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The Pillars of the Earth (Kingsbridge, #1)
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Dec 27, 2007
bookshelves: books-i-don-t-care-for, historical-fiction, epic, medieval
I did not hate this book (hate would be too strong a word, and I can't hate it because I applaud the fact that Ken Follett attempted to write an epic novel). But I did not like it. I didn't like it from the start; his writing style hit me like a brick, but Jim thoroughly enjoyed the book that I kept trying to convince myself that I ought to give it a chance, hoping it would get better. When I was about 500 pages in, he saw how miserable I was and asked why I didn't just stop reading it, but at that point, I was invested in it; I had spent all that time getting that far, that I needed to finish it, and I couldn't wait to come to the end. I kept counting down: "Only 450 pages left; only 300 to go; last 200 pages...yay, I have 50 pages left!" Those fifty pages were the toughest to get through. By the time I was at the end, I thought it was a wasted effort - both on his part and mine.
It's so much easier to explicate on what I did not like because there were so many things:
- I loathed the writing style (he vacillated between pages and pages of highly complex architectural discourses to third-grade level simple sentences grouped into short paragraphs). Sometimes it was bearable. Other times, I wanted to pull my hair out. There were times when I felt the only time he came alive as an author was when he was discussing architecture, but these parts were so didactic in nature that it couldn't hold my interest for long periods of time.
- I did not like the author's narrative style. He had to tie everything together (causality was so prevalent throughout the text that I wondered how he didn't work in how the killing of a fly affected events 60 years later). Every single storyline was wrapped up - too neatly for my liking, in some cases. Everyone was tied to someone else (it was like playing Six Degrees); every single character had to have a denouement; every little plot twist had to be explained; closure had to be achieved, no matter how preposterous the circumstances, over time and space.
- The characterization was poor. In fact, it was appalling how two-dimensional these characters were. Good people were good. Bad people were loathsome. As time went on, the good were always suffering one thing or another; they were put upon; they were harrassed; they were constantly challenged and put to the test like Job (something Follett actually used as a sermon!). The badfolk became more oppressive over time; they were not only detestable, but they had absolutely no redeeming qualities. And to go with a typical medieval stereotype, the good were always excessively beautiful, honorable, intelligent (geniuses or savants, even!) - and if they weren't rich, they would be at the end (I half expected Havelok the Dane and his refrigerator mouth to pop up somewhere, proving once and for all that in the medieval period, to be good was to have the purest light shining out of your mouth each time you opened it). Nevertheless, the bad became uglier, became more despotic, scheming throughout life to get the better of their enemies (the goodfolk). But in the end, good always triumphed over evil; those who could, repented and were forgiven. Those who couldn't, were killed off somehow, because apparently, death is the only way an evil person gets his (or her) dues. And then everyone had a happy ending. I hate happy endings when they're so obviously contrived. And this work was so elaborately, exhaustively, thoroughly contrived. (Maybe it's not too late for me to change my mind and say I hated it. *grin*)
- Historically speaking, there was so much left to be desired. Granted, this novel was written two decades ago, and there have been new discoveries about the medieval period since Follett started his research. But he got it all wrong anyhow. His idea of medieval life was so...off, that it hurt my head to continue reading sometimes. I had to pause periodically and rant to Jim about what I currently found off-putting (for example, there weren't many literate people at the time; at the time this novel was set, there was still a distinct divide between England and Wales; reading and writing were two separate skill sets, and people who knew how to read did not necessarily know how to write and vice versa; orality was a prevalent part of storytelling back then and books not so much and yet somehow, he conflated much of both; manuscript writing was either orally dictated or copied tediously by the monks - his concept of a scriptorium was incomplete, defective - and there has been so much written about this that it saddened me; he used modern translations of medieval poetical/verse works and couldn't explain even alliterative verse form effectively - I even wonder if he knew what it was; his understanding of the languages of the period - Old English, Middle English, Latin, Norman French, Old French, Middle French, etc. - and what was spoken by the aristocrats vs. the peasants vs. the growing middle classes disgusts me; he showed a lack of understanding of medieval law, medieval rights, the social classes, gender roles, even the tales and legends of the period, in both England and France; priests were quite low on the totem pole, in terms of the religious hierarchy, and were quite disparaged yet somehow, that didn't quite come across in this novel...I could go on and on, but I won't).
And the historical part of the novel I just found lacking. There are enough histories and chronicles, contemporaneously written, of the time, that he did not have to deviate much from history. There is so much written about the period between the death of Henry I through the civil wars between the Empress Matilda and King Stephen, to the time that Henry II ascended the throne (including the martyrdom of Thomas a Beckett), that I don't quite understand how he couldn't have mined the chronicles for better material. I understand that this is why it's called historical fiction, and that there will always be some element of fiction interspersed with historical fact. But the fictional aspects usually have to do with surrounding characters and situations that bolster the history. The fiction is not necessarily to the history itself. Many times, when writing historical fiction, the author has to beware the pitfalls of creating a revisionist retelling, interspersing his or her own ideals or beliefs of what should have been to what was. If this novel had been marketed as a revisionary narrative, it would have been okay. But it wasn't. I'm just glad that the historical aspect of the novel just served as the background and not the real story. Because then, I probably would've stopped reading.
The premise was a good one and held a lot of promise. It could've been a great historical epic had it been handled by a more assured writer. By someone who was more of a visionary, someone who had the patience to do exhaustive research or who knew how to craft richly developed characters. It needed an author who understood the epic genre, who knew how to mold the epic, who knew how to keep the narrative going, seemlessly binding time with narration and the human condition, without resorting to stereotypes and grating drama. And most importantly, it needed someone who understood when the story had been told; that while there will always be other stories to tell, that each book has its own natural end, and that these stories may not belong in this book.
