"it was supposed to give but it did not give what needed to be gave"

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“Bree is everything I aspire to be, everything I love, everything I desire. She holds my heart, and, with all that I am, I hope she never gives it back.��

edit : giving it a 1 star cause i took a good 5 minutes and contemplated my decision. yeah nope im giving it a 1 star

disclaimer : i know this book was a more PG sided book. i said smut would redeem it, not that i was expecting smut. plus, i did enjoy reading the books i just hated the execution. don’t hate me for my opinion <3

what is with women and pulling the “im so clueless i dont know he fucking loves me�� card like bitch. BITCH. you only pull that card unless

1. youre stupid
2. you genuinely dont like them and want to friendzone

which clearly she doesnt want to friendzone him BECAUSE SHE’S FUCKING IN LOVE WITH HIM? so what in the actual pick me is this fucking book...

also i just thought of something I HATE WHEN THE CHARACTERS HAVE THESE FUCKING MORALS WHERE ITS LIKE "OH I DONT WANNA TAKE YOUR MONEY" like yes, in some cases thats fine but this man is rich as fcuk like take his money. if you wont i fucking will

the first half of this book was good. so addictive. i was honestly hooked. the second half?? bitch i wanted to claw my eyes out and sell my soul to satan like what the actual fuck. they kept “questioning�� their feelings WHEN ITS FUCKING CLEAR AS DAY that they like each other??

this book was the biggest drag in history.. i wouldnt even call it sexual tension because its a fucking PG 13+ book like what part of that screams ”hot spicy sexual tension��??

exactly. none. of. it.

PLOT ˎˊ˗
2 besties, bree camden and nathan donelson. theyve been besties for 6 years and for the whole fucking six years theyve been in love with each other. surprised?? fuck no. bree is a ballet teacher and nathan is a star football player. theres a bit of fake dating (not the fun, hot fake dating tho) and then bam love. marriage. the end.

the plot?? basic asf. it was still fun to read but it wasnt anything that was interesting lol

also this may be a spoiler but its so bad that im just gonna say it:

who gets fucking married after a week of dating i dont fucking care you knew each other for 6 years like no. just no.

ROMANCE ˎˊ˗
there’s obviously no smut in this book cause duh PG 13+ ring any bells??

they were cute. there was kissing. VERY INNOCENT KISSING. ummm yeah idk 90% of this book is ”what they want with each other�� but its all talk, no action like chop chop get together already??

honestly, maybe smut wouldve redeemed this book because it had potential and if youre gonna write a slow burn with a pretty basic plot and an annoying female mc at least give the readers the sex??

their romance was also a little.. cringe towards the end. it just got all lovey dovey and i was just like�� what the fuck go back to being best friends

also a big BIG no no to public proposals id rather die and also i would hate to not be able to plan MY OWN WEDDING but everyone is different ig�� *sigh*

!! SPOILERS?? even tho i think ive said a lot already so whatever read on i guess !!

bree camden :
�� just a no for me.

who let her exist. no.. thats mean but just huh?? WHAT IN THE PICK ME GIRL IS THIS im sorry but was she not saying how ”she was being friend zoned�� at the beginning of the book??

SHE WAS THE ONE DOING ALL THE FRIEND ZONING. THAT. WAS. ALL. HER.

literally losing braincells atm just give me a fat second

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im calm :)

theres just SO MANY windows she could’ve taken but SHE DIDNT TAKE IT and half the time ran away??

nathan donelson :
�� cute turned into cringe sigh

i liked him. didnt love him or hate him so�� yeah. he was a good character UNTIL THE END where the love confessions came out and it was just�� gross

idc about love confessions but ive read enough to know what a ”not so cringe kinda cute�� confession should be. maybe im picky. maybe im judgemental but not gonna change my mind

he’s also THE BIGGEST SIMP which is ok i guess..?? he is so whipped for her tho like its fucking clear as day lmao and yet bree cant see it?? brb while i go lose more braincells

CONCLUSION ˎˊ˗
people hyped this book a bit too much because its really not that amazing. its average. its basic. yes, its addictive but like all in all, go pick up a smutty book and just read that instead. ok bye <3"

" The second hand embarrassment I experienced from the first three chapters alone...... bye. My goodness the pick-me energy, the I'm not like other girls trope???? Yeah, i'll pass.

I have never DNF'd a book so fast"