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The Iron Trial by Holly Black
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Overall, this was a good book. I had a few quibbles, but they did majorly affect my rating in a not-so good way. Let's talk about the bad first.

Callum's behavior was pretty reprehensible. He stole and damaged property and never had to face the wrongness of most of his actions. I'm not trying to be moralistic here, but those actions made me think less of him. I almost didn't want to finish the book. In light of later revelations, it felt even more manipulative to have him committing not so minor infringements. I feel that books for young readers don't have to be ethics primers, but honestly there are consequences when we do wrong. When books for younger readers overlook that, it makes me feel uneasy inside. And with all honestly, this reader was already rooting for Callum to grow in character over the course of the book. I'm not sure he did in crucial ways. There are some major plot spoilers that I can't go into, but even in light of the story direction, I wasn't okay with that.

The ending was too abrupt and clearly was a sequel bait. I don't like the tendency to create series that aren't terribly self-contained. I feel that it's better to write a story that feels complete even if I don't continue the series. I know that this is probably a minor thing for other readers, but it's increasingly becoming an issue for me.

While I wasn't enamored of the narrator, it didn't affect my rating that much. He wasn't terrible, just a little more flat than I liked.

What I loved;

*I felt that the story did keep me guessing. There were some reversals that I seriously didn't expect and kudos to the authors for that.
*The Magisterium is beautifully described and some aspects felt very unique. I loved how the food source is based on things that might grow underground, but they have tastes that you wouldn't attribute to something like dried lichen or mushrooms. The skills tests were fun.
*The developing friendship between Callum and his fellow students in his cohort. It reminded me of my time in professional school and how you tend to look to people in your class as a support system.
*I loved the ethnic/racial diversity. It's so easy to do it and have it be a normal part of the story. There was no reason for everyone of the students to be white/European, and I was glad that the authors didn't go that way with the story.
*The dark aspects of the story appealed. I like that middle grade/juvenile fiction can be done well with serious tension and thrills without assuming younger readers can't handle it.
*The pet wolf Havoc. I was so, so in love. I want!

I'm going to give this 3.5 stars. I imagine some would rate it higher, but with the issues versus the kudos, I think it's a very fair rating.
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Reading Progress

March 22, 2015 – Started Reading
March 22, 2015 – Shelved
April 25, 2015 – Finished Reading
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: 2015-action-adventure-challenge
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: 2015-challenge-factory-challenge
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: 2015-cover-to-cover-challenge
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: 2015-dangerous-hero-challenge
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: the-lost-heir
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: dark-heritage
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: middle-grade-juvenile
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: the-chosen-one
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: first-in-series
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: hero-black-hair-gray-eyes
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: hidden-world-or-civilization
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: magician
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: mage
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: library-checkout
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: audiobook
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: fantasy
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: hero-or-heroine-limps-disabled
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: character-diversity
May 2, 2015 – Shelved as: school-days

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Lucy Qhuay This book is a treat. It reminded me of Harry Potter at first, but then surprises kept appearing. That ending? OMG!


 Danielle The Book Huntress I haven't gotten very far, but you have me excited!


Lucy Qhuay Sorry! I only saw your reply now. :S Yes. I really enjoyed this book. It brought back good memories. :)


 Danielle The Book Huntress I just posted my review. Off to read yours.


Lucy Qhuay I agree with you. Callum did bad things and he should have had to face the consequences, but overall, I think he grew up as a character.
Considering the big revelation in the end, I feel that he has one heck of a journey ahead of him.
I totally didn't see that coming and I'm really looking forward to know how the authors are going to pull that off.


Alexander Draganov To be honest, one of the things I liked is that Callum is a big of a naughty boy and was not penalised for feeling rebelious :P


Lucy Qhuay Callum is just a scared, angry boy lashing out at the world for everything that happened in his life.
He's far from perfect, including the physical aspect and that's why I love him so much.


 Danielle The Book Huntress I don't have a problem with him being troubled, but I don't like how he never got caught or addressed for his actions. Overall, I liked him.


Lucy Qhuay I guess a lot of pain is on the way for him, considering the big revelation.


 Danielle The Book Huntress Lucy Grady-Garrett wrote: "I guess a lot of pain is on the way for him, considering the big revelation."

I so agree. I hope to see that he grows in character enough to make better decisions. I feel like his father failed to instill some important lessons in him about right and wrong. With his incredible abilities, that is crucial.


Lucy Qhuay Indeed. I'm certain he's going to grow as a character, giving that he was truly shocked with what he learnt about himself.
That kind of legacy would weight on everyone.
And you're right. Alastair didn't do a good job as a father. He should have prepared Callum for what was coming his way, instead of making him a suspicious, bitter boy.
If Callum is, for the moment, a somewhat dubious character, it's mostly because of his father. He's just a little boy. He didn't have the time to grow to the person he's supposed to be, yet.


 Danielle The Book Huntress Agreed! I hope that Callum becomes more confident and realizes that his destiny is not set in stone.


Lucy Qhuay I'm sure he's going to be always second guessing himself, wondering if he is his own person or the person others say he is/was.
I foresee a lot of anguish, doubt and anger.


 Danielle The Book Huntress Lucy Grady-Garrett wrote: "I'm sure he's going to be always second guessing himself, wondering if he is his own person or the person others say he is/was.
I foresee a lot of anguish, doubt and anger."


Yeah, definitely. I don't envy him. I feel like it's bad enough being a tween/teen without having such a legacy handed to him.


Lucy Qhuay Me neither. God knows we have enough angst in our lives without that kind of legacy. I don't know what I would do in his place.


 Danielle The Book Huntress Lucy Grady-Garrett wrote: "Me neither. God knows we have enough angst in our lives without that kind of legacy. I don't know what I would do in his place."

I was thinking exactly that. I felt for him, knowing that he felt he had to lie at the end, not to lose everything he'd gain at the school: acceptance, friendship, status.


Lucy Qhuay Absolutely. I felt that as well. It was so unfair that right when he was loosening up a bit, feeling he finally had a place, with friends who supported him, he was thrown that bucket of iced water down his head.
I think he's going to withdraw again.


 Danielle The Book Huntress Eek. I am kind of worried about what happens next. When is the next book out? Do you know?


message 19: by Lucy Qhuay (last edited May 04, 2015 11:08AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Lucy Qhuay I'm very worried. I so wasn't expecting what happened.
The Copper Gauntlet is out on the 1st of September.


 Danielle The Book Huntress Lucy Grady-Garrett wrote: "I'm very worried. I so wasn't expecting what happened.
The Copper Gauntlet is out on the 1st of September."


Cool. I hope my library gets the audiobook again.


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