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The Incredible Origins of the Onyx Sun
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Well I've finished the book! I enjoyed it. There were definitely some typos and accuracy issues (and since this is an ARC I'm not sure if any of these issues are in the final version), but overall it was a great story line with fun characters. There was a meaningful plot and great resolution, while still leaving it open for a second book. I had a lot of fun reading it. I love short chapters, so I thought it was great that they were all very short. It makes me keep reading when I know the chapter is only a few pages verses 40 pages. Thanks goodreads and Christopher Mahoney!
I would also like to add that I think it is amazing that you self published! Great work and keep going after your dreams!
I would also like to add that I think it is amazing that you self published! Great work and keep going after your dreams!
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August 4, 2010
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