Sydney Alvin Field was an American screenwriting guru who wrote several books on the subject of screenwriting. He also conducted workshops and seminars on the subject of producing salable screenplays. Hollywood film producers have increasingly used his ideas on structure as a guideline to a proposed screenplay's potential.
If Save the Cat is like arithmetic, Screenplay is like algebra.
What鈥檚 fascinating to me is the type of person each of these books was written for, which can be gleaned from the movies recommended by the authors. Blake Snyder loves Legally Blonde and Four Christmases while Syd Field is more of an American Beauty and The Shawshank Redemption guy. Snyder wants to cash in on the mostly clueless get-rich-quick crowd whereas Field aims at aficionados who have good concepts but no idea how to execute; he harbors no illusions about the field鈥檚 financial outlook, instead focusing on the love of the work itself. As Field and I are much closer in terms of taste, I obviously recommend his book over Snyder鈥檚.
What does it do well? For one, it breaks down several scripts line-by-line and explains not only why they work, but how they work. Turns out that the screenplay form has magical properties that novels, plays, and poems lack (vice versa, of course), and that understanding them is key to animating your text. The technical, visual, and emotional aspects are all covered, as are the common pitfalls that trap novice screenwriters. Field tells of F. Scott Fitzgerald鈥檚 failed foray into Hollywood, his students鈥� successes and failures, and interviews with prominent screenwriters. All of which are great fun.
David Foster Wallace offers: 鈥淢ovies are an authoritarian medium. They vulnerabilize you and then dominate you. Part of the magic of going to a movie is surrendering to it, letting it dominate you.鈥� Which is absolutely true. And from Spiderman: 鈥淲ith great power comes great responsibility.鈥� So you see what cinema we watch is vital, and it is people like Field who have a hand in shaping its future. I, for one, prefer films that allow audiences to come to terms with our common humanity, as opposed to those which shape our worldview into something simple and zombified.
As such, the creation of a film is wrought with ethics through and through. Field gets extra brownie points for centering his philosophy around Hegel, who 鈥渕aintained that the essence of tragedy derives not from one character being right and the other being wrong, or from the conflict of good versus evil, but from a conflict in which both characters are right, and thus the tragedy is one of 鈥榬ight against right,鈥� being carried to its logical conclusion. [p.132]鈥� Example films that fit the bill include Hayao Miyazaki鈥檚 repertoire and, recently, Captain Fantastic.
You might ask why I only give this four stars, and the reason, ironically, has to do with form. Field practically invented the three-act structure, but it certainly isn鈥檛 the only paradigm (to use his term) through which a story can be told. While this was broadly true of Hollywood when the first edition of the book came out, it seems disingenuous to fit Memento and Pulp Fiction into the model 鈥� round pegs into square holes 鈥� much less the art cinema of Rive Gauche and Haneke or mind-benders like Primer. Movies, constrained by time, must have a beginning and ending, but how they are structured in between is not nearly as fixed as Field suggests.
I eagerly await the day someone makes a film whose ending is not the actual ending and whose actual ending must be deduced by the audience after the fact. I guarantee the first person to do this will be hailed as a genius. Oh wait, I've just read a couple screenwriting books. That could be me!
P.S. Watching Chinatown is required before you start reading; Field references it extensively.
Favorite quotes 鈥淚 once taught a workshop in Germany for some fifty writers, and out of fifty stories, forty-six of them ended in death, suicide, mayhem, and destruction. [p.86]鈥�
鈥淎ll drama is conflict. Without conflict, you have no action; without action, you have no character; without character, you have no story; and without story, you have no screenplay. [p.25]鈥�
鈥淧oint of view shades and colors the way we see the world. Have you ever heard phrases like: 鈥楲ife is unfair,鈥� 鈥榊ou can鈥檛 fight City Hall,鈥� 鈥楢ll life is a game of chance,鈥� 鈥榊ou can鈥檛 teach an old dog new tricks,鈥� 鈥楲ife is unlimited opportunity,鈥� 鈥榊ou make your own luck,鈥� 鈥榦r 鈥楽uccess is based on who you know鈥�? These are all points of view. We all have points of view, singular and unique, individual to the personal experience and expression of each person. It should be mentioned that a point of view is acquired through personal experience. [p.65]鈥�
鈥淔ilm is behavior; action is character and character, action; what a person does is who he is, not what he says. [p.69]鈥�
I thought this book was going to be a technical guide to formatting a screenplay.
