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March 18, 2017
Hard-Boiled Laurel
This marks the second time THE LAST SECOND CHANCE has been named a finalist for a top-drawer award. It was a finalist in Underground Book Reviews� Novel of The Year for 2016. Earlier this year, it was named Best Mystery for 2016 by Independent Crime Master Authors, an exclusive group of crime fiction writers.
Check out the Foreward finalist listing at
And go to to grab a copy of both Ed Earl Burch hard-boiled thrillers, THE LAST SECOND CHANCE and THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER.
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March 12, 2017
Grab Before Gone
[image error]FREEBIE STARTING MONDAY � grab a free Kindle version of my latest Texas hard-boiled crime thriller, THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER. Snap up the paperback for $3 off list price. Sale ends Friday.

March 11, 2017
Wisdom From Ed Earl’s Daddy
[image error]Here’s the fourth set of question from my virtual interview with those snarky folks at the Straight From The Author’s Mouth book blog about my Texas hard-boiled crime thriller, THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER. Available in Kindle and paperback at
Snark is vital � almost as crucial as patter. And snarky patter is best of all.
Here you go:
How about the social networks? Which ones do you believe help and which ones do you wish you could avoid?
I think Facebook, Twitter and Instagram are great for helping you create buzz about your books that doesn’t necessarily translate into sales. I also post semi-frequent updates on LinkedIn and my blog, The Spotted Mule,
And I really enjoy the virtual give-and-take of blog tours and Q&A’s from book bloggers, particularly those who love snarky patter. Patter is vital and snarky patter is best of all. But what I’ve learned is you just can’t rely on social media alone—you also have to have an old-school game and hustle your work to influential publications that focus on your genre as well as national and regional magazines and the few newspaper that still run book reviews.
Book sales. Don’t you just love them (or lack of?)? How are you making the sales happen for you?
I’ve found that a combination of snagging good reviews in newspapers and magazines, Amazon advertising and frequent use of giveaways, countdown sales and deep discounts for a set time period give me a modest stream of sales. I haven’t found the silver bullet that will make me a best-selling author and don’t think there is one. It’s a marathon of the constant hustle.
What is one thing you’d like to jump on the rooftop and scream about?
Snobs who think a book can’t possibly be good if it’s self-published and the self-appointed gatekeepers and arbiters of “what good is� for a particular genre. You saw that in the traditional publishing world, but those walls have crumbled with the rise of self-publishing and the ease of getting your book into the market. Sadly, you’re starting to see those same type of folks pop up in the indie game. For the most part, they’re hawking a template for a genre, a checklist for what a book must have and mustn’t have to win a gold star from them. Most don’t realize a good writer masters the template then turns it on its ear or chucks it out the window to tell the story his or her way.
It takes a schizophrenic mix of confidence, determination and humble to write a novel and put it out on the market and still be able to keep the ego in check to accept good editing and smart, knowing criticism you need to hear from fellow writers to become a better writer. I’ll chew the fat till the cows come home with a writer or editor who has taken the time to read my book and offer me a detailed critique of what they liked or didn’t like and why. Readers are different animals: they paid their nickel and earned the right to tell me my books suck. And I’ll always listen because you never know who will deliver that nugget you need to get better. That’s why I read every review, good or bad, even the nasty ones from trolls. I’m looking for that nugget. But when I get dinged by one of these Checklist Charlies, I see red. Even Chandler himself flipped the template of the genre he helped create upside down to tell the story he wanted to tell in The Long Goodbye the way he wanted to tell it.

Hard-Boiled Perfecto
Yow, kids! My hard-boiled Texas crime thriller, THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER, just got named Pitch Perfect Pick of The Week by Underground Book Reviews. Check out the UBR listing at
Anita Lock’s review for UBR is scheduled for April 17. My first book, THE LAST SECOND CHANCE, was a UBR Pitch Perfect Pick and finalist in their Novel of The Year contest for 2016. See what all the fuss is about at

March 7, 2017
Textured Noir Nuance
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A RICHLY NUANCE AND TEXTURED STORY
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“The Right Wrong Number� is crafted with texture and nuance. It’s a bit like “Rocky� or “Chinatown,� in that the plot isn’t particularly complex or Byzantine. The adversaries are not so much devious as willing and determined to act without compunction or compassion to achieve selfish goals. The protagonist doesn’t prevail against all odds by being more clever, talented and skillful than his opponents, but through the dint of dogged determination.
