would be the growly hero who'd provide a side of kink, and one who institute a newly-developed fascination for strawberry hair products. The sweetness, the naughtiness, the seduction and the passion in the bedroom were a true highlight for me. It's those little touches that really humanise Kingsley's hero without making him stray from his original self. The explicit sex scenes fasten the chemistry, solidifies where they're heading and yep, they absolutely made me hot under my metaphorical collar as they fed the smut lover in me. It's a magical thing to be a part of a romance where two opposites can augment an easy chemistry and this pair definitely have that going for them.
The female friendship group was another suggestive highlight because I love seeing representation of supportive, realistic and honest girl groups who have the backs of their fellow ladies. I love the girl power, and speaking of such, we have a mini series crossover here too! If you've read the second book in the Bluewater Billionaires series - unlike me - you'll be familiar with an empowering collective of billionaire girlbosses, one of whom is Claire Kingsley's heroine, Cameron Whitbury. I know her as the friend to Lucy Score's heroine, Emily Stanton (because this is the book I can claim to have read), and Kingsley carves an appearance for her and her burly bodyguard here. I was two-minded about the series title if I'm honest though, because this might be called the Dirty Martini Running Club, but there's only one scene where Everly and her girl gang have an evening run and indulge in a round of late night adult beverages. It would have been nice to make that a repeated evening tradition.
Shepherd Calloway's personal life is a well-kept mystery that loses its edge when he finds it in himself to share what he's never shared with anyone before. You couldn't look at this man without feeling a strong presence that merges hand in hand with wealth and masculinity. He's careful habited power in a suit and his assistant enforces sunshine like a buttery-fine spread. If Everly Dalton's shine is a force, then Shepherd Calloway's grumpiness is a forcefield. With Claire Kingsley's sweet and saucy romance, you'll get a powerful hero with a secret side hobby, a chipper heroine who deserves her HEA, two people who decide that singlehood might be a temporary master plan after a series of dating misadventures and a live-in boyfriend/girlfriend bluff that soon has these two leaping for the bedroom (or car) door. I might just peddle this for readers eager to love a growly hero who's brought alive by the fringes of kink. I can understandably see why readers have a split opinion with this but it's still sweet, soft, sexy and worth a read if my opinion is worth some light CR salt. I'm relishing the day when I get to sample a sweet libation from Claire Kingsley's Boyfriend series. And while there exists approximately 116 miles between me and that goal because my threadbare self might perish in face of my expansive reading list, this is happening.
Content Warning: Profanity, a parent with cancer, descriptive bedroom scenes with some kink, alcohol consumption. Some themes include early parenthood separation/past parent infidelity and same sex partner adoption.
P.S Side Note: This is 2.0 of my review for Faking Ms. Right because I somehow (characteristically) dammed myself by accidentally deleting my first review which I painstakingly worked for days during a particularly bad sick period. That's a whole other level of wasted effort down the drain *excuse me as I mop up the flow of my tears *. I think my original review was a better penned, but alas, we're settling with this one. It's no too bad hopefully. Excuse me as present me continues to berate past me for fudging our efforts...as I again mop up those tears. I'm getting really good at mopping up tears.
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Working for Mr. Calloway was not easy. He was cold, harsh, and demanding. He never said thank you, or gave any sort of praise. I’d lived in terror for the first few months I’d worked for him, positive he was going to fire me. He always seemed so angry. But after a while, I realized that was just the way he was. He wasn’t angry at me. In fact, he barely noticed me. Sometimes I wondered whether he’d recognize me if he had to pick me out of a police lineup'
'“What is that?� “Hmm?� She walked over and picked up her drink. “This? Oh, it’s my bean bag chair.� “You brought a bean bag chair? And you’re putting it in my living room?� She smiled. “Yes.� “Why?� “Because it’s comfortable, and a great place to read, and my favorite color.� I glanced at it again, a big yellow blob sitting among my carefully chosen furniture. “It’s fuzzy. And yellow.� “That’s very observant of you, Shep.� My gaze snapped to her.'
“I made dinner reservations for us.� “Dinner?� “Yes, dinner. The meal that usually takes place after work. And sometimes people have dinner together. At a restaurant.� Oh my god, was he teasing me? My mouth turned up in a small smile. “Shepherd, are you making a joke?� He sighed and glanced away, as if annoyed, but I could see the hint of a smile on his face.'
'He offered to get me another drink, but I declined. After the champagne and the Manhattan, I was in danger of bypassing a little tipsy and heading straight for telling inappropriate stories and asking strangers for hugs. Not that I’d ever done that before. Okay, yes I had.'
�
'I’d never given it a lot of thought, but sharing a bed was awfully intimate. There was a certain vulnerability to it. Shepherd was an exceedingly private person, and he never made decisions without careful consideration. The fact that he trusted me enough for this was oddly touching. It made me want to be the best fake girlfriend ever.'
'I’d seen Shepherd Calloway looking every bit the hot, wealthy businessman in a designer tux or a perfectly-tailored suit. I’d seen him at the end of a long day with the sleeves of his button-down shirt cuffed to his elbows. I’d even seen him in gym clothes after a workout and rubbing sleep from his eyes in the kitchen early in the morning while he waited for his coffee. But this? I’d never dreamed I’d see Shepherd like this. Messy and a little sweaty, playing bass in a band at a dive bar? He was so sexy I thought I might die.'
�'Outside these walls, people took me for a sugary-sweet, plain as vanilla, boring blond girl with a big smile. But my coworkers saw me as something else entirely. They looked at me in awe, wondering how I could possibly handle the big bad wolf. How I never got bit.'
'What is that?� “Hmm?� She walked over and picked up her drink. “This? Oh, it’s my bean bag chair.� “You brought a bean bag chair? And you’re putting it in my living room?� She smiled. “Yes.� “Why?� “Because it’s comfortable, and a great place to read, and my favorite color.� I glanced at it again, a big yellow blob sitting among my carefully chosen furniture. “It’s fuzzy. And yellow.� “That’s very observant of you, Shep.� My gaze snapped to her.
I'm in the pleasant position to say that I've done it. I've finally read a Claire Kingsley romance! Somehow, this managed to cut its way up the cue that is my reading list. But I'm also in the pleasant position to say that for the most part, Faking Ms. Right glides right on by with sweet simplicity, an easy writing style and plain adorable grace. There were some beautiful subtle touches, a feel-good tone and an easy delivery imbues the first standalone instalment in the Dirty Martini Running Club series with a wonderful personality. As does Everly Dalton, the sunshine even-steven half of a trope to a romantic companion who is her truly twilighted other. This book doesn't have complicated turns or unpredictable developments - and many of them can be easily spotted as laid in motion - but perhaps the power (for me) lies in the simplicity of Everly and Shepherd's development and the substance of that simplicity. That which unbuttons and undresses a relationship between a removed boss-employee dynamic to one where eyes finally lock, sights shift, feelings thrive in close proximity and results in a big yellow beanbag chair in the centre of a stoic man's private penthouse. There's always something truly delightful about a bright heroine who disrupts a stoic man's sense of structure.
Shepherd Calloway is a man who doesn't believe in mincing his words, or even using too many to get his point across. All it takes is a glare, unnerving silence and perhaps the fear of God will enter the body of one who clears breathing distance. He's a man of poor tact, brute silence and has one tone within the office space: clean, mean silence that promises nothing in return. Shepherd's entrance to a work day is the night to Everly Dalton's day, because every day that he walks into the office with the shadows of intimidation smoking at his heels, Everly walks in with the beams sunlight trailing hers, and very few are impregnable to her glow (with the exceptions of her apathetic boss). As Shepherd's assistant, Everly may very well have been little more than pleasant office furniture to him but she's also lasted longer than any assistant that came before her, and three years under her belt as his second hand and she remains fully intact with a bright morning smile, excellent prowess and aglow at a daily job well done. Through her occupation at his side, she's learned the art of administrating her automaton boss, and as familiar as she is with his working routine, she knows little more about the man behind the desk. As we thirst for, the discovery's about to begin...
While Faking Ms. Right doesn't flesh out an emotional connection to its full depth, it has a slow, easy and delightful romantic development and I loved being a part of Shepherd and Everly's. Their on page relationship and slow burn chemistry is something I always found myself looking forward to. An opposites attract this definitely is. A grumpy/sunshine romance this also definitely is. Another thing: this is that romance where the brooding hero loses the battle with a historical straight face and smiles only for his heroine. I wouldn't expect a showstopping outcome or a romance that turns heads at first sight, but Claire Kingsley may very well have my admiration for deciding to not fall into the overzealous trapping of a superfluous delivery. I loved the seamless match of a hero and heroine that just seem to fit together. I also really appreciated the characterisation because while this was light-hearted, sweet and spicy with the mildest of comical bones, I really believed in the development of the couple. It was natural, easy and gave in the right places. And I think that's what I took a shine to, along with luxuriating in the transformation of a hero who can't stop the process of defrosting for a heroine he can't stay away from. And one who steadily chips at his emotion-resistant thaw.
