Laura C. Turner's Reviews > Unveil
Unveil (Alchemy, #3)
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OK, enough already!! There is WAY too much sex and it is simply reruns of most other sex scenes in this book and in Hart's previous books. I think I've said this before, sex scenes to further a plot line is good, sex scenes simply to use up space is boring.
The plot was interesting, Gen and Anton made a good pair, however I do have another issue. In all of Hart's books I've read, the male character "claims" the female character as his own, tells her how to conduct herself in sexual encounters (to which she replies "Yes, sir"). This is not arousing nor is it anywhere near respectful to Hart's female characters, who she writes as smart, educated, socially accomplished, and supposedly in charge of their individual lives.
Please, give us plot and character development. Give us one or two detailed sexual encounters and then leave the rest to our imaginations.
The plot was interesting, Gen and Anton made a good pair, however I do have another issue. In all of Hart's books I've read, the male character "claims" the female character as his own, tells her how to conduct herself in sexual encounters (to which she replies "Yes, sir"). This is not arousing nor is it anywhere near respectful to Hart's female characters, who she writes as smart, educated, socially accomplished, and supposedly in charge of their individual lives.
Please, give us plot and character development. Give us one or two detailed sexual encounters and then leave the rest to our imaginations.
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March 25, 2024
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March 25, 2024
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