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Awaken Online #5
Hellion
Jason's back! And he's ready for some revenge!
Roughly a month has passed in-game since Thorn's attack on the Twilight Throne. In that time, the dark city has managed to recover and rebuild - growing the ranks of Original Sin at the same time.
Which is good, because that brief respite is over. The Avatar of Flame has risen within the depths of the northern desert and has thrown down a digital gauntlet to Jason - with a gate piece hanging in the balance. Even worse? His opponent is none other than Finn Harris, the 'father of modern AI.' The same man that may have been behind Thorn's attack on the Twilight Throne.
And in the wake of recent events - the committee hearing back in the real world and the attack on his people - Jason is no longer content to just react; to wallow in the safety of his kingdom. If he's to be painted the villain... well, then it's long past time he fully embraced that role.
Because now it's personal.
And there'll be no holding back...
Roughly a month has passed in-game since Thorn's attack on the Twilight Throne. In that time, the dark city has managed to recover and rebuild - growing the ranks of Original Sin at the same time.
Which is good, because that brief respite is over. The Avatar of Flame has risen within the depths of the northern desert and has thrown down a digital gauntlet to Jason - with a gate piece hanging in the balance. Even worse? His opponent is none other than Finn Harris, the 'father of modern AI.' The same man that may have been behind Thorn's attack on the Twilight Throne.
And in the wake of recent events - the committee hearing back in the real world and the attack on his people - Jason is no longer content to just react; to wallow in the safety of his kingdom. If he's to be painted the villain... well, then it's long past time he fully embraced that role.
Because now it's personal.
And there'll be no holding back...
722 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 1, 2021
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About the author
Travis Bagwell
21books2,001followersI live in Austin, Texas with my wife and our three dogs. I'm an attorney by day and an avid video game enthusiast by night. Writing fiction had been a secret dream of mine for a while. However, between school and work, that dream seemed impossible to squeeze in. A couple of years ago, I had a bit more time on my hands and I finally decided to put my nerdy interests to work by trying my hand at writing science fiction and fantasy.
I never expected the wildly positive response to my work. I am truly blown away and humbled and I only hope to be able to continue sharing my stories.
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I never expected the wildly positive response to my work. I am truly blown away and humbled and I only hope to be able to continue sharing my stories.
You can find me here:
Or come check out our awesome fangroup and meet some cool people!
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June 21, 2024
An excellent addition that sees many plotlines converge within the universe of Awaken Online.
Awesome battles, great philosophical banter, an all round good read! Highly recommended.
Awesome battles, great philosophical banter, an all round good read! Highly recommended.
November 19, 2022
I admit I'm rating this series of books entirely on how much fun I'm having. It's not the only way to rate, of course, but it is quite genuine.
I never guessed how down the LitRPG hole I'd fall or how much sheer pleasure I'd have, standing around with a goofy grin on my face. This particular book had me standing around with that look a lot.
I mean, between trying to live up to a chaotic evil role while being a real softy is fun all by itself, but when you try to raze a desert city with undead gigantic ants and sandworms, play a long con-game featuring quite a bit of awesome military chicanery and lay full siege to a fully fortified city ... TWICE... matching epic action on the same level as any epic fantasy tome, I have to tip my hat.
The imagination, tactics, and strategy is awesome. Using the quirks of one's undead army on the playing field is fantastic.
I never guessed how down the LitRPG hole I'd fall or how much sheer pleasure I'd have, standing around with a goofy grin on my face. This particular book had me standing around with that look a lot.
I mean, between trying to live up to a chaotic evil role while being a real softy is fun all by itself, but when you try to raze a desert city with undead gigantic ants and sandworms, play a long con-game featuring quite a bit of awesome military chicanery and lay full siege to a fully fortified city ... TWICE... matching epic action on the same level as any epic fantasy tome, I have to tip my hat.
The imagination, tactics, and strategy is awesome. Using the quirks of one's undead army on the playing field is fantastic.
July 20, 2021
DNF 48%
How did so many people rate this 5 star? Wtf was I missing?
Repetitive and predictable. Boring, flat humor. Anticlimactic battles. Lame angst. I felt as though this book was written for a middle schooler with the B rated boring conversations. Also, what happened to the leveling system? That is my favorite part in any LitRPG and was basically forgotten here. Potions seemed to have taken over instead. The first 20+ chapters (legit 10 hrs of content) of the book was unnecessary filler. I can't take it any longer.
This used to be my favorite series for this genre, however it should've been finished at book 3. I'm finishing this series for good, it's just going downhill.
Honestly the only thing I liked was the cover.
How did so many people rate this 5 star? Wtf was I missing?
Repetitive and predictable. Boring, flat humor. Anticlimactic battles. Lame angst. I felt as though this book was written for a middle schooler with the B rated boring conversations. Also, what happened to the leveling system? That is my favorite part in any LitRPG and was basically forgotten here. Potions seemed to have taken over instead. The first 20+ chapters (legit 10 hrs of content) of the book was unnecessary filler. I can't take it any longer.
This used to be my favorite series for this genre, however it should've been finished at book 3. I'm finishing this series for good, it's just going downhill.
Honestly the only thing I liked was the cover.
May 9, 2021
"Because the reality is that morality isn't painted in black and white, but infinite and varied shades of gray, the hue shifting and changing subtly for each observer - with their own experiences and knowledge coloring the outcome. And what's true of our world is true of this one as well."
