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Citizen: An American Lyric
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**Update (4/6/16)** Tonight I had the privilege to attend a reading and discussion with Claudia Rankine here in Holland. It was a real treat. Especially powerful was seeing the visual elements of her book brought to life on the screen, with the video (made by her husband John Lucas), the music all mingling with her words to create an intensely powerful and emotive display. Rankine is a pure joy to hear read and speak, full of wit and humor and a reminder to us all that we all have the responsibility to constantly 'continue the conversation about our society.' She says that it isn't people that anger her, because it is important to remember that we all - even those who offend us - are people, but the failed judicial systems, white privilege, and all the social constructs that build a closed door to individuals based on race are what fuels her poetry. I particularly enjoyed her story about how she became a writer. She was working for a legal degree when she came across the poetry of Adrienne Rich. She says its a moment that can only happen around the age of 21, but when she read Rich she thought 'this is good, but I can do it better.' She loved what Rich had to say, but wanted to tweak the text to speak to her conditions, her story, her struggle. After abandoning the legal field (her first job was for a firm that defended two men for insider trading) she went on to a masters in creative writing and now has delivered an extraordinarily powerful book about racial politics and micro-aggression. Rankine is a national treasure and I feel so lucky to have seen her speak.
Lately it seems every time I turn on the news I come across a story that reminds me of this collection. The further I get from it, the more it grows within me. Rankine argues with teeth for a world where we can look bigotry in the face and pulverize it. A world where cops don't shoot unarmed citizens, regardless of race or creed. A world into which we can be proud to have birthed new lives. Citizen: An American Lyric is fiercely important to us all, not limiting to race, gender, nationality, etc, et al. I hope Rankines message is taken to heart.
�The past is a life sentence, a blunt instrument aimed at tomorrow.�
It is sad and utterly pathetic that racism still runs rampant in the modern world. Even here in America, despite the Civil Rights movement of the 60’s, vulgar displays of racism occur in everyday life. These displays of ignorance don’t always come in bold, headlines-making instances but in fleeting, casual moments where one hardly recognizes they’ve revealed their prejudice hand though the hurtful blow is cast all the same. Claudia Rankine’s Citizen: An American Lyric does more than just explore the existence of a black American in the modern world, it blasts the whole situation wide open with explosive power and frustration that echoes loudly across the valley of the heart in a choir of all those muted voices long held in silence. Though Rankine has a particular focus, the effect should be taken to heart as universal, and that we should not judge based on the color of skin, or gender, or sexuality in any country. From casual encounters to the Trayvon Martin murder or the hurricane Katrina news coverage, Rankine creates a wonderful multi-media artistic expression that straps the reader into the awkward situations where words get �stuck in the throat�, and though the purpose outshines the prose, the reader is left gasping for breath in a world much larger than themselves that is in desperate need for an awakening and change.
�Do you feel hurt because it’s the ‘all black people look the same� moment, or because you are being confused with another after being so close to this other?�
Rankine never falters in her mission to position the reader in the uncomfortable moments of being assessed not for your abilities, personality, qualities or deficiencies, but simply for the color of your skin. While there are passages of extreme power that focus on national news style racism, much of her book deals with situations between friends or everyday life with store clerks and other service providers.
Rankine uses her own experience coupled with those of her acquaintances to build a tidal wave of everyday racist encounters that are sure to horrify the reader. The discomfort of a friend trying to lightly refer to you as a �nappy headed hoe� or a colleague dismayed that they are forced to hire a black person when �there are many great writers out there�, and the feeling of forced guilt when you must keep silent in order to keep the peace despite the flagrant insult placed before you. A particularly moving series details a young man pulled over on his way home from a client’s because his skin color matches a suspect sought by police.
A metaphor frequently employed throughout Citizen is one akin to Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man, that of being unseen, such as people cutting in line at the grocery store to bumping into and knocking over a person on the subway and continuing on without taking notice. Or even worse, to be unseen as a human being and only seen as a color, as Rankine examines in the section on tennis superstar Serena Williams. Written as a prose essay, a strong departure from the style in the other segments, Rankine calls to light the difficulties faced by Williams from obviously bad calls to body parody by a fellow player, reminding us of Zora Neale Hurston’s quote
While this collection has been commonly shelved as ‘poetry,� any distinct classification detracts from the fluid artistic nature of this book. Rankine uses a wide range of styles: prose vignettes, essay form, and free-form poetry, and couples her prose with moving photography. Several segments are intended to be read aloud against a series of photographs (a collaboration with husband John Lucas), making this collection reach beyond the boundaries of typical literature and give it a very artistic, modern feel. There are frequent allusions to youtube videos and other events easily found through a quick Google search (Rankine already reminding us of our modern condition through frequent mentions of watching screens and using social media) that transfer the power from the author and her words into the reader, as if sending them on a quest of continual learning and understanding.
You said “I� has so much power; it’s insane.
The artistic experimentation is impressive and expansive, though it does occasionally buckle under the weight of it’s own ambition. Rankine delivers many moments of shearing prose, yet I was left wanting to see that powerful wit and control of language more often. However, this may also be the point and many of the vignettes may be rendered with duller prose than—considering her obvious potential—they could have been as an expression of mundane, everyday reality. This makes the shocking realization of common racist remarks all the more powerful as they seem to occur so casually and carelessly. Rankin does not need the use of deep metaphor or sly figurative language, she just needs to harness reality and extract the power of the “I�: the voice that shouts across barriers and through the obdurate hand trying to keep it silent. Perhaps I read this too soon after Hilton Als extraordinary White Girls, which explores similar themes but paints with a broader palette of themes, examining race, gender, sexuality and how we affect one another all through a masterful prose that made the book feel more like poetry than essay. But then again, Rankine need not explore a wider field as she has done so well with her focus and has created a book of the utmost importance in today’s world.
Yes, and this is how you are as a citizen: Come on. Let it go. Move on.
This is a blunt blow to the heart, one that cannot be read without coming away carrying its weight deep in the soul. This is a book that everyone should read, or at least spend time thinking about. It is an important look at the world in which we live, and must continue to live, and begs us to make that world a place that accommodates all. The hurt people dish out without even realizing it is just as striking and painful to read as the sections on national, and international news stories like the unarmed Mark Dugan gunned down by Scotland Yard. While Citizen aims its potent focus at the lives of black Americans, the message can be extended to a more universal truth: that we should respect all people regardless of race, gender, sexuality, et al. We should respect people as people and not as a classification, and this extends beyond any borders. We all must coexist together, and should do so with love and goodwill. I will certainly explore more of her work after reading this, as she clearly possesses a masterful language and prose that deeply moved me despite not being the sort of poetry that I typically enjoy or pursue. Rankine poetry harnesses the gut-punch of everyday reality to power her words, a reality that is often overlooked because we fear to look at it, to accept it, to give it credence, but there it is just the same.
4/5
The world is wrong. You can’t put the past behind you. It’s buried in you, it’s turned your flesh into its own cupboard. Not everything remembered is useful but it all comes from the world to be stored in you. Who did what to whom on which day? Who said that? She said what? What did he just do? Did she really just say that? He said what? What did she do? Did I hear what I think I heard? Did that just come out of my mouth, his mouth, your mouth? Do you remember when you sighed?