I finished this book having no idea how to do that. Field spends half a chapter on formatting. Thank God for software like CeltX.
But I finished this book with a greater appreciation of the writing process. I now have a better idea of how movies are written, and thus a much more technical appreciation of the writer's creative decisions when I watch movies.
All movies are structured identically: 3 acts -- first, a kick-off incident which leads to a major turning point to set up the conflict; then problem after problem ratchets the tension to a serious turning point; then the movie plays out and all life happily ever after (most of the time). That frees your creativity: hang your screenplays on that structure and you can't go wrong.
I got more than I bargained for with this one, and it was worth every penny.
i'm going to say i've finished this book, though i skipped a lot of chapter 14 & left 15 for some other day, or need of reference.
syd field is a no-nonsense, bridle no shit, formulaic bastard - but this book is an indispensable reference to those who are, actually writing a screenplay. granted, this is more for those who are "writing to sell a screenplay to Hollywood" than those who want to experiment with the form. mr. field is relentlessly capitalist about his notion of a 'good script,' and backs up his theory & formula with examples from classic films like Chinatown, The Wild Bunch, Casablanca, Citizen Kane, and, if you're reading this new updated version, many modern films as well. this book has supposedly been the industry standard for decades.
this is not the kind of book that will work for everyone. his tone in the ... manual, i've come to call it ... is overarching and sort of snobby, what with repeating key points in BOLD and in CAPITALS. then, in the section where he actually talks about actually 'writing' the screenplay, he says things like "Your dialogue will be bad at first."
i'm really torn on it, though. the theory of his 'paradigm,' which basically informs the entire book, is repeated to you, over & over again - but at the same time, it's an undeniable paradigm. it just seems like syd field has been patting himself on the back, lo these thirty-some-odd past years, for discovering it. the Columbus of Hollywood, and indeed, of Screenwriting.
This book was just what I needed to further clarify the screenplay structure. The more one searches about writing screenplays the more it seems everyone has their own "formula" for how a screenplay MUST be written. All the "experts" want to sell their course, book, or "rules" on the ultimate, "guaranteed" way to write a screenplay that Hollywood will buy. This book was refreshing because it was light on rules and only laid out the basic structure while reassuring that the "rules" can be bent and even broken. Interestingly, this book is written in a Three Act Structure. It starts off slow and too basic then gets into the meat of the material in the middle. The last chapters are mostly about professional situations and not about screenplay structure at all. I particularly found the part of the book about screenplay structure along with example screenplay inserts helpful as reading successfully-made Hollywood critically-acclaimed screenplays best illustrates a masterful execution of the subject material. After reading this book I feel better equipped to write a screenplay, which was my whole purpose for reading it. I can see why this book is considered the "gold standard" for screenplay writers. This is not a book that is best read in one sitting from cover to cover as parts of it need to be digested and internalized over a period of time.
My first time learning structure as a non film degree holder and what a rewarding read. His ideas seem to reflect first principles and his writing is clear with plenty of examples to teach not only structure but film literacy.
Most striking to me was watching art film darling Kieslowski鈥檚 Three Colors Trilogy between reading sessions and seeing Field鈥檚 approach applied even there. He鈥檚 not just talking about soulless studio driven drivel. He鈥檚 talking about that thing that T2 has in common with Chinatown.
For any writers like myself who equate structure with selling out, yeah that鈥檚 still true in highly formulaic contexts, but Field is not advocating for that type of film. Even if you reject his ideas you鈥檒l be glad you learned them. If you want to make films that are meaningfully ambiguous, for instance, you鈥檒l still want to know this salient approach to rendering clarity that might inform your own subversion. If you want to tell stories with unique kinetics, you鈥檒l need to know this approach to driving plot to understand how high the bar is that you鈥檙e trying to beat.
