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This was only the second or third romantic comedy I've ever read, so I'm not really a good critic of such things. However, I stuck with this and liked it for several reasons.

First, it's written in first person, present tense, which I llike. That's a hard venue to do because the readers is trapped in the lead character's head. If we don't relate to her, the book is shot. I found Rachel Solomon did a great job of characterizing Shay and of bringing out Dominic through actions and dialogue between the two. It's a difficult task, but she pulled it off. (I taught English at two universities. I know of what I speak).

Second, the dialogue itself was really good. Some say the jokes seemed forced, but I thought it read like natural conversations. Both used curse words a bit too much, though. I'm not a prude and in addition to collegiate level teaching, I worked at a daily newspaper for 20 years. Cursing was an art with reporters and editors. But I thought some of the things the two characters said used the bad words excessively and it hindered some of the dialogue. Other than that, she did a fine job.

The plot was good, although quick at times. It followed the formula romance writers use, I guess. Conflict early on, slow building attraction, sudden crisis that leads to "break up," a second chance, self-realization, resolution.

Again, I'm probably the worst demographic to read such a genre; I read it instead for the structure and mechanics of how Rachel Solomon did it. It was good enough for me to venture into whatever she writes next.