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Winter by Ali Smith
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it was amazing
bookshelves: 2017, 5-stars, 2019, 2020
Read 3 times. Last read June 16, 2020 to June 17, 2020.

I’d love to chat all day about the seasons but I’ve work to do, he said.

When I first read this book, I, along with many others, missed a key connection between it and the first volume of the quartet, Autumn. Reading Winter again now after just reading Autumn for the third time I firstly find it hard to believe we all missed that connection and secondly was delighted by how much knowing that connection changes the book (for the better). I won't, in case of spoilers, say what that connection is, but it has to do with a link between one of the main characters in each book and knowing that link makes Winter a different beast altogether. And far more enjoyable because of that.

Autumn was a collage, similar to the art work of Pauline Boty who featured heavily. Winter is also a collage, retaining the same format of leaping around in time. As Smith says,

That’s one of the things stories and books can do, they can make more than one time possible at once.

And this compression or overlaying of time seems to be a key idea in the books.

But the artist of choice in Winter is Hepworth, famous for her statues with holes in them. So, it is perhaps appropriate that Art, one of the main characters, says at one point

So I think of him, and I think of the word father, and it’s kind of like there’s a cut-out empty space in my head. I quite like it. I can fill it any way I like. I can leave it empty.

And we, as readers who know something about Art that he does not know himself, can relate to what Smith has someone say about Hepworth

Yes, he says, and she does that, Hepworth, I think, puts the holes through what she makes, because she wants people to think about exactly what you just said, time, and ancient things, but also because she really just wants them to want to touch what she makes, you know, to be reminded about things that are quite physical, sensory, immediate, he says.

Art's statement about his father means something more to us, or at least something different.

Having read Autumn and Winter back to back over the last 2-3 days, I am inordinately excited about the upcoming release of Spring (which is why I have re-read these first two) because my re-reads have definitely given me more of picture of what Smith is doing overall in her quartet (the way she is compressing and overlaying time, the way she is drawing parallels between past and present, the way...) and because the brief comments I have seen about Spring (I am trying to avoid them, but some sneak through) suggest this starts to come to fruition in the next volume.

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ORIGINAL REVIEW
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Ok, so I am biased and it may be that Ali Smith gets an extra star simply for being Ali Smith. But, even then, when you stop to consider what Smith has done in this second book of her seasonal quartet, it is breathtaking! Ali Smith has her own unique style. Given her very obvious love for Dickens and all things Dickensian, I wanted to say her style is Smithsonian, but someone else has already appropriated that word. No one writes like Smith with such joy in words.

At the Man Booker short list event in Cheltenham, Smith spoke about the difficulties of time in the novel. In a piece of music, several people can sing at the same time, and about different topics/times if that’s what the composer wants. In a novel, we can only read one set of words at a time. And this is a frustration for some novelists.

In Winter, Smith plays with this idea of time in a novel. This makes for a fairly complicated structure to the book which consists of multiple flashbacks and flash forwards. It can be tricky to keep track of all the different threads being covered.

That’s one of the things stories and books can do, they can make more than one time possible at once.

Well, they can when Smith writes them.

We are dealing with four main characters: Sophia, her sister, Iris, her son Art (Arthur) and a girl Art has paid to pretend to be his girlfriend for Christmas with his mother, Lux. Art needs a girlfriend because he has just broken up with Charlotte who was supposed to be spending Christmas with him at his mother’s, but she is now, instead, sabotaging his Twitter feed to such an extent that he dares not turn on his phone.

Lux is a fascinating character (somewhat reminiscent of Amber in The Accidental who arrives and disrupts a family occasion). Lux is, of course, both the bringer of light and a soap. And in this story the girl called Lux brings both illumination and cleansing. She is not British, but she came to the UK because of Shakespeare’s play Cymbeline.

Cymbeline, he says. The one about poison, mess, bitterness, then the balance coming back. The lies revealed. The losses compensated.

And that’s what Winter is about. Sophia and Iris have fallen out and not spoken for many years. Art has broken up with Charlotte. Then Lux happens.

And, in the mix with this story of a family gathering (Christmas is in Winter and Christmas is about family gatherings), Smith flashes back and forwards to earlier times in Sophia’s and Iris’s history. Primarily, amongst many other historical references, she visits the Greenham Common protests and pulls them forward to today.

It seems to me that one of the things Smith is trying to do in her quartet is ground or embed the events and attitudes of our current time in their underlying history. She wants to unite “now� and “then� because “now� means very little unless you understand “then�. In Winter, “now� very much is “now�: we cover events up to the summer of 2017.

Brexit and its implications are still part of the story (Christmas and “no room at the inn� is paralleled with UK and “no more room�). Trump is part of the story.

