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The Awakening / The Struggle by L.J. Smith
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"Vampire Diaries" are the earlier books written by L.J. Smith and, unfortunately, it shows. I enjoyed her later trilogies "Dark Visions" and "The Forbidden Games" very much and therefore had very high hopes for "Vampire Diaries."

To my disappointment, the writing is just not as good as I came to expect from L.J. Smith. The characters are not fully developed and more often than not unlikeable. The romance also is not written very well. It is very hard to believe in passion between Elena and Stefan. The narration in "The Awakening" is too choppy; multiple POVs are sometimes confusing and distracting. "The Struggle" however is significantly better written, the ending really pulled off the entire second book for me.

In spite of all this criticism, however, I have to give credit L.J. Smith for creating characters and mythology that were later shamelessly "borrowed" by Stephenie Meyer. The similarities between "Vampire Diaries" and "Twilight" are undeniable. Human-vampire romance set in high school, blood lust, angst, "vegetarian" vampires - all was first written by L.J. Smith.

I will continue on reading this series and hope the books are going to get better.
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Reading Progress

April 24, 2009 – Shelved
July 1, 2009 –
page 35
7.11%
July 2, 2009 –
page 155
31.5%
July 2, 2009 –
page 155
31.5% "Twilight deja vu, or other way around, I guess..."
July 2, 2009 –
page 260
52.85%
July 5, 2009 –
page 325
66.06%
Started Reading
July 6, 2009 –
page 368
74.8%
July 6, 2009 –
page 390
79.27%
July 6, 2009 – Finished Reading
April 3, 2010 – Shelved as: romancelandia

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.·:*¨ × Shannon♥Stelena&Bamon&Sydrian × ¨*: It's not so much as Stephenie copied but more she and L.J. go for the most obvious, cliched ideas.


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