“I’ve been where you are . . . Gone down the same path. It seems crazy, impossible, insane� but once you’ve explored every logical alley and crevice, followed that line of reasoning to its inevitable conclusion, you’re left with a single unanswerable question . . . How do you really know this world’s residents aren’t real?�
Bagwell reintroduces his main character, Jason, at the interesting juncture of now being imprisoned, framing the initial two-thirds of the book as a flashback as Jason recounts the events leading up to his confinement. This dialogue between Jason and Westley serves to add a new layer of intrigue, while at times resembling a Platonic dialogue foreground the philosophical and ethical issues of the game. The ability of the NPCs to pass the Turing Test, their personhood, and the game's intense realism pose significant questions for the nature of AO. The series' thematic focus on conceptions of reality and the attendant ethical implications have been underlying several subplots, yet here these matters are tackled more directly as Jason elucidates such points for his interlocutor. He cycles through these issues, such as defining reality, the ethics of (virtual) torture, and relativistic morality. Westley himself unexpectedly proves to be a fascinating character. Being accidentally caught in the center of Jason's schemes, he comes to experience the game first-hand, and his personal growth by the end of the book, in a sense, parallels that of Jason in the overall series as hinted by his repetition of Jason's philosophy at the investigation meeting. Another fascinating stylistic feature is the occasional vignettes from the perspective of otherwise background characters, a technique that Bagwell utilized in previous novels to create a greater depth to his fictional. In Hellion, this habit reveals its true creative potential, especially with the miniature backstory provided for Ella, a character that hopefully will show up in future novels.
The story in Hellion impressively weaves together the threads of Jason's and Finn's storylines as well as the side quest novels centered on Eliza and Frank. As with the rest of the mainline series, the perspective remains primarily with Jason, a character that has already shown substantial development over the course of the series. The more inward focus and development of Jason in Dominion (the management and stability of the Twilight Throne and his existing relationships), shifts in Hellion to grappling with the external threat posed by Finn. Of course, once he learns of Finn's motivations, the tone shifts remarkably. This watershed moment for Jason also directs attention back to the matter of Alfred's potential role in all of this, with the unsettlingly question of the AI's overarching influence, both inside and outside the game. Beneath this main conflict, are also threads of continuity, wrapping up developments of Eliza's story from Apathy, and the deepening relationship of Frank and Silver from Unity.
The novel is an impressive addition to the series, as well a remarkably innovative addition to the genres of science fiction and LitRPG overall. Bagwell, through Westley, also provides a more sophisticated and nuanced perspective on the concept and theme his the inaugural book of the series, Catharsis. This callback accompanies the closure of previous plotlines (the CPSC investigation appearing to be at an impasse now) and allusions to future developments (the connections of Eliza's parents, Alfred's hidden plans, and Finn's own goals), boding well for future novels being able to sustain the high pace and intrigue of Hellion.
“I’ve been where you are . . . Gone down the same path. It seems crazy, impossible, insane� but once you’ve explored every logical alley and crevice, followed that line of reasoning to its inevitable conclusion, you’re left with a single unanswerable question . . . How do you really know this world’s residents aren’t real?�
Bagwell reintroduces his main character, Jason, at the interesting juncture of now being imprisoned, framing the initial two-thirds of the book as a flashback as Jason recounts the events leading up to his confinement. This dialogue between Jason and Westley serves to add a new layer of intrigue, while at times resembling a Platonic dialogue foreground the philosophical and ethical issues of the game. The ability of the NPCs to pass the Turing Test, their personhood, and the game's intense realism pose significant questions for the nature of AO. The series' thematic focus on conceptions of reality and the attendant ethical implications have been underlying several subplots, yet here these matters are tackled more directly as Jason elucidates such points for his interlocutor. He cycles through these issues, such as defining reality, the ethics of (virtual) torture, and relativistic morality. Westley himself unexpectedly proves to be a fascinating character. Being accidentally caught in the center of Jason's schemes, he comes to experience the game first-hand, and his personal growth by the end of the book, in a sense, parallels that of Jason in the overall series as hinted by his repetition of Jason's philosophy at the investigation meeting. Another fascinating stylistic feature is the occasional vignettes from the perspective of otherwise background characters, a technique that Bagwell utilized in previous novels to create a greater depth to his fictional. In Hellion, this habit reveals its true creative potential, especially with the miniature backstory provided for Ella, a character that hopefully will show up in future novels.
The story in Hellion impressively weaves together the threads of Jason's and Finn's storylines as well as the side quest novels centered on Eliza and Frank. As with the rest of the mainline series, the perspective remains primarily with Jason, a character that has already shown substantial development over the course of the series. The more inward focus and development of Jason in Dominion (the management and stability of the Twilight Throne and his existing relationships), shifts in Hellion to grappling with the external threat posed by Finn. Of course, once he learns of Finn's motivations, the tone shifts remarkably. This watershed moment for Jason also directs attention back to the matter of Alfred's potential role in all of this, with the unsettlingly question of the AI's overarching influence, both inside and outside the game. Beneath this main conflict, are also threads of continuity, wrapping up developments of Eliza's story from Apathy, and the deepening relationship of Frank and Silver from Unity.
The novel is an impressive addition to the series, as well a remarkably innovative addition to the genres of science fiction and LitRPG overall. Bagwell, through Westley, also provides a more sophisticated and nuanced perspective on the concept and theme his the inaugural book of the series, Catharsis. This callback accompanies the closure of previous plotlines (the CPSC investigation appearing to be at an impasse now) and allusions to future developments (the connections of Eliza's parents, Alfred's hidden plans, and Finn's own goals), boding well for future novels being able to sustain the high pace and intrigue of Hellion.
June 4, 2021
Wow what a ride
Amazing Story, epic battles, and Jason's cunning through it all. And undead. Many many Undead. What more can you ask for? 😁
Amazing Story, epic battles, and Jason's cunning through it all. And undead. Many many Undead. What more can you ask for? 😁
May 12, 2021
This has become boring.
I find myself speeding through the in game action to get to the real world occurrences. The game has become to contrived, so I no longer care about it or any outcomes from it. The court case and real world disposition is still fun. Since they seem realistic.
I find myself speeding through the in game action to get to the real world occurrences. The game has become to contrived, so I no longer care about it or any outcomes from it. The court case and real world disposition is still fun. Since they seem realistic.
October 7, 2021
Note: This book ties in events of all previous main books and side quests (esp, Tarot and Unity though has minor references to all previous books and side quests) and events in earlier books are referenced in initial 25-30% of the book. It certainly would help if you have read them all and knew the backstories....but it's not really mandatory. Just take some references at face value and push through and soon we'll get to current narrative and leave history behind.
