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The Well of Ascension by Brandon Sanderson
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3.5 stars

Anytime I'm reading fantasy for review, I take copious notes. In fact, most of the time, my review is pretty much written by the time I finish the book, I just need to make slight alterations to account for any last minute goings on.

And I like that, b/c your average fantasy is 2 - 3x longer than any other book. Trying to go back after the fact and recall all the key details would be a nightmare.

BUT.

Brandon Sanderson has consistently thwarted me in this area. And by consistently, I mean every, single time.

Why do you hate me, Mr. Sanderson? WHY?!

If I were to rate a Sanderson book--any Sanderson book--prior to the last 20%, almost all of them would hover around the 3.0 star range.

But unlike most books that benefit from higher ratings b/c OMG, THAT ENDING!, my experience with Sanderson has been very different.

Yes, there is definitely an element of OMG and FEELS overwhelming your brain stem, making you instantly forget whatever had you feeling so MEH for the majority of the book, but that's only one small aspect of the turnaround. I'll get to the greater part in a minute.

I've called Sanderson a master of misdirection several times, but I'm finding it to be especially true in this first MISTBORN trilogy.

You know what happened last time . . . This time . . . it wasn't quite as drastic, but it had a greater impact on my overall reaction to the book.

B/c initially, I didn't much like this one.

We know from THE FINAL EMPIRE that the Well of Ascension is where the shit went down. The Lord Ruler traveled to the mountains of Terris as prophecy dictated to seize its power and defeat the Deepness . . .

A power that wasn't meant to be contained but released, and in selfishly keeping that power to serve his own purposes, the Lord Ruler became the new Evil.

With his death the Deepness is returning.

His ominous last words proved truthful, and whatever had been holding it back is now absent. Strange shapes take insubstantial form and stalk the Mist by night, and by day . . . no longer banished by light, the Mist attacks and kills defenseless villagers.

And Vin is drawn by a distant thrumming, a constant drum beat in the distance that only she can hear . . . calling her to the Well.

You'd think that a journey across a land filled with various and dangerous threats would make for an excellent second installment, and it would have . . . if the book had been about a journey across a land filled with various and dangerous threats.

But it wasn't.

It was about about a city besieged by not one, not two, but THREE armies, one full of the remnants of one of the Lord Ruler's monstrous creations.

It was about a naive manboy who needed to lose the boy and become a king. It was about a insecure girl who loves Manboy, but thinks he deserves far better than her. It was about grasping factions in a fledgling government and political scheming and backstabbing, and while that may sound marvelous in theory . . .

After roughly 600 pages, it's dreadfully dull.

Especially after an action-packed first installment, which brings up another complaint . . .

This is the second time I've encountered a lackluster sequel in a Sanderson series, so while I'm not 100% that it's a pattern, it is 2:2 which dramatically increases the likelihood . . .

It goes like this:

Book 1 - first 80% can be slow and consists primarily of misdirection, false trails, etc. leading to the brilliant chaos of the last 20%. World-building and character development are typically enough to keep you engaged.

Book 2 - favors political scheming over action, lots of agonizing(ly boring) soul searching, angst-fueled love triangle, and above all else, miscommunication and refusal to confront emotional problems directly.

If this is a pattern, Mr. Sanderson, you need to break it.

Sooners rather than laters, baby.

But despite my annoyance with the lack of progress towards the ultimate goal being somewhat neutralized by last minute revelations (which, by the way, is as frustrating as it is gratifying), those revelations cannot mitigate how completely over I was the Vin/Elend relationship drama.

Part of me feels like it would've been more honest to call this book: I'M NOT GOOD ENOUGH, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME, WHEN WILL HE LEAVE ME?, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME.

Long, I know. Probably one of the many reasons they went with something else. But it would have been more accurate than THE WELL OF ASCENSION.

And as I said, this is the second time Sanderson has done this to us.

I'm baffled. This kind of teen-angsty melodrama has no place in adult high fantasy.

NONE.

But, also again, a handful of new characters (Zane and Tindwyl) and careful threading of impossible-to-detect-foundations for later plot twists kept it from being a total loss. (view spoiler) <------If there had been just slightly less drama, those things alone would have made this a strong 4.0 star read for me. BUT. Drama.

