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Eragon (Inheritance, #1)
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1.5 stars - considering the author's young age at the time of writing.
When Eragon first was published, it was hyped very much - a teenage author writing a YA fantasy novel of such quality, and so on and so forth.
Reading it now for the first time ever, well past my teenage years, I really don't know how this could have gotten so big. It is exactly the kind of story you'd expect a 15-year-old fantasy reader would write: it basically is a mix-up copy/fan-fiction of the things he was reading, such as The Lord of the Rings, The Earthsea Quartet, The Hobbit, maybe a bit of the The Abhorsen Trilogy Box Set and the first volumes of A Song of Ice and Fire on the side. And those are only the ones I could identify at first glance.
There is no internal development in the main character, as you should expect from a classic hero on his or her quest: He starts as a sulky teenage boy who thinks he is a lot cleverer than he is on a farm, and ends as a sulky teenage superhero who thinks he is much cleverer than he is with magical powers, a dragon, a big sword and a crush on an elf. Also, his learning progress in, well, everything is absolutely unrealistic and, thus, boring. At least, to balance his superhero boy wonder out, Paolini might have left him an illiterate. But then, at fifteen, you want your characters to be super-everything.
The plot twists were unsurprising (of course the egg-shaped stone is a dragon egg; of course his old mentor dies, revealing himself to be the "last rider"; of course Eragon saves the day by killing the "boss", to use gaming terms, singlehandedly; etc.) and the foreshadowing blunt (of course Murtagh is his half-brother - I checked my suspicions after I read his background story). The dynamics among the characters were often only logical from an adolescent's point of view.
Another point that really bothered me were names of places and people: partly just badly or not at all disguised copies from the fantasy fiction the author has been reading, partly indiscriminately taken from all kinds of "places" (legends, myths, etc.) for the cool sound, without bothering to check if they fit together.
It was a bit of a mystery to me how something like this could have gotten published without a very rigid (and necessary) editing removing or reshaping the too obviously "inspired" passages and parts and style flaws with the young author. (I think it could have been a rather good book with that kind of help.) Reading the author's portrait at the back of my edition, I instantly knew how this got published: mum and dad working in the publishing industry might have been a bit of an advantage there. Possibly mum and dad also weren't the fantasy-versed editors who would have spotted their son's bookshelf in his book.
Also I think that Eragon might work quite well for a teenage audience with little or no previous "contact" to the fantasy genre. Then the story might seem novel, original and unique, and the characters very relatable in their adolescent mind-sets and behaviour. Once you are older or more versed in the fantasy genre as a first-time-reader, Eragon looses any magic it might have possessed.
As exceptionally young authors go, there have been more impressive ones since, like The Peculiar-author Stefan Bachmann. Therefore the saving grace of young age only added 0.5 stars to my rating.
If it weren't for this having been a buddy read, I probably would have given up on the book once Brom was dead at the latest.
When Eragon first was published, it was hyped very much - a teenage author writing a YA fantasy novel of such quality, and so on and so forth.
Reading it now for the first time ever, well past my teenage years, I really don't know how this could have gotten so big. It is exactly the kind of story you'd expect a 15-year-old fantasy reader would write: it basically is a mix-up copy/fan-fiction of the things he was reading, such as The Lord of the Rings, The Earthsea Quartet, The Hobbit, maybe a bit of the The Abhorsen Trilogy Box Set and the first volumes of A Song of Ice and Fire on the side. And those are only the ones I could identify at first glance.
There is no internal development in the main character, as you should expect from a classic hero on his or her quest: He starts as a sulky teenage boy who thinks he is a lot cleverer than he is on a farm, and ends as a sulky teenage superhero who thinks he is much cleverer than he is with magical powers, a dragon, a big sword and a crush on an elf. Also, his learning progress in, well, everything is absolutely unrealistic and, thus, boring. At least, to balance his superhero boy wonder out, Paolini might have left him an illiterate. But then, at fifteen, you want your characters to be super-everything.
The plot twists were unsurprising (of course the egg-shaped stone is a dragon egg; of course his old mentor dies, revealing himself to be the "last rider"; of course Eragon saves the day by killing the "boss", to use gaming terms, singlehandedly; etc.) and the foreshadowing blunt (of course Murtagh is his half-brother - I checked my suspicions after I read his background story). The dynamics among the characters were often only logical from an adolescent's point of view.
Another point that really bothered me were names of places and people: partly just badly or not at all disguised copies from the fantasy fiction the author has been reading, partly indiscriminately taken from all kinds of "places" (legends, myths, etc.) for the cool sound, without bothering to check if they fit together.