Overall: +7.5/10
Damn good book. Starts off a bit slow but then we get to the main event sometime quick and after that, it's just a breakneck race against time to the finish. Absolute blitzkrieg of a read! Epic'est of the epic battles till now and takes to plot to another level of murkiness leaving you with anticipation (and probably screaming for more!)
Writing/plot/Pace: +8.5/10
The initial foreword by the author was incredibly helpful and summarizes key events and timelines and refreshed my memory greatly. Should be mandatory for all sequels!
The book starts off where events in Dominion/Unity/Inferno ended. We get a slight recap of events to help those who might not have read all/some of the earlier books. The book initially takes a bit of time to set the scene as our favorite gang of sinners embark of a impossible quest. they realize things could start off as impossible and still get bleaker. And we all know next...time for Jason to come up with a nutcase of a plan. And this one is probably a dooze, king of nutcases. One thing lead to another and we are treated to high octane, action packed game of chess as the avatars Jason, Finn, Eliza, Alexion and their lieutenants strategize and counter-strategize against each other.
After about 30% in, the pace picks up and stays frenetic all the way to the end. Sure was a page turner and hard to put down.
The writing structure was different too as we get to see Jason in a new situation and near half the book is told as a flashback. What is interesting is that Travis has meshed the out-game current events with in-game flashbacks so deftly that the time shift is zero making this into a seamless story.
I was hooked as the plot twists and turns come across as Jason and Finn counter-move against each other. If Travis had a habit of pulling rabbit out of his hat, he's likely to have enough for a rabbit farm now. The events are tied in with a grand finale...that will likely make the out-game events as highly anticipated as in-game events going into next book (not that it wasn't the case now, but even more!)
Characters: +7.5/10
The book is all Jason and Finn. Now I'll admit I wasn't a fan of Finn in Tarot, but here he comes into his own as a strategist equal to Jason. their to-and-fro makes for a big chunk of the book. Eliza, Frank and Riley all mature as characters as they level up. I hope Julia gets her own side quest, as her perspective was one I really wanted more.
May 17, 2021
It’s ok
Juggling a lot of plot lines and twists with so much time between books... he needed the book review he gave at the beginning. I’ll be honest: I didn’t read the Finn books because I really didn’t want to get involved in a side world.
That said, if I were a teenager, I’d probably like this more...but...I’m not.
Perhaps my biggest issue is the use of current “cool� language (like using Karen as an insult, mentioning Instagram, or using 2020 stats for something decades later) is going to age VERY POORLY and will end up cringe material later on. I imagine that’s why Douglas Adams just made up his own.
I won’t get started on the “morality� arguments he writes about, although it’s fascinating as he’s a lawyer.
A side note: As someone who studies and occasional teaches WWII history, I disagree on his Truman statement. But that’s a nerd thing that can’t be helped. I also can’t help but wince, however, since it propagates false information. There was a third solution, but the bombs were to help intimidate the USSR and Stalin from being too bold in the face of US military might. But—AGAIN—it’s just a historian’s nerdiness. Most folks won’t care.
Juggling a lot of plot lines and twists with so much time between books... he needed the book review he gave at the beginning. I’ll be honest: I didn’t read the Finn books because I really didn’t want to get involved in a side world.
That said, if I were a teenager, I’d probably like this more...but...I’m not.
Perhaps my biggest issue is the use of current “cool� language (like using Karen as an insult, mentioning Instagram, or using 2020 stats for something decades later) is going to age VERY POORLY and will end up cringe material later on. I imagine that’s why Douglas Adams just made up his own.
I won’t get started on the “morality� arguments he writes about, although it’s fascinating as he’s a lawyer.
A side note: As someone who studies and occasional teaches WWII history, I disagree on his Truman statement. But that’s a nerd thing that can’t be helped. I also can’t help but wince, however, since it propagates false information. There was a third solution, but the bombs were to help intimidate the USSR and Stalin from being too bold in the face of US military might. But—AGAIN—it’s just a historian’s nerdiness. Most folks won’t care.
July 6, 2021
"That was totally wicked!"
No, really I have never in my life wanted to restart a series and pick up on clues so badly. If you see me back in Catharsis in the next few days you know I squeezed it is. Gods this was awesome. To think this is all in Travis' brain. Amazing.
No, really I have never in my life wanted to restart a series and pick up on clues so badly. If you see me back in Catharsis in the next few days you know I squeezed it is. Gods this was awesome. To think this is all in Travis' brain. Amazing.
October 23, 2024
Amazing! Still prefer Finn’s story over Jason’s. A lot of crazy stuff happens in this one and the epilogue is the cherry on top. Great read!
May 3, 2021
Travis Bagwell crafts an amazing adventure that follows Jason and team as they go on the offensive. Bagwell changes up the narrative framework in a few key ways for this book compared to his previous installments.
In Hellion, all but a few chapters exist entirely within Awaken Online which is a significant departure from the previous Jason-centric story, Dominion.
We're also introduced mid-timeline with a bulk of the story given as flashback. I actually liked this because it gave Bagwell the freedom to gloss over aspects of events as needed to maintain pacing. It also creates a natural buildup to the excitement in the final battle.
Lastly, we see Bagwell's philosophy roots in action. Sprinkled throughout the entire book are several arguments that outline the philosophical underpinnings of the Awaken Online series. Kept to a few paragraphs a time this is an interesting and welcome addition that doesn't distract from pacing or feel out of place.
I enjoyed this book thoroughly and read it almost in one sitting. I did have a few minor issues with the story which knocked it down from a 5 star for me on my first read.
With the events of the last section of the book I'll be very curious where we see things go from here (spoilers below):
In Hellion, all but a few chapters exist entirely within Awaken Online which is a significant departure from the previous Jason-centric story, Dominion.
We're also introduced mid-timeline with a bulk of the story given as flashback. I actually liked this because it gave Bagwell the freedom to gloss over aspects of events as needed to maintain pacing. It also creates a natural buildup to the excitement in the final battle.