I admit to pausing with reservation when I began Faking Ms. Right. There were admittedly a few things, mainly in tandem with thoughts/feelings and situations pertaining to Kingsley's hero that I might have grimaced at. There are some situations that feel unrealistic such as Annie's inappropriate request in profiling a certain someone for donor material. The rationale with that plot particular was a poor judgment call on Everly's sister's part to even entertain the idea. And there's also the addendum fake engagement which didn't feel needed on top of a fake relationship. But, there's also a lot of believability and fondness to be found in this story and with these characters. I especially loved getting to know the other Calloway men, giving weight to Shepherd's difference of character and his distanced personal relationships with even them, but always being there for them without fail. And as someone who similarly struggles with personal connections, maintaining personal relationships and being emotionally misunderstood, it was heartening to see - through Shepherd - that internalised some us may be, the feelings are still in the right place, even if they look different on the surface. I would have liked some follow up with this though, to perhaps address how Shep might tackle his emotional redundancy within his relationship with Everly. Especially as he seems so resigned to the state of his emotional status quo, which is where his character suffers.
For as many collected tropes as there are, Claire Kingsley works the ones included really well. The delivery isn't overblown and I appreciated that the inevitable conflict scenario isn't propelled on the heels of miscommunication, even if it was duly misjudged on Shep's part to wait as long as he did to make amends knowing that he played a poor part in the situation. While I would have liked a bit more grovel from him, he was so unexpectedly endearing for a man who would never be accused of anything less than emotional irresponsivity, that within situations where he was defenceless, it was clear that he didn't wear the role of a hardened man for the sake of being a hardened man. He just doesn't know how to be himself around people, how to leave that place, and believes he's not capable of being anything other than his mother's example. There are a few layers to Shep, and his receptivity and draw towards Everly spoke louder than any two-minded refusal did.
As for Everly, she's truly rainbow-esque, and one colour in her inner rainbow radiates the biggest: yellow. She's a kind, warm and caring heroine, and while these buoyant sweet-on-the-surface heroines can sometimes fail to assert their own strength, Everly definitely has her own. She's fun, easy in every way, a real social butterfly who cares, shares and sees the best. Very little could mar her sparkle and with a bit of Everly attitude she holds her own. While she's capable and carries herself well (and I know I'm mimicking an earlier point), I did want her to push for some more grovel during the conflict phase considering how distraught she was when Shepherd resorted to his typical withdrawn Shepherd way. I did need and want more shared moments between her and her untouchable hero though.
This does follow the lane of a contemporary romance more than it does the rom-com It's said to be. To get into a bit of backstory, Everly's been a remarkable assistant to Shepherd the past three years, and there isn't a particular attraction to each other until the book really begins. In that time, Shepherd's had multiple short-term, surface-deep relationships with outrageously beautiful women which usually amount to monetary advantage on their part and intentional distance on his part. Everly's had a self-professed parade of 'dating disasters' and has had her fair share of atrocious romantic adventures but It's not clear if she's been in actual relationships during their three years only bound by a professional relationship. While there's definitely some grounded relatability in backsplashing Everly's comical romantic history, it was also hard to believe that a gorgeous, smart, bright and successful woman with a flagrantly attractive personality hasn't managed to have even one relationship in that time? So they haven't been on each other's radar beyond practical operations, especially Shepherd, who rarely acknowledges Everly's existence bar a curt borderline. There is an OW situation, which is called upon as a plot device for Shepherd to pull Everly into a fake relationship scheme, and this becomes the basis of the a big lie, fake frontage and a very real chemistry.
I’m not too sold on the idea of the beauty trip; where one night of finery and a familiar woman in a beautiful dress grows from a bud to a blossom by the hero’s estimation. Especially when Everly’s clearly an attractive woman in more than just appearance. The story did feel a bit depthless in places and I really believe that with a more integrated emotional connection, the relationship could have reached some beautiful heights. But as is stands, it still sparkles with ease. And I really need to pave into the sexual chemistry here because I never expected that Shep would be the growly hero who'd provide a side of kink, and one who institute a newly-developed fascination for strawberry hair products. The sweetness, the naughtiness, the seduction and the passion in the bedroom were a true highlight for me. It's those little touches that really humanise Kingsley's hero without making him stray from his original self. The explicit sex scenes fasten the chemistry, solidifies where they're heading and yep, they absolutely made me hot under my metaphorical collar as they fed the smut lover in me. It's a magical thing to be a part of a romance where two opposites can augment an easy chemistry and this pair definitely have that going for them.
The female friendship group was another suggestive highlight because I love seeing representation of supportive, realistic and honest girl groups who have the backs of their fellow ladies. I love the girl power, and speaking of such, we have a mini series crossover here too! If you've read the second book in the Bluewater Billionaires series - unlike me - you'll be familiar with an empowering collective of billionaire girlbosses, one of whom is Claire Kingsley's heroine, Cameron Whitbury. I know her as the friend to Lucy Score's heroine, Emily Stanton (because this is the book I can claim to have read), and Kingsley carves an appearance for her and her burly bodyguard here. I was two-minded about the series title if I'm honest though, because this might be called the Dirty Martini Running Club, but there's only one scene where Everly and her girl gang have an evening run and indulge in a round of late night adult beverages. It would have been nice to make that a repeated evening tradition.
Shepherd Calloway's personal life is a well-kept mystery that loses its edge when he finds it in himself to share what he's never shared with anyone before. You couldn't look at this man without feeling a strong presence that merges hand in hand with wealth and masculinity. He's careful habited power in a suit and his assistant enforces sunshine like a buttery-fine spread. If Everly Dalton's shine is a force, then Shepherd Calloway's grumpiness is a forcefield. With Claire Kingsley's sweet and saucy romance, you'll get a powerful hero with a secret side hobby, a chipper heroine who deserves her HEA, two people who decide that singlehood might be a temporary master plan after a series of dating misadventures and a live-in boyfriend/girlfriend bluff that soon has these two leaping for the bedroom (or car) door. I might just peddle this for readers eager to love a growly hero who's brought alive by the fringes of kink. I can understandably see why readers have a split opinion with this but it's still sweet, soft, sexy and worth a read if my opinion is worth some light CR salt. I'm relishing the day when I get to sample a sweet libation from Claire Kingsley's Boyfriend series. And while there exists approximately 116 miles between me and that goal because my threadbare self might perish in face of my expansive reading list, this is happening.
Content Warning: Profanity, a parent with cancer, descriptive bedroom scenes with some kink, alcohol consumption. Some themes include early parenthood separation/past parent infidelity and same sex partner adoption.
P.S Side Note: This is 2.0 of my review for Faking Ms. Right because I somehow (characteristically) dammed myself by accidentally deleting my first review which I painstakingly worked for days during a particularly bad sick period. That's a whole other level of wasted effort down the drain *excuse me as I mop up the flow of my tears *. I think my original review was a better penned, but alas, we're settling with this one. It's no too bad hopefully. Excuse me as present me continues to berate past me for fudging our efforts...as I again mop up those tears. I'm getting really good at mopping up tears.
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Visit my blog for more reviews:
T W I T T E R: @TheVicarious1
I N S T A G R A M: @Vicarious.Hearts
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Some Favourite Quotes:
Working for Mr. Calloway was not easy. He was cold, harsh, and demanding. He never said thank you, or gave any sort of praise. I’d lived in terror for the first few months I’d worked for him, positive he was going to fire me. He always seemed so angry. But after a while, I realized that was just the way he was. He wasn’t angry at me. In fact, he barely noticed me. Sometimes I wondered whether he’d recognize me if he had to pick me out of a police lineup'
'“What is that?� “Hmm?� She walked over and picked up her drink. “This? Oh, it’s my bean bag chair.� “You brought a bean bag chair? And you’re putting it in my living room?� She smiled. “Yes.� “Why?� “Because it’s comfortable, and a great place to read, and my favorite color.� I glanced at it again, a big yellow blob sitting among my carefully chosen furniture. “It’s fuzzy. And yellow.� “That’s very observant of you, Shep.� My gaze snapped to her.'
“I made dinner reservations for us.� “Dinner?� “Yes, dinner. The meal that usually takes place after work. And sometimes people have dinner together. At a restaurant.� Oh my god, was he teasing me? My mouth turned up in a small smile. “Shepherd, are you making a joke?� He sighed and glanced away, as if annoyed, but I could see the hint of a smile on his face.'
'He offered to get me another drink, but I declined. After the champagne and the Manhattan, I was in danger of bypassing a little tipsy and heading straight for telling inappropriate stories and asking strangers for hugs. Not that I’d ever done that before. Okay, yes I had.'
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'I’d never given it a lot of thought, but sharing a bed was awfully intimate. There was a certain vulnerability to it. Shepherd was an exceedingly private person, and he never made decisions without careful consideration. The fact that he trusted me enough for this was oddly touching. It made me want to be the best fake girlfriend ever.'
'I’d seen Shepherd Calloway looking every bit the hot, wealthy businessman in a designer tux or a perfectly-tailored suit. I’d seen him at the end of a long day with the sleeves of his button-down shirt cuffed to his elbows. I’d even seen him in gym clothes after a workout and rubbing sleep from his eyes in the kitchen early in the morning while he waited for his coffee. But this? I’d never dreamed I’d see Shepherd like this. Messy and a little sweaty, playing bass in a band at a dive bar? He was so sexy I thought I might die.'
May 24, 2019
I skimmed my way through this book, the beginning ruined it for me. It got better but I just didn't enjoy it as much I wanted to.
I was in the mood for this sort of trope, I wanted to love it but it didn't work out. I was too focused on how the author portrayed the heroine, how she was different from all the other women he usually goes for. Excuse me while I vomit.
