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Phantom by H.D. Carlton
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** spoiler alert ** If you're expecting another Zade, stop, and turn around. Zade is Zade, and there will never be another him. One day, some of you will have to accept that I have no plans to 😂 Ronaldo is a character of his own, and truthfully, more of a mobster than a stalker.

I never ever planned to write Gigi and Ronaldo's story. When I wrote Haunting Adeline, it wasn't even in the realm of possibility because of her tragedy.

But then a publisher wanted it, and only asked for a tiny 40k novella, and well, I said why not. So then Phantom was born. Except, I wrote a book double what I was supposed to. Oops.

Let me add a huge important note: The timeline of Phantom goes off of the *updated* version of Haunting and it's journal entries. If you go off the original entries, the timeline and events in the entries will make no sense.

Annoying? Very. Trust me, no one is more irritated by that than me lmao. I cursed past, unambitious HD for about 3 days straight.

Again, I never planned on giving Gigi a story back in 2020 when I started writing Haunting, so when I wrote those journal entries, I didn't give too much thought to the unfolding of her story. But the moment I dived into Gigi's book, her REAL story quickly unfolded, and suffice to say, my old entries were just NOT going to work. If I tried, her story would've suffered greatly, and she's been handed enough injustices, I didn't want to add a story forced into a very tight box on top of it.

If I was going to write her story, I was going to write it how it needed to be. So I made the decision to adjust her old entries in HA to match. Again, annoying, but very necessary.

Anyway, my focus for this story was their love. I know my readers are used to plot heavy books with chaos at every corner, but Gigi's chaos ends in such a tragic way that I wanted to focus on the portion of her life where she experienced true love and passion. Boring? Maybe to some, but true love can be boring sometimes.

Eventually, I MAY give you all more insight into the chaos, and idk, maybe her ending won't be what it seems. But for now, you have the option to read the calm before the storm.

*Bows dramatically* enjoy, y'all. Or don't, that's an option, too. 😘
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September 29, 2024 – Started Reading
September 29, 2024 – Shelved
September 29, 2024 – Shelved as: finished-writing
January 14, 2025 – Finished Reading

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Jenn I am SO freaking excited for this! You don't even know!!!
I have to wait until the 21st because I have the Audible recording pre-ordered... So, I've been doing my best to avoid all spoilers!
Gah!!! Can't wait!!!!!!!


Kimmy Sue  Neal Loved it so much. 5 ⭐️ read as always.


Gracie I loved it 🥹❤️


BethBetweenThePages I am so excited for this. I can't wait for the audio!!!


Sienna (Azriel's version) I CANT WAIT AHHHHH IMMA DOWNLOAD THE PDF


Emilia Janson Normally I can’t read books that doesn’t have a Happy ending but I cannot not read Gigi and Ronaldos story! I have the original book and therefore the letters are not the updated version but even then their love was so intense and consuming! I can’t wait to finally get a real insight on them as people!


paula Thank you for this masterpiece!! I was obsessed and loved how you chose to write her story. But honestly, each one of your works is a piece of literature to me 🙇🏻‍♀️🫶�


Bryce Lundien i loved this book soo soo soo much! i am in love with gigi and ronaldo. should you ever chose to give us more of their story, and their tragic ending, i would eat it up! i want to know what happens to them. i’m so invested in them. thank you so much for giving us this beautiful story


Kaylee “The option to read the calm before the storm� girl I’m already hurting.
I loved this book so much 😭🫶🏻💋


Hazel Kelly Doesn't matter we'll love it anyways❤️�


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Lorimar Why didn't I know this was about to be release? Immediate buy! I need to know Gigi story.


Natalya  Harrelson It was everything we never knew we needed. You made us fall in Love with Gigi....and Ronaldo. That Waterfall


Nicole Bartos This was everything that we didn’t know we needed. Well done girlfriend! I absolutely loved this book, for so many reasons.


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Eleena Patterson So, are the entries in the old HA different? Should I buy the new HA for the new journal entries? I can't wait to read Gigi's story!!!


Batgirl Please tell me you are doing book 2 , because I can’t be left like this


Melissa Just finished it and it was PERFECTION!!


Janie Freeman I just finished! And may I say I can’t wait for book 2 hopefully it’s a reality not a dream!!! The waterfall scene🥵🥵. And the bonus Addie and Zade chapter! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! Oh and BTW I never thought I would love a MMC more than Zade but you changed that with Ronaldo


Katarina Blackwelder I LOVED this book so much


Kristenia L C Read Cant wait to start Phantom! I have the original cover paperback copies of Haunting & Hunting Adeline so assuming I have the old entries, my question is will the Mystery Box special edition books with Zade on the cover have the updated entries or the original ones? Just wondering cause Ill end up buying the updated versions so they match up with my hardcover copy of phantom


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Tinker Toy I absolutely can not wait till it gets here I went ahead and ordered it but I really wanted to hold out for a signed copy of satans affair and phantom I never can seem to find S.A on your sight 😭 so I just bit the bullet and ordered it to so I could finish your shelf since those two are the only ones I’m missing of your published works and I’m so excited I always wish Gigi’s story would have gone more in depth and somehow you would continue the series somehow for longer 😂 I know good things must end but still not happy I’ll have to find other things to read


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Jasmine Wells I will eventually get this book!


