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Switched by Amanda Hocking
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it was ok
bookshelves: fantasy, ya-lit, ebook, paranormal-ya

Well, this was interesting.
I've read and heard some much about Amanda Hocking lately - even an article on a major Italian newspaper - that I finally decided to give it a try.
I'd like to start by saying that this is my second attempt at a self published author and the first one didn't go well. The other book I read was ALMOST HUMAN ~ The First Trilogy ~ 3-in-1 Edition and the main problem with it was the editing. The book was probably 150 pages longer than necessary and there was so much internal monologue that I skipped and skipped and skipped.

With Switched the fundamental problem is basically the same: editing. This book is better than the one I mentioned above but it still needs a professional hand working through it. It certainly does not need to be cut. On the contrary. It jumped from action to action to action without any character development at all. Wendy goes from finding Finn creepy to falling in love with him without maturing the feeling inside her at all. BAM! I've fallen for him.
The dialogue is horrific at times, there are long parts where the characters are just bickering and repeating things over and over.

The second part of the book was definitely better than the first. The writing flowed better, even the dialogue got better and I almost never "furrowed my brow" like the characters so many times did. I was kind of shocked at the end when the escape scene is described in approximately 20 lines. It felt like Hocking was tired of writing or had finished her word count for the day and decided to cut it short.

Plotwise once again I can't really say this book was anything new or original. I appreciated the Troll theme - that is new - but the rest is pretty much standard in YA lit now. Finn, especially, reminded me of a mix of Patch from Hush Hush (the stalking) and Sonny from Wondrous Strange.
Wendy I didn't like AT ALL. What a pain in the ass she is. She kind of sounds like a badass at the beginning and then she turns in this whiny, please-Finn-save-me thing. Tove and Rhys I liked, especially Tove, an interesting character with a lot of potential. Matt is a totally underdeveloped character and i'm guessing we'll see more of him in the next installment.

All in all, I can say this book was OK. Considering it is self published it is even good. But I also think that Hocking needs to mature as a writer, get published and acquire some new ideas. I will be looking for her work in a few years time.
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March 7, 2011 – Shelved
March 8, 2011 – Started Reading
March 8, 2011 – Finished Reading

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Maja (The Nocturnal Library) I have this wierd aversion towards self published books. I know that I need to get over it and that it's not fair at all.


Limonessa Mh.... I'm not sure your aversion isn't justified. This one was bearable, but the one I mentioned in the review was awful (if you look on Amazon.com it got quite a few amazing reviews). Actually, if you want to give it a try.... :D :D I'll send you just THAT one!
(view spoiler)


Maja (The Nocturnal Library) And here I thought you actually liked me. :D


Limonessa But I DO! It would be just for educational purposes. :D


Maja (The Nocturnal Library) You know, my mother says that I'm overly educated as it is, so I think I'll pass. :D


Limonessa What is THAT supposed to mean? Overly educated? Pfft.
Ok, I add a big Tupperware of my special maldivian salad that tastes like maldivian skies and you got yourself a deal :D
You might even like the book, I just checked the rating on GR, it's HIGH.
Actually!
I just had an epiphany. The love interest in this book is as unpleasant as donovancaine. Imagine that.


Maja (The Nocturnal Library) See? Now I know that you're lying. Nobody's as unpleasant as donovanfreakin'caine. No-bo-dy!

Oh, shush, you know damn well I'd sell my soul for that salad. :D


Wendy Darling I agree, the biggest problem here (and for most self-pubbed books) is the editing. I read these before the author hit it big and the books were super cheap, so as quick entertainment they're kind of fun. Definitely not hugely original, though.

I kind of look on these self-pubbed books as a chance to read an author's early work, which is something I appreciate being able to do with ebooks. It will be interesting to see how her style/story develop now that she has an editor at a publishing house to help her.


Cassi aka Snow White Haggard I want to find a self-pubbed book I like. REALLY I do. They're cheaper, there's more of the vibe of helping the little guy but nothing I've read is even good. This book literally made me mad. And so many people love it & it's been quite successful which just baffles me.


message 10: by John (new)

John Abramowitz It's Self-Pubbed Author Man, here to save the day!

Okay, maybe not, but still, as someone who's trying very hard to combat the stereotype against self-published authors, I'd like to suggest giving one of my books a try. (Particularly the newest, "Atticus for the Undead," the first ever trial of a zombie for eating brains. Yes, really.)

I think then you'll see that some of us self-pubbers take the time and care to edit our work and come up with ideas that are at least moderately original.


Limonessa Thanks John, I'll check it out. :D


Giselle Oh it's actually not self pub! It's St. Martin's press. Maybe they just picked it up recently though!? Sorry you didn't like it much. I wonder if my arc was cleaned up from the version you read!? I kind of enjoyed it :)


message 13: by John (new)

John Abramowitz Giselle - "Switched" started out as self-pubbed. St. Martin's Press printed the Trylle Trilogy after its sales potential became apparent (I think she's sold a half million or more copies just of those three books?). They also signed Ms. Hocking for a four book series called "The Watersong Saga."


Cassi aka Snow White Haggard It was originally self-pubbed but was so successful it was picked up by a publisher.


Giselle Oooh I didn't know that! That's neat. I wonder if the one I have has been cleaned up or changed from her self-pubbed one. I'd be curious to read the original. I ended up quite enjoying it and I didn't get the "self pub" feel from it.


message 16: by John (new)

John Abramowitz I don't think the original is available anymore.

Also, not all self-pubbers have the "self-pub" feel ...

*is one*


Giselle Haha. Pretty sure all self pub authors think the same :)


message 18: by John (new)

John Abramowitz Don't take my word for it. Check out the Self-Pub Pledge of Quality:

OR, if you want to really take the plunge, read the sample of my newest book, "Atticus for the Undead". If, by the end, you still think I have the "self-pub" feel, leave a comment and say so.

I won't delete it. Promise.

(And I won't flame war you either.)


Giselle Cool I'll take a look. And I love arguing to the death so I can have a blast with flamers! Teehee.


message 20: by John (new)

John Abramowitz Fair enough. :)

Just saying, I'm willing to let my work speak for itself.

My first book, "Weaver," is good, too, but I think "Atticus" is one of the best things I've ever created. (And I learned from the mistakes I made in Weaver while I was writing it.)

If the sample does convince you, I hope you'll pick up a copy and encourage your friends to do the same.

Viva La Self-Pub Revolucion!


message 21: by Limonessa (last edited Dec 30, 2011 10:47PM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Limonessa Sorry guys, I was sleeping on this side of the world.
When I read Switched it was still self-published, I am sure StMartin's press must have done something before releasing it on paper...
Lately, I had to take back my words on self-published (see Flat-Out Love and Angefall right?) but this is still raw, IMO.
John, we'll check out your stuff and see if you're one of the true revolucionarios :D


Giselle Oh Angelfall was great. I also read a few really awesome self pubs since I started my blog. But they're a hit or miss.


message 23: by John (new)

John Abramowitz Lisa O. wrote: "Sorry guys, I was sleeping on this side of the world.
When I read Switched it was still self-published, I am sure StMartin's press must have done something before releasing it on paper...
Lately, ..."


So, do I earn my revolucionario stripes after all?


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