The emphasis on the ow's beauty was overwhelming which is usually the case in majority of romance books. I never critique it or get really annoyed by it but today? Today, I am so over this shit.
Let's review:
This is the hero's thoughts on the ow, it's lovely right? Of course he also states while she was basically perfect, she was also demanding, whiny and a gold digger because all ow need flaws that isn't their beauty, right? They always have to be gorgeous with huge personality flaws. That is his usual type.
Now let's compare these quotes with his thought's on the ACTUAL heroine. (Bare in mind, this is just in the beginning, his attraction obviously increases later in the book but that's not what I'm focusing on)
He also describes Everly as "too cute� in the beginning. Is she a fucking child?
Please, that is such a poor attempt at complimenting her. It’s so generic compared to the description of the ow. Why do authors have the need to always put a disgusting amount of emphasis on the beauty of ow but not on the heroine? But why do authors really need to go in so much fucking depth about the ow looks. A "she's pretty" would suffice as a compliment for the ow, no need to go in depth about her eyes, sultry voice and bright smile. Yeah, it’s all about personality, looks shouldn’t matter but fuck off, I don’t want to read the hero's thoughts on how the ow has PERFECT features and is exquisite whereas Everly is just cute and pretty. Although, there is nothing wrong with that. But why does it always take a girl who gets dressed up for the hero to take notice of her? Why isn't her normal everyday look enough?
As Everly put it “You work closely with someone for a long time, and feelings start developing before you even realize it’s happening.� (This was said to h’s father when she was introduced to him as the fake date) but this actually wasn’t the case for shepherd, he had no feelings or insane attraction towards her at all. But after one night of being forced to be the fake girlfriend and dress ‘sexy�, he was instantly attracted? Did he see her in a ‘new light? So fucking cliche and I’m tired of it.
So it takes one dress to get a guy to be into me even if I have worked with him for three years? Okay sure. Note taken. She’s only stunning dressed up but not at work? Okay sure.
I would understand if she only just started but THREE fucking years and nothing during that time. I beg someone to delete this from my brain. Honestly, I couldn’t tell you why I’m annoyed at this book. Why am I so hung up over these details? Because of the ow and heroines physical description?? I’ve read hundreds of book where ultimately, the ow is superior in the looks department and it’s never really bothered me. I get over it. Hell, I read one last week with little complaints on that matter. So why is this book grating my nerves? I truly don’t know. But I do know is that I’m fucking sick of reading this repetitive shit.
Listen. Don’t get me wrong, I do not want insta love but that initial attraction? I want it, I need it in my books. Also, he always had girlfriends but there wasn't even a mention of the h having a boyfriend in that time of knowing him? And no, a few terrible first dates with men do not count.
I was in the mood for this sort of trope, I wanted to love it but it didn't work out. I was too focused on how the author portrayed the heroine, how she was different from all the other women he usually goes for. Excuse me while I vomit.
The emphasis on the ow's beauty was overwhelming which is usually the case in majority of romance books. I never critique it or get really annoyed by it but today? Today, I am so over this shit.
Let's review:
"Svetlana was beautiful in every sense of the word—physically, at least—and people noticed her. She’d been blessed with the best of nearly every feature, and had bought the rest. Perfect facial symmetry. Large eyes Sleek nose. Full lips. Stunning curves. Just enough of her Bulgarian accent remained so she sounded pleasantly exotic.
"To look at her, you’d think it would have been her body—because honestly, her body was insane—but it had been her smile. She’d smiled at me, wide and bright, and I’d known I was taking her home with me."
This is the hero's thoughts on the ow, it's lovely right? Of course he also states while she was basically perfect, she was also demanding, whiny and a gold digger because all ow need flaws that isn't their beauty, right? They always have to be gorgeous with huge personality flaws. That is his usual type.
Now let's compare these quotes with his thought's on the ACTUAL heroine. (Bare in mind, this is just in the beginning, his attraction obviously increases later in the book but that's not what I'm focusing on)
"She was nice to look at, certainly. I didn’t choose my assistants based on their attractiveness, but if I did, Everly would’ve passed with flying colors. Pretty face, long blond hair. I could almost picture her in an evening gown, but that was a stretch."
He also describes Everly as "too cute� in the beginning. Is she a fucking child?
Please, that is such a poor attempt at complimenting her. It’s so generic compared to the description of the ow. Why do authors have the need to always put a disgusting amount of emphasis on the beauty of ow but not on the heroine? But why do authors really need to go in so much fucking depth about the ow looks. A "she's pretty" would suffice as a compliment for the ow, no need to go in depth about her eyes, sultry voice and bright smile. Yeah, it’s all about personality, looks shouldn’t matter but fuck off, I don’t want to read the hero's thoughts on how the ow has PERFECT features and is exquisite whereas Everly is just cute and pretty. Although, there is nothing wrong with that. But why does it always take a girl who gets dressed up for the hero to take notice of her? Why isn't her normal everyday look enough?
As Everly put it “You work closely with someone for a long time, and feelings start developing before you even realize it’s happening.� (This was said to h’s father when she was introduced to him as the fake date) but this actually wasn’t the case for shepherd, he had no feelings or insane attraction towards her at all. But after one night of being forced to be the fake girlfriend and dress ‘sexy�, he was instantly attracted? Did he see her in a ‘new light? So fucking cliche and I’m tired of it.
"I’d been haunted by visions of a blond woman in a red dress.
Where had she come from?"
So it takes one dress to get a guy to be into me even if I have worked with him for three years? Okay sure. Note taken. She’s only stunning dressed up but not at work? Okay sure.
I would understand if she only just started but THREE fucking years and nothing during that time. I beg someone to delete this from my brain. Honestly, I couldn’t tell you why I’m annoyed at this book. Why am I so hung up over these details? Because of the ow and heroines physical description?? I’ve read hundreds of book where ultimately, the ow is superior in the looks department and it’s never really bothered me. I get over it. Hell, I read one last week with little complaints on that matter. So why is this book grating my nerves? I truly don’t know. But I do know is that I’m fucking sick of reading this repetitive shit.
Listen. Don’t get me wrong, I do not want insta love but that initial attraction? I want it, I need it in my books. Also, he always had girlfriends but there wasn't even a mention of the h having a boyfriend in that time of knowing him? And no, a few terrible first dates with men do not count.
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May 23, 2019Faking Ms. Right is now live!
Everly Dalton’s cold-as-ice boss, Shepherd Calloway, needs a favor—a big one. Pose as his live-in girlfriend? She can totally handle it. Except there’s a problem. Shepherd is supposed to be a single-minded, unemotional robot boss. Not an actual human with a heart and morning wood. Between the awkward bed-sharing and tingly fake dates, lines are blurring. And as Everly gets to know the real Shepherd, she discovers there’s more to the man behind the bank account. And faking it gets all too real.
READ AN EXCERPT OF FAKING MS. RIGHT:
Without a second’s hesitation, he stood and yanked me off my stool. His strong hands held me tight against him as he leaned down and took my mouth in a hard kiss.
I flung my arms around his shoulders and had to stop myself from jumping up to wrap my legs around his waist. My fingers tangled in his messy hair as his tongue delved into my mouth. He tasted like whiskey and sex and potent masculinity. Under normal circumstances, I would have held back a little. After all, we were in a public place.
But there was no holding back now. His arms were hot steel around me, his delicious mouth tangling with mine. My heart beat furiously as he sucked on my lower lip, one hand moving beneath my shirt to splay across my ribs. I wanted to rip his clothes off—rip my clothes off—but a tiny part of me, way back in the recesses of my hormone-soaked brain, was still rational. We were in a bar, surrounded by people.
I pulled back, almost gasping for breath. “Where’s your car?�
“I’m parked out back.�
“Let’s go.�
He nodded, grabbing my hand, and led me through the crowd to a side door. My vision was hazy, my lips sensitive and swollen, every nerve ending attuned to him.
We burst out the door into a small parking lot behind the bar. A single bulb cast a dingy light over the cars. After the noise inside, it was almost silent. Just the hum of traffic a few blocks away.
His car unlocked automatically as soon as he got next to it. He grabbed the driver’s side door handle, but I put a hand on his chest.
“Back seat.�
A low growl rumbled in his throat. He opened the back door and practically shoved me inside.
As soon as he sat down, I climbed into his lap. My skirt hiked up my legs as our mouths crashed together, messy and wet. His hands slid up my thighs and I ran my fingers through his hair.
He eagerly licked into my mouth, his tongue sliding along mine. I already knew Shepherd was a fantastic kisser, but this was melting my brain. His lips were soft, but insistent, his hands grabbing me with demanding authority.
Pressing myself closer, I felt his hard-on through his pants. Oh dear god, that felt good. His hands moved up my thighs and slipped beneath my panties to cup my ass. I rubbed myself against him, tilting my hips, indulging in a little friction against my clit.
“Fuck,� he growled into my mouth.
I’d never felt like this before. So frantic. I was on fire for him, my worries about what this meant burning away to ash.
His stubble on my face was deliciously rough. I couldn’t get enough of him. His tongue, his lips, his hands all over me. He pressed me against his erection and grunted as I nipped his bottom lip with my teeth.
My panties were soaked, the insistent pressure between my legs begging to be sated. His pants looked sexy as hell, but right now, they were really in my way. Maybe if I just�
Still kissing him, I reached between us to unfasten his pants.