Lastly, we see Bagwell's philosophy roots in action. Sprinkled throughout the entire book are several arguments that outline the philosophical underpinnings of the Awaken Online series. Kept to a few paragraphs a time this is an interesting and welcome addition that doesn't distract from pacing or feel out of place.
I enjoyed this book thoroughly and read it almost in one sitting. I did have a few minor issues with the story which knocked it down from a 5 star for me on my first read.
With the events of the last section of the book I'll be very curious where we see things go from here (spoilers below):
May 18, 2021
Fun story plot, poorly written
The story line is captivating, the characters are fun (though they suffer from personality merging a little much). The overall story is however ruined by WAY too many deus ex machina instances that makes one wonder if the author plans only half of the book and wings the rest. Also, too many tell (instead of showing) moments, which leaves the feeling of empathy for the characters dulled out. Overall, too many tropes ruin a decent plot
The story line is captivating, the characters are fun (though they suffer from personality merging a little much). The overall story is however ruined by WAY too many deus ex machina instances that makes one wonder if the author plans only half of the book and wings the rest. Also, too many tell (instead of showing) moments, which leaves the feeling of empathy for the characters dulled out. Overall, too many tropes ruin a decent plot
October 10, 2021
2.5
Finally finished with this one, the first part was a slog which made me put it on the back burner.
Not a fan of the 'stuck in a bind' lets reminisce about how I got here before the plot can progress style.
Seems to me it just puts you in a holding pattern when you're anxious about how the heck the MC will get out of this while making the entire story until you catch up to the present of lesser importance since it's already happened and you know where it'll lead.
Finally finished with this one, the first part was a slog which made me put it on the back burner.
Not a fan of the 'stuck in a bind' lets reminisce about how I got here before the plot can progress style.
Seems to me it just puts you in a holding pattern when you're anxious about how the heck the MC will get out of this while making the entire story until you catch up to the present of lesser importance since it's already happened and you know where it'll lead.
January 22, 2024
This is the book I was waiting for. Interview with a Vampire meets the battle of Troy. Jason finds out the fire Avatar was behind Thorns attack on the twilight throne and has called out Jason in front of the world. Genius VS Ingenious, Fire VS Dark, with team ups and plenty of Alexion slander. 5/5
November 6, 2021
Another great installment in the series. I'm especially enjoying the MC's character growth and rising stakes with each installment. If there is a minor downside for me it would be the reveal of certain characters' incredibly astounding ability to think/plan so far ahead it would make a grandmaster chess player's head spin. That and perhaps the annoying was Travis hooks us with yet another cliffhanger for the next book haha.
August 28, 2023
Well slap me silly and call me Willy! This book was pretty good! Not only in the way it went back and forth between past and present, but also how the stories eventually met up and blew my brain with every twist and trick up Finn and Jason’s sleeves😮�
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 17, 2021
Starting from the middle of the story ruined the suspense
Good story. Great writing and style, just did not like starting in the middle and working back to it. Completely eliminated the desire to read it. Found myself skipping over "old" chapters that had no meaning since I knew where it would end. If it hasn't ended so well I would have given this 1 star.
Good story. Great writing and style, just did not like starting in the middle and working back to it. Completely eliminated the desire to read it. Found myself skipping over "old" chapters that had no meaning since I knew where it would end. If it hasn't ended so well I would have given this 1 star.
May 25, 2021
This was awesome. The author has grown much in his writing style. Can't wait to read the next book.
April 14, 2021
Super solid book. Read the early access copy through Patreon and was totally worth the build up reading chapter by chapter as it was released. Very well written with a solid plot would highly recommend the series as a whole!
May 21, 2021
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As always, I am open to debates and arguments, but also vain enough to seek acknowledgement, so feel free to roast me or applaud my efforts. Either is acceptable, because if you are paying attention to me then you are at least considering the book. And THAT my friends is exactly why you see my comments here.
Cheers
“This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.�
By all accounts, this is a perfectly worded review. Unfortunately, some of our fellow readers are offended that I am not pouring my heart out and offering a detailed and intimate breakdown of my thoughts on the books. As such they have reported me to the authorities and I have been warned against continuing my bad behavior. I will not. So I may be banned. If so, it was a fun journey with you.
If I enjoy a book, my goal is to promote it and help the author by encouraging others to read it. I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. I am simply saying that I liked it. I would like you to read it and make your own decision. After all, you are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
As always, I am open to debates and arguments, but also vain enough to seek acknowledgement, so feel free to roast me or applaud my efforts. Either is acceptable, because if you are paying attention to me then you are at least considering the book. And THAT my friends is exactly why you see my comments here.
Cheers
June 23, 2021
Very minor spoilers
When I saw the return of the Fire Ants, I got worried that it was the direction it was going to head in and we'd just get a lot of grinding...
Boy was I mistaken.
That's luckily only a few pages, maybe a chapter, and its over fairly quick.
Then we get to the lead ups and to the main event. And HOLY SHIT is this epic. Like 'The Return of the King' movie epic taken to crazier proportions. There is so much that happens in this book, its not even a rollercoaster ride, its like a hurtling ship trying to dodge asteroids.
It just starts with a calm before the storm and then gradually the rains come and the lightning, then the storm hits and it just goes to levels of insanity.
Normally reading strategic blow by blow bores me, (Foundryside), but here it's so expertly done that I'm following along, even when I miss stuff, it's ok because the next 'move' will wow me, and it does. The author keeps it moving and constantly engaging, whilst managing the characters, relationships, having touching moments between characters, the humor (although I missed some of the humor in the notifications they were more straight forward this time around), and the badassery.
So many favorite parts:
A ton of video game tropes are used here and it's awesome. My favorite was the 'worm shell game' which reminded me of the Zant fight in Twilight Princess.
Westley grew on me and I enjoyed his growth as a character and his POV in the last act had me grinning and laughing the way through, I loved it, probably one of the best parts, of the book, and that's saying a lot because there are a LOT of best parts. Its such a cool perspective to have for the events that happen.
Everything from when Jason and co get to the 'place' and after.
