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The Song of Achilles
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”He was a marvel, shaft after shaft flying from him, spears that he wrenched easily from broken bodies on the ground to toss at new targets. Again and again I saw his wrist twist, exposing its pale underside, those flute-like bones thrusting elegantly forward. My spear sagged forgotten to the ground as I watched. I could not even see the ugliness of the deaths anymore, the brains, the shattered bones that later I would wash from my skin and hair. All I saw was his beauty, his singing limbs, the quick flickering of his feet.�
Madeline Miller studied Latin and Ancient Greek from Brown University and even more interestingly studied at the Yale School of Drama, specializing in adapting classical tales for a modern audience. I ignored this book when it first came out because I had read The Iliad twice and plan to read it many more times if the Gods grant me enough time to do so. A reimagining of Homer’s words? There is enough debate over translations of the original source documentation without adding in additional controversy over Miller’s interpretation of events.
Or so I thought.
After all, aren’t these books designed for a “modern audience� who will never even attempt to read Homer? I am not the target audience, as there is very little modern about me. I have ancient book dust permanently lodged in my lungs. I cough, and the air is redolent with the scent of decaying leather and the intoxicating smell of the slightly hallucinatory book fungi. Miller is doing good work, though, bringing Homer to life for a new generation. Her books are not for me.
Or so I thought.
When her book Galatea came out, I barely even flinched. A mild flickering of interest, but I was up to my eyeballs in books to read so I easily dissuaded myself from giving it much thought. Deciding to read Galatea would also mean that I would need to read Song of Achilles first because I do believe that books by serious authors build upon one another. I wasn’t taking Miller serious...yet. Part of my resistance came from the fact that I’m not a big fan of Achilles. He might have been ”The Greatest Warrior of his Generation,� but I didn’t find him very heroic. Now Hector, poor doomed Hector, to me he was the hero of The Iliad. I didn’t really want to read a book glorifying Achilles and how effortless it was for him to kill a hundred Trojans in one lazy, bloody afternoon.
Or so I thought.
The lovely and talented Madeline Miller.
I fully expected Miller to fade back into the woodwork of academia, but then this year she published Circe. With one raised Nadalesque eyebrow, I thought to myself, now Circe is someone I don’t know nearly enough about. The five star reviews started raining down on me like thunderbolts from the fingers of Zeus. Cupid shot a quiver full of arrows at me, piercing me in numerous appendages until I looked like Saint Sebastian. If I could have gotten my hands on that pink tinted, chubby, precocious toddler, I’d have turned him over my knee and paddled him with his own bow. Really, I must confess that my new found love for Achilles, Patroclus, Briseis, Chiron, Odysseus, and even Madeline Miller herself could be the result of those love poison tipped arrows. Regardless, does it matter the reason why?
Even in an addled state, there is no way I would ever confuse great writing for poorly conceived writing. As I was reading through my notes and savoring favorite passages again, now that Cupid’s fog has cleared from my mind, I must say Miller is a wonderful, lyrical writer.
It all begins with a rape. The Greek Gods want to reward Peleus for being such a good subject and decide that he should be given a sea nymph named Thetis as his bride. ”It was considered their highest honor. After all, what mortal would not want to bed a goddess and sire a son from her? Divine blood purified our muddy race, bred heroes from dust and clay. And this goddess brought a greater promise still: the Fates had foretold that her son would far surpass his father. Peleus� line would be assured. But, like all the gods� gifts, there was an edge to it; the goddess herself was unwilling.�
The Gods whisper in his ear. Don’t even bother trying to woo her with kelp flowers, Aquaoir Ocean aged wine, or shrimp cocktail. The Greek Gods, being rampant assaulters of unsuspecting, pink cheeked, mortal maidens, have no compunction about advocating rape. Jump her on the beach, take her, and make her thine!
The Greek Islands are lousy with half Gods. You will meet many of them in the course of this story. Achilles is the greatest of them all. Greater than Hercules. His chosen companion is Patroclus, the disgraced and banished son of a king, an odd choice in many eyes as the closest friend of the greatest warrior. Patroclus is, after all, rather unremarkable at...well...everything. It doesn’t matter, though, because Achilles is good enough at everything for the both of them.
Thetis is rather annoyed at his choice. She doesn’t feel that Patroclus is good enough to spend so much time with her son. Her favorite greeting for Patroclus is: ”You will be dead soon enough.� With Patroclus being the narrator of this story, it is rather poor judgement on her part. Any quest I’ve been on I have always plied the narrator with honeyed wine and the most succulent figs in the hope that I would be rewarded in the prose and poetry of his/her telling of the tale.
Achilles and Patroclus by Barry J.C. Purves
Homer skates around the closeness between Achilles and Patroclus, although much can be read between the lines. There is also the possibility that some homophobic Christian hundreds of years later made some deft corrections to the original, obscuring any overt reference to a homosexual relationship. Homer may have been blind, but his ears must have heard the rustling of the reed mats whether he was an “eye� witness to the Trojan War or an interpreter of events many years later. Madeline Miller wades into the sweaty bedsheet truth of the matter, and yes, the Greatest Warrior to ever live is light in his sandals.