“Everly,� he mumbled. “I’m not—�
The button popped open. He grunted again.
“We’re not—�
I lowered the zipper.
Everly Dalton’s cold-as-ice boss, Shepherd Calloway, needs a favor—a big one. Pose as his live-in girlfriend? She can totally handle it. Except there’s a problem. Shepherd is supposed to be a single-minded, unemotional robot boss. Not an actual human with a heart and morning wood. Between the awkward bed-sharing and tingly fake dates, lines are blurring. And as Everly gets to know the real Shepherd, she discovers there’s more to the man behind the bank account. And faking it gets all too real.
READ AN EXCERPT OF FAKING MS. RIGHT:
Without a second’s hesitation, he stood and yanked me off my stool. His strong hands held me tight against him as he leaned down and took my mouth in a hard kiss.
I flung my arms around his shoulders and had to stop myself from jumping up to wrap my legs around his waist. My fingers tangled in his messy hair as his tongue delved into my mouth. He tasted like whiskey and sex and potent masculinity. Under normal circumstances, I would have held back a little. After all, we were in a public place.
But there was no holding back now. His arms were hot steel around me, his delicious mouth tangling with mine. My heart beat furiously as he sucked on my lower lip, one hand moving beneath my shirt to splay across my ribs. I wanted to rip his clothes off—rip my clothes off—but a tiny part of me, way back in the recesses of my hormone-soaked brain, was still rational. We were in a bar, surrounded by people.
I pulled back, almost gasping for breath. “Where’s your car?�
“I’m parked out back.�
“Let’s go.�
He nodded, grabbing my hand, and led me through the crowd to a side door. My vision was hazy, my lips sensitive and swollen, every nerve ending attuned to him.
We burst out the door into a small parking lot behind the bar. A single bulb cast a dingy light over the cars. After the noise inside, it was almost silent. Just the hum of traffic a few blocks away.
His car unlocked automatically as soon as he got next to it. He grabbed the driver’s side door handle, but I put a hand on his chest.
“Back seat.�
A low growl rumbled in his throat. He opened the back door and practically shoved me inside.
As soon as he sat down, I climbed into his lap. My skirt hiked up my legs as our mouths crashed together, messy and wet. His hands slid up my thighs and I ran my fingers through his hair.
He eagerly licked into my mouth, his tongue sliding along mine. I already knew Shepherd was a fantastic kisser, but this was melting my brain. His lips were soft, but insistent, his hands grabbing me with demanding authority.
Pressing myself closer, I felt his hard-on through his pants. Oh dear god, that felt good. His hands moved up my thighs and slipped beneath my panties to cup my ass. I rubbed myself against him, tilting my hips, indulging in a little friction against my clit.
“Fuck,� he growled into my mouth.
I’d never felt like this before. So frantic. I was on fire for him, my worries about what this meant burning away to ash.
His stubble on my face was deliciously rough. I couldn’t get enough of him. His tongue, his lips, his hands all over me. He pressed me against his erection and grunted as I nipped his bottom lip with my teeth.
My panties were soaked, the insistent pressure between my legs begging to be sated. His pants looked sexy as hell, but right now, they were really in my way. Maybe if I just�
Still kissing him, I reached between us to unfasten his pants.
“Everly,� he mumbled. “I’m not—�
The button popped open. He grunted again.
“We’re not—�
I lowered the zipper.
November 27, 2021
I have....no idea if I liked this or not. I didn't dislike it, for sure. But there was something about it that didn't click with me. I liked the plot, but felt that the execution was not up to the mark. It could've been so much better though, I still might try some other book by this author. (on that note, if anyone knows better ones by this author, they can tell me)
To say that I disliked it would be harsh, but I wouldn't exactly want to re-read it. It was middle ground for me.
I liked one or two things, but otherwise, it was pretty flat. Sweet, yes but nothing out of the ordinary. Or maybe I'm just in a really terrible book funk.
To say that I disliked it would be harsh, but I wouldn't exactly want to re-read it. It was middle ground for me.
I liked one or two things, but otherwise, it was pretty flat. Sweet, yes but nothing out of the ordinary. Or maybe I'm just in a really terrible book funk.
March 7, 2023
“𝙏𝙝𝙖�'𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙗𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚, 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝. 𝙄𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙣 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙪𝙥 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙧𝙞𝙨𝙠 𝙤𝙛 𝙗𝙚𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙝𝙪𝙧𝙩, 𝙮𝙤𝙪'𝙡𝙡 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙜𝙚𝙩 𝙘𝙡𝙤𝙨𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙩𝙤 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠.� -📖(chapter:29)
The writing style was good. I definitely like the simplicity of this sweet story. Although the book was enjoyable, I felt conflicted about the two main characters who were portrayed as super realistic. On one hand, it was refreshing to have a drama-free storyline, but on the other hand, the romantic side felt somewhat shallow and lacking in depth. While I appreciate the effort to avoid over-the-top drama, I couldn't quite give it more than 3 stars due to my mixed feelings about the characterization and romantic plot. Alas, the book could have been more satisfying if the emotional connection between them had been explored in more depth.
The writing style was good. I definitely like the simplicity of this sweet story. Although the book was enjoyable, I felt conflicted about the two main characters who were portrayed as super realistic. On one hand, it was refreshing to have a drama-free storyline, but on the other hand, the romantic side felt somewhat shallow and lacking in depth. While I appreciate the effort to avoid over-the-top drama, I couldn't quite give it more than 3 stars due to my mixed feelings about the characterization and romantic plot. Alas, the book could have been more satisfying if the emotional connection between them had been explored in more depth.
October 2, 2022
3 Stars
Opinion Breakdown
The Good: The premise, the side characters, and the banter.
The Not-So-Good: I didn't like that we don't get to experience them after they become a "real" couple except for in the epilogue. I wanted to experience that much more!
The Bad: The conflict. I'm not sure if it's necessarily "bad," but it definitely wasn't good. It felt stupid...and their reactions were kind of eye roll inducing.
Overall: I think I liked the first half much better than the second. This was pretty low drama and overall it was a cute read! It just probably won't be all that memorable in the long run and isn't finding its home on my favorites shelf.
Brief Summary of the Storyline: This is Everly and Shepherd's story. Everly has been the personal assistant to grumpy billionaire CEO Shepherd for ~3 years. When he shocks her by last minute asking her to go to a fundraiser as his stand in date and to dress sexy, she doesn't know what to think. What's worse is that she finds out that his gold digging recent ex has her claws in his unsuspecting father and Shepherd needs her to pretend to be his girlfriend. When Shepherd finds out his dad has cancer and is moving in with him, he realizes he needs Everly to move in too and to keep up the charade. There are some secrets revealed, some sweet moments, and some sexy times...and they get a HFN ending.
Point Of View (POV): This alternated between Everly and Shepherd's POV.
Overall Pace of Story: Good. I never skimmed and I thought it flowed well.
Instalove: No, they've known each other for over 3 years.
H (Hero) rating: 3 stars. Shepherd. While I appreciated his ability to be vulnerable for the h, I didn't feel like we got that into his character.
h (heroine) rating: 3 stars. Everly. I liked her positive outlook in life, but I don't think we got that deep into her character either.
Sadness level: Low, no tissues needed
Push/Pull: Yes
Heat level: Good. They have some good tension, chemistry, and scenes -- but not so much it takes away from the story.
Descriptive sex: Yes
OW (Other Woman)/OM (Other Man) drama: Yes
Sex scene with OW or OM: No
Cheating: No
Separation: Yes
Possible Triggers: Yes
Closure: This ends in a cute place but with what I would call a HFN ending . I'm sure other readers would be fine calling this a HEA, but I needed more and I needed some time in between their conflict being resolved and their ending.
Safety: This one should be Safe for most safety gang readers
Opinion Breakdown
The Good: The premise, the side characters, and the banter.
The Not-So-Good: I didn't like that we don't get to experience them after they become a "real" couple except for in the epilogue. I wanted to experience that much more!
The Bad: The conflict. I'm not sure if it's necessarily "bad," but it definitely wasn't good. It felt stupid...and their reactions were kind of eye roll inducing.
Overall: I think I liked the first half much better than the second. This was pretty low drama and overall it was a cute read! It just probably won't be all that memorable in the long run and isn't finding its home on my favorites shelf.
Brief Summary of the Storyline: This is Everly and Shepherd's story. Everly has been the personal assistant to grumpy billionaire CEO Shepherd for ~3 years. When he shocks her by last minute asking her to go to a fundraiser as his stand in date and to dress sexy, she doesn't know what to think. What's worse is that she finds out that his gold digging recent ex has her claws in his unsuspecting father and Shepherd needs her to pretend to be his girlfriend. When Shepherd finds out his dad has cancer and is moving in with him, he realizes he needs Everly to move in too and to keep up the charade. There are some secrets revealed, some sweet moments, and some sexy times...and they get a HFN ending.
Point Of View (POV): This alternated between Everly and Shepherd's POV.
Overall Pace of Story: Good. I never skimmed and I thought it flowed well.
Instalove: No, they've known each other for over 3 years.
H (Hero) rating: 3 stars. Shepherd. While I appreciated his ability to be vulnerable for the h, I didn't feel like we got that into his character.
h (heroine) rating: 3 stars. Everly. I liked her positive outlook in life, but I don't think we got that deep into her character either.