Recommended with qualifications. Book 3 is up next, so I'll let you know how it goes.

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8/26/15: BUDDY READ with my peeps in Sanctum of Fantasy .

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My other reviews for this series:

Mistborn: The Final Empire (Mistborn, #1)
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Reading Progress

August 15, 2015 – Shelved
August 25, 2015 – Started Reading
August 26, 2015 –
page 28
3.44% "“Vin?� he asked, standing.
“Have you seen anything strange tonight?�
Elend paused. “Besides you?�

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August 26, 2015 –
page 28
3.44% "“Where’s that worthless nephew of mine?� Clubs asked as he watched the sparring.
“Spook?� Elend asked. “He’s back? How’d he get into the city?�
Clubs shrugged. “He left something on my doorstep this morning.�
“A gift?� Clubs snorted.
“It was a woodcarving from a master carpenter up in Yelva City. The note said, ‘I just wanted to show you what
real carpenters are up to, old man.’�

LOL."
August 26, 2015 –
page 121
14.85% "This fortress, however, had not been built to defend against enemy soldiers. It had been built to provide solitude.

HA. A Fortress of Solitude ;)"
August 29, 2015 –
page 150
18.4% "“Uh, the plan?� Elend asked.
“I don’t know, El,� Ham said, getting back on topic. “It sounds like one of Kell’s plans—foolhardy, brave, and a little insane.�
He sounded as if he were surprised to hear Elend propose such a measure.
I can be as foolhardy as any man , Elend thought indignantly . . .

LOL."
August 29, 2015 –
page 182
22.33% "“Now, wait,� Elend said. “I see where this is going.�
“Then voice an objection,� Tindwyl said. “Don’t be vague!�
“All right, then,� Elend said. “I like my hair.�
“Short hair is easier to care for than long hair,� Tindwyl said. �And you have proven that you cannot be trusted in the area of personal grooming.


Hahahaha!"
August 29, 2015 –
page 200
24.54% "“Kill him,� God whispered.

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August 29, 2015 –
page 237
29.08% "“Your Majesty, a visitor has arrived from Lord Cett’s army.�
“A messenger?� Elend said, standing.
Demoux paused, looking a little embarrassed. “Well� sort of. She says she’s Lord Cett’s daughter, and she’s come looking for Breeze.�


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August 30, 2015 – Finished Reading
January 10, 2025 – Started Reading
January 15, 2025 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Lia (new) - rated it 5 stars

Lia After Mistborn, PLEASE read The Way Of Kings also by Brandon Sanderson, it's kinda like Mistborn but... leveled up.
And, since we mistborn fans already know the ending, *wiggles eyebrows* I can assure you that your hate for Sanderson will increase even more, as your respect!
BWAHAHAAAAA! Now you regret not reading this series sooner right? NOW YOU WILL PAY YOUR PRICE!
Though thanks for writing the review for Mistborn, not many people that I followed wrote it.
Can't wait for the other one!


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ HA. I have read WoK and WoR, actually ;)


Suyapa How did I miss your review of this? I was looking out for it!

Anyway, I felt the same way about this. It was dulldulldulldulldulldull BAM FUCKING GREATNESS dulldulldulldulldulldull BAM AGAIN CUZ HERE'S ANOTHER SPLASH OF GREATNESS dulldullduluklilk. You get the point, lol. The Final Empire was 100% greatness, imo, so this one did not live up to my expectations.

Sanderson still managed to keep me hooked with this one though. His twists are incredible! Damn sorcerer.

Good luck with The Hero of Ages!


message 4: by Jessica � � Silverbow � � (last edited Oct 09, 2015 05:28PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ HA. Probably b/c I haven't officially "posted" it yet ;) And yeah, this one . . . had issues . . . I've heard that Sanderson is super fond of Vin b/c he spent so much time creating/understanding her . . . My thoughts on that: why the hell would you want to spend excessive amounts of time trying to understand a 16-year-old girl? Especially one with the best boyfriend EVER? o.O All that insecurity, all that drama? NO, thank you.


Lizzy I loved your review, but never read anything by Sanderson, what would recommend to start with? A side comment, you got the perfect method for reviewing. I face just that problem, I might try it.


