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Switched (Trylle, #1)
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Well, this was interesting.
I've read and heard some much about Amanda Hocking lately - even an article on a major Italian newspaper - that I finally decided to give it a try.
I'd like to start by saying that this is my second attempt at a self published author and the first one didn't go well. The other book I read was ALMOST HUMAN ~ The First Trilogy ~ 3-in-1 Edition and the main problem with it was the editing. The book was probably 150 pages longer than necessary and there was so much internal monologue that I skipped and skipped and skipped.
With Switched the fundamental problem is basically the same: editing. This book is better than the one I mentioned above but it still needs a professional hand working through it. It certainly does not need to be cut. On the contrary. It jumped from action to action to action without any character development at all. Wendy goes from finding Finn creepy to falling in love with him without maturing the feeling inside her at all. BAM! I've fallen for him.
The dialogue is horrific at times, there are long parts where the characters are just bickering and repeating things over and over.
The second part of the book was definitely better than the first. The writing flowed better, even the dialogue got better and I almost never "furrowed my brow" like the characters so many times did. I was kind of shocked at the end when the escape scene is described in approximately 20 lines. It felt like Hocking was tired of writing or had finished her word count for the day and decided to cut it short.
Plotwise once again I can't really say this book was anything new or original. I appreciated the Troll theme - that is new - but the rest is pretty much standard in YA lit now. Finn, especially, reminded me of a mix of Patch from Hush Hush (the stalking) and Sonny from Wondrous Strange.
Wendy I didn't like AT ALL. What a pain in the ass she is. She kind of sounds like a badass at the beginning and then she turns in this whiny, please-Finn-save-me thing. Tove and Rhys I liked, especially Tove, an interesting character with a lot of potential. Matt is a totally underdeveloped character and i'm guessing we'll see more of him in the next installment.
All in all, I can say this book was OK. Considering it is self published it is even good. But I also think that Hocking needs to mature as a writer, get published and acquire some new ideas. I will be looking for her work in a few years time.
I've read and heard some much about Amanda Hocking lately - even an article on a major Italian newspaper - that I finally decided to give it a try.
I'd like to start by saying that this is my second attempt at a self published author and the first one didn't go well. The other book I read was ALMOST HUMAN ~ The First Trilogy ~ 3-in-1 Edition and the main problem with it was the editing. The book was probably 150 pages longer than necessary and there was so much internal monologue that I skipped and skipped and skipped.
With Switched the fundamental problem is basically the same: editing. This book is better than the one I mentioned above but it still needs a professional hand working through it. It certainly does not need to be cut. On the contrary. It jumped from action to action to action without any character development at all. Wendy goes from finding Finn creepy to falling in love with him without maturing the feeling inside her at all. BAM! I've fallen for him.
The dialogue is horrific at times, there are long parts where the characters are just bickering and repeating things over and over.
The second part of the book was definitely better than the first. The writing flowed better, even the dialogue got better and I almost never "furrowed my brow" like the characters so many times did. I was kind of shocked at the end when the escape scene is described in approximately 20 lines. It felt like Hocking was tired of writing or had finished her word count for the day and decided to cut it short.
Plotwise once again I can't really say this book was anything new or original. I appreciated the Troll theme - that is new - but the rest is pretty much standard in YA lit now. Finn, especially, reminded me of a mix of Patch from Hush Hush (the stalking) and Sonny from Wondrous Strange.
Wendy I didn't like AT ALL. What a pain in the ass she is. She kind of sounds like a badass at the beginning and then she turns in this whiny, please-Finn-save-me thing. Tove and Rhys I liked, especially Tove, an interesting character with a lot of potential. Matt is a totally underdeveloped character and i'm guessing we'll see more of him in the next installment.
All in all, I can say this book was OK. Considering it is self published it is even good. But I also think that Hocking needs to mature as a writer, get published and acquire some new ideas. I will be looking for her work in a few years time.
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Ok, I add a big Tupperware of my special maldivian salad that tastes like maldivian skies and you got yourself a deal :D
You might even like the book, I just checked the rating on GR, it's HIGH.
Actually!
I just had an epiphany. The love interest in this book is as unpleasant as donovancaine. Imagine that.

Oh, shush, you know damn well I'd sell my soul for that salad. :D

I kind of look on these self-pubbed books as a chance to read an author's early work, which is something I appreciate being able to do with ebooks. It will be interesting to see how her style/story develop now that she has an editor at a publishing house to help her.


Okay, maybe not, but still, as someone who's trying very hard to combat the stereotype against self-published authors, I'd like to suggest giving one of my books a try. (Particularly the newest, "Atticus for the Undead," the first ever trial of a zombie for eating brains. Yes, really.)
I think then you'll see that some of us self-pubbers take the time and care to edit our work and come up with ideas that are at least moderately original.




Also, not all self-pubbers have the "self-pub" feel ...
*is one*

OR, if you want to really take the plunge, read the sample of my newest book, "Atticus for the Undead". If, by the end, you still think I have the "self-pub" feel, leave a comment and say so.
I won't delete it. Promise.
(And I won't flame war you either.)

Just saying, I'm willing to let my work speak for itself.
My first book, "Weaver," is good, too, but I think "Atticus" is one of the best things I've ever created. (And I learned from the mistakes I made in Weaver while I was writing it.)
If the sample does convince you, I hope you'll pick up a copy and encourage your friends to do the same.
Viva La Self-Pub Revolucion!

When I read Switched it was still self-published, I am sure StMartin's press must have done something before releasing it on paper...
Lately, I had to take back my words on self-published (see Flat-Out Love and Angefall right?) but this is still raw, IMO.
John, we'll check out your stuff and see if you're one of the true revolucionarios :D