Lately it seems every time I turn on the news I come across a story that reminds me of this collection. The further I get from it, the more it grows within me. Rankine argues with teeth for a world where we can look bigotry in the face and pulverize it. A world where cops don't shoot unarmed citizens, regardless of race or creed. A world into which we can be proud to have birthed new lives. Citizen: An American Lyric is fiercely important to us all, not limiting to race, gender, nationality, etc, et al. I hope Rankines message is taken to heart.
�The past is a life sentence, a blunt instrument aimed at tomorrow.�
It is sad and utterly pathetic that racism still runs rampant in the modern world. Even here in America, despite the Civil Rights movement of the 60’s, vulgar displays of racism occur in everyday life. These displays of ignorance don’t always come in bold, headlines-making instances but in fleeting, casual moments where one hardly recognizes they’ve revealed their prejudice hand though the hurtful blow is cast all the same. Claudia Rankine’s Citizen: An American Lyric does more than just explore the existence of a black American in the modern world, it blasts the whole situation wide open with explosive power and frustration that echoes loudly across the valley of the heart in a choir of all those muted voices long held in silence. Though Rankine has a particular focus, the effect should be taken to heart as universal, and that we should not judge based on the color of skin, or gender, or sexuality in any country. From casual encounters to the Trayvon Martin murder or the hurricane Katrina news coverage, Rankine creates a wonderful multi-media artistic expression that straps the reader into the awkward situations where words get �stuck in the throat�, and though the purpose outshines the prose, the reader is left gasping for breath in a world much larger than themselves that is in desperate need for an awakening and change.
�Do you feel hurt because it’s the ‘all black people look the same� moment, or because you are being confused with another after being so close to this other?�
Rankine never falters in her mission to position the reader in the uncomfortable moments of being assessed not for your abilities, personality, qualities or deficiencies, but simply for the color of your skin. While there are passages of extreme power that focus on national news style racism, much of her book deals with situations between friends or everyday life with store clerks and other service providers.
At the end of a brief phone conversation, you tell the manager you are speaking with that you will come by his office to sign the form. When you arrive and announce yourself, he blurts out, I didn’t know you were black!
I didn’t mean to say that, he then says.
Aloud, you say.
What? He asks.
You didn’t mean say that aloud.
Your transaction goes swiftly after that.
Rankine uses her own experience coupled with those of her acquaintances to build a tidal wave of everyday racist encounters that are sure to horrify the reader. The discomfort of a friend trying to lightly refer to you as a �nappy headed hoe� or a colleague dismayed that they are forced to hire a black person when �there are many great writers out there�, and the feeling of forced guilt when you must keep silent in order to keep the peace despite the flagrant insult placed before you. A particularly moving series details a young man pulled over on his way home from a client’s because his skin color matches a suspect sought by police.
And you are not the guy and still you fit the description because there is always the guy fitting the description.This, and the line �you can’t drive yourself sane� repeat like a mantra during the events of handcuffing and questioning, the repetition effectively used to harness the feeling of utter frustration spiraling to the brink of disaster if one cannot hold them in as the situation would surely create.
A metaphor frequently employed throughout Citizen is one akin to Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man, that of being unseen, such as people cutting in line at the grocery store to bumping into and knocking over a person on the subway and continuing on without taking notice. Or even worse, to be unseen as a human being and only seen as a color, as Rankine examines in the section on tennis superstar Serena Williams. Written as a prose essay, a strong departure from the style in the other segments, Rankine calls to light the difficulties faced by Williams from obviously bad calls to body parody by a fellow player, reminding us of Zora Neale Hurston’s quote
I feel most colored when I am thrown against a sharp white backgroundRankine places this beside an account of William’s at London’s All English Club match where a three-second celebratory dance was broadcast on news medias as �a crip-walk�.What Serena did was akin to cracking a tasteless, X-rated joke inside a church,� an incident that she was heavily fined for and suspended. Rankine’s exploration of the �black body� against the white dominated background is made most evident by the extraordinary choice of cover art: a black hood underlined by black text against a solid white background. The image is sure to recall the Trayvon Martin murder, though the art used is actually David Hammon’s from 1993. The saying about history repeating itself if we fail to learn from it may be echoing in the back of your head about now.
While this collection has been commonly shelved as ‘poetry,� any distinct classification detracts from the fluid artistic nature of this book. Rankine uses a wide range of styles: prose vignettes, essay form, and free-form poetry, and couples her prose with moving photography. Several segments are intended to be read aloud against a series of photographs (a collaboration with husband John Lucas), making this collection reach beyond the boundaries of typical literature and give it a very artistic, modern feel. There are frequent allusions to youtube videos and other events easily found through a quick Google search (Rankine already reminding us of our modern condition through frequent mentions of watching screens and using social media) that transfer the power from the author and her words into the reader, as if sending them on a quest of continual learning and understanding.
You said “I� has so much power; it’s insane.
The artistic experimentation is impressive and expansive, though it does occasionally buckle under the weight of it’s own ambition. Rankine delivers many moments of shearing prose, yet I was left wanting to see that powerful wit and control of language more often. However, this may also be the point and many of the vignettes may be rendered with duller prose than—considering her obvious potential—they could have been as an expression of mundane, everyday reality. This makes the shocking realization of common racist remarks all the more powerful as they seem to occur so casually and carelessly. Rankin does not need the use of deep metaphor or sly figurative language, she just needs to harness reality and extract the power of the “I�: the voice that shouts across barriers and through the obdurate hand trying to keep it silent. Perhaps I read this too soon after Hilton Als extraordinary White Girls, which explores similar themes but paints with a broader palette of themes, examining race, gender, sexuality and how we affect one another all through a masterful prose that made the book feel more like poetry than essay. But then again, Rankine need not explore a wider field as she has done so well with her focus and has created a book of the utmost importance in today’s world.
Yes, and this is how you are as a citizen: Come on. Let it go. Move on.
This is a blunt blow to the heart, one that cannot be read without coming away carrying its weight deep in the soul. This is a book that everyone should read, or at least spend time thinking about. It is an important look at the world in which we live, and must continue to live, and begs us to make that world a place that accommodates all. The hurt people dish out without even realizing it is just as striking and painful to read as the sections on national, and international news stories like the unarmed Mark Dugan gunned down by Scotland Yard. While Citizen aims its potent focus at the lives of black Americans, the message can be extended to a more universal truth: that we should respect all people regardless of race, gender, sexuality, et al. We should respect people as people and not as a classification, and this extends beyond any borders. We all must coexist together, and should do so with love and goodwill. I will certainly explore more of her work after reading this, as she clearly possesses a masterful language and prose that deeply moved me despite not being the sort of poetry that I typically enjoy or pursue. Rankine poetry harnesses the gut-punch of everyday reality to power her words, a reality that is often overlooked because we fear to look at it, to accept it, to give it credence, but there it is just the same.
4/5
The world is wrong. You can’t put the past behind you. It’s buried in you, it’s turned your flesh into its own cupboard. Not everything remembered is useful but it all comes from the world to be stored in you. Who did what to whom on which day? Who said that? She said what? What did he just do? Did she really just say that? He said what? What did she do? Did I hear what I think I heard? Did that just come out of my mouth, his mouth, your mouth? Do you remember when you sighed?
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Thank you so much, Dolors, that means a lot. I had a really hard time with this review and almost didn't write one (it's not my usual topic/book/etc) but that makes me glad I did. Thank you as well for being a part of this wonderful goodreads realm and for always brightening others day with your wonderful prose and comments!

