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King's Cage by Victoria Aveyard
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did not like it
bookshelves: young-adult

Too many fillers. Boring writing style. Disintegrated storyline. Dull characters. Flat villain.



King's Cage is a bipolar book. Everything is swung up and down all the time, especially the characters being unstable and intermittent. I'm beyond disappointment and frustration, even though I didn't expect anything at all before reading, I still feel as if this book is a waste of my time. If you think Glass Sword was terrible, you would be terribly wrong because this book was ten times worse that I couldn't be so sure whether I was reading a book or a screenplay.

“I've been broken too many times to break again.�




King's Cage has its loop since the beginning: one, the description of the scene, and two, the description of the costumes, and three, the character progresses their own stories. Then it's back to the first step again and again. One and two and three. One and two and three. UNTIL THE END OF THIS BOOK. It keeps repeating without changing the tactic of narrating the story. I haven't known how dull Victoria Aveyard's writing style is until now. Her writing is getting worse and worse compared with Red Queen. She wrote this book like doing a screenplay and had no idea how disastrous it was for the gap between chapter 28 and chapter 29. The action scenes are the worst of all. They're scattered; hell, this isn't a comic that you can skip the scenes because you have illustrations to substitute it. A novel needs details to complete actions and a story needs skills to weave it carefully, not just putting a piece of them and you call it a novel. Yet VA does that all the time. She skips the scenes incessantly I wanted to stop reading many times if it wasn't for the cost that was worth my three meals, perhaps four.



However, I can conclude this book into one paragraph below.

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“To stand in front of a person who is your whole world and be told you are not enough. You are not the choice. You are a shadow to the person who is your sun.�


3 Stars for Red Queen for its awesome plot and setting. 2 Stars for Glass Sword because I didn't like Mare at all. She was such a brat in that book and her character made everyting awful. And 1 star for King's Cage. This book is utterly terrible, in my opinion. It is a black void of space with the story floating around and is impossible to grab. The worst book I've ever read in almost two years. Oh! and the ending is forced, too. I couldn't believe that would happen, whether the author intended to do it this way since the beginning or not, she should have been more elaborate.



0 for the story and 1 star for shirtless Cal and his abs.

I don't care who Mare will end up with. Cal ? Meh ! Maven ? I feel nothing for him. Kilorn ? I'm not surprised at all. Or she will probably die at the end of this series. Yet It doesn't bother me any.

“You aren’t alone.� The hope in his eyes cuts deeply. “You have your crown.�


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Reading Progress

February 7, 2017 – Started Reading
February 8, 2017 – Shelved
February 8, 2017 – Shelved as: young-adult
February 11, 2017 –
40.0% "Why is this so boring ? I'm not sure I can finish it *meh*

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February 12, 2017 – Finished Reading

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Maria✦❋Steamy Reads Blog❋✦ looking forward to your review! Don't know if I should continue with this series or not...


Ahmed  Ejaz I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me.


message 3: by Vicenta (new)

Vicenta So exciteddd!


message 4: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Maria✦❋Steamy Reads Blog❋✦ wrote: "looking forward to your review! Don't know if I should continue with this series or not..."

Though I'm reading it now, I still can't decide whether I should continue or not lol


message 5: by P (last edited Feb 08, 2017 05:36PM) (new) - rated it 1 star

P Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."

Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat.


message 6: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Vicenta wrote: "So exciteddd!"

ตอนหยิบเล่มนี้ขึ้นมาอ่านคิดว่าเป็� trilogy เล่มสุดท้าย อ่านด้วยความตื่นเต้นสุดฤทธิ� ไปๆมาๆก็นึกได้ว่ามันยังไม่จบนี่หว่� 555


L A i N E Y (will be back) Haha I hope you'll enjoy this one more :)


Ahmed  Ejaz P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."
Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat."


Exactly! Except for this, I have another problem with Glass Sword:
I was expecting Maven to show more. But he just took a back seat.
Apparently, Maven will play a big role in King's Cage. Really hope it's true.


message 9: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P oh! lainey wrote: "Haha I hope you'll enjoy this one more :)"

Cross my fingers :)


message 10: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."
Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat."