I鈥檒l preface by saying I鈥檓 a novelist, not a screenwriter. But I enjoyed and gleaned from this book on so many levels, not least in quenching my curiosity about some of the behind-the-scenes crafting of movies. Strictly from a novelist鈥檚 point of view, however, I found the book worthwhile for two primary reasons. 1) Its stripped-down, simple view of structure is fabulous. It allows you to see the basics of structure at a glance, break it down to manageable chunks, and realize the big picture. 2) It鈥檚 also valuable in its ability to help film-saturated authors (such as myself) realize the important differences in story on the screen and story on the page. Worth reading whether you鈥檙e a screenwriter, a novelist, or a short story writer. Or even just a film buff.
Obviously this book was the OG, so respect for that, but I vastly prefer Save the Cat!
Save the Cat! has easily-distinguishable terms, clear concepts, and concise descriptions, whereas this book is verbose, repetitive, and contains lots of overlapping and similar terms for entirely different concepts, making it a much more confusing and less accessible read.
Snyder definitely refined the ideas Field came up with and made them easier to understand. I don't know that this book really added anything to my knowledge of screenwriting beyond what I learned from StC. But it certainly didn't hurt, either.
This book is considered a bible in the industry -- ALL Hollywood screenwriters now conform rigidly to Field's notions of screenplay structure -- and that's why I consider this book to be the Root of All Evil.
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脡 imposs铆vel n茫o se apaixonar pela arte de escrever roteiros - ou simplesmente de escrever criativamente - depois de ler esse livro. Se voc锚 n茫o termina a leitura com a id茅ia fixa na cabe莽a de imediatamente come莽ar a escrever o seu primeiro roteiro, das duas uma: ou voc锚 茅 ruim da cabe莽a ou doente do p茅.
Esse livro n茫o merece 5 estrelas. Merece muito mais. E eu as daria se o GoodReads o permitisse.
I'm not planning to write a screenplay anytime soon, but I'm often struggling with structuring my storytelling in fiction and non fiction writing and Syd Field's book is pretty much a step-by-step breakdown of how to tell a story. His model is the basic model of how every screenplay is written, but his philosophy makes for a myriad of declinations. Truly I'm glad to have read it. If you are brimming with good storytelling ideas, but struggle to put them out as they all seem to peter out as you're writing, this is a book for you.
I remember reading this in a previous form a few decades ago. It still holds up as a great tool for either starting in on a new idea to be put into a screenplay format or, like me, to take an existing idea that may have existed in another format (book, article, &c...) and fashion it into a screenplay. This is a must have for anyone with an interest in completing their first work.
Fajn谩 kni啪ka...urobila mi pekn媒 preh木ad a upokojila ma v tom, 膷o je n谩pl艌ou mojej bud煤cej profesie.. When in doubt, I'll read some motivational quotes from this and things should be just fine馃榿.
There's one very good chapter here, no. 14, dealing with the psychological challenges of writing day-to-day. The rest of the chapters are faintly engaging but not particularly insightful. The front cover's promise of "A step-by-step guide from concept to finished script" is nonsense. Field rambles discursively about a bunch of screenwriting concepts in no particular order, and refuses to give any concrete advice on the first step, let alone any subsequent steps. It's the typical mumbo-jumbo of "have an idea, think about a character for a bit, sketch out some scenes, and then just write the thing. Duh!" The most often repeated scrap of advice is "Don't worry about it." Which is... worrying.
The centrepiece of Field's book and reputation is what he calls "the paradigm," which is simply three-act structure. Yes, that vessel for story refined in Ancient Greece that is yet to be improved. Yet unlike competitor Robert McKee, Field gives no justification for the three-act structure. There's no musing on how many turning points the human brain can handle before it gets bored. Instead, the paradigm just is. "Don't worry about it."