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Thanks! And yeah, notes are key ;) As for a rec . . . I'd probably say try:
The Way of Kings (The Stormlight Archive, #1) by Brandon Sanderson

It's amazing. The thing you have to remember with Sanderson is to be patient. Even when something seems insignificant/why are we wasting time on this? There's ALWAYS a reason.


Lizzy I will certainly try it. Thanks!


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ You're welcome. I hope you like it!


Nafeeza Couldn't agree with you more. My god, yes where does he come up with this shit. Ending= mind blown.


Alienor ✘ French Frowner ✘ THIS : I'M NOT GOOD ENOUGH, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME, WHEN WILL HE LEAVE ME?, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME.

LMAO. I couldn't finish this one for this reason... I'm used to 600+ fantasy novels, but damn, I can't deal with this. I'm glad the ending and the other characters saved it for you, though. Great review!


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Nafeeza wrote: "Couldn't agree with you more. My god, yes where does he come up with this shit. Ending= mind blown."

Fo realz.


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Alienor � French frowner � wrote: "THIS : I'M NOT GOOD ENOUGH, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME, WHEN WILL HE LEAVE ME?, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME.

LMAO. I couldn't finish this one for this reason... I'm used to 600+ fantasy novels, but damn, ..."


Seriously. It was obnoxious. But yeah, once again, his ending was mind-blowing. I've started #3 and it seems to be avoiding the drama . . . Vin and Elend seem much more comfortable with each other . . . which of course just means something else is going to go terribly wrong :/


Nafeeza Jessica � Elsecaller � at Rabid Reads wrote: "Alienor � French frowner � wrote: "THIS : I'M NOT GOOD ENOUGH, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME, WHEN WILL HE LEAVE ME?, HE'S GOING TO LEAVE ME.

LMAO. I couldn't finish this one for this reason... I'm used..."


I can't wait for you to finish book 3 and hear your thoughts! ^_^


Nafeeza My lips are sealed...


message 16: by Matt (new)

Matt Karwoski Are you writing all of these reviews Jessica? Or is it a collaboration of different people at Rabid Reads? I can't fathom how you find the time to read all these books!


message 17: by Jessica � � Silverbow � � (last edited Oct 22, 2015 01:50PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ No, it's just me. The other Rabid Readers post their reviews on their own profiles. And let's just say I'm a fast reader, and reading is pretty much my only hobby.


message 18: by Matt (new)

Matt Karwoski Well thank you!


Nenia ✨ I yeet my books back and forth ✨ Campbell THANK YOU regarding the love triangle. That drove me crazy! I was like, SANDERSON! SANDERSON WHAT ARE YOU DOING. SANDERSON YOU ARE BETTER THAN THAT.

He is definitely the master of misdirection. Every time I think I know where the story is going, he goes somewhere else. It's enough to keep me reading, even when there is a lull.


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Seriously. *mind is boggled*

I've completely given up trying to figure out what he's going to do. I just brace for it. And yeah, it's curiosity that keeps me reading, too.


message 22: by OhWell (last edited Jan 19, 2016 11:47AM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

OhWell I'm glad I'm not the only one who liked Zane! :) But his story is quite frustrating. (view spoiler)


Alex ☣ Deranged KittyCat ☣ This is sad... just sad. And it was such a great first book. *sigh*


message 24: by Marcy (new)

Marcy Scherpetong Flat flat flat. I actually liked this book better than the first. :/


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ OhWell wrote: "I'm glad I'm not the only one who liked Zane! :) But his story is quite frustrating. [spoilers removed]"

Definitely not the only one. And who knows? Maybe it'll get explained in the next one ;)


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Alex wrote: "This is sad... just sad. And it was such a great first book. *sigh*"

Yeah . . . :/


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Marcy wrote: "Flat flat flat. I actually liked this book better than the first. :/"

Without knowing how you felt about the first one, I have no way to gauge your feelings for this one. All I can say is that I bloody loved #1 and did not bloody love this one.


Alexander Stormborn This review was spot on. Great story and setting, but that romance was horrid.