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Where the author truly distinguishes himself is first through colorful three-dimensional characters with detailed histories and human frailties, and second, with vividly detailed settings. The character backgrounds and settings in most novels could be described as watercolors, in that they are vague, a bit impressionistic, with little detail or tonal variation. In TRWN, they are more like oil paintings, with vivid colors, fine details and depth.
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Protagonist Ed Earl Burch is a deeply flawed anti-hero with enough emotional baggage to single-handedly fuel a group therapy session. He is not particularly likeable or admirable � nobody seems to like or respect him, least of all himself. He’s like a force of nature or a promontory that withstands the relentless assaults of the winds and tides. Like Rocky Balboa, Burch sets his objectives realistically low and seems content if he can go the distance.
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This is the second novel I’ve read by Nesbitt. Like “The Last Second Chance,� it is an easy read, but not necessarily a quick read, as the narrative should be savored and appreciated.

Meet Jim Nesbitt, Author of ‘The Right Wrong Number�
The Dark Phantom interviews Ed Earl’s daddy.
For more than 30 years, roved the American Outback as a correspondent for newspapers and wire services in Alabama, Florida, Texas, Georgia, North Carolina, South Carolina and Washington, D.C. He chased hurricanes, earthquakes, plane wrecks, presidential candidates, wildfires, rodeo cowboys, ranchers, miners, loggers, farmers, migrant field hands, doctors, neo-Nazis and nuns with an eye for the telling detail and an ear for the voice of the people who give life to a story. He is a lapsed horseman, pilot, hunter and saloon sport with a keen appreciation for old guns, vintage cars and trucks, good cigars, aged whiskey and a well-told story. He now lives in Athens, Alabama.
Q: Congratulations on the release of your latest book, . To begin with, can you give us a brief summary of what the story is about and what compelled you to write it?
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March 6, 2017
The Gospel Of Ed Earl
[image error]Preaching is hard, thirsty work and author Mayra Calvani’s gracious invite for a Q&A about THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER on her Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ blog reminds me it’s about time for a 90-proof bedtime toddy. Check out the interview below. And see what all the fuss is about at
Meet Jim Nesbitt, Author of ‘The Right Wrong Number�
For more than 30 years, roved the American Outback as a correspondent for newspapers and wire services in Alabama, Florida, Texas, Georgia, North Carolina, South Carolina and Washington, D.C. He chased hurricanes, earthquakes, plane wrecks, presidential candidates, wildfires, rodeo cowboys, ranchers, miners, loggers, farmers, migrant field hands, doctors, neo-Nazis and nuns with an eye for the telling detail and an ear for the voice of the people who give life to a story. He is a lapsed horseman, pilot, hunter and saloon sport with a keen appreciation for old guns, vintage cars and trucks, good cigars, aged whiskey and a well-told story. He now lives in Athens, Alabama.
Q: Congratulations on the release of your latest book, . To begin with, can you give us a brief summary of what the story is about and what compelled you to write it?
A: The Right Wrong Number is a hard-boiled tale of revenge and redemption set in Texas and northern Mexico. It’s more of a thriller than a whodunit and features Ed Earl Burch, a cashiered Dallas homicide detective eking out a living as a private eye. He’s an ex-jock gone to seed, a guy who’s been smacked around by life and has the bad knees, wounded liver and empty bank account to prove it. In this story, he’s been hired to protect an old flame threatened by the partners ripped off by her husband, a high-flying Houston financial consultant who has disappeared. These partners include some mobsters from New Orleans who send a pair of hitmen to get back their money, drugs and jewels and kill anybody involved in the score. Ed Earl finds himself locked in a deadly contest where nobody can be trusted and he’s tempted to forget his own rules by the money and sex offered up by the old flame, who has a lethal knack for larceny and betrayal. When his best friend is killed in Dallas by hired muscle, Ed Earl blames himself and sets out for revenge that winds up being a bloody form of redemption.
[image error]My primary motivation is the desire to write well-told, hard-boiled crime fiction. I’ve always regarded hard-boiled or noir stories and movies as a particularly American art form. And when you read the novels of Hammett, Chandler and more contemporary writers like James Ellroy, James Lee Burke and the late, great James Crumley, the stories are so much more than a whodunit. They’re commentaries on politics, crime, art, sex, culture, music and the time and place of the stories being told. That’s the kind of hard-boiled fiction I wanted to write. Still do.
Q: What do you think makes a good hard-boiled crime thriller? Could you narrow it down to the three most important elements? Is it even possible to narrow it down?
A: Crackling dialogue, rich and detailed narrative that gives the reader a vivid sense of time and place and lots of action. To me, plot takes a back seat to those three elements, although I know a lot of damn good writers will forcefully reject this notion.
Q: How did you go about plotting your story? Or did you discover it as you worked on the book?
