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Moderan by David R. Bunch
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Moderan is back!

Moderan, the SF world of the future populated by men that are a combination flesh and futuristic metal forever seeking war, conquest and total domination. And the great war of Moderan is now underway. This New York Review Books edition of David R. Bunch’s classic is available for the first time since its original publication back in 1971.

Moderan men live in Srongholds. Moderan men live and breathe war - if they are not at war, Moderan men are forever setting plans for war.

Moderan men flowed from the pen of Missouri born and bred New Wave SF author David R. Bunch (1925-2000), the oddest duck in the fringe literary pond of odd ducks. Bunch found American culture with its obsession with progress via technology a repugnant nightmare. The smiling, smooth-talking, upbeat, success driven prototypical American male of the 1950s was for him the scum of the scum, a threat to nature and a violation of human decency.

As far as Bunch was concerned, the Golden Age of Science Fiction with its rocketships and up, up and away philosophy producing such works as Robert A. Heinlein’s Starship Troopers was, to put it bluntly, shit on a stick.

To provide a taste of the author’s vision, I’ll focus on three chapters from the collection:

INCIDENT IN MODERAN
The tale is told in the first-person from the perspective of one of the Moderan men who is sitting on a chair outside his Stronghold, bored stiff since his side voted for a temporary ceasefire to let the damaged enemy rebuild so they can get back to blasting. He’s quick to tell us their brief letup has nothing to do with fair play or love thy neighbor, no, no, no � its about having a bigger and better war and thus greater quantities of hate and better chances to win honors. After all, he goes on, his own fort, Stronghold 10, is FIRST IN WAR, FIRST IN HATE, AND FIRST IN THE FEARS OF THE ENEMY (author’s capitals).

What strikes me with these Moderan men is that they might be part human, part metal (making them nearly indestructible) but it is the weakest human parts: a capacity for boredom combined with an unrelenting desire to hate and destroy while instilling fear in others. And to have these human traits made next to invincible through technological innovation in metal parts. Now that’s dangerous!

At that moment, Moderan man catches sight of a “piece of movement,� a mutant form roaming around on the homeless plastic (in Moderan man's world, the ground is covered in plastic). The thing approaches Moderan man. We read: “When he stood before me, I felt disturbed. Strangely I felt somehow guilty, and ashamed, that he was so bent and twisted and mushy-looking with flesh. Oh, why can’t they all be hard and shining with metal, and clean, like we Stronghold masters are, with a very minimum of flesh-strip holding them in shape? It makes for such a well-ordered and hate-happy life, the way we masters are in Moderan, so shiny and steellike in our glory, with our flesh-strips few and played down and new-metal alloy the bulk of our bodily splendor. But I suppose there must always be lower forms, insects for us to stride on.�

I’m quite confident readers will clearly detect the condescension of Moderan man. More metal = greatness and superiority; more flesh = weakness and inferiority. Likewise, I’m sure an observant reader will pick up the odd cadence and meshing of words. This is uniquely David R. Bunch � he wanted his future world Moderan men to have their own vocabulary and way of speaking � not as developed or nearly as sophisticated as Anthony Burgess� Clockwork Orange, but the language in Moderan is distinctly his own creation.

It had been nearly fifty years since the publication of Moderan. Has our culture and society moved in the direction of Moderan man? Are you familiar with the latest developments within the world of Artificial Intelligence (AI)? How much is your life currently intertwined with technology? Is your computer an extension of you or are you an extension of your computer?

And how free are we from our own versions of condescension? Case in point: I recall reading how one world leader said immigrants from lands south of his border were not humans but animals. Sounds like Moderan might be judged by some as an ideal to be pursued.