Sadness level: Low, no tissues needed
Push/Pull: Yes
Heat level: Good. They have some good tension, chemistry, and scenes -- but not so much it takes away from the story.
Descriptive sex: Yes
OW (Other Woman)/OM (Other Man) drama: Yes
Sex scene with OW or OM: No
Cheating: No
Separation: Yes
Possible Triggers: Yes
Closure: This ends in a cute place but with what I would call a HFN ending . I'm sure other readers would be fine calling this a HEA, but I needed more and I needed some time in between their conflict being resolved and their ending.
Safety: This one should be Safe for most safety gang readers
March 1, 2025
3.5 Stars
Absolutely preposterous
Two words that kept pinging around in my brain while I read this�
However, this still consistently delivered on the classic billionaire mogul falling for his competent assistant trope where the writing is pretty darn good, the spice is varied, and the characters didn’t drive me too bonkers despite the aforementioned words.
Overall, I read this for a challenge and luckily found it an entertaining love story amongst the unbelievable absurd situations these two protagonists find themselves in. If you want some OTT shenanigans, go forth and enjoy!
Absolutely preposterous
Two words that kept pinging around in my brain while I read this�
However, this still consistently delivered on the classic billionaire mogul falling for his competent assistant trope where the writing is pretty darn good, the spice is varied, and the characters didn’t drive me too bonkers despite the aforementioned words.
Overall, I read this for a challenge and luckily found it an entertaining love story amongst the unbelievable absurd situations these two protagonists find themselves in. If you want some OTT shenanigans, go forth and enjoy!
January 23, 2023
the way i read this in one sitting? sos.
this was the perfect palette cleanser book. it wasn’t anything too special but it was so much fun. + the spice? excuse me!!!! 🥵
shepherd + everly were so cute and very hot if i do say so myself.
if ur in a reading slump.. this book is for u because it’s so quick and easy to get through.
i shall be reading the rest of course. nora, i love u already.
this was the perfect palette cleanser book. it wasn’t anything too special but it was so much fun. + the spice? excuse me!!!! 🥵
shepherd + everly were so cute and very hot if i do say so myself.
if ur in a reading slump.. this book is for u because it’s so quick and easy to get through.
i shall be reading the rest of course. nora, i love u already.
June 27, 2019
The relationship parts of this were really quite outstanding. I really loved Everly and her unabashed kindness and refusal to bank her innate happiness. And I loved even more that she didn't let others use that to walk all over her. There were a couple of times where she had to knock someone upside the head because they thought they could get away with manipulating her because of her personality. She did so with a firm grace that pegged exactly how such a thing would work. So that rocked.
Shepherd was problematic, on the other hand. He's a bit of an emotional midget, some of it self-inflicted. I mean, he thinks he's emotionally stunted so he gives himself leave to act emotionally stunted. And he's remarkably impervious to outside input on his actual emotional state. Which mostly works, actually, and I really enjoyed seeing Everly crack him open to get to the gooey center. I loved seeing him become attached to her and come to trust her.
So it is with bitter regret that I came to late-novel author manipulation for the sake of a dramatic "dark moment". I mean, to get there, Everly had to be uncharacteristically sloppy and get sick so she couldn't go to work and make Shepherd do something he'd literally never done before () and make him forget literally everything he knows about her and . The only thing that Kingsley didn't screw up is making them not communicate. He confronts Everly right off and she tells him her reasons. But that almost makes it worse because
Making the characters act uncharacteristically for the sake of drama dropped this an entire star. I was skating on a solid four stars and I'm almost reluctant to give it a full three. Kingsley at least got back on track once the characters were allowed to act like themselves again, though, so I'll stick with the three. I'm sad it dropped so badly when it was doing so well.
A note about Steamy: There are some explicit sex scenes that amount to the high side of my middle range. So three or four? I had a couple of days interruption to make a library due date that snuck up on me so I lost track. I did kind of appreciate some of the dynamic of those intimate moments as it was a case of the two bonding over an odd aspect of their relationship dynamic that made them fit unusually well and I think Kingsley made that work better than most might have.
Shepherd was problematic, on the other hand. He's a bit of an emotional midget, some of it self-inflicted. I mean, he thinks he's emotionally stunted so he gives himself leave to act emotionally stunted. And he's remarkably impervious to outside input on his actual emotional state. Which mostly works, actually, and I really enjoyed seeing Everly crack him open to get to the gooey center. I loved seeing him become attached to her and come to trust her.
So it is with bitter regret that I came to late-novel author manipulation for the sake of a dramatic "dark moment". I mean, to get there, Everly had to be uncharacteristically sloppy and get sick so she couldn't go to work and make Shepherd do something he'd literally never done before () and make him forget literally everything he knows about her and . The only thing that Kingsley didn't screw up is making them not communicate. He confronts Everly right off and she tells him her reasons. But that almost makes it worse because
Making the characters act uncharacteristically for the sake of drama dropped this an entire star. I was skating on a solid four stars and I'm almost reluctant to give it a full three. Kingsley at least got back on track once the characters were allowed to act like themselves again, though, so I'll stick with the three. I'm sad it dropped so badly when it was doing so well.
A note about Steamy: There are some explicit sex scenes that amount to the high side of my middle range. So three or four? I had a couple of days interruption to make a library due date that snuck up on me so I lost track. I did kind of appreciate some of the dynamic of those intimate moments as it was a case of the two bonding over an odd aspect of their relationship dynamic that made them fit unusually well and I think Kingsley made that work better than most might have.
October 30, 2023
This is your pretty conventional boss/assistant grumpy/sunshine fake relationship contemporary romance. Literally every contemporary romance author has one. It was ok, stuck to the formula: faking dating for a dumb reason, having sex but saying it would just be sex and then falling in love only to have it fall apart for a dumb reason -usually something that triggers baggage from one of the two main characters� past. This checks all the boxes, has some funny moments, some steamy moments but was very unoriginal.
Just once however, I would LOVE to read this trope with a female boss and male assistant. Let me know if anyone knows of one like this, otherwise I may have to write it myself.
Just once however, I would LOVE to read this trope with a female boss and male assistant. Let me know if anyone knows of one like this, otherwise I may have to write it myself.
January 17, 2020
4.75 stars.
Yeah!!!!
This is back to the Claire Kingsley I truly love and adore.
Such a sweet, funny, sexy and absolutely entertaining romance .
Great characters, I loved the storyline and so fun to read...I really enjoyed this book.....yippee!!
I had been totally missing that with her "Miles Family" series which was a tad disappointing IMO (it felt flat), I couldn't bring myself to read anymore after book one and perusing friend reviews.
Even her "sassy" collaboration with Lucy Score on the "Bootleg Springs" series which I did enjoy was still missing that "emotional high" I loved so much with her earlier "Book Boyfriend" series (Highly Recommend) .
Shepherd and Everly made such a great couple. She warmed up, this superficially at least "cold man" with her sweet, kind and generous personality (a bright, sunshiney optimist as per Ms. Kingsley in her afterword for this book) .
This story had such great secondary characters as well, Shepherd's father Richard (especially) and I also really liked Everly's two BFF's - Nora and Hazel.
I will definitely be reading all of this series, no doubts whatsoever!!
The next book is slated for 2020 and it will feature Everly's best friend Hazel as the heroine of the story.
Can't wait!!
Yeah!!!!
This is back to the Claire Kingsley I truly love and adore.
Such a sweet, funny, sexy and absolutely entertaining romance .
Great characters, I loved the storyline and so fun to read...I really enjoyed this book.....yippee!!
I had been totally missing that with her "Miles Family" series which was a tad disappointing IMO (it felt flat), I couldn't bring myself to read anymore after book one and perusing friend reviews.
Even her "sassy" collaboration with Lucy Score on the "Bootleg Springs" series which I did enjoy was still missing that "emotional high" I loved so much with her earlier "Book Boyfriend" series (Highly Recommend) .
Shepherd and Everly made such a great couple. She warmed up, this superficially at least "cold man" with her sweet, kind and generous personality (a bright, sunshiney optimist as per Ms. Kingsley in her afterword for this book) .
This story had such great secondary characters as well, Shepherd's father Richard (especially) and I also really liked Everly's two BFF's - Nora and Hazel.
I will definitely be reading all of this series, no doubts whatsoever!!
The next book is slated for 2020 and it will feature Everly's best friend Hazel as the heroine of the story.
Can't wait!!
March 25, 2020
Finalizing my rating to 4 stars.
I am so happy to say that I really enjoyed this book! This is a book that I have had my eye on for a couple months now, and I am so glad I have finally read it!
I loved the hero and heroine; they were perfect for each other. I also loved the family dynamics in this book; it gave so much substance to the story and I really enjoyed it!!
The only reason I didn’t give this book 5 stars was because it isn’t my absolute favorite office and fake relationship book. Even though these tropes were done well in this book, it wasn’t absolutely mind blowing or anything.
Overall, a really good read; would definitely recommend if you want a cute office romance with a slow burn and fake relationship type of romance.
I am so happy to say that I really enjoyed this book! This is a book that I have had my eye on for a couple months now, and I am so glad I have finally read it!
I loved the hero and heroine; they were perfect for each other. I also loved the family dynamics in this book; it gave so much substance to the story and I really enjoyed it!!
The only reason I didn’t give this book 5 stars was because it isn’t my absolute favorite office and fake relationship book. Even though these tropes were done well in this book, it wasn’t absolutely mind blowing or anything.