It is a book where you probably KNOW or can guess what is going to happen in terms of overall plot for the most part. If you're familiar with story arcs in action/adventure you've seen the arc a million times. But you're here to experience HOW it happens. It's the HOW that is constantly engaging and compelling.
Then it just ramps up more and more, and moves so smoothly, so effortlessly in how much is juggled here, until all the story arcs merge, like the best final thirds of your epic fantasy series. Again it reminded me of watching 'Return of the King', or 'Return of the Jedi'.
Hellion throws everything and the kitchen sink. There are so many types of scenes, events happening that I never felt it was ever the same thing twice. In cases where it might of been, the tactic was done so differently it never felt that way. It was always reinventing itself with interesting twists, and new strategies.
There are even really important questions asked and a conversation between characters about them that adds another level of depth to what's going, not just in this book but the whole series.
Then the finale, I won't spoil but was interesting and I didn't see coming which was nice, and there is going to be another book. I was thinking it'd have to be a different style or at least a completely different plot because I can't see how the author could top what he's done with the plot here.
AO: Hellion gets five out of five stars from me, there are a few flaws that I've mentioned in previous books but they didn't bother me here because its so brilliantly done, exciting, thrilling, and just a blast to read. AO: Catharsis is still my favorite because to me its a more unique conflict even though its not nearly as grand, whereas Hellion has a conflict that is probably as old as storytelling itself, but told in a unique way. This is now my second favorite in the series behind it. Got me excited for and anticipating the next chapter!
When I saw the return of the Fire Ants, I got worried that it was the direction it was going to head in and we'd just get a lot of grinding...
Boy was I mistaken.
That's luckily only a few pages, maybe a chapter, and its over fairly quick.
Then we get to the lead ups and to the main event. And HOLY SHIT is this epic. Like 'The Return of the King' movie epic taken to crazier proportions. There is so much that happens in this book, its not even a rollercoaster ride, its like a hurtling ship trying to dodge asteroids.
It just starts with a calm before the storm and then gradually the rains come and the lightning, then the storm hits and it just goes to levels of insanity.
Normally reading strategic blow by blow bores me, (Foundryside), but here it's so expertly done that I'm following along, even when I miss stuff, it's ok because the next 'move' will wow me, and it does. The author keeps it moving and constantly engaging, whilst managing the characters, relationships, having touching moments between characters, the humor (although I missed some of the humor in the notifications they were more straight forward this time around), and the badassery.
So many favorite parts:
A ton of video game tropes are used here and it's awesome. My favorite was the 'worm shell game' which reminded me of the Zant fight in Twilight Princess.
Westley grew on me and I enjoyed his growth as a character and his POV in the last act had me grinning and laughing the way through, I loved it, probably one of the best parts, of the book, and that's saying a lot because there are a LOT of best parts. Its such a cool perspective to have for the events that happen.
Everything from when Jason and co get to the 'place' and after.
It is a book where you probably KNOW or can guess what is going to happen in terms of overall plot for the most part. If you're familiar with story arcs in action/adventure you've seen the arc a million times. But you're here to experience HOW it happens. It's the HOW that is constantly engaging and compelling.
Then it just ramps up more and more, and moves so smoothly, so effortlessly in how much is juggled here, until all the story arcs merge, like the best final thirds of your epic fantasy series. Again it reminded me of watching 'Return of the King', or 'Return of the Jedi'.
Hellion throws everything and the kitchen sink. There are so many types of scenes, events happening that I never felt it was ever the same thing twice. In cases where it might of been, the tactic was done so differently it never felt that way. It was always reinventing itself with interesting twists, and new strategies.
There are even really important questions asked and a conversation between characters about them that adds another level of depth to what's going, not just in this book but the whole series.
Then the finale, I won't spoil but was interesting and I didn't see coming which was nice, and there is going to be another book. I was thinking it'd have to be a different style or at least a completely different plot because I can't see how the author could top what he's done with the plot here.
AO: Hellion gets five out of five stars from me, there are a few flaws that I've mentioned in previous books but they didn't bother me here because its so brilliantly done, exciting, thrilling, and just a blast to read. AO: Catharsis is still my favorite because to me its a more unique conflict even though its not nearly as grand, whereas Hellion has a conflict that is probably as old as storytelling itself, but told in a unique way. This is now my second favorite in the series behind it. Got me excited for and anticipating the next chapter!
July 30, 2021
A bit long winded on hype�
…by now, we all know that Jason’s character is a “teenager� ~ written by an “adult� ~ yet almost every chapter had paragraphs in reference to “just a kid�, “only a teenager�!�
It got repetitive, at least for me. Take out all these incredulous compliments, you’d probably have trimmed it down by 20+ pages. This also applies to Finn regarding his Rachel motivation.
I get it, his character is capable of more than your average bear. The more it’s typed, the more it sounds hyped.
Just my humble opinion, but Dude (Mr. Travis Blackwell, sir); please just finish the damn story already.
I’m about done putting up all this money for installments.
…by now, we all know that Jason’s character is a “teenager� ~ written by an “adult� ~ yet almost every chapter had paragraphs in reference to “just a kid�, “only a teenager�!�
It got repetitive, at least for me. Take out all these incredulous compliments, you’d probably have trimmed it down by 20+ pages. This also applies to Finn regarding his Rachel motivation.
I get it, his character is capable of more than your average bear. The more it’s typed, the more it sounds hyped.
Just my humble opinion, but Dude (Mr. Travis Blackwell, sir); please just finish the damn story already.
I’m about done putting up all this money for installments.
June 20, 2021
There is a lot, and I mean a lot going on here. We have the two heavy weights of Awaken Online fighting in this book. We all came to love Jason, the OG avatar, but then we got to know Finn and we got familiar with him and his difficult position (I still prefer Jason), but this time, it's both of them against each other, and the battle is quite epic.
The book starts with the CPSC demanding Jason to be interviewed by a psychologist to see just how stable or unstable he really is, but the interview is to happen inside the game, and we find the interview being held in a dungeon, where he is Finn's prisoner. How did he end up there? That's what we find out little by little, but as we all know by now, Jason always have a crazy plan ready to be implemented, he is not giving up, but Finn, well, he is another character that cannot be underestimated. So much happens here, it's like a game of chess with two master players, and they are both really good.