It was a bit of a mystery to me how something like this could have gotten published without a very rigid (and necessary) editing removing or reshaping the too obviously "inspired" passages and parts and style flaws with the young author. (I think it could have been a rather good book with that kind of help.) Reading the author's portrait at the back of my edition, I instantly knew how this got published: mum and dad working in the publishing industry might have been a bit of an advantage there. Possibly mum and dad also weren't the fantasy-versed editors who would have spotted their son's bookshelf in his book.
Also I think that Eragon might work quite well for a teenage audience with little or no previous "contact" to the fantasy genre. Then the story might seem novel, original and unique, and the characters very relatable in their adolescent mind-sets and behaviour. Once you are older or more versed in the fantasy genre as a first-time-reader, Eragon looses any magic it might have possessed.
As exceptionally young authors go, there have been more impressive ones since, like The Peculiar-author Stefan Bachmann. Therefore the saving grace of young age only added 0.5 stars to my rating.
If it weren't for this having been a buddy read, I probably would have given up on the book once Brom was dead at the latest.
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Reading Progress
September 7, 2017
– Shelved
September 7, 2017
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1.19%
"A chance pick up at Oxfam as I'd left my book at home by accident."
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9
September 25, 2017
– Shelved as:
to-read
June 5, 2018
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Started Reading
June 5, 2018
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7.16%
"So far, I don't get what the hype was all about. Concerning books written by an author of that young age, Stefan Bachmann has done a better job, I feel. Even the names are not congruently chosen..."
page
54
June 6, 2018
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12.47%
"Really? THAT is your dragon's name?! I wouldn't even call a guinea pig that."
page
94
June 6, 2018
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17.77%
"Only an author in puberty could describe the sufferings of a self-absorbed adolescent so unreflectedly. This is decidedly not an all-ager, but can possibly be appreciated by adolescents a lot."
page
134
June 8, 2018
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24.14%
"So he has an older, mysterious mentor now. And a dragon with a tacky name who tries to make him behave like a person instead of a pubescent nuisance while only being a few weeks old. (Yep, still not in love with this.)"
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182
June 9, 2018
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25.46%
"If he is having any more "deep" thoughts and revelations, I'm going to eat the book. Also, somebody seems to have been playing a bit of Diablo II for inspiration. I seem to remember that slaughter pile..."
page
192
June 11, 2018
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28.38%
"And here we go, almost word for word plagiarism from Ursula LeGuin."
page
214
June 13, 2018
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33.02%
""Everything about me is turning hard" - worst sentence ever written for an adolescent hero by an equally adolescent author. x-D"
page
249
June 17, 2018
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38.73%
"Why would he not recognize the voice in his head as not Saphira's?"
page
292
June 17, 2018
– Shelved as:
to-read
June 17, 2018
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40.72%
"Dear Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ, please stop effing up my book sorting. Dear Mr Paolini, research is a great tool to find out that a completely illiterate adolescent will not be able to learn to read in a mere week."
page
307
June 17, 2018
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40.72%
"Dear Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ, please stop effing up my book sorting. Dear Mr Paolini, research is a great tool to find out that a completely illiterate adolescent will not be able to learn to read in a mere week."
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307
June 18, 2018
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42.71%
"Curious to learn more about Solembum, worried that I won't, as they'll be off somewhere else. Also wondering whether Paolini had read the Abhorsen Chronicles and thus was aware of Mogget..."
page
322
June 19, 2018
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49.73%
"If one wishes to use "old-fashioned" language, at least be correct: "May thee [...] understand [...]" is linguist BS. It should say "May'st thou [...] understand [...]", as English at the time of thee and thou still had quite some inflections. Research, research, research..."
page
375
June 28, 2018
–
75.33%
"Oh please don't let Murtagh be Eragon's half-brother or something equally corny, recycled and blunt..."
page
568
June 28, 2018
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76.53%
"... and Murtagh's background story is an bearably self-contradictory mess. Did anyone actually edit this who wasn't the author's mum and dad, and ever so proud and supportive of him?"
page
577
June 28, 2018
–
79.97%
"I checked, as I don't intend to read on in the series: Murtagh IS his half-brother... boooooooooooooooh......"
page
603
June 29, 2018
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Finished Reading
May 25, 2019
– Shelved as:
fantasy-high
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If you look in the english book Shops where I first discovered the first part, ist listed as Young Readers book. From age 12 to 16 or 18.
He had stolen a lot of parts from other writers. LotR firsthand but others also.
Orks, Oger, dwarfs are all described in other forms before.
For a Young writer i find it a good work.