Two lines struck me especially:
the one about the young man pulled over because his skin colour matched a suspect,
and this one: Do you remember when you sighed?

"...casual moments where one hardly recognizes they’ve revealed their prejudice hand though the hurtful blow is cast all the same."
This is very telling indeed, and it amazes me that in those situations, even after explaining why a remark or a 'joke' is full of prejudice, the person who said it still won't understand and realize it. It's so intertwined in them - as if it were indeed born there - that the person truly believes it's not prejudice at all - very much in line with the last quote you inserted.
I don't know which is worse to be honest, the situation above or the other cases where the person knows they are prejudiced but hypocritically feel the need to disguise it under just 'an opinion', for fear of being judged of judging someone else... here in Brazil there's a sad pattern where almost every statement of prejudice is preceeded by "well I'm not ____ at all, but..." (fill the blank with 'racist', 'homophobe' etc) or even "don't get me wrong, my best friend is ____, but..." ('black', 'gay', 'fat'). It's quite sad, dumb, revolting...
"A particularly moving series details a young man pulled over on his way home from a client’s because his skin color matches a suspect sought by police."
Once I was walking to work and I saw, across the street, a fellow coworker being agressively stopped by the police and searched for the very same reason mentioned there: his skin color matched that of the suspect. What added to my complete dismay of this situation was that I crossed the street and told them I knew the guy etc., and they simply let him go, as if my 'white recommendation' meant for sure my black coworker was to be trusted...
Oh, and I very much liked the mention to Invisible Man. I need to get to that one asap. And sorry for the big rant.

