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Sweetbitter by Stephanie Danler
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This is one of those "I really wanted to like it" books. The sentence-level writing is gorgeous, and the subject matter--working in a high end NYC restaurant--is (for some of us) nearly irresistible. And at first I liked Sweetbitter very much. Young girl moves to New York, gets an amazing job, is immersed in the life of the city ... What's not to like?

But after a hundred pages or so (maybe even fewer), I started to get frustrated. While I was enjoying protagonist Tess's introduction to fine food and wine, I kept waiting for, well, a plot. Eventually I could no longer deny what I'd begun to suspect: there was no plot, unless you call a 22-year-old backwaiter falling in love with the attractive-yet-troubled bartender a plot. It's not.

Tess's relationship with Jake the bartender is as tedious as you'd imagine. The more interesting relationship is the one between Tess and Simone, the restaurant's doyenne and longest-serving server. Simone takes on Tess as her protege, teaching her about wine, urging her to go deeper, learn more. Simone in many ways is who Tess wants to be--well-traveled, at home in the world, mysterious, cultured.

The problem is neither Simone or Tess (or Jake, the troubled bartender) are fully developed characters. And they're the main ones, so imagine how unmemorable the secondary characters are. Simone is intriguing, but ultimately she seems like a type instead of real person. Same with Tess, same with Jake. But they're so close to being more than that! I finished this book wishing it had gone through one more round of edits (you will grow tired of the drinking and the snorting and the vomiting, I promise; you will begin to skim), in which the author had gone more deeply into her main characters. I had the feeling she didn't want to reveal too much about them because she was holding back for the penultimate reveal ... but to be honest, what we learn at the end of the book doesn't have much of a payoff. I think it's supposed to be shocking, but it isn't. Or it's not really that interesting--so, mildly shocking in a boring kind of way. I'd rather have real characters.

Anyway, if you're twenty and living at home in the suburbs this summer, dreaming about how great life will be once you're shed of your parents and your job at the mall, you'll like this book more than I did. If you're me, you'll read to the end (after vowing to give up in the middle), skimming as you go, because you're curious how things will turn out. But of course you already know how things turn out. They always turn out that way.
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message 1: by CC (new) - rated it 4 stars

CC "But of course you already know how things turn out. They always turn out that way..."

That made me laugh! Very true. :)


Frances Dowell CC wrote: ""But of course you already know how things turn out. They always turn out that way..."

That made me laugh! Very true. :)"


Thanks! Just read your review, which was fabulous. And yes--the writing is definitely 5 star-worthy. I'll be curious what she does next, now that she has this story out of her system.


message 3: by CC (new) - rated it 4 stars

CC Yeah, I will definitely read her again.


Vicky Mutuc Enjoyed your review. Spot on.


Karen I started skimming too. I thought something more had to happen...I was wrong.


Shellie Yes! Your character paragraph captures my frustrations with this book, too.


Thomas Wow. I wished I read your review before I got the book. You hit the nail write (pun intended) on the head. If I never see the word "terroir" again it will be too soon.


Debra Yep. Ditto. I thought it was really well-written EXCEPT I wanted to slap Tess and I don't remember any vibrant and vivid culinary descriptions.


Valerie Cowan Review is great, and like Debra, I wanted to slap Tess!


message 10: by Pam (new) - rated it 2 stars

Pam Arifian Couldn't have said it better myself


Kristy Griffin Yes yes yes to your review and all of the comments. I wanted to stop reading the book half a million times but was so hoping it would get better! I. Was. Wrong. In all the books I've read, I've never met a main character that made me want to punch in the face like I did Tess. And I've read ALOT of books. Haha!


Parisienne I'm a third of the way through and am starting to skim. Disappointing.


Jenna I really wanted to love it as well.


message 14: by J (new)

J Excellent review. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one waiting for a plot. I do work in the restaurant industry, so that makes it interesting - and a bit scary! So that's where all the young servers go after their shift is over!!


Kara B Dead on! I was skimming as well just to get to the end and say I finished. So disappointing!


Frances Dowell Kara Butler wrote: "Dead on! I was skimming as well just to get to the end and say I finished. So disappointing!"

Thanks, Kara. So much potential in this book, but ultimately it didn't deliver. I'll definitely look at whatever, the author does next, though. I think she's talented.


Frances Dowell Jane wrote: "Excellent review. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one waiting for a plot. I do work in the restaurant industry, so that makes it interesting - and a bit scary! So that's where all the young serve..."