A: ÌýI didn’t do a detailed plot, more of a skeletal outline that gave me a general notion of where I wanted to go and where I wanted to wind up. But I also wanted to make sure I had enough freedom to let the characters and action take me where they wanted to go. If you’re strait-jacketed by an intricate plot, you might miss some marvelous surprises along the way. That said, you always have to make sure those surprises serve your story. If they don’t, kill them off and look at that rough outline again.
Q: Tell us something interesting about your protagonist and how you developed him or her. Did you do any character interviews or sketches prior to the actual writing?
A: I didn’t do any character interviews or sketches, but I did a lot of thinking about who this guy is, what he’s experienced in life, what he’s done as a result of those experiences and how to make him utterly human. I wanted him to be strong, flawed, reckless, cagey and cynical, a guy who has a code he sometimes forgets to live by but returns to under pressure. I didn’t want him to be a Spade or a Marlowe—I wanted him to be more angst-ridden and tortured than those guys.
Ed Earl’s a bit of an Everyman who’s been smacked around by life. He’s fatally attracted to women ready, willing and able to drive a stake through his heart. He’s also a little slow on the uptake, but not dumb. He’s dogged rather than brilliant. And he sure isn’t supercool like Frank Bullitt—he’s the polar opposite of that. He’s Columbo without the caricature—people he goes up against underestimate him and he makes them pay for that mistake. Sometimes with a bullet.
Q: In the same light, how did you create your antagonist or villain? What steps did you take to make him or her realistic?
A: I learned a hard lesson from my first novel, The Last Second Chance, when I made the main villain way too over the top, haunted by visions of Aztec heart sacrifice and nightmares of flying serpent demons. I tried not to make that same mistake with the two villains in this book—the old flame and her fugitive husband. They’re smart, remorseless predators. She’s got a violent temper and a relentless sex drive; he’s an utterly cold and charming sociopath who just knows he’s the smartest guy in any room he walks into. They aren’t haunted by otherworldly demons—the devils that drive them come from good old-fashioned human evil.
Q: How did you keep your narrative exciting throughout the novel? Could you offer some practical, specific tips?
A: There’s a great Raymond Chandler line in response to a question about solving plot dilemmas—something like: “I just have somebody open the door and walk into the room with a gun in their hand.� Not a bad rule of thumb for keeping your narrative exciting. Chandler wasn’t a stickler for plot—his novels are driven by snappy dialogue, rich narrative and sudden and surprising action. I keep that in mind when writing my novels, not that I’m anywhere near the same galaxy as his talent. There’s something else I learned the hard way by reading Chandler and other great writers—everything they write is in service of the story they’re trying to tell. If it isn’t, kill it. You can see this discipline even in the wretched excess or wild tangents of a James Ellroy or Hunter S. Thompson. My books are pretty graphic—they aren’t for the Sunday school crowd. I’m frank in my descriptions about sex and violence because I think using euphemisms insults the reader and doesn’t serve the story I’m trying to tell. The characters in my books aren’t nice people. Even my main character, Ed Earl Burch, is profane, violent and reckless, with a mean streak a mile wide. These folks can be flat nasty whether they’re killing somebody or having sex with them. That’s who they are, so that’s how I tell it. You may not like them, but they won’t put you to sleep.
Q: Setting is also quite important and in many cases it becomes like a character itself. What tools of the trade did you use in your writing to bring the setting to life?
A: You’re preaching to the choir on this one. I believe the setting of a novel IS a character unto itself. You should use rich, detailed descriptions to give readers a vivid sense of time and place and give your characters a compelling landscape for what they say and do. How they react to and interact with that landscape gives depth and authenticity to your story. Too many writers don’t bother to do this and their story reads like a cardboard cutout. As for the tools of the trade that get you where you need to go, nothing beats being there. Nothing beats walking the ground, as the Brits would say. My latest novel takes you from Dallas to Houston and New Orleans and winds up in the stark, arid beauty of the Texas Big Bend country and northern Mexico. I lived in Dallas in the mid-to-late 1980s and knocked around Houston, New Orleans and West Texas and northern Mexico as a roving correspondent in the early-to-mid 1990s, which is the timeframe for this book. If you can’t walk the ground, you do the next best thing: research. You read about the places you put in your story and the time you’re trying to portray. Find historians who know that time and place and talk to them, get their recommendations on what you should read. Find friends who have lived there and talk to them. That’s what I did to give me a deeper understanding that added strength and authenticity to my writing.
Q: Did you know the themes of your novel from the start or is this something you discovered after completing the first draft? Are these themes recurrent in your other work?
