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Servant Mage
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Great concept and setting, but the story felt underdeveloped. I was also thrown at times by jarring info dumps or awkward transitions.
The protagonist's habit of blurting whatever crossed her mind made her somewhat annoying; it came across more like a way of sharing backstory than a natural part of the character.
The protagonist's habit of blurting whatever crossed her mind made her somewhat annoying; it came across more like a way of sharing backstory than a natural part of the character.
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Finished Reading
January 13, 2024
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