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The Toymakers by Robert Dinsdale
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bookshelves: coming-of-age, contemporary-fantasy, family-dynamics

"Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere."
—Albert Einstein

Small-town teen, Cathy Wray,
finds herself in the family way.
(I'm a poet, yet didn't know it).
She is also desperate to escape her parents, who want her pregnancy kept secret and the baby given up for adoption.
But then a serendipitous moment occurs; a highlighted ad in a newspaper’s situations vacant column: a position at a toymakers� store, Papa John's Emporium, in London.
As if guided by a deity, Cathy hightails it to the capital with a swollen belly and a runaway's dream of motherhood. She discovers the joint to be every bit as magical as she'd hoped; a place where saluting tin soldiers rub shoulders with eager Russian dolls, and where a pyramid of ballerinas stand en pointe, hoping to be bought.
The emporium is out of step with the outside world and the toys therein burst wonderfully to life in the imagination of customers, and readers, alike. To make the toys work, their creators, Emil and Kaspar, retain a child's perspective and I was lapping it up - a cynical adult once more flying the magic carpet of his childhood, or Robert Loggia dancing on a giant piano keyboard with Tom Hanks.

The book was subtly magical and so beautifully written.

In fact, up until the 40% mark, I was already declaring it to be my best read, thus far, in 2018.

Sadly though, like a toy bear that has lost much of its stuffing, the story began to sag in the middle.
The character development required fresh batteries and the slow pace of the story would have benefitted from a new winding mechanism.
This began as an epic tale of sibling rivalry; two brothers competing for their father’s (view spoiler) affections in a Legends of the Fall/Twelfth Night kind-of-way but, by the end, it had morphed into a Willy Wonka/Chitty Chitty Bang Bang piece of nonsense!
Such a shame, as it was initially so-o good, and promised much.

It’s only Dinsdale's exquisite prose that has stopped me from slinging this novel into three-star jail!
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Reading Progress

January 22, 2018 – Shelved as: to-read
January 22, 2018 – Shelved
April 27, 2018 – Started Reading
May 2, 2018 – Shelved as: coming-of-age
May 2, 2018 – Shelved as: contemporary-fantasy
May 2, 2018 – Shelved as: family-dynamics
May 2, 2018 – Finished Reading

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Jennifer ~ TarHeelReader Thank goodness for the prose because no one wants to be in three star jail! Loved your review, Kevin!


Kevin Ansbro Jennifer ~ TarHeelReader wrote: "Thank goodness for the prose because no one wants to be in three star jail! Loved your review, Kevin!"

Aww, thank you, Jennifer!
Appreciate you reading it. : )


Paromjit Wonderfully engaging review, Kevin...and sorry it was not a completely satisfying read. :)


Jules Great review, Kevin. I'm so pleased you were able to love at least part of this book :-)


Kevin Ansbro Paromjit wrote: "Wonderfully engaging review, Kevin...and sorry it was not a completely satisfying read. :)"

Thanks, Paromjit. : )
Parts of it were fab!


message 6: by Kevin (last edited May 02, 2018 04:12AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kevin Ansbro Jules wrote: "Great review, Kevin. I'm so pleased you were able to love at least part of this book :-)"

Thanks, Jules!
I was really excited in the early stages. The prose was exquisite and magic hung in the air. Then it slowed, like a toy robot whose batteries were running on empty...
I appreciate you reading my review! : )


message 7: by Bianca (new)

Bianca Playful review.


message 8: by Julie (new)

Julie Beware of Kevin, 3-star jailer!



I've missed your reviews, Kevin. This humorous rendition of yours puts everything right!


message 9: by Angela M (new)

Angela M “Three-star jail � ! I love that phrase , Kevin. I may have to use it sometime but I promise to credit you with it. Great review.


message 10: by Julie (new)

Julie G What a fun review, Kevin. (As always). You’ve been just a little too hard to find on here lately, but I’ve been hoping you’re riding a writing streak. Either way, thanks for the teaser.