Ken Follett may be a bestselling author of suspense novels (and even historical fiction such as Pillars of the Earth and World without End), but he is no writer of epics. Compared to writers of historical fiction such as Edward Rutherford, James Michener, Bernard Cornwell or Margaret George, Ken Follett has a long way to go.
It's so much easier to explicate on what I did not like because there were so many things:
- I loathed the writing style (he vacillated between pages and pages of highly complex architectural discourses to third-grade level simple sentences grouped into short paragraphs). Sometimes it was bearable. Other times, I wanted to pull my hair out. There were times when I felt the only time he came alive as an author was when he was discussing architecture, but these parts were so didactic in nature that it couldn't hold my interest for long periods of time.
- I did not like the author's narrative style. He had to tie everything together (causality was so prevalent throughout the text that I wondered how he didn't work in how the killing of a fly affected events 60 years later). Every single storyline was wrapped up - too neatly for my liking, in some cases. Everyone was tied to someone else (it was like playing Six Degrees); every single character had to have a denouement; every little plot twist had to be explained; closure had to be achieved, no matter how preposterous the circumstances, over time and space.
- The characterization was poor. In fact, it was appalling how two-dimensional these characters were. Good people were good. Bad people were loathsome. As time went on, the good were always suffering one thing or another; they were put upon; they were harrassed; they were constantly challenged and put to the test like Job (something Follett actually used as a sermon!). The badfolk became more oppressive over time; they were not only detestable, but they had absolutely no redeeming qualities. And to go with a typical medieval stereotype, the good were always excessively beautiful, honorable, intelligent (geniuses or savants, even!) - and if they weren't rich, they would be at the end (I half expected Havelok the Dane and his refrigerator mouth to pop up somewhere, proving once and for all that in the medieval period, to be good was to have the purest light shining out of your mouth each time you opened it). Nevertheless, the bad became uglier, became more despotic, scheming throughout life to get the better of their enemies (the goodfolk). But in the end, good always triumphed over evil; those who could, repented and were forgiven. Those who couldn't, were killed off somehow, because apparently, death is the only way an evil person gets his (or her) dues. And then everyone had a happy ending. I hate happy endings when they're so obviously contrived. And this work was so elaborately, exhaustively, thoroughly contrived. (Maybe it's not too late for me to change my mind and say I hated it. *grin*)
- Historically speaking, there was so much left to be desired. Granted, this novel was written two decades ago, and there have been new discoveries about the medieval period since Follett started his research. But he got it all wrong anyhow. His idea of medieval life was so...off, that it hurt my head to continue reading sometimes. I had to pause periodically and rant to Jim about what I currently found off-putting (for example, there weren't many literate people at the time; at the time this novel was set, there was still a distinct divide between England and Wales; reading and writing were two separate skill sets, and people who knew how to read did not necessarily know how to write and vice versa; orality was a prevalent part of storytelling back then and books not so much and yet somehow, he conflated much of both; manuscript writing was either orally dictated or copied tediously by the monks - his concept of a scriptorium was incomplete, defective - and there has been so much written about this that it saddened me; he used modern translations of medieval poetical/verse works and couldn't explain even alliterative verse form effectively - I even wonder if he knew what it was; his understanding of the languages of the period - Old English, Middle English, Latin, Norman French, Old French, Middle French, etc. - and what was spoken by the aristocrats vs. the peasants vs. the growing middle classes disgusts me; he showed a lack of understanding of medieval law, medieval rights, the social classes, gender roles, even the tales and legends of the period, in both England and France; priests were quite low on the totem pole, in terms of the religious hierarchy, and were quite disparaged yet somehow, that didn't quite come across in this novel...I could go on and on, but I won't).
And the historical part of the novel I just found lacking. There are enough histories and chronicles, contemporaneously written, of the time, that he did not have to deviate much from history. There is so much written about the period between the death of Henry I through the civil wars between the Empress Matilda and King Stephen, to the time that Henry II ascended the throne (including the martyrdom of Thomas a Beckett), that I don't quite understand how he couldn't have mined the chronicles for better material. I understand that this is why it's called historical fiction, and that there will always be some element of fiction interspersed with historical fact. But the fictional aspects usually have to do with surrounding characters and situations that bolster the history. The fiction is not necessarily to the history itself. Many times, when writing historical fiction, the author has to beware the pitfalls of creating a revisionist retelling, interspersing his or her own ideals or beliefs of what should have been to what was. If this novel had been marketed as a revisionary narrative, it would have been okay. But it wasn't. I'm just glad that the historical aspect of the novel just served as the background and not the real story. Because then, I probably would've stopped reading.
The premise was a good one and held a lot of promise. It could've been a great historical epic had it been handled by a more assured writer. By someone who was more of a visionary, someone who had the patience to do exhaustive research or who knew how to craft richly developed characters. It needed an author who understood the epic genre, who knew how to mold the epic, who knew how to keep the narrative going, seemlessly binding time with narration and the human condition, without resorting to stereotypes and grating drama. And most importantly, it needed someone who understood when the story had been told; that while there will always be other stories to tell, that each book has its own natural end, and that these stories may not belong in this book.
Ken Follett may be a bestselling author of suspense novels (and even historical fiction such as Pillars of the Earth and World without End), but he is no writer of epics. Compared to writers of historical fiction such as Edward Rutherford, James Michener, Bernard Cornwell or Margaret George, Ken Follett has a long way to go.
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Put some space between Penman's Welsh trilogy and the Brothers Quartet -- that might help. I read them too close together and the brothers might have suffered for that.
Now I'll hype my favorite author of medieval fiction (next best thing to time travel),