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Taylor Finch I just received it! Gonna start after I finish “Molly.�


Cassie Tincher *Sigh* I guess I’ll read the whole series again after reading this.

It was so good!


Catmomdani21 I knew how it ended, but I still devoured this. It wraps it all up in a now. Especially that added scene at the end ♥️


Marie Goins Thank you so much for giving us more to gigi story! This book was amazing and so beautifully written! Had me in literal tears at the end, in a good way!


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Ryan Long Loved it and the little bonus Addie and Zade scene 🥹🫶🏼


Amanda (edgybookvixen) Loved their story! I'm ngl. The masochist in me wanted the whole tragic ending


lyssa mullins You could re-write a phone book and I’d read it. Love your work so much HD. 💕


Shelten Watson Okay, I read both Haunting and Hunting Adeline. Why am I very confused when H.D. is talking about Gigi's tragic ending. Am I forgetting a very important detail? It has been a second since I read both of those books. Could someone help me jog my memory? Is that we don't get a truly conclusive ending to the phantom? Send help, please.


Willow Beeler HD� crack? Is it crack you put into your books, because I’m addicted 🫠


Amanda Roberts I just need to know if there’s going to be more Molly, Zade, and Adeline? I just finished Molly’s book and the extended epilogue gave me hope�.was it all for naught?


Shelten Watson Please someone help me. Help me understand. What happens to Gigi. I don't remember. Help a girl out. It's eating me alive not to remember.


Keyshla Figueroa I just finished it. And I can't ever have enough of your characters. When I think I love one, another comes, and I'm in love again.


Katie19.B To say I was ugly crying at the end is an understatement. The bonus scene pushed me over the edge and my heart broke and healed all at once for Gigi and Rondalos love. 💋
Thank you for your talent and allowing us to bask in it.


Lauren Dougherty It was sooo good!! I enjoyed it so much!!


Ashley Mesaros Man did this book make me cry. Especially the additional ending with Zade and Adeline. Gigi and Ronaldo are everything.


Erika Micakova Shelten Gigi gets murdered


Shelten Watson Erika wrote: "Shelten Gigi gets murdered"

Thank you for reminding me!


Jerrica Schillawski Okay so I had to go back to Haunting to remind myself what happened to Gigi (mind you i basically reread the whole book because it is just SO FUCKING GOOD)! Butttt i didn't realize there was a bonus chapter until reading some reviews. I now read that bonus chapter and feel much better about Gigi and Ronaldo's story, but also wonder so much about Ronaldo. If Gigi was murdered by Frank, did he murder Frank? Did he hold true to his word and not remain in a world without Gigi so he killed himself? Did he live on?? Ahhhhh tell me!!!!


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Carol Collinsworth I can’t wait to read it!!! I was enthralled as I was reading Haunting Adeline, the I read Hunting Adeline, then Where’s Molly!!!!


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Carol Collinsworth I am looking for this in paperback and it is showing a different cover. Why?


message 42: by Yoli (new) - rated it 5 stars

Yoli From the moment Gigi's story was mentioned in HA, I was hooked on her storyline, even though it wasn't the main theme. I finished the book last night and it was everything I hoped for and more... It left me desperate for more!!!! (Sidenote: I really hope you write more mafia books!)


Jina 💋 We not getting another Zade is supposed to be bad? Like thank god we ain’t


Sabina ❤️ It was amazing, i wanted to know this story so bad when i read HA <3 The ending scene made my heart melt.. <3 Zade is Zade, but Ronaldo� omg, he was much better than i ever could imagine this character <3 !


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Beau Omg is this book really happening? This will destroy me for sure


Kasey Ringger I absolutely loved Gigi and Ronaldo's story!


Tawnya I loved getting to know Gigi and Ronaldo, and the ending is so perfect - if anything, this approach of the calm before the storm broke my heart even more than if the book went all the way through the chaos. Feeling her pure joy and love, the excitement for all that she wanted to do and explore and knowing her ending just broke my heart so much worse. Won’t lie, I sobbed. Thank you for giving her life!


message 48: by Gage (new) - rated it 5 stars

Gage HD Carlton has hit it out of the park yet again. This book has an old glamour to it that I really enjoyed. You can definitely tell research was in the forefront of writing this masterpiece. I love Ronaldo breaking down borders for Gigi, that at that time period are unheard of. Gigi is an odd and effortlessly seductive woman who beats to her own drum. Ronaldo a hardened gangster who softens at the sight of her. its a beautiful duo that kept me engulfed in this story. I dont want to give away any spoliers so im being very careful of my review. Seeing the story of Parsons Manor brought to life yet again has brought even more appreciation for the orginal cat and mouse duet than before. Dont run to this book expecting a retelling of Zade and Addie, it is different but just as fun.


bookloverforlife22 @Jerrica that is what I want to know. I think Ronaldo found out who killed her and he killed him.


Mariela Thank you hd
I loved gigis story. She’s a fucking lioness ❤️‍�


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