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The Sonnets
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O William Shakespeare I hate you so much
For writing far better than ever I could
Though you have long lost the power to touch
A lover's soft hand in the springtime wood
Your eyes they've not seen for four hundred years
The brightness of mirrors in faces that fade
Nor have the sighings of winds reached your ears
Since your body in a deep hole was laid
But how can a dead man's words breathe more life
Than the ones that come from a living brain?
How can a bridegroom whom Death made his wife
Marry the living again and again?
An answer to these questions I have not
I'm but the Bard’s bastard son he forgot
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Ulysse's review
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Feb 09, 2016
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O William Shakespeare I hate you so much
For writing far better than ever I could
Though you have long lost the power to touch
A lover's soft hand in the springtime wood
Your eyes they've not seen for four hundred years
The brightness of mirrors in faces that fade
Nor have the sighings of winds reached your ears
Since your body in a deep hole was laid
But how can a dead man's words breathe more life
Than the ones that come from a living brain?
How can a bridegroom whom Death made his wife
Marry the living again and again?
An answer to these questions I have not
I'm but the Bard’s bastard son he forgot
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February 9, 2016
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And Shakespeare who lives in my books
Together they give me all I need
I think I have such good…fortune!

The sonnets are works I love being reminded of. I once studied them. And the academics who taught us saw them as living entities."
Thanks, Nick. I really loved re-visiting the Sonnets this umpteenth time, even though there are some I will never understand, no matter how hard I try. That's ok, though, for knowing that some things are beyond my brain's capacity to understand them is part of the enjoyment of having them near me.

And Shakespeare who lives in my books
Together they give me all I need
I think I have such good…fortune!"
If my bastard rhymes married to that bastard Shakespeare can make you feel fortunate on this late-October day, Fionnuala, we are more than content :-)

The sonnets are works I love being reminded of. I once studied them. And the academics who taught us saw them as living entities."
Thanks, Nick. I really lo..."
They loved a linguistic puzzle back in Bill's day. Part of the fun of composition.

Indeed!
Do you have 5 hours? Try to wrap your head around this one:
Th' expense of spirit in a waste of shame
Is lust in action; and till action, lust
Is perjured, murd'rous, bloody, full of blame,
Savage, extreme, rude, cruel, not to trust,
Enjoyed no sooner but despisèd straight,
Past reason hunted; and, no sooner had
Past reason hated as a swallowed bait
On purpose laid to make the taker mad;
Mad in pursuit and in possession so,
Had, having, and in quest to have, extreme;
A bliss in proof and proved, a very woe;
Before, a joy proposed; behind, a dream.
All this the world well knows; yet none knows well
To shun the heaven that leads men to this hell.

Whatever Shakespeare's reaction,
Laysee, he's long gone.
But to have you praise my stuff
makes me break into song!

I'm so glad to hear you think so, Markus, thank you!

Oh thank you Cecily, that's so very kind of you to say! It was fabulous to read these sonnets again, all 154 of them, after 20 some years. The older I get the more I love them. I must be maturing, or something.

Indeed!
Do you have 5 hours? Try to wrap your head around this one:
Th' expense of spirit in a wa..."
It's all about the opening lines. "Expense" is the waste of semen. The waste produced by lust is maddening, because it is not rational.
Consummation must be expressed (proved) in marriage: the legally binding necessity of marriage (where issue (children) can only be proven legally to occur). In marriage, thoughts about sex are best expressed. But not lusty. That therefore is rational because it legally produces children as heirs. To prove is to rise bread. In wordplay of the day also likely a little hint at getting the lady wife pregnant.
That is from my historical study way back when of Elizabethan times and their values. John Donne was also very good at this.
It's not that interesting a poem. Way down in my list. It was probably a poem he wrote as an appeasement. It had enough wordplay to make it interesting to poetry reading yahoos. But he would've had to talk up the values of the day to look like the right sort of guy to get patronage. He could easily be censored for being too secular or vulgar a thinker.

Were the 'I' in my review really me, I'd kind of be complimenting myself in the last lines. I mean, imagine being sprung from the loins of the Bard himself, even if in a momentary lapse of reason? But the 'I' in the review isn't really me.

Ah so it's all about wasted sperm, is it? So that's what they taught in college back in the day.

Ah so it's all about wasted sperm, is it? So that's what they taught in college back in the day."
Everyone got a religious education.

Aiming to equal Shakespeare the poet
Perhaps with aging maturing and time
Ability, he will anon grow it

Aiming to equal Shakespeare the poet
Perhaps with aging maturing and time
Ability, he will anon grow it"
Excellent, Lisa :-)
Ulysse knows that no matter how hard
He rhymes his short life away
He will never equal the Bard
Nor marry Anne Hathaway

"Ulysse knows that no matter how hard
He rhymes his short life away
He will never equal the Bard
Nor marry Anne Hathaway."
Bravo!
The sonnets are works I love being reminded of. I once studied them. And the academics who taught us saw them as living entities.