What will happen next in The Rifter? discussion
Timelines--Book Two
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Apr 15, 2011 09:38AM

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I'm glad you're enjoying the 'mystery' aspect of the time lines-- that was a huge part of why I wrote the book!

I'm pretty sure you're not too far off base...
Dlee wrote: "I'd love to hear your guesses. I'm a bit confused as to who I think Jath'ibaye really is. Kyle recognized him so I thought he might be John but he didn't seem like a nice person. I can't imagine..."
Well, you know, whether a person seems nice or not can be a matter of perspective. To Ourath et al, I'm pretty sure Jath'ibaye is an antagonist keeping them from what they want.
Well, you know, whether a person seems nice or not can be a matter of perspective. To Ourath et al, I'm pretty sure Jath'ibaye is an antagonist keeping them from what they want.

@Dlee - I agree. I think Jath'ibaye is John. Not because the beginning of Jath'ibaye's name is Jath, which IIRC is the name John is called, but more because of the description of the Glass Palace and how the plants were indoors. Something I thought a environmental major would do. Plus he doesn't eat dog...
And for how Jath'ibaye acts...it's approx. 40 years on in the timelines. We have no way of knowing what John discovered in the temple, and what things happened to him. Maybe he decided that being in charge would mean less bad things would happen? Plus...for Kahil, this is an alternate timeline. Fijiri hadn't survived in the original timeline - it was John's intervetion that changed the timeline. But then...John is the Rifter, and I'm beginning to think that...fate isn't necessarily applied to him. In other words, he can change things.
What I'm wondering, what I'm hoping is whether Kahil can regain his memory and, if so, go through the Grey Space and back to the right timepoint and change things... I don't know what is possible...
I spent all morning, including my trip to the grocery store, mulling this over. This serial is definitely making me think :)

Josh wrote: "All I know is I can't imagine how the heck Ginn kept these timelines straight. I have to keep stopping to remind myself which is real, which is alternate -- assuming either."
Ha! (Maybe that's why it took her 5 years to write it.)
Ha! (Maybe that's why it took her 5 years to write it.)

(The option that requires the most work to plot out and devise is sadly the one I always tend to choose.)

:-D Of course!

Oh, I like that! I was leaning towards Kyle's original timeline being real, but being warped by Jon's presense (as seen with where Kyle is now). But I was thinking it was Kyle who would regain his memories and jump back to the correct time to try and undo certain timepoints. But...if John is The Rifter then...why could he not close instead of tear?


I have a hard time spelling some of the place names myself--so no worries. ; )

Ahhh, yes, but what is a Rifter exactly? I don't think it's going through the Grey Space like Kyle does. I'm kind of speculating that it actually...undoes space, or the atoms that make up space...creating said rift. Then again it could be something else entirely :)
IIRC when Kyle currently is the Rifter has acted...so it hasn't destroyed the world itself.

Speaking of John's "sister" does anyone else think that maybe Laurie is now in the form of a yellow dog? She was referred to on several occasions as a "b*tch." We haven't actually seen her yet... just thinking maybe she went the way other witches seemed to go....

@Pink - YIKES! Poor Laurie. The thing is, if one goes in can one come out again?

I was kinda taken aback when they were talking about John being a leader of the red coats. But obviously some serious stuff has gone down in the intervening years. And when you think about it, John really is very honorable. What if while he was living with the priests he learned about the Rifter and realized that these people had been planning to use him to annihilate a whole country. It might have made him change his point view. Maybe. I can't wait to find out. I just hope things get better for Kyle. He's breaking my heart right now.

I thought Kyle's role was to stop The Rifter - as in kill him so he didn't unleash h*ll. Hmmm. Maybe I need to re-read part way to get Kyle's POV...

And I'm digging the idea that Laurie might actually be Ji Shir‘korud. I don’t know if that would work with the timeline that John is in, though, if he’s in a time where Rathal’pesha still stands (unless Ji is doing some time-travel as well). I just like the idea of (heretofore) timid Laurie being a complete bad-ass that strikes fear into the hearts of her enemies.
Also, something I found in the index: Saimura is Ji Shir’korud’s son? Did I read that right? I totally missed that in-story. Thank you, index! You never let me down.
Also, something I found in the index: Saimura is Ji Shir’korud’s son? Did I read that right? I totally missed that in-story. Thank you, index! You never let me down.
I don't think you missed it. I'm pretty sure that hasn't been revealed in the direct text of the story yet--only in that index. (G. Hale apparently stuck this in the index on purpose as a clue to see if anybody would notice it.)
I don't think you missed it. I'm pretty sure that hasn't been revealed in the direct text of the story yet--only in that index. (G. Hale apparently stuck this in the index on purpose as a clue to see if anybody would notice it.)


In that context, searching the index does seem a little like checking for answers in the back of the book. I can see how that would take some of the fun out of everything. Though if you're trying to remember a character's name or what the nuns are called, as opposed to priests- the index is there for you.

*nods* And I should clarify, what I said only applies to me - usually I'd be really tempted to look at the index, but...I'm just enjoying the mad speculating that is no doubt way of base (which is unusual for me as normally I'd worry about being completely wrong and thus looking like an idiot :)

I happen to think some of your ideas are brilliant! I wish I'd had you around to bounce thoughts off of back when I was hammering this thing out.


I pitched it as one history, told in two parts--but that obviously glosses over everything Kyle has to deal with when it comes to his past...(pasts?) ; D


Never fear, I refuse to put characters, (and readers) through the wringer and then deprive them of a happy ending.
And happy endings are actually much more challenging and interesting to plot out, in my opinion, because it's easy to just let everything go to hell--it's much much harder to work out a way for the characters to take on the impossible and WIN!

I didn't know where to say this, but I've mentioned we are rereading the Rifter for three months over at Josh's.
One of us just noticed that ebook #2 ends at chapter 19, but ebook #3 starts with chapter 22.
She asked me to check the print edition, and it is the same there.
I think that there was a mistake in the numeration. Those chapter don't exist, do they?

I didn't know where to say this, but I've mentioned we are rereading the Rifter for three months over at Josh's.
One of us just noticed that ebook #2 ends at chapter 19, bu..."
Ah yes! There was a numbering error when the book was cut into ten different sections. It carried over into the print version-- but all the chapters are there.
(good eye, by the way!)

I thought so, but I didn't want to miss the chance of finding two more shiny chapters of The Rifter ;-))

I thought so, but I didn't want to miss the chance of finding two more shiny chapters of The Rifter ;-))"
Maybe next christmas! :D

Thank you for putting it here. Na said:
I've not modified it since I've created it. If there's any edit to be done, I'll be glad to do so.