Miller puts flesh on these ancient bones, Gods and mortals alike, and brings a freshness to one of our most venerated stories. Though I resisted, it turns out that Madeline Miller was writing these books for me. She has also given me a burning desire to read The Iliad again while her interpretation is still imprinted so deeply in my mind. I have a feeling my reading experience will be deepened and her observations will glow like phosphorus between the lines.
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Madeline Miller studied Latin and Ancient Greek from Brown University and even more interestingly studied at the Yale School of Drama, specializing in adapting classical tales for a modern audience. I ignored this book when it first came out because I had read The Iliad twice and plan to read it many more times if the Gods grant me enough time to do so. A reimagining of Homer’s words? There is enough debate over translations of the original source documentation without adding in additional controversy over Miller’s interpretation of events.
Or so I thought.
After all, aren’t these books designed for a “modern audience� who will never even attempt to read Homer? I am not the target audience, as there is very little modern about me. I have ancient book dust permanently lodged in my lungs. I cough, and the air is redolent with the scent of decaying leather and the intoxicating smell of the slightly hallucinatory book fungi. Miller is doing good work, though, bringing Homer to life for a new generation. Her books are not for me.
Or so I thought.
When her book Galatea came out, I barely even flinched. A mild flickering of interest, but I was up to my eyeballs in books to read so I easily dissuaded myself from giving it much thought. Deciding to read Galatea would also mean that I would need to read Song of Achilles first because I do believe that books by serious authors build upon one another. I wasn’t taking Miller serious...yet. Part of my resistance came from the fact that I’m not a big fan of Achilles. He might have been ”The Greatest Warrior of his Generation,� but I didn’t find him very heroic. Now Hector, poor doomed Hector, to me he was the hero of The Iliad. I didn’t really want to read a book glorifying Achilles and how effortless it was for him to kill a hundred Trojans in one lazy, bloody afternoon.
Or so I thought.
The lovely and talented Madeline Miller.
I fully expected Miller to fade back into the woodwork of academia, but then this year she published Circe. With one raised Nadalesque eyebrow, I thought to myself, now Circe is someone I don’t know nearly enough about. The five star reviews started raining down on me like thunderbolts from the fingers of Zeus. Cupid shot a quiver full of arrows at me, piercing me in numerous appendages until I looked like Saint Sebastian. If I could have gotten my hands on that pink tinted, chubby, precocious toddler, I’d have turned him over my knee and paddled him with his own bow. Really, I must confess that my new found love for Achilles, Patroclus, Briseis, Chiron, Odysseus, and even Madeline Miller herself could be the result of those love poison tipped arrows. Regardless, does it matter the reason why?
Even in an addled state, there is no way I would ever confuse great writing for poorly conceived writing. As I was reading through my notes and savoring favorite passages again, now that Cupid’s fog has cleared from my mind, I must say Miller is a wonderful, lyrical writer.
It all begins with a rape. The Greek Gods want to reward Peleus for being such a good subject and decide that he should be given a sea nymph named Thetis as his bride. ”It was considered their highest honor. After all, what mortal would not want to bed a goddess and sire a son from her? Divine blood purified our muddy race, bred heroes from dust and clay. And this goddess brought a greater promise still: the Fates had foretold that her son would far surpass his father. Peleus� line would be assured. But, like all the gods� gifts, there was an edge to it; the goddess herself was unwilling.�
The Gods whisper in his ear. Don’t even bother trying to woo her with kelp flowers, Aquaoir Ocean aged wine, or shrimp cocktail. The Greek Gods, being rampant assaulters of unsuspecting, pink cheeked, mortal maidens, have no compunction about advocating rape. Jump her on the beach, take her, and make her thine!
The Greek Islands are lousy with half Gods. You will meet many of them in the course of this story. Achilles is the greatest of them all. Greater than Hercules. His chosen companion is Patroclus, the disgraced and banished son of a king, an odd choice in many eyes as the closest friend of the greatest warrior. Patroclus is, after all, rather unremarkable at...well...everything. It doesn’t matter, though, because Achilles is good enough at everything for the both of them.
Thetis is rather annoyed at his choice. She doesn’t feel that Patroclus is good enough to spend so much time with her son. Her favorite greeting for Patroclus is: ”You will be dead soon enough.� With Patroclus being the narrator of this story, it is rather poor judgement on her part. Any quest I’ve been on I have always plied the narrator with honeyed wine and the most succulent figs in the hope that I would be rewarded in the prose and poetry of his/her telling of the tale.
Achilles and Patroclus by Barry J.C. Purves
Homer skates around the closeness between Achilles and Patroclus, although much can be read between the lines. There is also the possibility that some homophobic Christian hundreds of years later made some deft corrections to the original, obscuring any overt reference to a homosexual relationship. Homer may have been blind, but his ears must have heard the rustling of the reed mats whether he was an “eye� witness to the Trojan War or an interpreter of events many years later. Madeline Miller wades into the sweaty bedsheet truth of the matter, and yes, the Greatest Warrior to ever live is light in his sandals.
Miller puts flesh on these ancient bones, Gods and mortals alike, and brings a freshness to one of our most venerated stories. Though I resisted, it turns out that Madeline Miller was writing these books for me. She has also given me a burning desire to read The Iliad again while her interpretation is still imprinted so deeply in my mind. I have a feeling my reading experience will be deepened and her observations will glow like phosphorus between the lines.
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I should have a review up sometime this week.

