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I Am Number Four by Pittacus Lore
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One of the worst books I've read so far in 2011, second only after Spells in stupidity. I suppose this is another case of a book with a decent concept, but incredibly weak execution of said concept. My main gripe with this book was that it just bored me out of my mind. I am not usually a skimmer. I tend to read slowly, and really absorb each word and sentence, but this book just had me itching to skim through large sections. Boredom aside, I found the characters and dialogue quite wooden, and the entire plot was rife with cliches.

The so-called "romance" between the protag and his love interest was ridiculous, cheesy and bland. The love interest was the stereotypical, perfect, gorgeous, personality-less, blue-eyed, ivory-skinned blonde. She seemed to be valued mainly for her looks, as the reader has it hammered over their head over and over again that she is "the most beautiful girl John had ever seen" blah blah etc etc. I suppose she was also valued for her supposed "goodness", which was demonstrated to the reader only in the most banal, cliche ways (ie. she works at an animal shelter! she is semi-nice to the school outcast!). At one point she was actually described as "fluttering her eyelashes" at him. I mean, c'mon, who actually does that?

I just had no interest in any of the characters. I couldn't feel anything for them. They all seemed like teenage cliches, not real people. In fact, the whole book had a distinctly teenagerish feel, which is not necessarily a bad thing for a book to be and completely understandable considering it's YA, but that doesn't mean it has to suck. I enjoy plenty of YA and children's books, but this one was just.. I don't know.. immature? Unsophisticated? One-dimensional? Too commercial?

The writing was serviceable, although again, very bland and uninspired. Plus, there are some pretty questionable ethical issues when it comes to the "authoring" of this book and whether the author who wrote the bulk of it was fairly compensated. See for more info. I wasn't at all surprised to learn about the conditions that the book was written under, as that's exactly what it reads like - some kind of mass-produced, commercial product coming out of a YA-book-trend factory. There's no handmade flourishes, no artistry and no heart. It's like they just grabbed a bunch of cliches and popular YA trends - a love triangle, magic powers, etc. and clumsily assembled them together. That's not writing, it's a tragedy.
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Reading Progress

February 10, 2011 – Started Reading
February 10, 2011 – Shelved
February 10, 2011 –
page 1
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February 10, 2011 –
page 80
18.18% "Ugh. So not impressed. Completely cliche-ridden so far."
February 11, 2011 –
page 170
38.64% "“I couldn’t wait to get here,� she says. “The whole time I was in Colorado, you were all I could think of. Even when playing with the animals, I was wishing you were there with me playing with them, too. And then when we finally left this morning, the entire trip was hell even though every mile we traveled was another mile I was closer to you.� ..Barf! Too much cheese-whiz will make you sick."
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: adventure
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: aliens-or-outer-space
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: conspiracy
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: high-school
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: reviewed
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: weak-heroines
February 11, 2011 – Shelved as: young-adult-dystopian
February 11, 2011 – Finished Reading
April 5, 2011 – Shelved as: young-adult-science-fiction

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Shadow Jubilee I thought that you described the problems you had with the book very well. Just reading your review made me cringe and want to get far away from the book.

"The love interest was the stereotypical, perfect, gorgeous, personality-less, blue-eyed, ivory-skinned blonde."

"I suppose she was also valued for her supposed "goodness", which was demonstrated to the reader only in the most banal, cliche ways (ie. she works at an animal shelter! she is semi-nice to the school outcast!)."

Definitely cringe-worthy. I'm so tired of these types of heroines.


message 2: by Alicia (last edited Feb 11, 2011 07:29PM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Alicia Haha, me too. And I mean, come on, it's really not that hard to freshen up a cat's litter and feed and play fetch with a puppy.. is that really evidence of someone being a saint? I think like 75% of my high school volunteered at the animal shelter when I was a teen.. I'd find her "goodness" somewhat more believable if she at least worked with less-than-pleasant smelling homeless people or perhaps worked with rough-edged convicts in a prison literacy program.. how hard is it to be good to adorable puppies and kittens?


message 3: by Sans (new)

Sans Great review!


Alicia Thank you Myriam! Plenty of my friends have been giving it 4 or 5 stars, so I'm glad that others can get some enjoyment out of it - it's probably one of those very divisive books. I still plan to see the movie, and I expect I will like it considerably more in that format.


Alicia Well as you can probably guess from my review, I doubt I'll be continuing on with reading the series, but I agree. I think it's a bit hasty to switch to another narrator so quickly after they've invested a whole book on John. Seems to me that they should spend a bit more time delving into John's past and developing him as a character before they rush onto someone else. I haven't read the preview yet though. Is it available for free somewhere?


message 6: by Tess (new) - rated it 1 star

Tess Spot on review!


message 7: by Tess (new) - rated it 1 star

Tess Nothing new under the sun or moon in the book and I thought the writing was absolutely abysmal.


Alicia Thank you Tess!


message 9: by Tess (new) - rated it 1 star

Tess YW Alicia!


message 10: by Malorie (new) - added it

Malorie i loved the book!


message 11: by ree (new)

ree News flash. It's a YA book, not a romance novel, or dissertation.


message 12: by Lexi (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lexi I would have to agree that the novel, I am Number Four, is quite bland. I very much so like the concept; the thought of aliens living on earth is quite captivating. Although this novel did not have me "bored out of my mind", I too found myself skimming large passages because they were quite wordy and had many irrelevant sentences. As a whole, the novel was quite cliché.

The characters also had me at a point where I lacked a lot of interest because it was so stereotypical. The nerd, the jock, the 'perfect' girl and the new kid, it was a very one dimensional book as you put it. It lacked a certain passion and artistry and it just left me bored.


Matthew Pfingstl I feel like most of your review just was you explaining why you hate Sarah...... I enjoyed the book. I love the series. did I enjoy it for the same reasons that I enjoyed the great gatsby or the portrait of Dorian grey? no. I enjoyed it because I saw it for what it was.... a teen fiction, and honestly you want her to go work with convicts? is that what makes a story better? also yes she is describe as the most beautiful girl John has ever seen but that because she is his type. it sounds to me that someone has some bitterness.... maybe a blonde from the animal shelter is dating your ex?


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