The book is engaging, once you start reading, you can't stop, and it's quite a long one, but oh so worth it. We now see how every piece is being moved, and how everyone is playing a second game behind the scenes. Who is an ally and who is a foe? Who can you trust? Things are definitely not what they look like, and it seems that we still have a way to go before we can find out what is really going on. We still have to avatars to meet, and a lot of secrets to uncover. Can't wait!
The book starts with the CPSC demanding Jason to be interviewed by a psychologist to see just how stable or unstable he really is, but the interview is to happen inside the game, and we find the interview being held in a dungeon, where he is Finn's prisoner. How did he end up there? That's what we find out little by little, but as we all know by now, Jason always have a crazy plan ready to be implemented, he is not giving up, but Finn, well, he is another character that cannot be underestimated. So much happens here, it's like a game of chess with two master players, and they are both really good.
The book is engaging, once you start reading, you can't stop, and it's quite a long one, but oh so worth it. We now see how every piece is being moved, and how everyone is playing a second game behind the scenes. Who is an ally and who is a foe? Who can you trust? Things are definitely not what they look like, and it seems that we still have a way to go before we can find out what is really going on. We still have to avatars to meet, and a lot of secrets to uncover. Can't wait!
June 30, 2021
Fantastic. Best in series.
Sometimes writers write a great book and as time goes on they flag. This series is the complete opposite. This is by far the best book in the series. It is amazing. Halfway in the book I was cooked and done. That was only half time. There are so many plot twists and turns and plots and explosions going on all over the place Is didn’t know which way to look. I have read every book in this series to include side quests. Hands down this is the cherry on top.
Sometimes writers write a great book and as time goes on they flag. This series is the complete opposite. This is by far the best book in the series. It is amazing. Halfway in the book I was cooked and done. That was only half time. There are so many plot twists and turns and plots and explosions going on all over the place Is didn’t know which way to look. I have read every book in this series to include side quests. Hands down this is the cherry on top.
March 4, 2023
Definitely the best book the Author has ever written
Wow, I read all the books from both series non-stop and what a wild ride it was! This series has so much depth with all the characters, you can relate to many of their issues and want to know more about them. The writing is great throughout the series but this book takes it to another level and the story flows smoothly from a ridiculous amount of character's points of view. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Wow, I read all the books from both series non-stop and what a wild ride it was! This series has so much depth with all the characters, you can relate to many of their issues and want to know more about them. The writing is great throughout the series but this book takes it to another level and the story flows smoothly from a ridiculous amount of character's points of view. I can't wait to see what happens next!
January 2, 2024
Hellion was such a roller-coaster of a ride with all the twists and turns throughout the story. I also thought it truly was incredible how this story in the series tied everything together with all of the side stories and the main story. Awaken Online is my first ever Lit-RPG series I have read and I am so excited to see what the rest of the series brings because that cliffhanger at the end of this novel was absolutely crazy. Thank you Travis Bagwell for writing all of these incredible books!
July 19, 2021
This was undoubtedly the best book of the Awaken Online series, and it honestly might be the best book I've read within the LitRPG genre period. Travis Bagwell did not disappoint with his eventual convergence of his three stories into one (Unity, Inferno, & the Main story). He stuck the landing and then some; Jason's discussions with the CPSC interviewer throughout the book, for example, were constantly intellectually intriguing, deeply philosophical & gave you the sense that Bagwell might have been writing some of these lines and dialogue for years. I only really had minor issues with the very end, so spoiler warning.
----SPOILERS!!!----
I'm mostly satisfied with the way the book ended. I do think Bagwell could've drawn out Jason and Finn's war a little longer, where instead of Finn and Jason teaming up at the end of this book, it ends with a full victory of one side or the other. Then this could've lead to a future discussion/team up in the next book. I felt as though there was so much bad blood between the two, that it naturally would've taken another book or two for them to finally sit down and listen to each other. I was still very satisfied with their team up though, even if it felt a little premature or unnatural given Jason had just murdered over 8,000 of Finn's residents.
The part that I couldn't really shake off, was at the very very end (the end of the epilogue) where Jason meets Finn in the real world, and Finn reveals how he planned for Jason to have a comeback & basically let Jason win just so he could simply have a better chance of unrelatedly breaking into a Server room at Cerulean Entertainment. To me, this was so unrealistic & unbelievable considering everything we had seen Finn do and say (many times in an extremely emotional state), but more importantly, it made Jason's epic victory feel hallow and undeserved despite the fact that it was one of the most genius plans in the entire series.
I loved how Jason had planned for the high possibility that he'd be captured. His phase 2 plan was just crazy enough to work & the twist felt natural given Jason's stoic interactions upon his capture & his explanation for why he couldn't reveal it to anyone, especially not Alfred (he had to use his school email just so Alfred wouldn't catch on). In contrast, Finn's "plan" to let Jason win flies right in the face of every single moment Finn is enraged at Jason, saddened by using the energy meant to resurrect Rachel, or desperate to save his city/Rachel. The whole thing barely makes any sense given every interaction in the entire book between the two main characters.
It also honestly just felt unnecessary too, since Bagwell could've easily written that Finn's plan was to just have a huge battle with Jason so he could break into Alfred's Server Room - that being the real reason he challenged Jason to begin with, hoping it would be a massive battle and event that would leave Cerulean Entertainment vulnerable. Bagwell took it way too far though, made it feel contrived and disjointed, and then basically gave you a feeling that all the amazing events of the book were mostly pointless. The more I think about it, the more I wish the last few lines of the book could've just been erased. This book could've been absolutely perfect if not for this last second reveal in my opinion.
----SPOILERS!!!----
I'm mostly satisfied with the way the book ended. I do think Bagwell could've drawn out Jason and Finn's war a little longer, where instead of Finn and Jason teaming up at the end of this book, it ends with a full victory of one side or the other. Then this could've lead to a future discussion/team up in the next book. I felt as though there was so much bad blood between the two, that it naturally would've taken another book or two for them to finally sit down and listen to each other. I was still very satisfied with their team up though, even if it felt a little premature or unnatural given Jason had just murdered over 8,000 of Finn's residents.
