"There was no protagonist, character building was very bad, unnecessary drama was there, from the very beginning i thought Beth would be the main character but her character went down real bad, then there was archie( a hopeless lover, who could do nothing good but to listen to his wife), i didn't understand how can beth marry archie when archie was adopted by her parents and was Beth's brother in some way, how can Milly marry hugh when he clearly was flirting with both the sisters, why didn't beth tell her the truth, this whole story started nowhere and ended nowhere, it made no sense ,simple waste of time. "

"WTF did I just read? Aside from the white washing of the history of his abuse of his wife, the ‘hero� and heroine lacked any personality. I could put down the heroine’s lack of personality down to being a house slave for 5 years and the hero’s due to being an abusive psychopath but that just let’s the author off the hook for formulaic, wooden writing.

The HEA is not believable, he will be slapping her around and controlling her and his dayghter their hole lives."