What little advice Field offers on "the paradigm" is bland and not very helpful. Confusingly, he also deploys different terminology from other writers. McKee's "Inciting Incident" is usually Field's "Key Incident" (the turning point into Act 2), and Field's "Inciting Incident" (the first scene of Act 1) is usually setup and not directly related to the story, so "Inciting Incident" seems a misnomer. Both McKee and Field are missing Blake Snyder's "Catalyst," which is actually a much more subtle and important moment (5-15 pages into Act 1; McKee sometimes calls this the Inciting Incident, but most of his examples come around page 30).
Worse, while Field gives you four key points in your story (the opening, ending, and the turning points terminating Acts 1 and 2), he has vanishingly little to say about what to put between those points. There is much talk (admittedly correct) about how Act 1 is Setup, Act 2 is Confrontation, and Act 3 is Resolution. But how do you sustain "Confrontation" over 60 pages (or 50% of your word count, in a novel)? Both Field and McKee, the leading lights in screenplay education, completely fail here, leaving a vacuum improbably colonised by Blake Snyder, of Save The Cat! fame. Snyder cops a lot of flak, perhaps because of his chirpy infomercial writing style. But he's by far the most astute student of film structure. He gives great advice, encompassing act breaks, sure, but also the structural function and tonal goal of all that empty space between pages 1 and 30, pages 30 and 90, and so on. He breaks down the daunting 60-page expanse of "Act 2" into several smaller units that are much easier to approach. His books on screenwriting are far more valuable than this offering of Field's. He somehow packs twice as much advice into half the word count. "Don't worry about it," I guess.
Aside from Chapter 14, there are some helpful and interesting excerpts from filmed screenplays (there's also a lengthy excerpt from one of Field's own screenplays that is...not very good - but that's irrelevant). But as Field repeatedly stresses, this is no substitute for finding and reading the screenplays themselves. Once you grok three-act structure (read Snyder, and if you're hankering for a more respectable teacher, throw in Campbell), the next best thing to do is read as many screenplays as you can, and / or watch as many movies as you can. That, plus writing, will be a much more valuable education than this book can provide.
In summary, do not read this if you want to learn how to understand and write story. 2/5 stars.
After months of owning this book, I finally finished it this morning and I am so glad I did. In the beginning it took me a while to get into it, but around the chapter on characters, I started making it a goal to read a chapter a day. For such a little book, it is packed with tons of information from starting off to finishing a screenplay.
"Screenplay - the foundations of screenwriting" is exactly what it says it is. It's a book about the foundations of screenwriting. It gives you a strong base to begin your writing process, whilst also giving you insight into the life of professional screenwriters. The book focusses a lot on the story and making sure you keep it moving in order to keep the reader (and future audience) engaged throughout it all. With each step in this step-by-step guide you learn various techniques you can use, along with examples from some great movies, albeit some lesser known ones nowadays, including many screenplay excerpts the author then uses to showcase and further explain his point. Overall a very informative read.
Syd Field writes very condensed at times, to then repeat certain aspects again and again throughout chapters, to push the importance of those topics. He references certain movies a lot, possibly spoiling an ending or two here and there, which is why I recommend watching them beforehand, as following along and being able to compare script to film will also be more fun. The little summary at the end of each chapter makes it easy to use the book as a reference or for advice whenever you should stumble during the writing process. I mostly enjoyed the chapters on how to create appealing characters and a technique on how to start organizing your ideas into an order that will work for a ca.120 page screenplay. The book touches upon adapting a screenplay from a novel or theatre performance as well, as creating one from scratch is a bit different than having pre-existing source material written by someone else.
Field focuses a lot on feature film ready scripts for hollywood, meaning there isn't a single chapter on how to work towards a short film, though I assume most ideas would remain the same. Where most topics are fully fleshed out, they do adhere to a standard 3 Act story structure, as most films fit into that category. Other possibilities are not mentioned, so if you want more of an open view on writing itself, I recommend buying this book together with another. One thing I personally missed was more structural information. The author shows you a basic set up containing 4 essentials to create a story, and while I am now fully convinced it is possible to only work with these 4 points, I would have liked the extra information about where the Climax should sit, Confrontation points and more structure points in general, in a way like Dan Harmons Story Circle (with 8 points that describe most movies).
