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On the Road by Jack Kerouac
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it was ok
Read 2 times. Last read January 26, 2019 to February 13, 2019.

I think this book, which launched Kerouac's career and gave him insta-fame, has to be seen as a product of its time.

I found it a chore to read, a long dull boast about a series of road trips. It's populated by vacuous largely despicable alcoholics with zero impulse control and an unshakeable belief that they are deeply profound observers of the human condition.

One saving grace of the book is that Kerouac has an unusual writing style with a strong voice that he uses well, especially when describing the landscapes and cities as his avatar rushes to and fro across America.

The other is that the 'shocking' nature of the book back in 1955, immersed in drugs, alcohol, and sexuality, five years before a court case finally allowed the rather tame Lady Chatterly's Lover to be published in the UK, 32 years after it was written, has been replaced with a certain historical interest in the modern reader seeing how things worked over 60 years ago.

The book garnered so much interest because it was said to capture zeitgeist of the beat generation - it variously explained and/or titillated with an under the hood look at the youth movement of the late 40s/early 50s that led into rock and roll and on into hippydom. We also see the young white male characters mixing with African Americans and Hispanics decades before the civil rights movement.

Kerouac's avatar, Sal Paradise, follows Dean Moriarty, a hollow messiah of the age, and together they haunt jazz and bop clubs trying to capture "it" and waxing ecstatically about saxophonists blowing.

We see several years of the pair's directionless lives, Dean oscillating between three women, spawning and abandoning children, dropping everything repeatedly on a whim to cross America east to west or back again, and finally to Mexico City.

The pair cheat and steal their way while claiming to savour the goodness of those they encounter. Dean has to be warned off the 13 year old daughter of a friend, and later in Mexico they sleep with 15 year old prostitutes.

In a manner familiar in Dickens and Dostoevsky, and more recently echoed by Rothfuss, our characters are always penniless, generally because if they get money they spend it at a ridiculous rate until they have none.

Dean and Sal are characterised by a refusal to look beyond the next hour. The consequences of their actions are of little concern to them because they feel no responsibility for them.

I realise that I sound like a scolding schoolmarm, the epitome of everything this book was likely a reaction to. But after hundreds of pages of having their reaction forced down my throat I have my own reaction back against it. No, I don't dig it.

And it being a travelogue based on real experience there is of course no plot and as it turns out no real sense of progression, which led to the book feeling rather samey after a while. It was apparently hand written on a roll of wallpaper and it really does feel rather like a long list of "and then and then and then".

I was moved to try Kerouac back in the 80s by a line in a Marillion song, "read some Kerouac and it put me on the track to burn a little brighter now". Yes, this is a book about living at full throttle (and much of it is spent shooting across the States at 110mph), about burning the candle at both ends, about not living a milk toast life, it shouts at you "what are you saving yourself for?" and those ideas of course hold a certain appeal. But then again, when you look at the sad sacks in this book ... maybe not.

The second star is for the quality of the prose. In fact both of them are.









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Reading Progress

Finished Reading
March 26, 2011 – Shelved
January 26, 2019 – Started Reading
January 26, 2019 –
page 150
48.86% "I've been reading this for 6 months, in 60 second bursts.

I thought I had read it already, back in the 80s, but that must have been a different Kerouac book. I remember I was motivated by a Marillion lyric: Read some Kerouac, and it put me on the track, to burn a little brighter now.

This is basically the diary of an impoverished road trip. Most of the characters are incoherent, narcissistic alcoholics."
February 3, 2019 –
page 160
52.12% ""I could run 100 metres in 10.5 and Dean sailed past me."

Uh. No. & no."
February 13, 2019 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Maryam (new)

Maryam Rz. Well, amazing review! I always love reading your reviews even if I don't read the book 😂😂 I know, weird...


Michael  Adam Carroll I’m glad not to be alone in this


message 3: by Al (new) - rated it 2 stars

Al Burke I'm the same. Never took to it, just read because it's a "classic."


