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390 pages, Hardcover
First published September 1, 2011
"My mind was reeling from the deluge of new information."
"We'd been talking about a fight. Was it ever going to happen?"
"For a moment I thought he would shift forms and bite me."I don't know what I'm more offended by; Shay's reaction to the ring or Calla's submissive behavior. Both, definitely both. I'm not sure what Cremer was hoping to accomplish with this scene, but I think it's safe to call fail on this too. This was starting to get a little to Patch and Nora for my tastes and if you don't know how I feel about , here's a clue: I effin' hate it. I wasn't a fan of Shay and Calla's relationship in Nightshade to begin with, but now this?! This is NOT OK. In no way, shape or form, is it ever OK for you to feel threatened in a relationship! YA PNR authors stop trying to convince me otherwise with your stories of love. That is not love, it's wrong and offensive. I don't know what was going on with him in this book, but he was not acting as the Shay we met in Nightshade. When Calla and the Searchers set off on the mission to find her pack mates on the mountain, Shay knew they would be unsuccessful, yet said nothing and let them go. He deliberately let Calla go into danger without any sort of reasonable explanation. Best believe, the one he gave was shitty.
"I wanted you to be safe," he said, his shoulders tensing. "I thought you could prove your worth to the Searchers without actually running into trouble."WHAT?! That makes no sense, Shay. Sending her into high alert, enemy territory doesn't actually scream "I love you!" Two, count 'em, two people died during that mission!! *Headdesk**Headdesk**Headdesk*
"...so the Keepers broke some big rules on the way to all that power they have...they cannot weave. The earth won't allow it."How convenient. Not only that, but it seemed to be no limits on what the Weavers could do. For example,
"I don't understand why he's not a Keeper," I said. "Doesn't it matter who his father was?"*Sigh* Really, Cremer? I'm sorry, I'm not buying it, especially when Silas just got finished tell the Calla and Shay that the Keepers are all humans like the Searchers. Are you following this BS? Now, if the Keepers had Shay for 16 years, why didn't they just kill him if they knew who he was? He was the almighty Scion and you had him for YEARS to yourselves. That was never questioned nor explained and it freakin' agitated me.
"It matters for the prophecy," Silas replied. "But in terms of his essence, his being it's the mother that matters."
"Huh?" I frowned.
Tess smiled. "Because the power of creation rests in women."
Silas said," Tess is right. The mother's essence always seems to dominate, determines the nature of the child. That's why you only perceived him as human--in all respects he was. His father's use of the Nether's power didn't pass on to him. The only sign of his mixed ancestry is the mark."
Free of the chains, Sabine leaned forward and wrapped her arms around Ethan's neck, pulling him into an embrace.The book takes place over just a few days. Does Cremer expect me to believe Ethan made a complete 180 overnight? No, just no.
"Thank you," she said. "Thank you so much."
He stiffened in her arms, his tensed muscles finally easing when she didn't pull back. He let his cheek briefly rest against her hair.
"Jasmine," he murmured.
"What?" Sabine asked, looking up at him.
He cleared his throat. "You're welcome."
"Even a Searcher," Nev snickered. "Only you, Sabine. I swear."
Bryn smacked her palm against her forehead. "I'm an idiot."This might have been all fine and dandy, if she hadn't have already acknowledged this on page 58:
"Well, I must be one too," I snapped. “Because I'm still not following."
"You're not following because you are an alpha, Cal." She offered me a sympathetic smile. "Shay's always felt like an equal to you, right? He talks to you on your level, has never backed down if you challenged him?"
I chewed on my lower lip. "I guess I thought that was just a human thing. That he didn't know any better because he wasn't one of us."
His wolf instincts were taking over, and they were threatening something he considered his territory...me. He was acting like I was his mate. His alpha counterpart. And that meant only I could intervene.And here:
Shay watched me, uneasy, but he was listening. I was taken aback by how deeply the wolf had marked him. The way he reacted to me was the way on alpha took counsel from another. That partnership made strong, unwavering leaders. If his mind was working on those terms now, I knew how to sway him.Based on that, why the hell was she surprised by what Sabine said? Inconsistent. Why didn't the editor catch that, hmmm?
"Staring at the wreckage of the life we could have had, I knew it wasn't about love or Shay or the Searchers now. It was about sacrifice and redemption, loss that could have new meaning."
"Yeah, she is great. I spent the whole week with her.
"Doing what?" I asked, catching a growl before it left my throat. "Aw, you're cute when you're jealous."