Worst of all, I wasted almost week and a half of my two week vacation reading this. I feel like I've been duped. I want my reading time back!









Thank you! I really thought this work was flawed. He tried, but it was just seriously flawed.


I read this because my husband said I would "love" it...sadly, it was the reverse. I applaud you for having the wherewithal to stop. I couldn't, no matter how much I wanted to! It was like watching a train wreck in (very) slow motion.

Thanks for the support. Don't know what I'll say to my book club. I'll have to temper my review so as to tread lightly on feelings. Back to The Tiger's Wife, now.




Yes, it was really horrible. I don't think he spent any time at all doing a lot of research. Some people have also indicated that he wanted this novel to be a paean to his love of architecture but he fell short of as well. You just saved yourself 900+ pages of aggravation!

Why did I like the book? I'm pretty forgiving of style, if the story interests me I can read a book (fiction) regardless of style inadequacies. I did find the story interesting, although I also pretty much had the same feelings about the characterization as Francine did (I couldn't have expressed them as well as she did).
That said, the review is tremendous, Francine describes why she didn't like the book superbly and convincingly. I think it is a great review if it can warn people who like it off the book, because it is such a long work, requires a significant investment of time to get through. If I had read this review first I would not have wanted to read the book, but I probably would have at least tried it anyway, because it was given to me.
Francine's complaint about the historical inaccuracies really made me wince. If I knew as much as she does about the period of the novel, I couldn't have forced myself to complete the book at all. Thus my only criticism, not of the review, but of Francine. Francine, why did you finish the book? Next time this happens, I would personally recommend that you just stop reading and take up a different book. Life is too short.
My daughter used to have a hangup where if she started a book, no matter how long, no matter how much she disliked it, she would force herself to finish. On the way the time she spent reading for pleasure would diminish drastically, cause it was such a chore to go back to the book. I think she was finally able to drop that bad habit of having to finish a book you don't like.