Christoffer Ladstein I read this when I was +-20 and I suppose that 's a perfect age to digest this and book.


Brad Marillion, hell yeah.


Anghell I loved this book.. and I typically don't fall for things touted as 'classics.' lol. But it was fantastic..


Thomas Olivent It was interesting. I think this one had hipsters mentioned in it? I found that hilarious as I didn't realize the term was an old one.


message 8: by Denis (new)

Denis Pedersen On The Road den fånigaste skiten jag har läst!


message 9: by Sasha (new)

Sasha Kurup What do you think about 'factotum' by charles bukowski? I had similar thoughts while reading it.


message 10: by Mark (new) - rated it 2 stars

Mark Lawrence Sasha wrote: "What do you think about 'factotum' by charles bukowski? I had similar thoughts while reading it."

I've not read that one.


Sarah This seems so accurate but I feel like I *have* to finish. Thanks for the review!


message 12: by T. (new)

T. Frohock "It's populated by vacuous largely despicable alcoholics with zero impulse control and an unshakeable belief that they are deeply profound observers of the human condition."

That sounds like an accurate description of the sixties.


message 13: by Seth (new)

Seth Very well said. A friend of mine let me borrow this book in middle school and I think I gave it back to him partway through that same day. Just couldn't be fucked to read about a bunch of losers going on a road trip.


message 14: by FantasyBookNerd (new)

FantasyBookNerd "The book garnered so much interest because it was said to capture the zeitgeist of the beat generation"

I came to this book very much because I am very interested in the counter cultures of different ages and this kind of like showed me that there were similar thoughts and beliefs long before I got involved with them. When I read it, I had been a goth, a hippy, a crusty and a kind of non conformist so it resonates at the time. However, when I read the book later in life, I didn't enjoy it so much. I think when I read it originally, I was looking at it with the mystique that I had at that particular time of reading of the figures of that particular time in history, people like Kerouac, Burroughs and Ginsberg etc. But, reading it later in life, I just didn't like it.


message 15: by Erik (new) - added it

Erik Dyrelius What I really take with me from the review (no not really, from the reading progress I guess) is that you know the lyrics to "Torch Song". :)


message 16: by John (new) - rated it 1 star

John Mauro I dig this review. 😎 Couldn't agree more.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes I HATED this book! But the energy of the sentences propelled me to keep reading thinking sure something must happen!


message 18: by G.R. (new)

G.R. Paskoff To echo another person's comment: Marillion, hell yeah. That really brought me back a few years. "I've got a strange fascination with a liquid fixation. Alcohol, thrill me now. It's getting late in the game to show any pride or shame. Burn a little brighter now."


message 19: by Iris (new)

Iris Alright, alright: I'll read the book. Sheesh.


message 20: by Alex (new) - rated it 2 stars

Alex Couldn’t agree more. I wanted so badly to love this book as a teenager who thought they were immersed in their own early 2010s counterculture, idolizing those before me who went off the beaten path. Now in my late 20s, I feel like I can see the book (and my teenage hipsterdom) for what it was: totally empty, and worse, convinced that it was full.


Robyn Hanson You nailed it.


message 22: by Steven (new)

Steven Booth While I don’t see it as the classic other people do, I liked the character-driven journal type feel of it. The lack of a plot did make it meander for long periods, but overall I liked it for the same reasons y’all disliked it. Go figure.


message 23: by John (new)

John One thing I’ll say about it, I think it was much better as an audiobook than trying to read it. On the page he’s got these run-on paragraphs, like a single one could go over multiple pages, and that just breaks my reader-brain. But listening to it, it has a spoken-word poetry slam feel to it, a declamatory rhythm that’s compelling like music.