Kevin Ansbro Bianca wrote: "Playful review."

Thanks, Bianca!


message 12: by Kevin (last edited May 02, 2018 05:46AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "Beware of Kevin, 3-star jailer!
I've missed your reviews, Kevin. This humorous rendition of yours puts everything right!"


Aww, thank you SO much, Julie. That means a great deal!

And I LOVED the graphic! : D


Kevin Ansbro Angela M wrote: "“Three-star jail � ! I love that phrase , Kevin. I may have to use it sometime but I promise to credit you with it. Great review."

Very kind, as ever, Angela. You can use my phrase anytime you wish! : )


Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "What a fun review, Kevin. (As always). You’ve been just a little too hard to find on here lately, but I’ve been hoping you’re riding a writing streak. Either way, thanks for the teaser."

Yes, I must apologise, Julie. I’m buried in the final sweep of ‘latest novel� edits, so haven’t had as much time for reading as I’d like. Normal service will resume: I miss reading when I’m writing and writing when I’m reading!
Thank you for noticing! : )


message 15: by Susanne (new)

Susanne Sorry this one lost its appeal part of the way through. It does sound magical though! Nice review.


message 16: by Laysee (new)

Laysee I enjoyed your entertaining review, Kevin. How fun that you extended the toy metaphor to your review. Brilliant!


message 17: by Angela M (new)

Angela M I keep thinking about your three star jail and it is so true for me when I rate a book 3 stars , I feel like I’m in jail when trying to write a review. The middle of the road is the hardest for me to write .


message 18: by Julie (new)

Julie G Kevin,
You, in the act of writing, is all for the greater good. Help us promote your work when you're done, okay??


Kevin Ansbro Susanne wrote: "Sorry this one lost its appeal part of the way through. It does sound magical though! Nice review."

Thanks, Susanne! I was thoroughly enjoying it but the story remained one-paced and pedestrian, then a whole load of ridiculousness was unleashed. Most readers of this book award it a solid five, though.


Kevin Ansbro Laysee wrote: "I enjoyed your entertaining review, Kevin. How fun that you extended the toy metaphor to your review. Brilliant!"

Most kind of you, lovely Lay See. : )
You know me, I have to get creative with my reviews...


Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "Kevin,
You, in the act of writing, is all for the greater good. Help us promote your work when you're done, okay??"


Most kind, Julie (hope the arm is on the mend).
I prefer such things to happen organically. I leave the self-promo to the pushy, self-aggrandising authors. Lord knows, there’s enough of them!! ; )


message 22: by Julie (new)

Julie G Well, sir, I'm your friend, so make sure I know about it at least, okay??


message 23: by Kevin (last edited May 02, 2018 04:00PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "Well, sir, I'm your friend, so make sure I know about it at least, okay??"

Thank you, Julie.
*blushes wildly*

On Twitter, I’m an author (a necessary evil), here, I’m a reader...


message 24: by Jaline (new) - added it

Jaline Excellent review, Kevin! This one is on my wishlist, and now I'm wondering how I will fare with the sagging middle and the wind-up key for the characters gone missing. Oh well . . . I might find out some day. 😊


Kevin Ansbro Jaline wrote: "Excellent review, Kevin! This one is on my wishlist, and now I'm wondering how I will fare with the sagging middle and the wind-up key for the characters gone missing. Oh well . . . I might find ou..."

Most kind, Jaline (as ever), but I would also like to direct you to the plethora of five-star reviews that this book has attracted. : )
This is a tremendous book that falls short in the characterisation department and whose storyline seemed to have one eye on a movie audience, rather than a literary one.


message 26: by Cheri (new) - added it

Cheri Fabulicious review, Kevin, even though you didn't love the 2nd 'half' as much, you won me over with your review!


Kevin Ansbro Cheri wrote: "Fabulicious review, Kevin, even though you didn't love the 2nd 'half' as much, you won me over with your review!"