Exactly! Except for this, I have another problem wit..."


It's true.
I don't understand people why they like Marven.
His character is so boringgggggggg ehhhhh


Ahmed  Ejaz P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."
Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat."
Exactly! Except for this, I have anoth..."


I liked Maven as an antagonist in Glass Sword. Otherwise I like Cal more. I liked Mare in Red Queen. But in Glass Sword, she has become a nuisance. Don't know what she will become in King's Cage.


message 12: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."
Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat."
Exactly! Except for this, I h..."


Actually Kilorn was my focus, but I felt sorry for him in Glass Sword :(


Ahmed  Ejaz P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."
Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat."
Exactly! Except..."


Me too! Or also I am not seeing his further role in the series. Victoria just used him to start the story of Red Queen. After that, she just forgot him. :(


message 14: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "P wrote: "Ahmed wrote: "I also wish! Glass Sword was a little disappointment for me."
Me too.
I didn't like Mare in that book. She was a brat."
Exact..."


I hope to see him more in this book though.


message 15: by Vicenta (new)

Vicenta Why is cal shirtlesssss????


message 16: by P (last edited Feb 12, 2017 07:14AM) (new) - rated it 1 star

P Vicenta wrote: "Why is cal shirtlesssss????"

I don't want to spoil you. You gotta read this book asap :)


message 17: by Candace (new)

Candace Robinson I couldn't continue this series after book 1!


ٰԲˡĢĢ I gave it 2*. I don't know what in the actual hell is this.


message 19: by Manna (new)

Manna not surprise.. I didn't even pick up book 2.


message 20: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Candace (Literary Dust) wrote: "I couldn't continue this series after book 1!"

I hoped that King's Cage would be better, but I was wrong again TT


message 21: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Kisses A wrote: "I gave it 2*. I don't know what in the actual hell is this."

Everything in this book is annoying.


message 22: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Manna wrote: "not surprise.. I didn't even pick up book 2."

Good for you.
Save your time for other books.


Jessica ❥Chatterbooks Book Blog❥ Oh wow, I really liked the first book, and I was hoping the series would get better not worse. Sorry it wasn't better for you. :( Excellent review, P!! �


ٰԲˡĢĢ P wrote: "Kisses A wrote: "I gave it 2*. I don't know what in the actual hell is this."

Everything in this book is annoying."


Yes it was. I don't know if I will read the next book. Maybe read spoilers and not waste my time;/


message 25: by Manna (new)

Manna Wow... haha thank you!! ตอนแรกมีคิดว่าจะหยิบ แต่รอไปยาว� เหนเม้นล� โอเ� ตัดสินใจได้ง่ายเลย


message 26: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Kisses A wrote: "P wrote: "Kisses A wrote: "I gave it 2*. I don't know what in the actual hell is this."

Everything in this book is annoying."

Yes it was. I don't know if I will read the next book. Maybe read spo..."


I might read it. It's my bad habit to finish what I've started lol


message 27: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Manna wrote: "Wow... haha thank you!! ตอนแรกมีคิดว่าจะหยิบ แต่รอไปยาว� เหนเม้นล� โอเ� ตัดสินใจได้ง่ายเลย"

ตอนอ่านก็คิดอยู่หลายครั้งว่าผู้แต่งได้ดราฟท์งานกันก่อนเขียนบ้างหรือเปล่า ดูเหมือนด้นสดเยอะมากเลย ใน Glass Sword ยังไม่ค่อยชัดเท่าไ� แต่พอมาเล่มนี้เห็นชัดขึ้น เหมือ� draft งานไม่ละเอียดจริงๆนั่นแหล� คือมันไม่สมูธมาก� เหมือนคนเป็� bipolar 5555


message 28: by Margaux (new)

Margaux That's such a damn disappointment, but I'm not surprised at all after Glass Sword.


Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin Great honest review hon. I wasn't into the second one and am sure not reading this one !


message 30: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Margaux wrote: "That's such a damn disappointment, but I'm not surprised at all after Glass Sword."