Support Characters > Vin


message 30: by Iva (new) - rated it 3 stars

Iva I feel the same about everything you wrote. Great review!


message 31: by Zach (new)

Zach I'm about 2/3 of the way through and I completely agree with this review. I'm carrying on only because I have faith there is a glorious conclusion. From your review, it sounds like it's coming!
I sometimes don't know why I keep reading Sanderson books. Some of the conflict is so contrived. The drama came out of nowhere and it seems every scene with Elend and Vin involve almost word-for-word the same crap about "he deserves better". It's draining.

And it's hard to believe that problem of the city under siege by multiple armies could be dragged out for the entire book with hardly any plot progression. Elend got a change of clothes and a gal from an army entered the city. When does it go somewhere?

But I'm forcing myself to have faith that the remainder of the book will make the book worthwhile.


message 32: by Jessica (new) - added it

Jessica Great review, Jessica. So on point. I agree with Zach, I find myself pushing through to get to the payoff at the end (or that turning point). I don't know if I can make it. >.< I really LOVED the first one.


Andrew "careful threading of impossible-to-detect-foundations for later plot twists....Seriously, where does he come up with this stuff?"

Yes! After finishing the book and thinking back on the foundations, I keep thinking, oooh that's what he meant. Also, yes, so much misdirection. I listened to the audiobook and the snippets from the rubbing at the beginning of the chapters kept repeating and harping on the same thing steering you away from the twist foundations. And where does he come up with such fantastic twists!?

Overall, I very much enjoy Sanderson's style, even the dull parts have enough world-building to keep me interested, then BAM at the end. I'm definitely looking forward to Stormlight 3 this November.


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Heather K (dentist in my spare time) wrote: "Great review!"

Thanks, Heather!


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Alexander wrote: "This review was spot on. Great story and setting, but that romance was horrid.

Support Characters > Vin"


*shakes head* Seriously . . . What was that? O.o


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Zach wrote: "I'm about 2/3 of the way through and I completely agree with this review. I'm carrying on only because I have faith there is a glorious conclusion. From your review, it sounds like it's coming!
I s..."


If you're 66% finished, you've got less than 20% before ALL THE THINGS happen. Might as well, IMO 😉


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Jessica wrote: "Great review, Jessica. So on point. I agree with Zach, I find myself pushing through to get to the payoff at the end (or that turning point). I don't know if I can make it. >.< I really LOVED the f..."

It was pretty amazing . . .


Jessica ❁ ➳ Silverbow ➳ ❁ Andrew wrote: ""careful threading of impossible-to-detect-foundations for later plot twists....Seriously, where does he come up with this stuff?"

Yes! After finishing the book and thinking back on the foundation..."


I think the reason I struggle through the dull parts in this series is b/c the world-building in SA is so. Much. Better. That's how I get through those dull parts, making these harder, b/c inferior (comparatively speaking) material.

BUT. So far his genius has kept it worthwhile.


Daniela Uslan This review is so spot on! Also all the philosophical discussions drag so much! I keep reminding myself (and my husband -- we're listening to the book together) that he wrote this 11 years ago and his writing has grown and matured so much since he wrote the first Mistborn trilogy.


Cherie Barbee This is a fair review, although I really enjoyed the book more than you did overall. I hated Zane though, ew


Anouck Amen. Couldn't agree more!


message 42: by The New Maria (last edited Jul 28, 2023 09:13PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

The New Maria Completely agree. When I started the book I told my partner (who dutifully listens to me talk about books he'll never read) "there's an army at the gate, but it's going to resolve quickly." Nope!

As someone who has worked in politics, I generally like reading about political intrigue. But the politics in this book felt so naive and nothing. It made me angry reading it because it just felt so simplistic and, often times, inaccurate. My partner is a politician and at times I would stop reading, walk over to him, rant for a few minutes about how frustrating the politics were, then go back to reading.

Still rated it 4 stars.


Gabriel Chen Great review xD pretty much sums up exactly what I was thinking. I was ready to just abandon this book and wait for the next Stormlight Archive because of the Zane stuff. So annoying� but alas the end intriguing enough for me to keep going to the end of this trilogy


message 44: by Kay (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kay "You'd think that a journey across a land filled with various and dangerous threats would make for an excellent second installment, and it would have . . . if the book had been about a journey across a land filled with various and dangerous threats."

This is exactly what I was thinking. Good to know I'm not crazy, haha.


jubsbooks !!!!!


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