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Well here it is....chapter one in my short story for consumption and feedback...it's a slow start, and the first fiction piece I've started really writing.
I'm not really an author, just a book reviewer looking to write some fiction!

Joe, I'm seeing a blank page when I click on the link. I tried three times.

thanks. for some reason today people can't seem to access my site :(