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Reading Fearless right now... am I the only one who has some big issues with the way it’s written?
The language feels so overdone—like every sentence is trying to be poetic or profound with fancy words and dramatic synonyms. It honestly messes with the flow and makes it harder to connect with the story. I get wanting to sound like a good writer, but sometimes less is more. This is supposed to be a romance, not Shakespeare. Anyone else feeling this?😭

yes 100%! I thought I was the only one who thought that 😭 it definitely feels different from the previous books. Like the first two did have poetic lines, but it wasn’t like shoved down in our throats every single page

i just finished reading fearless and if I could, I would rate it 6 stars

Ikr. I just finished it and my friends are going to read it next week so it’s so hard not to rant about how amazing is is to them. It is so good

Helenaaaa wrote: "Reading Fearless right now... am I the only one who has some big issues with the way it’s written?
The language feels so overdone—like every sentence is trying to be poetic or profound with fancy w..."

I honestly did not notice this even after reading it.... But now that I read this, I am starting to

I honestly didn’t notice this at all. I literally read the book in 24 hours and loved every minute of itttt! I was eating up the writing style sm ❤️💐

totally agree !! i was very disappointed