Maria:Thank you
Gregsamsa: Maddening subject indeed, made it a bit tough to review too. Glad it worked out.
Fionnuala: Thank you. Yeah, that part was the section that affected me the most I think. There is this trailer park right off the freeway in Holland that I used to pass every day on my way home from work. I had vague intentions to take a photo of every person pulled over in park entrance because 9 times out of 10 it was not a white person. I would add no commentary and try to publish the series of pictures in the paper, and let the overwhelming truth do all the talking. But then I realized I would have to have a decent camera phone and take pictures at 50mph...so it didn't happen ha. Wow, sorry, long story, but that's what I thought of. Holland, Mi is a pretty conservative and closed minded white community, its actually pretty creepy.
Renato: That is so true, as if such statements qualifies what you are saying as being okay. There was some comedian who once said 'any statement that begins with "im not racist but..." will certainly end with something racist" ha. He also said anyone who starts a sentence with "I'm a tax paying citizen and..." is about to be an asshole ha.That is quite a shocking story! It's really sad that this is normal in the world we live in. I remember living in a college town that was quite diverse and then moving where I live now (a town primarily white and very conservative) and being shocked how the world works once you see outside the false-haven of collegiate goodwill (I'm sure racism occurred there as with any other place, but I noticed it less). And thank you for the rant!
Arah-Leah: Thank you so much!