And, as with Pauline Boty in Autumn, there is a female artist. In Winter this artist is perhaps mentioned fewer times or in less detail, (Update: this comment comes from my ignorance of Hepworth - some basic research after reading shows that she is actually present, if not named, from the very beginning) but her role in the overall aim of the story is very clear. She is Barbara Hepworth:

Yes, he says, and she does that, Hepworth, I think, puts the holes through what she makes, because she wants people to think about exactly what you just said, time, and ancient things, but also because she really just wants them to want to touch what she makes, you know, to be reminded about things that are quite physical, sensory, immediate, he says.

Hepworth’s work is like what Smith is aiming for (and, for me, achieving) in the way she seeks to unite past and present. In a comment on Hepworth, there is a quote that it seems to me applies equally to Smith’s writing:

She walks round the sculpture. It makes you walk round it, it makes you look through it from different sides, see different things from different positions. It’s also like seeing inside and outside something at once

And also in a comment that could apply equally to Smith’s writing, we read of Kepler

Kindred means family, what I’m saying is he thought that truth and time are sort of related, family to each other.

And

And he was a man who paid things attention up close as well as far away.

Winter contains far more meditation on the season it is named after than Autumn did.

That’s what winter is: an exercise in remembering how to still yourself then how to come pliantly back to life again.

…the shift, the reversal, from increase of darkness to increase of light, revealed that a coming back of light was at the heart of midwinter equally as much as the waning of light.

I could write for hours about this book, but I cannot do it justice and the best thing is if you read it for yourself. Everyone should read it, especially the final quarter which made me laugh and cry in equal measure. One final quote which really made me laugh:

The man who wrote the dictionary. Johnson. Not Boris. The opposite of Boris. A man interested in the meanings of words, not one whose interests leave words meaningless.

And I haven’t even talked about the floating head or the floating coastline.
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Meike Great review, thank you, Neil! Now I am even more excited to read this!


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Great review. I am only 100 pages in but loving it so far and preferring to autumn (about which I had some reservations). Having gone to a college whose main feature was a Barbara Hepworth statue I am looking forward to that piece also.


Neil Hepworth arrives late in the story - I was beginning to wonder if she'd make it!


Hugh Thanks Neil. Really looking forward to reading this but I can't justify buying it yet...


Neil I got book vouchers when I left my job ... so it cost me nothing!


Robert I enjoyed reading your review! I'm eagerly awaiting my copy


Hugh Cost is not the issue! The 50+ unread books on the physical shelf are the problem.


Neil Ah - good point! With Ali Smith, I tend to ignore anything else in the house already (including my wife) and just get on with reading it!


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Bartleby I want it so much! Thanks for the review :)


message 10: by Doug (new) - rated it 4 stars

Doug Envious, but my copy should arrive this week, so won't be far behind! :-)


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Neil. Just finished this and I think Hepworth is there from the very beginning.


message 12: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil I agree. I do not know much about Hepworth but, having done some basic research since finishing the book, I now see that she is indeed there from the very first pages.


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Neil And I am glad I invested some of yesterday into looking at Hepworth on the internet because not only is her work fascinating but it made Smith’s book even better!


message 14: by Paul (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paul Fulcher "Hepworth is there from the very beginning" - must admit I'd missed that.

And is it only me who finds myself playing Ali Smith seasonal quartet bingo? I'm on page 50 and I've already filled most of my card - I'm just waiting for the thinly disguised version of the popular light entertainment TV show: my money's on Strictly popping up somewhere.


message 15: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil Google “Hepworth head�


message 17: by Paul (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paul Fulcher I think you can see the room Gumble and I shared in 1987-8 on the right of that photo.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Yes I think our room is on there


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer I think the other really crucial Hepworth sculpture is "nesting stones" - this motif reappears at various times throughout the book (for example with Sophia and Iris in the past and present day, and with Art and Lux), then as the actual sculpture and then (my interpretation) you realise that the floating head eventually metamorphosises into the smaller of the two stones, which Sophia was given by Art's real father.


message 20: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil Nice one! Thanks.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Any thoughts on the floating coastline. I was seeing it as based on some of the imagery the (real) Charlotte places in Art's sub-conscious - the "shelf the size of Wales" about to break off Antarctica and her "quartered" kingdom/chicken nightmares.


message 22: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil I haven’t worked that bit out yet. Interesting thoughts, though.


message 23: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil Things that might also be a factor. Lux's description of walking along a street and it all going dark and she suddenly is aware of all her ancestors over her head pressing down. Or, less likely, Sophia's meditation on the first dog in space.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Definitely agree on Lux's description - and I think she actually shares that when Art asks her for views on whether she has seen any "coastlines". I had the impression though that Lux was more generalising the question to "seeing things".