Ted, I wholeheartedly agree with you! I acknowledge this to be one of my shortcomings as well (and my husband has tried many times to get me to stop reading something that I am obviously not enjoying). One of the reasons why I couldn't just let it go is because I am a completist at heart. I'm the type of person who stays until the credits have rolled in any movie, only because I want to pay my respects to all the people who were involved. I may not like something, but I do want to acknowledge that accomplishment and the work that people have done.
I respect the fact that people put so much into writing and getting their works published. If I ever got published, I would hope that people paid the same respect towards my work. Obviously, everyone wants to have good reviews, but this isn't always possible. While bad reviews can smart, hopefully, the author can learn from them and make a better piece of work the next time (who knows...if I ever get published, maybe I won't have as thick a skin as I claim to have right now and I'll be reduced to a crying lump in a corner!) :-)
As I started my review, I did say that I didn't hate the book -- I applauded the fact that Ken Follett wanted to create an epic. Having said that, I know that this was Follett's first foray into the middle ages. It was a good try, but unfortunately, he fell short. He continued on with World Without End; I didn't read this, and while part of me wants to know if he got better with time and newer research, part of me also doesn't want to blast him again. Once was enough, for me. I will also say that Follett may have been picked on by me (unfortunately), as I read this book very shortly after receiving my masters, where my focus was on medieval lit and history. It sort of wasn't a fair fight...
The other reason why I continued to read it is because even though I may not have liked it, I kept waiting for something redeeming or fantastic to happen (this happens occasionally!). I think if I only read books that I enjoyed and gave up on things that I didn't like from the beginning, then I'd have missed out on many wonderful little gems out there. That, and the fact that it gives me a look into why there are so many others out there who may have liked something I didn't. If others like it, there has to be a reason, and in many cases, I know that my dislike of something will put me in the minority. And I'm okay with that.
So while I agree that life is short, this is also one of the things that spices up life (well, my life, at least since I don't live large). It keeps things interesting. My reading Follett has helped me see what mistakes I shouldn't make, what tropes will work, how others may react to characterization and theme and other things like that. In short, it's helped me become better.
Thanks for the feedback! I liked your review a lot and relish these kinds of discussions. :-)

Have fun reading! At the end of the day, that's why we read - it's an escape and it's meant to give pleasure. :-)

My hubby had the book and really enjoyed it, and I bought into the hype. Unfortunately, he and I didn't see eye to eye.

Personally, and yes I know this sounds harsh, I think you like the attention.


Thanks, Ted. Much appreciated.


:-)
I never saw the miniseries and I don't really have a desire to. Reading is such a personal thing, and what works for many won't necessarily always work for others. I thought I was missing something, but it's just personal preference.


Thank you, Huixian - I love Bernard Cornwell. He's such a fantastic storyteller and he knows how to craft multidimensional characters. I must admit, I've never read Robyn Young and will have to look up her work one of these days.

Yes, my biggest issue with Pillars is the one dimensional characters. The good are too good, the bad are too bad. He should learn a thing or two from George R R Martin. That guy is fantastic with his characters.


I hate the fact that I actually read this horrid book one Christmas, and just really suffered through it, hoping it would get better which i..."
Ooh...over Christmas?? That's horrible! :-P Hope it didn't totally ruin the holidays...


That being said, it certainly isn't a dull book. I think approached as a piece of pop-fiction it's got plenty of redeeming qualities. It's just not the great literature it's made out to be.

Hmmm...interesting concept. You make a good (and valid) point there. It's been awhile since I read this, but at the time, everyone was saying how Pillars was just great lit (my hubby included). I guess I looked at it that way and it came up short.
Don't get me wrong; my opinion still hasn't changed, but maybe I wouldn't have felt as strongly (read: disappointed, cheated) if someone had said "Approach it as you would the GI Joe or Transformer movies. Don't go in expecting anything profound; just sit there and enjoy it for what it is." If someone had said that to me before I slogged through a thousand pages, maybe it wouldn't have been as bad.


Good luck if you do decide to finish it! There are definitely better books out there.

Both were good yarns with interesting details and the divinations from actual history just made me more interested in doing my own research. Historic novels are one of my favorite genres, not as textbook substitutes, but to participate in a particular author's interpretation of the time and events.
But I must admit I am finding "Winter of the World" hard to get into after my disappointment in "Fall of Giants." This Follett trilogy appears to have the shortcomings of "Pillars" without the "good stuff."

It's good that you enjoyed these books -- what I wrote in my review was merely my opinion. 欧宝娱乐 is for expressing your honest opinions about books, and at the time I wrote this review, this was how I felt about it. I know that I'm in the minority as many, many people love this book, and I'm glad you're one of them.
Pillars was one of Follett's earlier works, so I'm sure he's changed and improved.
BTW, for well written books on the Stephen and Maude try Sharon Kaye Penman's When Christ and His Saints Slept and Time and Chance. Also, Elizabeth Chadwick's A Place Beyond Courage. Those two ladies know their medieval period.