Thank you, fabulicious Cheri.
This book had greatness stamped all over it, and initially put me in mind of A Gentleman in Moscow. But, for me, it didn’t live up to its glittering promise.


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Diane S ☔ Those darn middles, lol.


Kevin Ansbro Diane S � wrote: "Those darn middles, lol."

Ha! Thanks, Diane! : )


Kevin Ansbro Kimber wrote: "Brilliant review, Kevin! It's unfortunate the story unraveled in the middle.
The final sweep of editing for your new book is exciting. I look forward to another magnificent Ansbro creation!"


Thanks, Kimber, most kind! : )
Re. my latest novel, it’s 99% complete, but then there are the dreaded agent submissions (queries) to send off...


message 31: by Debbie (new)

Debbie Glad to see you back around, Kevin. You delivered a clever review, as always. WTG on adding the finishing touches to your novel!


Kevin Ansbro Debbie wrote: "Glad to see you back around, Kevin. You delivered a clever review, as always. WTG on adding the finishing touches to your novel!"

Thanks, Debbie!
I’m sorry I haven’t been around as much as I’d like but the writing part has temporarily arm-wrestled the reading part into submission.


Kevin Ansbro Kimber wrote: "Kevin wrote: "Kimber wrote: "Brilliant review, Kevin! It's unfortunate the story unraveled in the middle.
The final sweep of editing for your new book is exciting. I look forward to another magnifi..."


So kind! Thank you, Kimber!
*blushes wildly*


message 34: by Deanna (new)

Deanna Awesome review, Kevin!!


Kevin Ansbro Deanna wrote: "Awesome review, Kevin!!"

Ah, that’s so very kind of you, Dee! : )


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I think this review is exquisite and amusing Kevin, I very much enjoyed reading it. It's simply superb!!!


Kevin Ansbro Beverly~Lady B wrote: "I think this review is exquisite and amusing Kevin, I very much enjoyed reading it. It's simply superb!!!"

Aww, Beverly, you are so kind. Thank you very much!


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You're most welcome, Kevin!!


message 39: by Apatt (new)

Apatt Sounds like an interesting book, Kevin. Pity it sags in the middle, and also Mrs. Kevin doesn't like it, which disqualifies it for me.
If the emporium is out of step with the outside world, perhaps the EmQuartier is more your speed?


Kevin Ansbro Apatt wrote: "Sounds like an interesting book, Kevin. Pity it sags in the middle, and also Mrs. Kevin doesn't like it, which disqualifies it for me.
If the emporium is out of step with the outside world, perhaps..."


Thanks, Apatt!
Mrs Kevin lost patience with this book and would only have scored it three stars (but she is a harsher critic than I). : )


message 41: by Cecily (new)

Cecily The dreaded sagging middle.

(The book, not you or your charming review!)


Kevin Ansbro Cecily wrote: "The dreaded sagging middle.

(The book, not you or your charming review!)"


Thanks, Cecily! My middle show no signs of sagging yet! ; )


message 43: by Cheri (new) - added it

Cheri Love your review, Kevin, just lovely and charming. I'm disappointed for you by the last half going downhill, but I'm so intrigued that I think I have to add this!


Kevin Ansbro Cheri wrote: "Love your review, Kevin, just lovely and charming. I'm disappointed for you by the last half going downhill, but I'm so intrigued that I think I have to add this!"

Thank you, Cheri.
I'd be interested to see what you make of this one. It did become unnecessarily farcical, which is a real shame.


Frida Hultgren Good review. Couldn't agree more!


Kevin Ansbro Frida wrote: "Good review. Couldn't agree more!"

Thanks, Frida!
Promised more than it delivered.


message 47: by Sharyl (new)

Sharyl Nice review, Kevin. This does sound appealing, too bad it lost its muchness. (That's a word.) Good luck with your writing!


Kevin Ansbro Sharyl wrote: "Nice review, Kevin. This does sound appealing, too bad it lost its muchness. (That's a word.) Good luck with your writing!"

I'm happy with 'muchness', Sharyl. Lovely to hear from you! : )


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