THINKING BACK ((OUR GOD IS A HELPING GOD!)
Moderan man recounts the creation of his race. Back when the air and water turned poison, people looked to their God on high. Their God was silent. The air and land and water became more poisoned, poisoned to the point where the life of those flesh men and flesh women were on the brink of extinction. But then came the solution! Replacing flesh with steel; replacing weak hearts with strong artificial hearts. A new, improved race was born - steely Moderan man, a man no longer the plaything of time - Moderan man's artificial heart would beat forever; Moderan man's steel body would never grow old. A giant steel man stood in the middle of Moderan man's world to serve as his ideal and God. The air, earth and water could continue to grow poisonous -- no problem for Moderan man since Moderan man transcended such lowly organic considerations.

And what happened to those flesh men who refused new replacement hearts and steel? We read: "And then the flesh-man - oh, consider. CONSIDER him - the sick few that are left. Please do. Then perhaps you will see why we in our new-shining glory, flesh-strips few and played-down, pay homage to a massive stick of new-metal placed as our guide star when New Processes Land, our great Moderan, was new!"

New world, new land, new Moderan man - steel conquers all!

NO CRACKS OR SAGGING
Our future Moderan man recording these tapes reflects back on the first time he crossed over into the lands of Moderan. He comes across huge, long-legged tamping machines pounding the ground. He’s perplexed. Why are these steely monsters pummeling the earth? He’s quickly given the answer along with the background of the Moderan world by a lowly old man who has just enough metal parts to oversee these jumbo mechanisms.

Turns out, the machines are doing the flattening, the ultimate goal being to cover the earth with a white-grey sheet of uniform plastic. No trees, no plants, no animals, no oceans even (seen as excess water). The old man also tells the visitor new to Moderan that he, the newcomer, has all the markings that will schedule him for a procedure turning him into one of the elite-elite steel war-making Stronghold leaders that will secure the future for the new world of Moderan.

Here’s a snatch from the chapter that highlights how David R. Bunch developed his own vocabulary and sentence rhythm as part of creating his new Moderan world: “I looked about and far and wide strolled still on that smoothed and rolled-down earth the tall cylinder-carrying monsters, and many was the jammy ram that was hunched into the position and having a go at the jug-jug-jug, phoo-phoo-phoo, bam-bam-bam that was its main mission.�

Ah, to cross over into Moderan with its plastic and supercharged war machines. Sounds like 1950s America taken to absurd extremes. But how absurd really? Many Americans love all the war and plastic. Just look at the comic books, TV shows and movies. The more artificial, the less nature and more people, the more killing and destruction, the better. Moderan as the future USA - all life that isn’t human and isn’t American can go straight to hell.
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message 1: by Lars (new)

Lars Jerlach Fabulous review Glenn.


Glenn Russell Lars wrote: "Fabulous review Glenn."

Thanks as always, Lars. Really appreciate your reading and letting me know you enjoyed.


message 3: by Glenn (last edited May 25, 2018 10:38AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Glenn Russell Robert wrote: "Great review, sir! Thank you for your insight."

My pleasure, Robert! So glad you found something of value in my review. Nowadays I concentrate on writing reviews of novels and short story collections I judge well worth a reader's time. I hold myself to high standards in making sure I squeeze the juice of wisdom from a book and share my understanding in a way that is clear and enjoyable to read. When Moderan is published in August I plan to repost and expand my review a bit.


message 4: by Manny (new)

Manny Thank you Glenn! I read this when it came out (I must have been about 12), and I totally didn't get it. I remember wondering what the hell that was about. Just found it and reread it, and it was a whole lot better the second time.

Indeed very appropriate to our brave new hate-happy world...


message 5: by Lars (new)

Lars Jerlach ; )


message 6: by Glenn (last edited May 25, 2018 12:20PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Glenn Russell Manny wrote: "Thank you Glenn! I read this when it came out (I must have been about 12), and I totally didn't get it. I remember wondering what the hell that was about. Just found it here and reread it, and it w..."