I definitely intend to read Circe!



Thank you Rachel! There is no better compliment than to be an inspiration to others. I appreciate your support!

Yeah Fagles is great! I probably will read The Odyssey again before returning to The Iliad. Wonderful translations.

I hope you do Amy! It was certainly an inspirational read for me. Thanks Amy!



Only yesterday I was thinking something similar. This may seem like a weird association, but I was thinking again about what we people do to the planet and all the other species. And aside from the negative feelings, there is always also that sense of wonder, my amazement of our abilities, our intellect, our passion. The price of everything incredible we have achieved is being paid by others too, but all the same, I can’t help being proud.
Part of my resistance came from the fact that I’m not a big fan of Achilles. He might have been ”The Greatest Warrior of his Generation,� but I didn’t find him very heroic. Now Hector, poor doomed Hector, to me he was the hero of The Iliad. I didn’t really want to read a book glorifying Achilles and how effortless it was for him to kill a hundred Trojans in one lazy, bloody afternoon.
I actually am happy to read about unpopular or not well liked characters in retellings. What is the point of reading over and over again about the known heroes? Well, there is a point, because every authorial voice is unique and it is always good to return to what you know and love, but I also like it when I happen to stumble upon something different from the popular take. I was very pleased when I discovered The Mists of Avalon, where Morgaine isn’t a villain. Not that she’s purely a hero either. She is a grey and very interesting character there. Well, in the book. In the movie adaptation she is an entirely positive character. I am glad that you loved this one so much! Recently I read Willie’s fantabulous review of Circe and instantly listed it. :) I will have to do the same with this one and her other books. :) And if you feel like getting to more retellings of The Illiad, you may try David Gemmell’s trilogy. Lord of The Silver Bow, Shield of Thunder and Fall of Kings. I own them and I like them. They feature mostly Aeneas and Hector’s wife, Andromache. But Hector himself, Odysseus and Cassandra too are well fleshed out. If this helps, Achilles actually has a very small part in it.
With one raised Nadalesque eyebrow
I thought that the happy eyebrows were my special thing. :) What does Nadalesque eyebrow mean? :)
Thank you so much for this magnificent review, Jeffrey! It excited me so much that it managed to make your prophesy about my eyebrows turning into caterpillars and falling out true. :) Ha! You gave me a good material. You say “You’re not blowing my skirt� and I will say “You’re not leaving me without eyebrows� :) I wonder which one is better :) Okay, yours is better. And this review too has laughter inducing gems. :)
The five star reviews started raining down on me like thunderbolts from the fingers of Zeus. Cupid shot a quiver full of arrows at me, piercing me in numerous appendages until I looked like Saint Sebastian. If I could have gotten my hands on that pink tinted, chubby, precocious toddler, I’d have turned him over my knee and paddled him with his own bow.
Who is St. Sebastian and what does he look like? :)

A good friend of mine who worked as a travel writer reached a point in his life where he quit reading new books and only read books he had enjoyed in the past. I puzzled on that for a while. With the advent of GR and my ability to share how I feel about books I've been encouraged me to go back and read books I've really enjoyed in the past. So maybe Edward was on to something.
As I was writing this review I kept thinking how do I ensnare Jaline into reading the whole review/ What pixie dust do I need to sprinkle to make it impossible for her to quit reading? Ha! Made you look! Made you read it! haha! :-)
Thanks Jaline! I had a bit more fun than usual with this one.