A: Only in the subconscious sense when I wrote the first one because I was so focused on the specifics of character backstory and motivation and was having a helluva good time seeing where these guys would next take the story. I started out with a couple of simple rules about Ed Earl � he doesn’t get the girl, he survives but winds up a little more battered physically and spiritually, he reclaims a bit of his life by remembering his code and returning to it. But I really didn’t think about the overarching themes of my books until an old Houston friend who loves Ed Earl penned a review of The Last Second Chance and shot me a note that said: “Your book is about revenge and redemption.� So is The Right Wrong Number in an equally subconscious way. Not surprising since I grew up Baptist but like to think of myself as more of an Old Testament kind of guy.
Q: Where does craft end and art begin? Do you think editing can destroy the initial creative thrust of an author?
A: The raucous laughter and hoots you’re hearing right now come from all the editors I left bloody when I was a word-proud journalist too enamored with his own turns of phrase. I’m a little older and wiser now—and far less pig-headed. That doesn’t mean I meekly allow any editor to take a chainsaw to my work because I still believe bad editing can kill creativity while great editing can make it shine. It’s the difference between that chainsaw and a surgeon’s scalpel. As to where craft ends and art begins, I think about that question quite a bit but I’m not sure I have an easy answer. I do know that too many writers rely on artifice and obedience to the conventions and templates of their chosen genre and too many editors try to force writers into those cubbyholes. I think good writers learn about those conventions and master that template, then turn them on their ear and use what works best to tell the story they want to tell. You have to be brave enough to chuck the rules and let the story fly but smart enough to know if you’re taking a flight to nowhere.
Q: What three things, in your opinion, make a successful novelist?
A: Storytelling talent, ego and dogged persistence.
Q: A famous writer once wrote that being an author is like having to do homework for the rest of your life. What do you think about that?
A: I think writing is a cruel mistress who gives me no choice but to obey her.
Q: Are there any resources, books, workshops or sites about craft that you’ve found helpful during your writing career?
A: I think the best thing a writer can do is keep reading good writers, keep talking with other good writers to learn and get better and keep that butt in the chair to write that next story.
Q:Ìý Is there anything else you’d like to share with my readers about the craft of writing?
A: There’s no silver bullet. You hone your craft by doing it and reading the work of great writers.

February 27, 2017
THE STORY BEHIND ‘THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER� BY JIM NESBITT
Another stop on the blog tour for THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER, this one on The Story Behind The Book. See what the fuss is all about at
I come from a long line of hillbilly storytellers and grew up listening to parents, grandparents, uncles, aunts and cousins tell tales about growing up in the mountains of western North Carolina during the Great Depression, about going overseas during World War II to beat Hitler and Tojo, about coming home to marry and start families and pulling up stakes to chase better jobs during the post-war boom.
I had an older cousin who ran moonshine to pay for the dicey operation to fix his daughter’s heart. He later became a cop. I had a great grandfather who was a circuit-riding preacher serving hamlets so deep in the hollers they had to pipe in the sunshine. I had a grandmother who dipped snuff and drank a nightly dram of fortified wine to settle her stomach till the day she died at 93. And my father’s father, a caretaker for the�
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February 25, 2017
High Cotton, Hard Boiled
If you missed The Big Show at High Cotton Arts Center last week, you can still drop in and get autographed copies of my latest hard-boiled Texas thriller, THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER. A signed copy for just a penny more than the Amazon list price � can’t beat it with a sharp stick. And while you’re there, check out the mighty fine work by the talented artists who also hang a shingle there. High Cotton Arts, 103 W. Washington Street, Athens, Ala. Tell ’em Ed Earl’s daddy sent you. [image error]

February 21, 2017
The Right Wrong Number, by Jim Nesbitt
Here’s another stop on my blog tour for THE RIGHT WRONG NUMBER � a synopsis and excerpt in the Plug Your Book! blog. Take a peek and grab a copy at
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Genre: Mystery
Author: Jim Nesbitt
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Publisher: Spotted Mule Press
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When the phone rings long after midnight, it spells trouble of the lethal kind for Ed Earl Burch. A cashiered homicide detective with bad knees, a wounded liver and an empty bank account, Burch has been hired to protect an old flame after the disappearance of her husband, a high-flying Houston financier who ripped off his clients, including some deeply unsavory gentlemen from New Orleans.
It’s a simple job that goes wrong fast, plunging Burch into a ruthless contest where nothing is as it seems and no one can be trusted. Money and sex� twin temptations served up by the old flame, a rangy strawberry blonde with a violent temper and a terminal knack for larceny and betrayal—tempt Burch�
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