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A better editor would've elevated the story to 5 stars

There were a few too many story threads. Or perhaps there were a few too many characters introduced too quickly or there was a bit too much jumping between the story threads? Either way, though a thoroughly entertaining story it lacked cohesiveness and got muddled in several spots due to there being so much going on. Still a 4 star read (and I'm jumping into the next!) but could have leapt to a 5 star with a better editor.