But that impression is basically all I remember from listening to it over a decade ago.


message 24: by Matt Whitby (new) - added it

Matt Whitby I agree. I've started it so many times, but it's so very very dull.


message 25: by Paul (new) - rated it 1 star

Paul I loved this review. Especially loved this: "It's populated by vacuous largely despicable alcoholics with zero impulse control and an unshakeable belief that they are deeply profound observers of the human condition." Bingo.


message 26: by AJ (new) - rated it 2 stars

AJ Fantastic review. I decided to read On the Road because I remember reading The Dharma Bums in high school 20+ years ago and loving it. Kerouac's fluidity with words shines in On the Road, but that's about the only thing good in it. I truly disliked it and wished I'd never read it.


message 27: by Chris (new)

Chris Everson I don't think it's a bad book. It's just of it's time. A bit like 'The Dice Man'. They were great when I read them decades ago, but painful as re-reads.


message 28: by Phil Parkman (new)

Phil Parkman On the Road has to be read as an answer to the conformity of the time. Like old revolutionaries after their rebellion has succeeded, Sal and Dean are due to fade away, but they were big when it mattered.


message 29: by Yvette (new)

Yvette What a thoughtful review. I plucked this book off my shelf to read but now think I will wait until December (maybe that week between Christmas and New Years when I can’t even remember what day of the week it is because I’m in a food coma). I’m curious to check out his writing style and as a road tripper, the premise appealed to me. However, after reading your review and several other scathing ones, I don’t think I’m in the mood for this quite yet.


message 30: by Barbara (new) - added it

Barbara Vice Thank you for this review; I won’t be in any hurry to read this book but may get to it someday. And, *milquetoast.


message 31: by Mark (last edited Mar 23, 2024 07:30AM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Mark Lawrence Barbara wrote: "Thank you for this review; I won’t be in any hurry to read this book but may get to it someday. And, *milquetoast."

Milk toast inspired the comic strip character Milquetoast, who in turn became enshrined in the language - but you can still appeal to the original inspiration: milk toast, which is more accessable.


message 32: by J (new) - rated it 2 stars

J L Very well said!


message 33: by reader29 (new)

reader29 This review critiques Kerouac's book as a product of its time, noting that while it captures the spirit of the Beat Generation, it feels outdated and unappealing today. The reviewer finds the story dull, filled with impulsive, unlikable characters who glorify reckless living. Despite these flaws, the book is praised for its unique writing style and vivid descriptions of America’s landscapes. However, the lack of plot and repetitive nature make it a tedious read.


message 34: by Matt Whitby (new) - added it

Matt Whitby I've tried to read this countless times and it's just too dull.


message 35: by David (new)

David Okay, I have to read it.


message 36: by Em (new)

Em So true...and I also think perception changes with age. I remember finding this book fascinating when I was 16. I don't think I minded the flat structuring--probably didn't even notice. Then when I went back to it in my 30's I kept wondering what I had seen in it prior.


message 37: by M (new) - rated it 5 stars

M J It's a shame that
Alcohol played such a large part of Jack's life . Ultimately it led to his death aged just 47. In its day this book was outrageous and rebellious. Read all his work with Jazz playing , because that's how he wrote it in his mind. You have to remember when it was written . The beats were the precursors to the Hippies , often intelligent but rebellious . After the huge huge fame this book made him , his descent into alcohol got much worse . He tried to dry out in a cabin in Big Sur , lent to him by Lawrence Ferlinghetti another poet and owner of City Lights book store . He wrote Big Sur there ,(my favourite book of his )again on one piece of continuous paper . It's about torment and the beauty of nature.
My favourite quote of his is "The Only Truth Is Music "


message 38: by ThrashMTN (new)

ThrashMTN Only dude I know that was into this book is a real POS


message 39: by Ed (new) - added it

Ed Some people have said that Steinbeck's "Travels with Charlie " is better.


message 40: by Matt (new) - rated it 3 stars

Matt Wish I read this before I started. I’m halfway and will definitely finish but I was expecting �. More.


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