I'm pretty patient with character-centered novels that aren't wildly plot-driven, but this asked too much of me as a reader. If the characters had been more fully-developed, I would have probably dealt with the lack of plot ... but then again, if the characters had been more fully developed, there would have been more of a plot. You need one to have the other.


Amanda Bynum You took the words right out of my mouth.


Meredith Estes Agreed. Well said.


Jessica Great review!


mallory This review hit the nail on the hammer - exactly what I was thinking as I read. I felt like there could've been so much more that this book delved into with character development.


message 22: by Gina (new) - rated it 2 stars

Gina So much of what you all said expresses the range of thoughts and feelings I had too! I went from "ooh, this is going to be a really good story" to "OMG I hate these idiots" to Gahhhhh, how much longer and please someone drop this whiny twit into a river somewhere." I can't even remember any of the wines that sounded interesting because I was in such a hurry to cleanse my palate, so to speak.


Mandi MacDonald I'm not even done reading this and I agree 100%


Laura Bratt This book is a great representation of the restaurant business and how the organized chaos creates a family. It shows how glamorous a life underground can be while alluding to how there is more to life than drugs and bars. This is not solely a love story but much more


message 25: by SM (new) - rated it 3 stars

SM Exactly what you said! I wish it finished as strongly as it started.


Catherine GREAT review! I agree whole-heartedly with your reactions.


Frances Dowell Catherine wrote: "GREAT review! I agree whole-heartedly with your reactions."

Thanks, Catherine!


Frances Dowell SM wrote: "Exactly what you said! I wish it finished as strongly as it started."

Me, too! I'll be interested to see her next book.


Heather I was way more invested in Simone's story than with idiot Tess and her self destructive obsession with the dirty bartender who doesn't change his undies. 🙄


message 30: by Olga (new) - rated it 3 stars

Olga Great review. I agree completely. Felt the same way half way through yet I keep waiting for the plot to develop.


message 31: by Bethan (new) - added it

Bethan Archer I’ve not finished, but know you’re bang on as I’m at the half-way-and-strongly-considering-giving-up point.


Frances Dowell Bethan wrote: "I’ve not finished, but know you’re bang on as I’m at the half-way-and-strongly-considering-giving-up point."

I did a lot of skimming, I have to admit, mostly because it was clear that the author was talented and I was hopeful that things would pick up. Spoiler: they didn't. But maybe the next book?


Caitlyn Grimes I couldn't agree more! Very appropriate review.


No Credentials finished this book moments ago, needed catharsis, this review delivered + made me feel like I'm not insane. thank you.


Frances Dowell Kathryn wrote: "finished this book moments ago, needed catharsis, this review delivered + made me feel like I'm not insane. thank you."

Happy to be of service!


Frances Dowell Caitlyn wrote: "I couldn't agree more! Very appropriate review."

Thanks, Caitlyn!


Stacey That last paragraph though hit too close to home 😂 maybe that’s why I enjoyed it...


Frances Dowell Stacey wrote: "That last paragraph though hit too close to home 😂 maybe that’s why I enjoyed it..."

I totally get it! My younger self would have loved this book more than I did for sure!


message 39: by Sam (new) - rated it 2 stars

Sam Your review was more interesting and more intriguing than 85% of the book. Completely agree with your final paragraph.


Frances Dowell S wrote: "Your review was more interesting and more intriguing than 85% of the book. Completely agree with your final paragraph."

Thanks!


Shaunae This review was spot on for me! Thank you for putting into words what I was feeling!


Frances Dowell Shaunae wrote: "This review was spot on for me! Thank you for putting into words what I was feeling!"

Thanks, Shaunae!


Michelle This review is exactly how I felt!


Frances Dowell Michelle wrote: "This review is exactly how I felt!"

It's nice to know I'm not alone--thanks, Michelle!


Daniela Cardona Great review!


Frances Dowell Daniela wrote: "Great review!"

Thanks, Daniela!


message 47: by Ashley (new)

Ashley YES. This is EXACTLY why I gave up; the writing is really beautiful, but there's just no place for it to go. I had so much trouble "seeing" and even placing the characters that I finally called it quits.


Kaholstein Excellent review. Nailed it.


Frances Dowell Ashley White wrote: "YES. This is EXACTLY why I gave up; the writing is really beautiful, but there's just no place for it to go. I had so much trouble "seeing" and even placing the characters that I finally called it ..."

Kaholstein wrote: "Excellent review. Nailed it."

Thanks!


Kylee Torres this review is SPOT ON


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