Overall, a really good read; would definitely recommend if you want a cute office romance with a slow burn and fake relationship type of romance.
December 13, 2024
₊�.°.� 3.5 stars �.°.‧₊
� possible spoilers ahead!
the book was good—not amazing, but still an enjoyable experience for my first claire kingsley read. it was fun and easy, making it perfect for when you want something light. the writing style was simple and okay for the most part, though there were a few moments that felt a bit cringe to me. the story itself didn’t have any major twists or unpredictable developments, which made it easy to follow without needing to overthink. while it wasn’t groundbreaking, it still had a charm that kept me engaged.
⋆౨ৎ� everly.
she truly embodies sunshine, and i genuinely believe that every grumpy individual needs their own everly. she’s the kind of person who brings warmth and light wherever she goes—independent, trustworthy, and incredibly loving. she’s lively, carefree, and a true social butterfly who genuinely cares, generously shares, and always sees the best in others. she perfectly captures what it means to be the sunshine in the sunshine x grumpy trope, balancing out the grumpiness with her unwavering positivity and charm. honestly, you can’t help but root for her and adore her.
⋆౨ৎ� shepherd.
i really appreciated how his character was written, he wasn’t so toxic that i found myself hoping they wouldn’t end up together. he had a strong sense of self and wasn’t afraid to express his emotions, even though his trust issues with women were evident. his grumpiness was balanced perfectly; he wasn’t an outright jerk, which was such a relief.
⋆౨ৎ� shepherd and everly.
while faking ms. right doesn’t fully explore the emotional connection, it delivers a slow, easy, and charming romance that i thoroughly enjoyed. shepherd and everly’s journey was such a joy to follow, with their on-page relationship and slow-burn chemistry being a constant highlight. it’s the perfect blend of opposites attract and grumpy/sunshine, making their dynamic both fun and heartwarming.
ᢉ� .� all in all, it was a good read. while it wasn’t something entirely new, it was an easy and enjoyable book to get through. i really enjoyed it, and i’m definitely planning to continue with the series. i’m definitely interested in exploring the author’s other books next time
——� ˗ˋ � 𝐪𝐮𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐬 � ˊ˗ ——�
� “i figured if more people made an effort to be friendly, the world would be a much better place.�
� “that's the thing about love, though. if you never open yourself up to the risk of being hurt, you'll never give someone the chance to get close enough to love you back.�
� “everly, you have the biggest heart of anyone i’ve ever known. and i’m about to ask you to give it to me, forever. all i have to give you in return is mine, which, to be perfectly honest, isn’t enough. but i love you with every bit of it—with every piece of my soul. will you marry me?�
� possible spoilers ahead!
the book was good—not amazing, but still an enjoyable experience for my first claire kingsley read. it was fun and easy, making it perfect for when you want something light. the writing style was simple and okay for the most part, though there were a few moments that felt a bit cringe to me. the story itself didn’t have any major twists or unpredictable developments, which made it easy to follow without needing to overthink. while it wasn’t groundbreaking, it still had a charm that kept me engaged.
⋆౨ৎ� everly.
she truly embodies sunshine, and i genuinely believe that every grumpy individual needs their own everly. she’s the kind of person who brings warmth and light wherever she goes—independent, trustworthy, and incredibly loving. she’s lively, carefree, and a true social butterfly who genuinely cares, generously shares, and always sees the best in others. she perfectly captures what it means to be the sunshine in the sunshine x grumpy trope, balancing out the grumpiness with her unwavering positivity and charm. honestly, you can’t help but root for her and adore her.
⋆౨ৎ� shepherd.
i really appreciated how his character was written, he wasn’t so toxic that i found myself hoping they wouldn’t end up together. he had a strong sense of self and wasn’t afraid to express his emotions, even though his trust issues with women were evident. his grumpiness was balanced perfectly; he wasn’t an outright jerk, which was such a relief.
⋆౨ৎ� shepherd and everly.
while faking ms. right doesn’t fully explore the emotional connection, it delivers a slow, easy, and charming romance that i thoroughly enjoyed. shepherd and everly’s journey was such a joy to follow, with their on-page relationship and slow-burn chemistry being a constant highlight. it’s the perfect blend of opposites attract and grumpy/sunshine, making their dynamic both fun and heartwarming.
ᢉ� .� all in all, it was a good read. while it wasn’t something entirely new, it was an easy and enjoyable book to get through. i really enjoyed it, and i’m definitely planning to continue with the series. i’m definitely interested in exploring the author’s other books next time
——� ˗ˋ � 𝐪𝐮𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐬 � ˊ˗ ——�
� “i figured if more people made an effort to be friendly, the world would be a much better place.�
� “that's the thing about love, though. if you never open yourself up to the risk of being hurt, you'll never give someone the chance to get close enough to love you back.�
� “everly, you have the biggest heart of anyone i’ve ever known. and i’m about to ask you to give it to me, forever. all i have to give you in return is mine, which, to be perfectly honest, isn’t enough. but i love you with every bit of it—with every piece of my soul. will you marry me?�
June 1, 2019
A great start to the series...
I'm a sucker for a millionaire/billionaire hero. If you add in that he's an aloof, arrogant and bossy hero, you've caught me hook, line and sinker. I really enjoyed reading Faking Ms. Right and I finished the story with a big goofy smile and a sigh of contentment. I met and was intrigued with Everly and Shepherd when I read the prequel, . This poor woman has faced some horrific first dates and I completely understood her initial reticence in looking for love. Shepherd comes across as an unemotional robot who's working life takes precedence to everything. When Shepherd needs a favour, he does not hesitate to call on the most capable woman he's acquainted with, his assistant, Everly.
At first, I was a little icy towards Shepherd, but to be honest, he was just as icy back. He doesn't want me to get close to him to see if he has a gooey inside. As times goes on, we get to know Shepherd better and realise that his iciness is really a protective shell. With a winning smile, strawberry shampoo and a wee bit of heat, Everly manages to melt his hard shell.
I found Faking Ms. Right the perfect mix of humour, sigh-worthy loveliness and sexy hot shenanigans. Everly's friends are an absolute CRACK UP. I can't wait for them to get their own stories. Shepherd's family, especially his Dad were lovable and at times, it was hard to believe they were related. Shepherd's ex was a psycho chicken and I hated every scene we had to deal with her and her beautiful butt. There was a wee bit of conflict and frustration but it never overtook the storyline and I knew that Everly and Shepherd were always going to make it to the end and beyond.
Claire Kingsley is quickly becoming one of my favourite contemporary romance authors and I'm going to check out her backlog. Her writing flows well, characters are engaging and sexy times HOT without being OTT.
I really enjoyed Faking Ms. Right and if you haven't tried Claire Kingsley yet, this would be a great introduction. If you're a fan of office romances, and quite partial to a rich, handsome and bossy hero, I highly suggest giving this one a go.
I'm a sucker for a millionaire/billionaire hero. If you add in that he's an aloof, arrogant and bossy hero, you've caught me hook, line and sinker. I really enjoyed reading Faking Ms. Right and I finished the story with a big goofy smile and a sigh of contentment. I met and was intrigued with Everly and Shepherd when I read the prequel, . This poor woman has faced some horrific first dates and I completely understood her initial reticence in looking for love. Shepherd comes across as an unemotional robot who's working life takes precedence to everything. When Shepherd needs a favour, he does not hesitate to call on the most capable woman he's acquainted with, his assistant, Everly.
At first, I was a little icy towards Shepherd, but to be honest, he was just as icy back. He doesn't want me to get close to him to see if he has a gooey inside. As times goes on, we get to know Shepherd better and realise that his iciness is really a protective shell. With a winning smile, strawberry shampoo and a wee bit of heat, Everly manages to melt his hard shell.
I found Faking Ms. Right the perfect mix of humour, sigh-worthy loveliness and sexy hot shenanigans. Everly's friends are an absolute CRACK UP. I can't wait for them to get their own stories. Shepherd's family, especially his Dad were lovable and at times, it was hard to believe they were related. Shepherd's ex was a psycho chicken and I hated every scene we had to deal with her and her beautiful butt. There was a wee bit of conflict and frustration but it never overtook the storyline and I knew that Everly and Shepherd were always going to make it to the end and beyond.
Claire Kingsley is quickly becoming one of my favourite contemporary romance authors and I'm going to check out her backlog. Her writing flows well, characters are engaging and sexy times HOT without being OTT.
I really enjoyed Faking Ms. Right and if you haven't tried Claire Kingsley yet, this would be a great introduction. If you're a fan of office romances, and quite partial to a rich, handsome and bossy hero, I highly suggest giving this one a go.
May 19, 2019
I will admit to some apprehension when I started Faking Ms Right. I was really bothered about how Shepard got himself into the situation with Every. But have faith, readers! Claire Kingsley brings it around to fantastic. Poor Shepard thinks he is genetically cold and closed off. Sunshiney, happy Everly is there to help him save face by following his crazy scheme. She shows him that she can be trusted with his true self and helps him melt that cold exterior. It was a real pleasure reading this book. I am so glad that I kept going because Kingsley writes a wonderful romance.
February 28, 2025
3.5 Stars
I’ve rarely been this annoyed by so many plot points and character behaviours YET still enjoyed the hell out of a romance as much as I did here. This whole review will therefore be littered with mixed messaging and I just don’t care.