It reads easy too. I basically read it in one afternoon. Miller kept pulling me along. She definitely added warmth to my feelings for these characters. Thinking about reading The Iliad I know my experience will be enhanced by spending some time with Miller's interpretations. Thanks Diane!

I love seeing those 5 stars after your name! Thank you Arah-Lynda! I've got Circe queued up to read soon.

Vessey wrote: "I could not even see the ugliness of the deaths anymore, the brains, the shattered bones that later I would wash from my skin and hair. All I saw was his beauty, his singing limbs, the quick flicke..."
What is the point of reading over and over again about the known heroes? Achilles is a great character, wonderfully conceived. I don't want him to change. I just don't like him. Miller managed to warm up my feelings for him. She made him, the half god, more human.
I've thought about David Gemmell's series more than once. He is well respected. Too bad he died so young! RIP
Rafa Nadal is one of the best tennis players in the world and is from Spain. When he answers questions one eyebrow always shoots high up into his forehead as he concentrates on what he is saying.
The first painting I ever saw of Sebastian was this one:

Thanks Jaline! I had a bit more fun than usual with this one."
You are too funny, Jeffrey!! I could tell you were having fun with it, and the pixie dust was just be-dazzling! I didn't think it was possible but in this review, you out-did yourself! 😊

It’s stunning. Who painted it?
Good to hear that you’ve been considering David Gemmell. :) Indeed, too bad that he died before his time. Actually, the last book of the trilogy was written by his wife and she actually has her own novels. I wonder what she’s like outside of his world. I need to check her out.
When he answers questions one eyebrow always shoots high up into his forehead as he concentrates on what he is saying.
That’s a good approach. I have to use it. It would make me seem very serious and reliable. Yeah…My eyebrows are all-powerful. :)

Marco Basaiti is the artist
Nadal is Spanish, but he knows English and French and probably others as well. It shows how he is concentrating as he speaks.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Awesome!

"Miller puts flesh on these ancient bones, Gods and mortals alike, and brings a freshness to one of our most venerated stories. Though I resisted, it turns out that Madeline Miller was writing these books for me. "
I just wanted to put those two statements from your review together and say that I am ever so glad you stepped out of your comfort zone to explore this one and gift us with a marvelous review as a result, Jeffrey.
I remember being entranced by Arah-Lynda's review of this one so I shall look even more forward to tackling it myself. I have Circe kicking around as well so I think a back to back read might be in the future.

Sometimes when I'm in the right mood strange things can start to happen to the writing in my reviews. :-) Thanks Mike! I had a lot of fun writing this one. I think it is a wonderful idea to do a back to back read of Miller's books. I'm committed in some different directions, but Circe is going to float up very shortly maybe even this weekend. I'm so glad you enjoyed the review!


Thanks Henry! I believe reading this novel will enhance my next reading of Homer. I hope you get a chance to read this one!

I'll have to check out more of his work. Thanks :)


You are most welcome Orsolya! Thank you for the kind words. Reading is my passion and when anyone is passionate about something they try to spend as many waking hours they can being involved with what they are passionate about. I'm very organized and few minutes of the day get away from me. I sleep about six hours a night which gains me several hours that other people are blissfully sleeping. :-) I don't watch much TV. I read quickly with good comprehension. I work full time, but have some latitude given that I own part of the company. I'm so glad you enjoy my reviews!

Definitely do so Hanneke! I loved it. Thanks for the kind words!

Thanks Sue! Miller gave us such a great perspective of characters we thought we already knew!


I would have to agree Anna! Even Cupid could not keep me so enthralled through this book and Circe. Loved them both. Thanks Anna! Glad you enjoyed her books as much as I did.

Thank you! I take notes as I read so I can be sure to write about what most interested me about the book.

There are movies based on Troy and Achilles, but not one from this book.

However, despite Brad Pitt’s laughably bad performance in many of the scenes, in others he captures the wrath of Achilles quite well...the rage in his eyes outside the walls of Troy before he fights Hector is chilling.

Philip should probably check Troy out if he is looking for a movie verson of the events of this book.

Thank you Treece! I also really enjjoyed her Circe book as well. Both are brilliant!