- The word him is spelled his throughout. There are other editing issues but that was the most noticeable.
- There's lack of good prep for anal sex and there's zero prep for anal sex. In this story the young man, who had never experienced anal sex before, allowed his stepfather to enter in one, hard thrust without lube or stretching. Oh, and he enjoyed it. The young man had just taken a drug that caused him to be extremely aroused. Even with that, the lack of preparation bugged me. I get that it's erotica, but when I'm thinking "Ouch!" the whole time I'm reading a particular scene, it takes away from the story for me. (hide spoiler)]...more
Richard is a devoted husband, devoted father, and devoted employee. He's never strayed in all the years he's been with his wife but suddenly he's moreRichard is a devoted husband, devoted father, and devoted employee. He's never strayed in all the years he's been with his wife but suddenly he's more than a little tempted. When an opportunity arises (pun intended) to be with his babysitter does he do the right thing and walk away? Or does he follow through with what the babysitter is offering?
This was a sexy short. The writing is good and the sex is hot as hell. I can't wait to see what happens next in the series....more
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