There is a clear Hepworth link as well - as it is noted in the book an early inspiration for Hepworth was the Yorkshire coastline of her holidays, and as it more widely recognised the Cornish coastline was a major inspiration for her and the reason she set up her studio (where she eventually died and which Art's real father is visiting when he meets Art's mother) in Cornwall. Some of her wooden sculptures are explicitly meant to have been based on the coastline, but they don't seem to resemble Art's vision.


Henry with Paul on Ali Smith bingo!


message 26: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil In a quartet of related novels, I would expect there to be some overlapping of themes.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer I am with Neil. The overlap of themes is what impressed me here and what will make this a single artistic endeavour. The work of both Boty and Hepworth features lots of repeating ideas and themes. It’s what makes them artists with a recognisable body of work.


message 28: by Paul (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paul Fulcher I'm really struggling with this one, just isn't working for me. Maybe one to revisit another time. Think I had too great expectations and ended up with a Christmas carol instead.


message 29: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil Shame, but no point forcing yourself to read a book you don’t like. On Christmas Carol, I am still trying to fit three ghosts into Winter: given Smith’s love of Dickens I have a feeling they are there (the head and the coastline may be two of them, Lux another - but that may be forcing things because I want them to happen).


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer For anyone interested in exploring the overlap of artistic themes in the first two parts of this quartet - I have tried to concentrate on these in my review
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message 31: by Paul (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paul Fulcher Why does Art give Lux three matches?


message 32: by Paul (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paul Fulcher And we all seem to have missed that Daniel Gluck reappears


message 33: by Jane (new) - rated it 4 stars

Jane The matches confused me as well...


message 34: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil

I think.


message 35: by Doug (new) - rated it 4 stars

Doug I had also originally thought (and posted) about The Little Match Girl, but then thought about it and think that's a stretch, and deleted it...earlier in the book, Lux talks about matches (top of p. 288) and think it is just referring to her wish for them.


message 36: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil That’s probably where I got the idea from. But I think you are probably right, although I think in the story (not Smith’s) she does light 3 matches.


LittleSophie Couldn't agree more. Wonderful, wonderful Ali Smith!


Cheri Wonderful review, Neil. I especially loved your thorough coverage of this, but my favourite was "I wanted to say her style is Smithsonian, but someone else has already appropriated that word. " I think she would approve.


Roger Brunyate It seems to me that one of the things Smith is trying to do in her quartet is ground or embed the events and attitudes of our current time in their underlying history?

Neil, that is a superb observation, and indeed your whole review is magnificent. It took me hours to write mine; you must have spent days!

Responding now in part to the comment chain above, I do not quite see the closeness of the parallel between Hepworth and Boty in the two novels. Boty is, let’s face it, a relatively minor artist given enormous coverage in Autumn; Hepworth is a truly major one, but her role in Winter is much less significant—the distantly presiding deity rather than a parallel protagonist. But in general what I loved about this second book is that the art layer is kept relatively far in the background, where—paradoxically—they can assert an even more pervasive influence.

I started by thinking that this was a less composed work than its predecessor. I ended by realizing that the composition is in fact even more controlled, because that much less obvious. Roger.


message 40: by Jay (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jay Chi This is a stunning review Neil. Would love to hear further thoughts on the floating head or the floating coastline.


Barbara I agree to giving Ali Smith an extra star just for being Ali Smith!🙆


message 42: by Andi (new) - rated it 5 stars

Andi Thank you your brilliant review of this beautiful book. Ali Smith with her stunning work!


Denise Excellent review. You put into words all the things I felt as I read the book. Smith is a singular writer, who challenges readers to go along with her, then rewards them for their trust. But what about the head/stone/landscape?


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer I did not have time to do a full re-read of Autumn and Winter ahead of my surprise early copy of Spring. However I did page through them both and like you I can’t think how I (and pretty every one else) initially missed the connection first time round. What were we thinking of. Especially with Hepworth explicitly named in the first book, let alone the postcard.


message 45: by Neil (new) - rated it 5 stars

Neil In retrospect, it is amazing that so many of us missed that link. Not helped by the author telling Paul there was no link other than SA4A, I suppose. Cheeky! But I found it quite a different book to read a) so soon after reading Autumn and b) knowing the link as I started reading.


Bobby Scott Can someone shed more light on the connection between the two characters from Autumn and Winter? I fear I am missing an important link.


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Neil (view spoiler)


message 48: by Paul (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paul Fulcher I will put in spoilers but

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Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer And the connections increase in Spring.


message 50: by Abi (new)

Abi Hi Neil do you think I should read Autumn before reading this book Winter? Unfortunately I was gifted winter only.... wouldn't want to waste the read by not having read Autumn!!! Thanks a lot


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