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The Mistake (Off-Campus, #2)
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I wasn't sure how much I would like this since I really loved The Deal and I tried not to have high expectations but I seriously adored this book.
For me, it was mostly a fun, giggle-inducing story. We met Logan in the first book and we all wanted to know how he would get over his crush on Hannah. I bought that he wanted what Garrett and Hannah had...I was in a generous mood I guess.
Seriously all of my highlights in the book are the hilarious lines that comes out of a young guy's mouth and his equally young friends. Lines that no self respecting...ahem...older woman such as myself should even find entertaining...but yet I found myself just laughing out loud.
And I was rolling when Garrett had to take a picture of Logan on the red chaise lounge. In nothing but his boxes and with Garrett taking the picture and vetoing the thumbs up to opt for showing off his guns, Logan studies the pictures.
There are a lot of other funny young lingo in this book. Again it's immature in a lot of ways, a lot of cock and junk talk but I guess it is because they are young and it's in the right context that makes you feel that it's appropriate for that time and for their ages. And I was able to thoroughly enjoy it.
There was some drama with Grace's best friend and Logan's Dad but overall for me it was a fun lighter read. I loved the guys' banter, I adored Grace's Mom, and I was pleasantly surprised with Grace's Dad and how he was there for Logan that night.
It does wrap up pretty fast in the end but you do get an epilogue 2 years down the line and it's sweet.
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I wasn't sure how much I would like this since I really loved The Deal and I tried not to have high expectations but I seriously adored this book.
For me, it was mostly a fun, giggle-inducing story. We met Logan in the first book and we all wanted to know how he would get over his crush on Hannah. I bought that he wanted what Garrett and Hannah had...I was in a generous mood I guess.
Seriously all of my highlights in the book are the hilarious lines that comes out of a young guy's mouth and his equally young friends. Lines that no self respecting...ahem...older woman such as myself should even find entertaining...but yet I found myself just laughing out loud.
"Just out of curiosity, what constitutes a
'nice cock shot'?
I mean, is it the lighting? The pose?"
I'm being sarcastic, but Dean responds
in a solemn voice.
"Well, the trick is, you've gotta keep
the balls out of it.
Seriously, balls aren't photogenic."
And I was rolling when Garrett had to take a picture of Logan on the red chaise lounge. In nothing but his boxes and with Garrett taking the picture and vetoing the thumbs up to opt for showing off his guns, Logan studies the pictures.
"Damn. I should go into modeling."
"You photograph really well," Garrett agrees in a serious voice.
"And dude, your package looks huge."
Fuck, it totally does.
There are a lot of other funny young lingo in this book. Again it's immature in a lot of ways, a lot of cock and junk talk but I guess it is because they are young and it's in the right context that makes you feel that it's appropriate for that time and for their ages. And I was able to thoroughly enjoy it.
There was some drama with Grace's best friend and Logan's Dad but overall for me it was a fun lighter read. I loved the guys' banter, I adored Grace's Mom, and I was pleasantly surprised with Grace's Dad and how he was there for Logan that night.
It does wrap up pretty fast in the end but you do get an epilogue 2 years down the line and it's sweet.
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Thanks Patty! I am so far... :)

THOSE TWO SCENES!!!
Those were deffo the reason why I really enjoyed this one!
The dick pic advice and Garrett telling him how hot he looks on the chaise lounge pic!! LOL CLASSIC!!!
xoxoxoxo

I appreciate it J!!! It was enjoyable! :)

THOSE TWO SCENES!!!
Those were deffo the reason why I really enjoyed this one!
The dick pic advice and Garrett telling him how hot he looks on the chaise lounge pic!! LOL ..."
LMAO Patty!!! I was howling in laughter. And how They made fun of him and his poem. Love the guys' banter.

THOSE TWO SCENES!!!
Those were deffo the reason why I really enjoyed this one!
The dick pic ..."
I think those were my FAVE parts of the whole book!!
I loved Logan but not as much as I loved Garrett! :)

THOSE TWO SCENES!!!
Those were deffo the reason why I really enjoyed this..."
Totally agree Patty! Really like Logan...more than I anticipated but I was so happy when Garrett would show up in the book!
xoxoxo