What will happen next in The Rifter? discussion
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I wish the idea had been mine. The folks at Blind Eye Books came up with it.
I'm very interested to see what readers will think. It would be cool to see the revival of serial fiction, I think.


Sort of like watching a mini-series...uhm where all the characters are played by a bunch of typed letters... okay, so maybe not exactly the same but the idea of getting to anticipate the next episode is there.
I'd like to see more of it myself.

I hope you enjoy it! I'm really excited/nervous about how readers will deal with the size of this plot. I can't wait to hear what you think.

Mostly I'm hoping you don't kill off Bill or Laurie, they seem like prime candidates.



I'm just going to say that Laurie and Bill are not incidental characters...also keep an eye out for that dog--
--and I have to stop writing now because I'm perfectly terrible at keeping secrets once I get going... I can just see myself getting tossed out of the group for posting spoilers...

The mind boggles at the thought of tossing the author out of their own group... I suppose you are in possession of all the spoilers though, being as you wrote them *grin*

I spent far too much time on the language and then suddenly realized that I had to simplify the entire system to something the could be easily picked up by readers who might be interested in that pesky story more than participles. ; )

The mind boggles at the thought of tossing the author out of their own group... I suppose you are in possession of ..."
I still want to obey the rules that Nicole set up... but it's sooooo hard not to just blurt things out...must restrain my every urge!


Yes, I think that a large part of why he can't easily recognize magic in himself is due to his scientific training.
I think you'll be pleased to see how he learns to cope and thrive.

heh heh. : )

You are too kind!
There are a few twists and turns as the books progress but pretty soon everything will start coming together, I promise.

*nods*
I just finished and there was much wailing and knashing of teeth when I realized I had to wait until next month for the second part. Reading The Shattered Gates felt like...running through a maze, you know there is more, but at the moment you only have part of the maze mapped. And I just love how such simple, mundane things as having breakfast sheds insight into the characters. How do you pack so much characterization in without info dumping?

I wish I could take credit for that but I suspect that my only real expositional skill is to have found a very good editor.
Not only does Nicole know when to trim or expand a scene, but she gave me a great piece of advice about writing a scene that's heavy in information: Whenever possible, involve the character physically in the exposition, so that the reader is experiencing the world, not just being lectured about it.

I am already in love with this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how this is going to be a meaty plot and I get the feeling that part one was just the tip of a very big iceberg.
I also love the idea of a serial too! Reminds me of Sherlock Holmes. Hopefully I can get myself a big print copy when it has all been released =D

I am already in love with this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how this is going to be a meaty plot and I get the feeling that part o..."
Thank you!
I'm so relieved that readers seem to be enjoying the project.
You're quite right about the plot for this one being large. (My first outline took up a 18x24 sheet of newsprint.) I did my best to build climaxes and rests throughout so as not to fatigue readers with non-stop action...or worse yet non-stop botany! ; )
As for a print book, I'd personally love to have one, but I think it will really depend on the response to the digital books. If they do very well then I think the publisher would consider printing The Rifter despite the cost involved.
I'm keeping my fingers crossed! (Though it makes typing a real bother.)

And that's what works so well :) So hanging out for Part II!

I based many of the characters on friends of mine so I'm extra happy to know that I managed to convey how likable they are--in my opinion anyway ; )

This is fantastic! I just finished reading installment 1/10. I love the distinctiveness of the characters and how muddled Kyle is since he doesn't remember clearly who he is or if he ever has.
I love how you're playing with time, the part where Kyle is uncertain of when he'll be when he falls through the gate between the worlds. I love the hints that Kyle might be Rashivan! So charming and sad to think of him as the ingénue after seeing him as a scarred and private man who may or may not be a serial killer roommate. And yet, it's still unclear as to whether they are the same person somehow, or not.
I love the elements of surviving in the wild. It reminds me of those wonderfully exciting wilderness books I read in grade school. :-D I love the gruesome aspects of your world, the oracle bones clambering into the dead dog was utterly horrifying. Brilliant imagery!
I love the slow build-up of the plot that the serial format is allowing you to use. Not to say that the story is slow. It isn't, not at all! Your world building is terrific!
The overwhelming question on my mind is whether or not the blond dog is the same that Kahlil killed into which the oracle bones climbed or there is an order of blond dogs. I'm also wondering where or when Kahlil wound up if the city of his childhood is so changed.
Oh, I can hardly wait for more. I love the hook at the end of this chapter, but I really want to know what is happening to the Kyle who is slowly regaining his memories.