On one hand, the causations within the main plot were absolutely bonkers.
For two seemingly sane, intelligent, and rational adult MCs, sunshiney executive-assistant Everly and her broody millionaire boss Shepherd decide to enter into a fake relationship scenario for the stupidest of stupid reasons—being that Shepherd’s CEO father is unwittingly dating Shepherd’s scheming ex, but no one can tell daddy this because he’s� too sensitive? Or because he’s going through big life stuff? Like all human adults?! But, again, he’s too sensitive to handle the truth…so Shepherd and Everly play house to detract and distract, which, yeah. Stupid.
Meanwhile, Everly’s also very sane, intelligent, and rational lesbian sister wants to have a baby, so she starts making demands that Everly ask Shepherd for his sperm� because that’s something you ask your sister to ask HER BOSS, whom you (as the sister) have never ever ever met, so that’s a normal ask, right? Because he’s handsome and must be smart, given his professional status, so naturally you (the sister) have the right to demand he gives you his best swimmers. WHAT THE F*CK!?!
The outrageousness of the sister’s request (this had my blood boiling; I kid you not) and the use of the weakest fake relationship set-up I’ve ever read in my life almost had me throwing in the towel at chapter 4.
But, guys� I can’t stress enough how easy and addictive the story was on a whole, making it nigh impossible to stop reading once I started.
Because on the flipside of my annoyances, I thought the ensemble cast was fantastic, I found the writing to be smooth and morish, and I ended up absolutely loving the way Shepherd and Everly’s once-purely-professional relationship slowly morphed into a deeper bond of friendship, emotional support, and steamily rising attraction—even when I thought their reasons for the initial forced proximity were just plain silly.
It was one of those reads where I simultaneously wished I could go back and change a few things, but also keep it exactly as is, because had the stupid shit not been part of the plot, then all the things I enjoyed about the story wouldn’t/couldn’t have played out the same way.
Honestly, it’s a real conundrum, but that’s what happens when you love/hate a book as intensely as I did while reading . Will I be back for the sequels? Hell yes, I will, because those best girly friends of Everly's stole every page they were on and I want to see each of them find their own HEA, more silly plot points be damned.
I’ve rarely been this annoyed by so many plot points and character behaviours YET still enjoyed the hell out of a romance as much as I did here. This whole review will therefore be littered with mixed messaging and I just don’t care.
On one hand, the causations within the main plot were absolutely bonkers.
For two seemingly sane, intelligent, and rational adult MCs, sunshiney executive-assistant Everly and her broody millionaire boss Shepherd decide to enter into a fake relationship scenario for the stupidest of stupid reasons—being that Shepherd’s CEO father is unwittingly dating Shepherd’s scheming ex, but no one can tell daddy this because he’s� too sensitive? Or because he’s going through big life stuff? Like all human adults?! But, again, he’s too sensitive to handle the truth…so Shepherd and Everly play house to detract and distract, which, yeah. Stupid.
Meanwhile, Everly’s also very sane, intelligent, and rational lesbian sister wants to have a baby, so she starts making demands that Everly ask Shepherd for his sperm� because that’s something you ask your sister to ask HER BOSS, whom you (as the sister) have never ever ever met, so that’s a normal ask, right? Because he’s handsome and must be smart, given his professional status, so naturally you (the sister) have the right to demand he gives you his best swimmers. WHAT THE F*CK!?!
The outrageousness of the sister’s request (this had my blood boiling; I kid you not) and the use of the weakest fake relationship set-up I’ve ever read in my life almost had me throwing in the towel at chapter 4.
But, guys� I can’t stress enough how easy and addictive the story was on a whole, making it nigh impossible to stop reading once I started.
Because on the flipside of my annoyances, I thought the ensemble cast was fantastic, I found the writing to be smooth and morish, and I ended up absolutely loving the way Shepherd and Everly’s once-purely-professional relationship slowly morphed into a deeper bond of friendship, emotional support, and steamily rising attraction—even when I thought their reasons for the initial forced proximity were just plain silly.
It was one of those reads where I simultaneously wished I could go back and change a few things, but also keep it exactly as is, because had the stupid shit not been part of the plot, then all the things I enjoyed about the story wouldn’t/couldn’t have played out the same way.
Honestly, it’s a real conundrum, but that’s what happens when you love/hate a book as intensely as I did while reading . Will I be back for the sequels? Hell yes, I will, because those best girly friends of Everly's stole every page they were on and I want to see each of them find their own HEA, more silly plot points be damned.
February 18, 2021
So in theory, I should hate this book because it has so many things that I normally hate:
� Powerful and intimidating boss falls for his secretary
� Love interest that is way too possessive and domineering
But...but... I really liked this story 😅 There's just something interesting and unique about it that makes it stand out from other books with these common tropes which I normally hate. I actually find myself thinking about a couple of scenes in this book quite often because I enjoyed them that much! Definitely recommend 👍
� Powerful and intimidating boss falls for his secretary
� Love interest that is way too possessive and domineering
But...but... I really liked this story 😅 There's just something interesting and unique about it that makes it stand out from other books with these common tropes which I normally hate. I actually find myself thinking about a couple of scenes in this book quite often because I enjoyed them that much! Definitely recommend 👍
June 16, 2022
4 stars
Loved this book. The Grumpy/Sunshine trope is just top tier. Highly recommend this book for when you want something light hearted and sweet.
Loved this book. The Grumpy/Sunshine trope is just top tier. Highly recommend this book for when you want something light hearted and sweet.
November 2, 2022
3,5 Sterne
Die erste Hälfte hat mir sehr gut gefallen, dann haben mich die ganzen spicy Szenen ein bisschen genervt. Auch am Ende gab es ein Thema, das meiner Meinung nach unnötig aufgebauscht wurde, das dann wiederum für reichlich Drama gesorgt hat.
Aber insgesamt ein netter, unterhaltsamer Read :)
Die erste Hälfte hat mir sehr gut gefallen, dann haben mich die ganzen spicy Szenen ein bisschen genervt. Auch am Ende gab es ein Thema, das meiner Meinung nach unnötig aufgebauscht wurde, das dann wiederum für reichlich Drama gesorgt hat.
Aber insgesamt ein netter, unterhaltsamer Read :)
July 28, 2024
4 Stars!
Such a cute, sweet Grumpy/Sunshine read. Took a star off for the implausibility of the Sperm donor angle which was key to the plot but ultimately forgivable.
Sheppard Calloway hasn't noticed Everly Dalton despite that she's been his executive assistant for years. But that's the mark of a good EA, be so good you're not even noticeable. Except that once he dumps his ex, Svetlana, and winds up running into her with his dad, of all people, he needs a huge ask from Everly. Pretend, for one night, to be his girlfriend so Svetlana will stop pursuing him.
It's an easy enough ask but when Sheppard's dad becomes ill and loses a small fortune in bad investments, he's forced to move in with Sheppard. Knowing Svetlana will be a constant visitor now, Sheppard is forced to ramp up this ruse by moving Everly in.
Now you ask, why is Everly invested in this ruse? We all know both parties have to have a reason for this trope to work. Hers is less plausible which is that her sister Annie wants a baby with her wife and they want Sheppard's perfect baby batter. This is where the author lost me. In this day, with all the advances in science, you couldn't find another suitable donor? AND, what makes Annie so certain he doesn't have some sort of genetic flaw? A predisposition for diabetes? Or how about a recessive gene that could prove deadly? No, she wants his baby because he's pretty and smart. I can only suspend disbelief so much.
HOWEVER, the balance of the story is engaging and funny and endearing. The relationships between Everly and her friends, Nora and Hazel are sweet, supportive and genuine. Even Sheppard, who seems very stoic most of the time, is kind and gentle with his father and deeply caring for his brother.
As Everly and Sheppard get to know each other and, yes, share a bed, their differences become complimentary. He's a steadfast rock and she's his sunshine. Slowly, they begin to bring out the best in each other and, despite the original agreement, begin to fall in love. Though Sheppard would tell you otherwise.
Yes, there is a third act break up, but with this particular story it fits the narrative and I didn't find it misplaced. Altogether, this is a sweet, solid read from an author I will definitely read more from in the future.
Such a cute, sweet Grumpy/Sunshine read. Took a star off for the implausibility of the Sperm donor angle which was key to the plot but ultimately forgivable.
Sheppard Calloway hasn't noticed Everly Dalton despite that she's been his executive assistant for years. But that's the mark of a good EA, be so good you're not even noticeable. Except that once he dumps his ex, Svetlana, and winds up running into her with his dad, of all people, he needs a huge ask from Everly. Pretend, for one night, to be his girlfriend so Svetlana will stop pursuing him.
It's an easy enough ask but when Sheppard's dad becomes ill and loses a small fortune in bad investments, he's forced to move in with Sheppard. Knowing Svetlana will be a constant visitor now, Sheppard is forced to ramp up this ruse by moving Everly in.
Now you ask, why is Everly invested in this ruse? We all know both parties have to have a reason for this trope to work. Hers is less plausible which is that her sister Annie wants a baby with her wife and they want Sheppard's perfect baby batter. This is where the author lost me. In this day, with all the advances in science, you couldn't find another suitable donor? AND, what makes Annie so certain he doesn't have some sort of genetic flaw? A predisposition for diabetes? Or how about a recessive gene that could prove deadly? No, she wants his baby because he's pretty and smart. I can only suspend disbelief so much.
