Couldn't finish it. The punctuation (or lack of) drove me mad. Interesting concept but.... Couldn't finish it. The punctuation (or lack of) drove me mad. Interesting concept but.... ...more
Just gave up after a while. It could have ended after part one and been a decent story. I felt it dragged on and on with little movement in the plot. Just gave up after a while. It could have ended after part one and been a decent story. I felt it dragged on and on with little movement in the plot. After a while I didn’t care what happened to anyone. Three stars because some scenes were interesting and clever. ...more