This is fantastic! I just finished reading installment 1/10. I love the distinctiveness of the characters and how muddled Kyle is since he doesn't remember clea..."
I can't tell you how happy I am to hear your response! Those are exactly the questions that I worked hard to build up in the story... I'm soooo pleased that you notice the dog!
Don't worry there will be more of Kyle in book two-- and some things will be made quite clear... (You can't see it but I'm wiggling my fingers like and evil villain, about to release the hounds!)

I'm relieved that you liked the character being on a learning curve. I too feel weird about characters just knowing everything from the get go, but I also have to balance that with the pace of a plot. I'm so happy that I got the balance right,(at least for one book--I hope for all ten...)

I've loved everything I've read by Ginn - the short story Shy Hunter was so good I had to go out for Ethiopian food!

Book Two will be out April 12th (The books are all being release on the second tuesday of every month.)
And I'm really delighted to have inspired an outing for an Ethiopian meal... Though now the thought it making me crave injeera... mmmm...

I'm here but laying low because I don't want to spoil anything before everyone has a chance to read bk 2...
(But can I talk about the two time lines now, you think? I tried to hint at them by having the illustrator put dates on the maps... did it work?)


I really wanted it to be a book that some one could read more than once and catch new things each time.

I wish the idea had been mine. The folks at Blind Eye Books came up with it.
I'm very interested to see what readers will think. It would be cool to see the revival of serial fiction,..."
No it wouldn't. This is TORTURE waiting for the next installment. :-D

So agree ;) I'm waiting until 3 or 4 are out then reading them...

Now you know how I feel waiting for your next book!

I start reading and get completely hooked only to reach the end and realize I have to wait a month for the next installment! Definitely torture!
@Ginn - BTW, I like the 'previously' bit at the beginning of the second part. I was worried I wouldn't remember everything, but I read it and everything came flooding back beautifully!

I glad to know that, because those recaps have to be the hardest things for me to write ever. I tried to keep them concise but by book nine a LOT had happened! ;D

I know everyone is on to discussing the Book 2 timelines now, and I too have finally caught up through the end of the 2nd book. But I wanted to comment on something from Book 1 that I found to be particularly humorous and so insightful. I loved your writing of Kyle's thoughts in the restaurant scene concerning the fact that oatmeal was always offered as a breakfast selection, but never pictured on the menu. You wrote that he had no desire to eat it; he just wanted to see what it looked like. I cannot even begin to tell you how long I laughed when I read those words. Sheer genius on your part. What a hoot!

I'm so glad someone noticed that! It's a little bit of biography, because I hadn't encountered the term "oatmeal" until I was about nine years old and somehow I got the idea that it was something mysterious and exotic when I saw it on a menu. You can imagine my shock when the true "glory of the dish was revealed to me. ; )

How was it referred to before then?

I lived in a cabin above a commune up in the mountains for the first eight years of my life. Rice and corn were common staples but I never encountered oats until my family moved to the city. Then suddenly I discovered all the modern wonders: electricity, flush toilets, disposable pens and OATMEAT! :D
Thinking back on it, I'm not certain why I was so fascinated by that one dish but the experience came in handy years later.

I do like oatmeal,(but only cooked savory not sweet) though I'm much more fond of uncooked oats served cold with yoghurt and berries. (My sympathy to your poor husband.)
I was using it to emphasize Kyle's alien qualities, but the idea came easily--along with a few others-- because my own early experiences of modern America were a bit alien as well.

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I just wanted to thank readers for supporting this project. I can''t wait to hear what you think --of course, I hope that you all really enjoy the books!