The part that I couldn't really shake off, was at the very very end (the end of the epilogue) where Jason meets Finn in the real world, and Finn reveals how he planned for Jason to have a comeback & basically let Jason win just so he could simply have a better chance of unrelatedly breaking into a Server room at Cerulean Entertainment. To me, this was so unrealistic & unbelievable considering everything we had seen Finn do and say (many times in an extremely emotional state), but more importantly, it made Jason's epic victory feel hallow and undeserved despite the fact that it was one of the most genius plans in the entire series.
I loved how Jason had planned for the high possibility that he'd be captured. His phase 2 plan was just crazy enough to work & the twist felt natural given Jason's stoic interactions upon his capture & his explanation for why he couldn't reveal it to anyone, especially not Alfred (he had to use his school email just so Alfred wouldn't catch on). In contrast, Finn's "plan" to let Jason win flies right in the face of every single moment Finn is enraged at Jason, saddened by using the energy meant to resurrect Rachel, or desperate to save his city/Rachel. The whole thing barely makes any sense given every interaction in the entire book between the two main characters.
It also honestly just felt unnecessary too, since Bagwell could've easily written that Finn's plan was to just have a huge battle with Jason so he could break into Alfred's Server Room - that being the real reason he challenged Jason to begin with, hoping it would be a massive battle and event that would leave Cerulean Entertainment vulnerable. Bagwell took it way too far though, made it feel contrived and disjointed, and then basically gave you a feeling that all the amazing events of the book were mostly pointless. The more I think about it, the more I wish the last few lines of the book could've just been erased. This book could've been absolutely perfect if not for this last second reveal in my opinion.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 4, 2023
TL;DR: "Awaken Online: Hellion" is another impressive installment in Travis Bagwell's series, expertly intertwining multiple storylines while providing fresh character development. Despite some drawbacks, such as a simplified leveling system and minor consistency issues, the novel continues to offer a deep and engaging narrative that thoughtfully explores the themes of artificial intelligence and personal choice. It's a highly recommended read for both series fans and newcomers.
Travis Bagwell has done it again with "Awaken Online: Hellion", delivering a powerhouse of a tale that stands out even in the crowded landscape of VR-themed novels. Reading it, I felt like I was witnessing an artist at the peak of his powers, painting a vivid picture of a world I thought I knew, only to be surprised at every turn.
Hellion is like a masterclass in how to bring together separate storylines into a single, compelling narrative. Bagwell manages to weave Jason's and Finn's journeys with the side adventures of Eliza and Frank so seamlessly, it's like watching separate streams merge into one roaring river. It’s clear that Bagwell knows his characters inside and out, and he gives each of them the space to grow and shine.
What struck me was how Hellion doesn't just rest on the laurels of its series. It nudges Jason out of his comfort zone from "Dominion" and into the rough seas of external conflict with Finn. This isn't just another “good guy versus bad guy� trope. It's more nuanced, digging into their beliefs and histories, and by the end, I found my perceptions of both characters had shifted in ways I didn't expect.
That being said, I've got to admit, I was a bit thrown off by the changes to the leveling system. It’s like going to your favorite restaurant only to find out they’ve trimmed down the menu to just one dish. The strategic depth that I loved felt like it was pushed to the sidelines, which was a letdown.
And then there are these little niggles with consistency. Finn's endgame reveal felt like a square peg forced into a round hole given his in-game persona after the whole Armageddon protocol debacle. Plus, the continuous "I saw this coming" banter between him and Jason started to feel like a looped recording after a while.
But let's not get bogged down in the negatives too much. "Awaken Online: Hellion" is still an absolute thrill ride. It's not just about gaming; it's about the essence of intelligence, both artificial and human, the choices we make, and the futures we shape. For old fans, this book is a no-brainer � you're going to love it. And if you're new to the series, there's no better place to jump in. So, grab your gear and dive into this adventure. It's a wild one, and it's worth every minute.
Solid 4.5/5
Travis Bagwell has done it again with "Awaken Online: Hellion", delivering a powerhouse of a tale that stands out even in the crowded landscape of VR-themed novels. Reading it, I felt like I was witnessing an artist at the peak of his powers, painting a vivid picture of a world I thought I knew, only to be surprised at every turn.
Hellion is like a masterclass in how to bring together separate storylines into a single, compelling narrative. Bagwell manages to weave Jason's and Finn's journeys with the side adventures of Eliza and Frank so seamlessly, it's like watching separate streams merge into one roaring river. It’s clear that Bagwell knows his characters inside and out, and he gives each of them the space to grow and shine.
What struck me was how Hellion doesn't just rest on the laurels of its series. It nudges Jason out of his comfort zone from "Dominion" and into the rough seas of external conflict with Finn. This isn't just another “good guy versus bad guy� trope. It's more nuanced, digging into their beliefs and histories, and by the end, I found my perceptions of both characters had shifted in ways I didn't expect.
That being said, I've got to admit, I was a bit thrown off by the changes to the leveling system. It’s like going to your favorite restaurant only to find out they’ve trimmed down the menu to just one dish. The strategic depth that I loved felt like it was pushed to the sidelines, which was a letdown.
And then there are these little niggles with consistency. Finn's endgame reveal felt like a square peg forced into a round hole given his in-game persona after the whole Armageddon protocol debacle. Plus, the continuous "I saw this coming" banter between him and Jason started to feel like a looped recording after a while.
But let's not get bogged down in the negatives too much. "Awaken Online: Hellion" is still an absolute thrill ride. It's not just about gaming; it's about the essence of intelligence, both artificial and human, the choices we make, and the futures we shape. For old fans, this book is a no-brainer � you're going to love it. And if you're new to the series, there's no better place to jump in. So, grab your gear and dive into this adventure. It's a wild one, and it's worth every minute.
