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718 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published September 4, 1998
I decided to write one summary review for books 1-9 in the HH series. I guess that what I write down below could be considered as very mild spoilers.
What I liked:
* the action scenes
* they were very well described, especially the space battles, the author found the exact mix of describing the situation, engaged forces, the thinking on both sides and the execution, best parts of the books for me
* I didn't bother to check the numbers though but I believe the author put some effort into them
* the other action scenes, like the duels, hand-to-hand combat and ground ops were also fine
* the world
* I liked the world, its rules but I'd like to get more details
What I hated:
* the constant jumping around, it didn't flow naturally, in the later books, I found myself skipping whole chapters to get to the "good stuff", when I finished the book, I back tracked and I read the parts which I skipped (I usually read books from cover to cover without jumping over something)
* moreover, while the look from the other side is always interesting, I couldn't stand the walls of text which were presented as thoughts of any given character, you are forced to read about some global rules/laws/customs/expectations which help you to understand what motivated the character to act in such a way, this feels a really crude way of story telling because it repeats itself all the time
* another problem, at least for me, is the fact that these auxiliary characters have very short lifespan, you get to know them a bit and then they get killed within the same book or at most in the next two books, there is such a high turn-over of characters that you have almost zero interest to read about them after you find out this fact
* in the same vein, the characters which are key for the story and you meet them again and again, you have not so much info about them, the politicians, the admirals, the queen, the protector, etc.
* also as the customs, laws and rules of the society are introduced purely as needed to move the story in certain direction it feels unnatural, I'd have very much preferred more background, history, explanation in one place, which is then referred to later
* Honor is perfect leader, perfect martial artist, perfect pilot, perfect tactician, perfect officer, perfect duelist, dutiful, honorable, etc. I like heroes and heroines but if you give them supporting cast of characters who are also perfect in their area of expertize were she is not perfect like the financial wiz, the regent, the maid, the armsmen and arguably her superiors it just creates very very unreal setting and there is nothing to improve, no character development
* the books follow the same template, introduction, fight with some arch-enemy on personal level, couple of battles and the final battle, Honor gets usually promoted and is wounded in some way
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* especially these enemies, who you meet for the first time, have the nasty habit of jumping out of the woodwork, scheming for a bit, failing to impact Honor in any meaningful way and they are ultimately dealt with only to be replaced by someone else
* I also didn't get the author's taste for Honor's mutilation, it doesn't make any sense when the state of medicine is at such a high level that she is patched up and as good as new afterwards
* the conversations between Honor and her superiors as well her subjects, the sense of familiarity, goodwill, light-heartedness, I guess the author can say that she is basically an empath making it easy to blend with other people but I still find it hard to believe that she would trade jokes with the queen and the protector in such a way especially when she had the chance to talk to them only on several occasions
* then there are several highly suspect twists in the story and the situation which lead to them, I'll describe just two of them which are really spoilers and both are from book 9
* the assassination, Honor was able to protect the heads of states with brilliant maneuver but the prime minister and the chancellor (among others) got killed to promote the next story twist; considering the fact that the LACs or yachts were military-grade ships and their personnel were highly trained navy professionals (the author presents these facts throughout the books anytime he discusses security), then I simply have no idea why they couldn't have performed the same maneuver as Honor themselves, makes no sense, especially when she had plenty of time to tell them what to do in case they couldn't have figured it out
* the next is the meeting between the queen and the opposition representatives I really don't understand why she invited them all at the same time when she wanted to bully them into different decision and quite frankly their best interests to stop the war when the allies could easily achieve enemy's capitulation in six more months is rather suspect too, they could have created new coalition while the war was ongoing and get even more dividends in six month
* but the fact that the queen could've invited them separately and bully them individually, promise them anything so that at least one of them supports her and as the situation was described, she would have been successful IMO, after all these politicians were from different parties and they'd have loved to crush their peers
* and of course the support of unaligned lords and ladies, I find it highly doubtful that the queen wouldn't have got their support back if she at least tried to persuade them; if they supported her prime minister, I see no reason why she couldn't have negotiated their continual support for the next 6 months
So all in all, I enjoyed the books but the storyline got too patched up at the end and it was quite obvious that the author simply forced the twist in very rude way so that the story could continue. In other words, some parts were too overdone and the other underdone. A pity. The author made me lose interest in reading the sequels.
One last comment. Given the fact that she is bright and hard-working person and that she dedicated more than 40 years of her life to the uniform, I can very well accept the fact that she actually achieved the perferction in all areas which were important to her. Being in peek physical shape for more than 100 years will make it inevitable for dedicated people. However, it is hard to relate to it in our less than perfect reality.