Hey, my pleasure, Manny. Thanks so much for reading my review, posting your comment and including that link (I was totally unaware the story existed on-line). And that's spot-on - recognizing how the computer has taken over organic life and advances in AI are humming along, not to mention the current Moderan men political climate, David R. Bunch's stories speaks to us in expanded ways in 2018.


message 7: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Masterson That does sound dangerous! Fantastic review, Glenn!


message 8: by Manny (new)

Manny I think I am going to have to start using the word "hate-happy" more often.


Glenn Russell Jennifer wrote: "That does sound dangerous! Fantastic review, Glenn!"

Thanks so much, Jennifer! Yes, yes . . . I couldn't imagine a more harrowing combination. Isn't it something how with the combination of human flesh and robot metal the awareness and compassion dies and the boredom, hatred and the lust for destruction is alive and kicking.


message 10: by Glenn (last edited May 25, 2018 12:28PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Glenn Russell Manny wrote: "I think I am going to have to start using the word "hate-happy" more often."

If you get a copy of the new NYRB edition available in August I suspect you will have an entirely new vocabulary at your command.


message 11: by Brian (new)

Brian Glen, I consider myself your student. You always have the most unique and interesting reads. Thanks for your influence. :-)


Glenn Russell Brian wrote: "Glen, I consider myself your student. You always have the most unique and interesting reads. Thanks for your influence. :-)"

Very kind of you to say, Brian. It gives me great joy to share with great Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ friends such as yourself.


message 13: by Cheri (new)

Cheri Fabulous review, once again, Glenn.


Glenn Russell Cheri wrote: "Fabulous review, once again, Glenn."

Thanks very much, Cheri. The author has such a unique voice with so much to say about our current world culture. There are 47 chapters in this collection. I'm in the process of recording each chapter myself so I can listen to them as I take my daily walks. When the NYRB is finally published in August I will go back and expand my review and repost.


message 15: by s.penkevich (new)

s.penkevich Excellent review! I'm nearly finished with this one right now, it's just wildly fascinating. The language, the sheer creativity and philosophical discourse in a bizarrely violent world--this rules. And great points about how this book is quite modernly relative...


Glenn Russell Marita wrote: "Excellent review, Glenn!"

Thanks, Marita. NYRB did a great thing with the republication of Bunch's masterpiece.


Glenn Russell s.penkevich wrote: "Excellent review! I'm nearly finished with this one right now, it's just wildly fascinating. The language, the sheer creativity and philosophical discourse in a bizarrely violent world--this rules...."

Thanks, S. Bulls-eye - the language and creepiness - seems to fit the current political scene like a mechanical, plastic glove.


message 18: by Paul (new)

Paul Great review, Glenn - that all sounds pleasingly dystopian!


Glenn Russell Paul wrote: "Great review, Glenn - that all sounds pleasingly dystopian!"

Thanks, Paul. Moderan is one of the few dystopian novels narrated from the perspective of a semi-human participant. Powerful slam against a modern world turned violent and cruel.


message 20: by Forrest (new)

Forrest Great review, Glenn. I have to think that the updated equivalent would be a fiction showing more-or-less complete integration with internet search engines and voice-activated AI assistance to make our flesh more pure. Bunch was on to something.


Glenn Russell Forrest wrote: "Great review, Glenn. I have to think that the updated equivalent would be a fiction showing more-or-less complete integration with internet search engines and voice-activated AI assistance to make ..."

Bullseye, Forrest. A number of SF authors pick up on that combination of human with AI. With Bunch, the human parts are the least likeable: bloodthirsty, crude, callous, egocentric, destructive, dimwitted. Not a whit of those more tender parts: love, compassion, refinement, grace, beauty, elegance.


message 22: by Jo (new) - rated it 4 stars

Jo Sé Ordered this from eBay, came back German language


message 23: by Glenn (last edited Nov 28, 2020 07:34PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Glenn Russell Jo wrote: "Ordered this from eBay, came back German language"

Not good, Jo. If you want a great English language edition, go with New York Review Books with an Intro by Jeff VanderMeer. Available via Amazon.


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