I insisted on reading this book after my disappointment of Glass Sward. And see how it turns out lol


message 31: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Melissa � Dog Lover � wrote: "Great honest review hon. I wasn't into the second one and am sure not reading this one !"

I couldn't agree more, Melissa. Glass Sword was a huge disappointment for me, but King's Cage was more than that :(


Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin Sigh. . I hate when books aren't what we expect but we can't love them all :-/


message 33: by Tammy (new)

Tammy I'm glad I quited.


message 34: by Azbaqiyah (new)

Azbaqiyah After reading your review I don't know if I should start reading this series...well I did DFN Steel Scar. ;p


message 35: by Pim (new) - rated it 2 stars

Pim ตอนอ่า� Glass Sword ก็ใช้อินเนอร์ส่วนตัวในการอ่านให้รู้สึกสนุกไปกับมั� King's Cage นี่ก็อยากอ่านจะแย่ แต่กลัวรอบนี้อินเนอร์จะไม่แกร่งกล้าพอ (TvT) กลัวความผิดหวังจริงๆค่� แต่ก็คงอ่านแหล� 5555 #fangirlproblem


message 36: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Melissa � Dog Lover � wrote: "Sigh. . I hate when books aren't what we expect but we can't love them all :-/"

I hate when I couldn't quit and still read that series even more ;P


message 37: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Tammy wrote: "I'm glad I quited."

You're so lucky ;)


message 38: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Azbaqiyah wrote: "After reading your review I don't know if I should start reading this series...well I did DFN Steel Scar. ;p"

It's not that bad actually. I mean Red Queen was good, but Glass Sword wasn't what I expected :)


message 39: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P pimjunha wrote: "ตอนอ่า� Glass Sword ก็ใช้อินเนอร์ส่วนตัวในการอ่านให้รู้สึกสนุกไปกับมั� King's Cage นี่ก็อยากอ่านจะแย่ แต่กลัวรอบนี้อินเนอร์จะไม่แกร่งกล้าพอ (TvT) กลัวความผิดหวังจริงๆค่� แต่ก็คงอ่านแหล� 5555 #fangi..."

ถ้าใช้อินเนอร์เยอะๆน่าจะรอดอยู่ครับ แต่พอดีส่วนตัวไม่ค่อยอินตั้งแต่เล่มแรกเลย ที่รอดเพราะส่วนของพล็อตล้วน� พอมันเริ่มยืดมากๆก็เลยรู้สึกว่าไปต่อไม่ไหวละ 555555


message 40: by ✦❋ԲԲ✦❋ (new)

✦❋ԲԲ✦❋ Great honest review, P! ;)


message 41: by Sara (new) - rated it 2 stars

Sara Saif Dude. We feel practically the same!


message 42: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Arianna✦❋SteamyReadsBlog❋✦ wrote: "Great honest review, P! ;)"

Thanks ! xx


message 43: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Sara wrote: "Dude. We feel practically the same!"

Yas ! this book bored me to death.


Hannah Thank you thank you thank you for this review!! I have just finished this book and I am just as frustrated and disappointed as you! I was going to write a review but I think you've stolen all the words from me, because this book was disastrous!! I can't believe how empty the story was and don't get me started on the split narratives!! She chose the worst characters to use! I just can't believe I had to force myself to finish the book. I enjoyed red queen and glass sword at a push, but this... I don't think I will read any of her novels again!


message 45: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Hannah wrote: "Thank you thank you thank you for this review!! I have just finished this book and I am just as frustrated and disappointed as you! I was going to write a review but I think you've stolen all the w..."

You're welcome. I felt very bad too after reading this one. I don't even know how this series goes downhill like this.


Laurie –Read Between The Skylines– After one month of trying and trying to finish it, I'm utterly disappointing as well...


message 47: by P (new) - rated it 1 star

P Laurie –A Court of Books� wrote: "After one month of trying and trying to finish it, I'm utterly disappointing as well..."

I spent three days on this book and I was so tired.


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