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The Iron Trial (Magisterium, #1)
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Mar 22, 2015
bookshelves: 2015-action-adventure-challenge, 2015-challenge-factory-challenge, 2015-cover-to-cover-challenge, 2015-dangerous-hero-challenge, the-lost-heir, dark-heritage, middle-grade-juvenile, the-chosen-one, first-in-series, hero-black-hair-gray-eyes, hidden-world-or-civilization, magician, mage, library-checkout, audiobook, fantasy, hero-or-heroine-limps-disabled, character-diversity, school-days
Overall, this was a good book. I had a few quibbles, but they did majorly affect my rating in a not-so good way. Let's talk about the bad first.
Callum's behavior was pretty reprehensible. He stole and damaged property and never had to face the wrongness of most of his actions. I'm not trying to be moralistic here, but those actions made me think less of him. I almost didn't want to finish the book. In light of later revelations, it felt even more manipulative to have him committing not so minor infringements. I feel that books for young readers don't have to be ethics primers, but honestly there are consequences when we do wrong. When books for younger readers overlook that, it makes me feel uneasy inside. And with all honestly, this reader was already rooting for Callum to grow in character over the course of the book. I'm not sure he did in crucial ways. There are some major plot spoilers that I can't go into, but even in light of the story direction, I wasn't okay with that.
The ending was too abrupt and clearly was a sequel bait. I don't like the tendency to create series that aren't terribly self-contained. I feel that it's better to write a story that feels complete even if I don't continue the series. I know that this is probably a minor thing for other readers, but it's increasingly becoming an issue for me.
While I wasn't enamored of the narrator, it didn't affect my rating that much. He wasn't terrible, just a little more flat than I liked.
What I loved;
*I felt that the story did keep me guessing. There were some reversals that I seriously didn't expect and kudos to the authors for that.
*The Magisterium is beautifully described and some aspects felt very unique. I loved how the food source is based on things that might grow underground, but they have tastes that you wouldn't attribute to something like dried lichen or mushrooms. The skills tests were fun.
*The developing friendship between Callum and his fellow students in his cohort. It reminded me of my time in professional school and how you tend to look to people in your class as a support system.
*I loved the ethnic/racial diversity. It's so easy to do it and have it be a normal part of the story. There was no reason for everyone of the students to be white/European, and I was glad that the authors didn't go that way with the story.
*The dark aspects of the story appealed. I like that middle grade/juvenile fiction can be done well with serious tension and thrills without assuming younger readers can't handle it.
*The pet wolf Havoc. I was so, so in love. I want!
I'm going to give this 3.5 stars. I imagine some would rate it higher, but with the issues versus the kudos, I think it's a very fair rating.
Callum's behavior was pretty reprehensible. He stole and damaged property and never had to face the wrongness of most of his actions. I'm not trying to be moralistic here, but those actions made me think less of him. I almost didn't want to finish the book. In light of later revelations, it felt even more manipulative to have him committing not so minor infringements. I feel that books for young readers don't have to be ethics primers, but honestly there are consequences when we do wrong. When books for younger readers overlook that, it makes me feel uneasy inside. And with all honestly, this reader was already rooting for Callum to grow in character over the course of the book. I'm not sure he did in crucial ways. There are some major plot spoilers that I can't go into, but even in light of the story direction, I wasn't okay with that.
The ending was too abrupt and clearly was a sequel bait. I don't like the tendency to create series that aren't terribly self-contained. I feel that it's better to write a story that feels complete even if I don't continue the series. I know that this is probably a minor thing for other readers, but it's increasingly becoming an issue for me.
While I wasn't enamored of the narrator, it didn't affect my rating that much. He wasn't terrible, just a little more flat than I liked.
What I loved;
*I felt that the story did keep me guessing. There were some reversals that I seriously didn't expect and kudos to the authors for that.
*The Magisterium is beautifully described and some aspects felt very unique. I loved how the food source is based on things that might grow underground, but they have tastes that you wouldn't attribute to something like dried lichen or mushrooms. The skills tests were fun.
*The developing friendship between Callum and his fellow students in his cohort. It reminded me of my time in professional school and how you tend to look to people in your class as a support system.
*I loved the ethnic/racial diversity. It's so easy to do it and have it be a normal part of the story. There was no reason for everyone of the students to be white/European, and I was glad that the authors didn't go that way with the story.
*The dark aspects of the story appealed. I like that middle grade/juvenile fiction can be done well with serious tension and thrills without assuming younger readers can't handle it.
*The pet wolf Havoc. I was so, so in love. I want!
I'm going to give this 3.5 stars. I imagine some would rate it higher, but with the issues versus the kudos, I think it's a very fair rating.
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March 22, 2015
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Considering the big revelation in the end, I feel that he has one heck of a journey ahead of him.
I totally didn't see that coming and I'm really looking forward to know how the authors are going to pull that off.


He's far from perfect, including the physical aspect and that's why I love him so much.


I so agree. I hope to see that he grows in character enough to make better decisions. I feel like his father failed to instill some important lessons in him about right and wrong. With his incredible abilities, that is crucial.

That kind of legacy would weight on everyone.
And you're right. Alastair didn't do a good job as a father. He should have prepared Callum for what was coming his way, instead of making him a suspicious, bitter boy.
If Callum is, for the moment, a somewhat dubious character, it's mostly because of his father. He's just a little boy. He didn't have the time to grow to the person he's supposed to be, yet.


I foresee a lot of anguish, doubt and anger.

I foresee a lot of anguish, doubt and anger."
Yeah, definitely. I don't envy him. I feel like it's bad enough being a tween/teen without having such a legacy handed to him.


I was thinking exactly that. I felt for him, knowing that he felt he had to lie at the end, not to lose everything he'd gain at the school: acceptance, friendship, status.

I think he's going to withdraw again.

The Copper Gauntlet is out on the 1st of September.

The Copper Gauntlet is out on the 1st of September."
Cool. I hope my library gets the audiobook again.