Some of the video project you mention is available here, if anyone is interested:

Miriam: yes, thank you! I was wondering if those existed (I've been too lazy to look ha). That really adds a lot to this, I really like the expansive varieties of artistic expression all contained within and extending from Citizen

Haha thank you! I wasn't sure if I was going to review it or not. Her prose style isn't exactly my cup of tea but the message transcends that. I think. It's definitely an important book. And besides, it has a theme about looking beyond oneself and structure. Glad I read it.



But back to the points in the comments. There were a few areas where the 'they all look alike' comment was explored in great detail in this book. And while I gather it was used as a metaphor, several of the vignettes about common racism involved one person calling the black character by the name of another black character. It is meant to be read as violating that stereotype, though the rather commonplace writing didn't emphasize it as such and I thought a few times 'I've been called the wrong name.' Though I also am not subjected to the sort of injustices examined through the book either, so I realize that there is much more being discussed than a simple mistake. See how tough this is to discuss? In a book where one entire page just reads 'because white men cannot police their imagination, black men are dying.' I was really worried to inadvertently say something construed as offensive simply for being the white male when all I really want to do is praise Rankine for her efforts and for exploring this difficult, painful and very real issue. But now I'm rambling and backpeddling and I think you get the point ha. Thank you both for all the support and discussion!

On the topic of In Bruges, the Harry character you mentioned was great. But then Ken and Ray made me laugh, too:
Ken: Coming up?
Ray: What's up there?
Ken: The view.
Ray: The view of what? The view of down here? I can see that down here.
Ken: Ray, you are about the worst tourist in the whole world.
Ray: Ken, I grew up in Dublin. I love Dublin. If I grew up on a farm, and was retarded, Bruges might impress me but I didn't, so it doesn't.