HOWEVER, the balance of the story is engaging and funny and endearing. The relationships between Everly and her friends, Nora and Hazel are sweet, supportive and genuine. Even Sheppard, who seems very stoic most of the time, is kind and gentle with his father and deeply caring for his brother.
As Everly and Sheppard get to know each other and, yes, share a bed, their differences become complimentary. He's a steadfast rock and she's his sunshine. Slowly, they begin to bring out the best in each other and, despite the original agreement, begin to fall in love. Though Sheppard would tell you otherwise.
Yes, there is a third act break up, but with this particular story it fits the narrative and I didn't find it misplaced. Altogether, this is a sweet, solid read from an author I will definitely read more from in the future.
May 16, 2019
I loved this so much!
It was sweet, it was sexy, it was FUN.
Everly - bright and cheery as sunshine, always wanting to make people happy and put a smile on their face. She is full of warmth and friendliness that made me want to be her best friend.
Shepherd - seen as a cold businessman, an emotionless, heartless robot.
But I’m here to tell you... that is false.
He’s HOT, full of love, and has a huge... heart.
And BONUS: he’s sexy and growly AF. And loves a good scratch on the back.
Be still my vagina.
These two stole my heart! Watching Shep’s layers slowly being peeled away by the delightful and bubbly Everly was heart-warming. Watching their relationship go from assistant/boss to a fake couple was highly entertaining. The anticipation and sexual tension was delicious. And seeing their attraction grow into something stronger was heart-squeezingly beautiful and made my heart go pitter patter. It was impossible not to fall in love with them.
And I must give a shout out to Nora and Hazel. These witty supporting characters are Every’s best friends and they added so much to this story. Love them, too!
I absolutely loved this sexy RomCom and highly recommend it. It had the perfect blend of sass, steam, and heart.
This was my first read by Claire Kingsley and I cannot wait to read more!
It was sweet, it was sexy, it was FUN.
Everly - bright and cheery as sunshine, always wanting to make people happy and put a smile on their face. She is full of warmth and friendliness that made me want to be her best friend.
Shepherd - seen as a cold businessman, an emotionless, heartless robot.
But I’m here to tell you... that is false.
He’s HOT, full of love, and has a huge... heart.
And BONUS: he’s sexy and growly AF. And loves a good scratch on the back.
Be still my vagina.
These two stole my heart! Watching Shep’s layers slowly being peeled away by the delightful and bubbly Everly was heart-warming. Watching their relationship go from assistant/boss to a fake couple was highly entertaining. The anticipation and sexual tension was delicious. And seeing their attraction grow into something stronger was heart-squeezingly beautiful and made my heart go pitter patter. It was impossible not to fall in love with them.
And I must give a shout out to Nora and Hazel. These witty supporting characters are Every’s best friends and they added so much to this story. Love them, too!
I absolutely loved this sexy RomCom and highly recommend it. It had the perfect blend of sass, steam, and heart.
This was my first read by Claire Kingsley and I cannot wait to read more!
May 25, 2019
This was awesome. Like so cute and adorable and low-angst and believable like why am I only justing hearing of this author?!
It's all basically what the blurb says, Shepherd, world's most serious and task-oriented, ice-cold robot of a boss, asks Everly, who let's be honest he doesn't actually see beyond her role as his assistant, to be his fake live-in girlfriend because of shit pulled by his actual slutty ex-girlfriend.
Now we all know what happens next but I loved how it was delivered. All and I really do mean all, characters were just plain absolutely brilliant. It was so much fun to read and the low-angst. God! that was definitely a highlight for me cause damn it, I abhor unnecessary angsty drama.
I loved how Everly was a bubbly fun walking on sunshine kinda girl and yet had a steel backbone. She did not let anyone take advantage of her good nature and I for one can truly admire that.
Faking Ms.Right has all my recommendation, give it a chance, it will brighten your day and leave you with a lot to smile about.
I can't wait to check out more of Claire's work.
June 27, 2020
The story is about fake relationship. The hero, Shepard is a billionaire who needs a fake date. He took his assistant, Averly. Averly is out if luck with dating. It seems she always ends up with horrible date.
Both are perfect for each other. What I do not get is that the plot/ twist is flat/ no depth. Every climax is solved too quickly. The character chemistry is also forced. I want to see more spark/ vulnerable moments/ tender moments between the characters
I an surprise and can not believe this book is coming from Miss Kingsley. After all, Miss Kinsley usually write a wonderful rom com genre.
Disappointment.
2 stars
Both are perfect for each other. What I do not get is that the plot/ twist is flat/ no depth. Every climax is solved too quickly. The character chemistry is also forced. I want to see more spark/ vulnerable moments/ tender moments between the characters
I an surprise and can not believe this book is coming from Miss Kingsley. After all, Miss Kinsley usually write a wonderful rom com genre.
Disappointment.
2 stars
November 17, 2023
Kendini okutan, akıcı bir kitaptı. Patron-Asistan temasını severim. Anlaşmalı bir nişanlılık da yine benim için çalışan bir unsur.
Karakterler de fena değildi. Shep'in duygularını nasıl ifade edeceği konusunda emin olamaması...bu yüzden de soğuk bir imaj çizmesi, daha doğrusu insanların bu yönde fikirlere sahip olması üzücüydü.
Everly ise tam bir günışığı modundaydı. Herkesi mutlu etmek isteyen nazik ve kibar bir yapıya sahip. Soğuk CEO'ya bu kadar uzun süre dayanmasında bunlar da etkendi.
Ve ilk etapta novella kısmı... Everly bu kadar şanssız olamaz. Ya öyle felaket randevuları oldu ki 🤣 okurken ben şaştım kaldım.😅
Aşırı bağlanmadım kitaba ama hızlı okuttu kendini. Kitabın başında bir detay beni vazgeçiyordum ama aldığım teşvikler sayesinde devam ettim 😅 yine de hoşuma gitmeyen bir detay.
Seriye devam ederim ama. Karakterler ilgi çekiciydi.
Karakterler de fena değildi. Shep'in duygularını nasıl ifade edeceği konusunda emin olamaması...bu yüzden de soğuk bir imaj çizmesi, daha doğrusu insanların bu yönde fikirlere sahip olması üzücüydü.
Everly ise tam bir günışığı modundaydı. Herkesi mutlu etmek isteyen nazik ve kibar bir yapıya sahip. Soğuk CEO'ya bu kadar uzun süre dayanmasında bunlar da etkendi.
Ve ilk etapta novella kısmı... Everly bu kadar şanssız olamaz. Ya öyle felaket randevuları oldu ki 🤣 okurken ben şaştım kaldım.😅
Aşırı bağlanmadım kitaba ama hızlı okuttu kendini. Kitabın başında bir detay beni vazgeçiyordum ama aldığım teşvikler sayesinde devam ettim 😅 yine de hoşuma gitmeyen bir detay.
Seriye devam ederim ama. Karakterler ilgi çekiciydi.
March 31, 2023
31.03.2023: I think some books are not meant to be reread, because with each reread, I like this story a little bit less.
It's a pretty standard fake engagement story and I liked the steam level, but the things that irritated me the first time around stood out even more, so -
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05.02.2021: Upholding my previous opinion that the reason for drama in this book was absolutely WTF.
But also, it's definitely a cute book xD
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After some deliberation, 3.5 stars it is.
I enjoyed Everly and Shepherd as characters. I enjoyed fake-dating/fake-engaged trope and their chemistry and the heartfelt and steamy romance as well as all their soft moments.
Overall, it was fun.
But it was also...oh-so-predictable? The moment Everly's sister, Annie, verbalized what kind of favour she was asking of Everly (which, by the way, was just so OUT THERE and irrational), I knew it was simply a plot device to cause Drama� and I knew perfectly well where it was all heading. And I was 100% right.
*yawn*
There were also parts that weren't written all that well. For example a scene where Everly's friends, Nora and Hazel, visit Shep in his office and he lists in his mind what they're wearing from head to toes. It was just weird and clumsy.
To sum up - this was a relaxing read and I had some fun reading it but the earth did not move or anything. It's trapped in this place between "just OK" and "good" and so I was left teetering on the edge of satisfied.
It's a pretty standard fake engagement story and I liked the steam level, but the things that irritated me the first time around stood out even more, so -
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05.02.2021: Upholding my previous opinion that the reason for drama in this book was absolutely WTF.
But also, it's definitely a cute book xD
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After some deliberation, 3.5 stars it is.
I enjoyed Everly and Shepherd as characters. I enjoyed fake-dating/fake-engaged trope and their chemistry and the heartfelt and steamy romance as well as all their soft moments.
Overall, it was fun.
But it was also...oh-so-predictable? The moment Everly's sister, Annie, verbalized what kind of favour she was asking of Everly (which, by the way, was just so OUT THERE and irrational), I knew it was simply a plot device to cause Drama� and I knew perfectly well where it was all heading. And I was 100% right.
*yawn*
There were also parts that weren't written all that well. For example a scene where Everly's friends, Nora and Hazel, visit Shep in his office and he lists in his mind what they're wearing from head to toes. It was just weird and clumsy.
To sum up - this was a relaxing read and I had some fun reading it but the earth did not move or anything. It's trapped in this place between "just OK" and "good" and so I was left teetering on the edge of satisfied.
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