Solid 4.5/5
January 16, 2022
Was considering giving up but now I'm back in
After Evolution I was ready to give up on the series; then came Dominion, which was better. Still, I was hesitant, would Hellion help this series to find its way back to going strong, or was it going downhill after all?
Well, in my opinion this book succeeded in being great again - such a relief! We're back to the same level of excitement and entertainment as the first two novels. I think one of the reasons is that most of the plot is in-game again, there are hardly any real world scenes. Also, the in-game adventures aren't as useless and meaningless as the random quests in Evolution. There are actual stakes now.
A nice improvement, imho, is that some of the issues I had with previous titles, are resolved. Although I can relate to some of the issues others have mentioned in their reviews, I'm still pleased to note there is far less teen angst nor cringy teen awkwardness, Riley is far less bitchy, Eliza is less whiny, and everyone is less annoying overall. Plus, I enjoyed the new minor character, Westley. In short, improved writing.
I disagree with some reviewers that the fact that a big chunk of the story is conveyed through flashbacks, is a spoiler. It is not. Although I must say that to me, from the beginning it was very clear (and thus, a predictable plot point), that things would not end there; but because I could not predict the details, I was still interested in following the story. And was pleasantly surprised and entertained by how everything was resolved in the end.
For the people that read the other Awaken Online trilogy: Finn and Jason are both in this book, the author knitting those two story arcs deftly together, with the emphasis still on Jason of course. I haven't read that other trilogy myself, and I can safely say that you don't have to, in order to read Hellion. The author provides enough context to be able to follow along with Finn's character without having read his origin story.
All in all, I'm very happy with the renewed quality of this title. I hope the author keeps this up, then I won't hesitate to purchase the next title.
After Evolution I was ready to give up on the series; then came Dominion, which was better. Still, I was hesitant, would Hellion help this series to find its way back to going strong, or was it going downhill after all?
Well, in my opinion this book succeeded in being great again - such a relief! We're back to the same level of excitement and entertainment as the first two novels. I think one of the reasons is that most of the plot is in-game again, there are hardly any real world scenes. Also, the in-game adventures aren't as useless and meaningless as the random quests in Evolution. There are actual stakes now.
A nice improvement, imho, is that some of the issues I had with previous titles, are resolved. Although I can relate to some of the issues others have mentioned in their reviews, I'm still pleased to note there is far less teen angst nor cringy teen awkwardness, Riley is far less bitchy, Eliza is less whiny, and everyone is less annoying overall. Plus, I enjoyed the new minor character, Westley. In short, improved writing.
I disagree with some reviewers that the fact that a big chunk of the story is conveyed through flashbacks, is a spoiler. It is not. Although I must say that to me, from the beginning it was very clear (and thus, a predictable plot point), that things would not end there; but because I could not predict the details, I was still interested in following the story. And was pleasantly surprised and entertained by how everything was resolved in the end.
For the people that read the other Awaken Online trilogy: Finn and Jason are both in this book, the author knitting those two story arcs deftly together, with the emphasis still on Jason of course. I haven't read that other trilogy myself, and I can safely say that you don't have to, in order to read Hellion. The author provides enough context to be able to follow along with Finn's character without having read his origin story.
All in all, I'm very happy with the renewed quality of this title. I hope the author keeps this up, then I won't hesitate to purchase the next title.
November 4, 2024
Wish I could've reviewed this right away but... Yep. Dunno that it would've been much different, though, honestly.
This was way too long. Also,and mostly waay too many POVs. We had practically every "MC" POV here, and a few side-characters! Finn's would've been more annoying... Or maybe it is more annoying actually, because he has his own series. (Admittedly, I did listen and enjoyed Finn's books, although they were going downhill.) Bagwell has a tendency to repeat, and frequently. Could've cut out half the words from just "arcane words spilled from his lips" or "multi-colored energy spilled" or... Well, you get my meaning. I'm trying to do this from memory since I listen to the audiobook version and finished a few days ago.
I also... With the whole billion POV in mind, just am not a fan of the story-telling aspect of this for most of this book: where it's a retelling of past events to someone else and they're walking through it. This just always annoys me. I do think it (even though it wasn't at all unexpected) was done well as far as intergrading the two timelines together.
Partially interested in real-world stuff but don't like the legalese necessarily (rarely do). I ended up liking where Wesley's character went, though. Again, expected, but I thought it was very fitting for multiple reasons. Jason also really isn't evil, or even really depicted as such. He's more... dark. He'll toy in shades of grey with what he's willing to do. Definitely chaotic and, I suppose, in a game, and in general, it is easier to depict it as evil...
Finn's POV. It probably wasn't so bad for people who hadn't read/listened to his series, but... Rachael, Rachael, Rachael! Omfgosh. I GET IT
*ahem*
It was great how Jason and Finn did the thing against Alex. There were some great scenes here with all the characters (and yes, as is stated, there is a huge patch coming to AO, lol!). Had some fun parts but I also tuned out some.
I do find myself more interested in continuing and seeing where this series goes after this so... That's great!
This was way too long. Also,
I also... With the whole billion POV in mind, just am not a fan of the story-telling aspect of this for most of this book: where it's a retelling of past events to someone else and they're walking through it. This just always annoys me. I do think it (even though it wasn't at all unexpected) was done well as far as intergrading the two timelines together.
Partially interested in real-world stuff but don't like the legalese necessarily (rarely do). I ended up liking where Wesley's character went, though. Again, expected, but I thought it was very fitting for multiple reasons. Jason also really isn't evil, or even really depicted as such. He's more... dark. He'll toy in shades of grey with what he's willing to do. Definitely chaotic and, I suppose, in a game, and in general, it is easier to depict it as evil...
Finn's POV. It probably wasn't so bad for people who hadn't read/listened to his series, but... Rachael, Rachael, Rachael! Omfgosh. I GET IT
*ahem*
It was great how Jason and Finn did the thing against Alex. There were some great scenes here with all the characters (and yes, as is stated, there is a huge patch coming to AO, lol!). Had some fun parts but I also tuned out some.
I do find myself more interested in continuing and seeing where this series goes after this so... That's great!
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