Hahaha I love that part! Gleason gives such a good performance and its one of the few movies I really like Colin Farrel in. Funny now as I'm just recalling the bit about the race war they get all offended over, which fits this book haha. 'Two mangy hookers and a racist dwarf, well I think I've had enough'. Have you seen Seven Psychopaths? Same production team I think. Or at least writer. Not as good but really a smart, meta script. Plus Tom Waits is in it.


He really is! I only just recently realized that he is the homeless vet begging for money in The Fisher King. Parnassus was pretty solid, i always enjoy Gilliam films. Did you ever see Cigarettes and Coffee? Worth it just for the awkward conversation with Waits and Iggy Pop. I love where he lies and says he is a surgeon and Iggy says 'oh I can totally hear that in your music!'

Adding this on your recommendation. More reviews, please!

No, I haven't, but I want to now that you've tied it to our buddies in Bruges. Thanks!

Adding this on your recommendation. More reviews, please!"
Thank you so much! I hadn't heard of it either, though it was quite recent. I have to fact check myself though, I may have mixed stories. She got fined for cursing out a line-judge (view spoiler) and now I can't recall if it was that I was thinking of or if she also got fined for the dance. Ill check and possibly correct after work.

No, I haven't, but I want to now that you've tied it to our buddies in Bruges. Thanks!"
Let me know what you think! It's not as good but still pretty cerebral.

Ha is it that obvious? Good.
Also, thanks!


I live in a predominately white and somewhat conservative area, and as a white male, I get to hear the honest opinions of other white males around me... Which are often pretty horrifying, to be honest. I use to sort of look forward to checking facebook every day until now the people that live around me post daily reminders of their bigotry. They don't think they are, of course. They don't see it whatsoever. It's a great example of "check your privilege." The Hurston quote has utility here with my neighbors, who are spotting white against a stark white background. The violence of their opinions, the harshness of their condemnations frankly scare me. I honestly don't know if it's only a matter of understanding and perspective, that they are so philosophically removed from other points of view that they cannot bear even the idea of accepting them, or are they so far gone that there isn't hope? Despite my ability to walk amongst them freely, I wonder if I can live here forever. Thanks again for a thought provoking review.

I live in a predominately white and somewhat conservative area, and as a white male, I get to..."
Thank you so much.
Well spoken. I share many of your sentiments also living in a very whitewashed, conservative (and Trump supporting... ugh) area. Rankine made a great point tonight about how it is critical to always speak up and call out racism when we see it, to not let it live in the room. I mean, if you don't then you are no better than the offensive remark which at least had the courage to be heard despite it's repulsiveness. It worries me as well. Most of the worst offenders aren't going to change, but much of the buildup are the micro-aggressions that Rankine addresses here. If we were all more conscious about what we said and how we said it, at least that is a step in the right direction. Thank you again, and thank you for your insight into the world around you.


Thank you so much! What? THat is a real shame. I wish my knowledge of Spanish was better or I'd hop right on to translating this book. Which suddenly sounds like a good reason to go get a degree in Spanish language....
Incredible review Steve. Really liked those quotes. Equally intresting was the discussion in comments.

Thank you so ..."
Noooooo, Spenk!!!!!! You have to try be a writer, not a translator!!!! Or, at least, a literary critic (but try to be a writer first, pleeeeeeease). :)

Not to mention all those untranslated Airas.

This review
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Not to mention all those untranslated Airas."
Translating an Aira book from a language you only vaguely speak sounds like the plot of an Aira novel!

Thank you so much. Rankine is really incredible, seeing her speak was as equally powerful as her poetry.

Thank you very much! She rules.

That actually sounds like a great project -- having people translate stories or poems from a language they know imperfectly. No or limited use of dictionaries!