In the end, I repeat that I am glad I read this book. It has everything you need to begin writing a professional film screenplay, and actually manages to inspire and motivate you to do so throughout each chapter. From the first page onward you can tell that Syd Field is passionate about the world of writing and his love can be very contagious if you let it. Though I personally would have wished for more depth in certain aspects, in retrospect this book gives you everything you need to begin your journey to professionalism. The rest is just practice and learning from failure. I recommend anyone with a passion for film or screenwriting to read this book. For anyone wanting to delve into this profession, this book is a must-have.
I am glad I bought this book, and as an aspiring filmmaker, I know I will be coming back to it time and time again.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Every character has a dramatic need, something that drives them forward into action. As someone raised in the Hollwood foothills, I've long wondered how you can make a multi-million dollar movie and forget to have a story (Rise of Skywalker cough cough). Screenplays are the least expensive part of a film, probably below the craft services table, so why are they so frequently incoherent and mediocre?
Well, I'm still not sure, and having read Syd Field's classic guide, Hollywood has even less of an excuse. A screenplay is an odd beast of a genre, a written description of moving images. They're short, 120 pages with a lot of white space, which puts then in the novella range, and have a distinct format of scene descriptions, character dialog, and action. Field mentions that successful screenplays 'look right', with a nice balance, but his concern is with form and structure.
Field prototype, his favorite movie, is Chinatown. And while he's no fan of formulaic movies, for him a movie needs form. Much like a coat has two sleeves, a collar, and a front a back, a screenplay has certain requirements. A screenplay is built of scenes arranged into sequences. There's a main character, who is thrust into conflict at Plot Point I, and then resolves the conflict at Plot Point II. The best parts of the book concern the writing and research process, working up a full biography of your characters, figuring out the context and content of the incidents that illuminate who they are (and incidentally make up the pages of your screenplay), and then the harsh work of removing all the cruft to leave a tight, lean story that grabs the reader from page one. The technique of using 52 3x5 notecards for scenes, and then laying them out, has some inspired parallels with some futurist work I've done.
Field's tone is a friendly elder letting you in on the secrets of the guild. He wants you to succeed, and he has few illusions about your low odds in Hollywood. But with this book, you're at least forewarned. It's a lot better and more professional than The Writer's Journey, which I read ages ago.
I first wrote shadow of Eden as a Screenplay and this book is on the must read list for screenwriters. Well, I must say, it is extremely useful for novelists as well. I learned several key things from this book: first: get in late, get out early. Second: make the scenes visual Third: every story had bones, structure. Know your structure and build on it. Otherwise you'll have no direction, no form and the reader will sense it in three pages and bolt - or give you a bad review.
Bonus: every movie worth its sale focuses the build up on one or two scenes. Create this buildup and have it payoff during the key scene(s).
Second bonus: create contrast. It make a photograph, incorporate it into your novels. Your hero must have ups and down, like life. Make your reader feel it. Even in Thrillers. Especially in Thrillers.
Well I wasn't goin to read the book cause I'd heard rumors about how simple the book is. But I decided to give it a try and there we go... the book is actually good, explaining the whole process very well especially to those who search for something fundamental about screenwriting and are about to write the two first feature scripts.
No book can help you churn out another Chinatown, but this was worth the time. I really hate books that preach "how to [insert action] " and was happily surprised this was not one of them. So, you think you have what it takes to be a screenwriter? Good. Read this book. It details the process in a concise, engaging way, unlike this review.
If you've ever taken a creative writing class, like, even in high school, then you don't need to read this book. And if you do read this book, be warned that it's extremely repetitive and could probably have given you everything you need in about sixty pages. I also got the companion Workbook, so we'll see if that's any more useful.