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2024 : YEAR OF DNFS
I’m determined to actually read the books that have been squatting on my shelves for YEARS, and because of some Poor Life Choices� I suspect some of them are gonna be dnfed with extreme prejudice. First victim : Connie Willis, an sf author who wrote two of my favourite sf short stories, “Fire Watch� and “All my Darling Daughters�.
INFODUMPS
Science fiction is notorious for infodumping and Connie is very bad at this from the get go :
”Are you familiar with the new RIPT scan?�
Joanna shook her head. “Is it similar to a PET scan?�
He nodded. “They both measure your brain activity, but the RIPT scan is exponentially faster and more detailed. Plus, it uses chemical tracers, not radioactive ones, so the number of scans per subject doesn’t have to be limited. It simultaneously photographs the electrochemical activity in different subsections of the brain for a 3-D picture of neural activity in the working grain. Or the dying brain.�
There is even a little kid who does infodumping :
”Look,� Maisie said. “This is the Great Molasses Flood. It happened in 1919.� She pointed to a grainy black and white photo of what looked like an oil slick. “These huge tanks broke and all the molasses poured out and drowned everybody. Twenty-one people…�
LANGUAGE WAY TOO ROMCOMMY
”Can you give me the extension for CICU?� he said “I –�
“It’s 4502,� a cute blond nurse said, coming up to the nurse’s station. “Are you looking for Joanna Lander?�
“Yes,� he said gratefully. “Do you know where she is?�
“No,� she said, looking at him through her lashes. “but I know where she might me. In Pediatrics…�
“Thanks," he said, hanging up the phone. “Can you tell me how to get to Peds? I’m new here.�
“I know,� she said, smiling coyly. “You’re Dr Wright, right? I’m Tish.�
I thought I was suddenly reading
I’m determined to actually read the books that have been squatting on my shelves for YEARS, and because of some Poor Life Choices� I suspect some of them are gonna be dnfed with extreme prejudice. First victim : Connie Willis, an sf author who wrote two of my favourite sf short stories, “Fire Watch� and “All my Darling Daughters�.
INFODUMPS
Science fiction is notorious for infodumping and Connie is very bad at this from the get go :
”Are you familiar with the new RIPT scan?�
Joanna shook her head. “Is it similar to a PET scan?�
He nodded. “They both measure your brain activity, but the RIPT scan is exponentially faster and more detailed. Plus, it uses chemical tracers, not radioactive ones, so the number of scans per subject doesn’t have to be limited. It simultaneously photographs the electrochemical activity in different subsections of the brain for a 3-D picture of neural activity in the working grain. Or the dying brain.�
There is even a little kid who does infodumping :
”Look,� Maisie said. “This is the Great Molasses Flood. It happened in 1919.� She pointed to a grainy black and white photo of what looked like an oil slick. “These huge tanks broke and all the molasses poured out and drowned everybody. Twenty-one people…�
LANGUAGE WAY TOO ROMCOMMY
”Can you give me the extension for CICU?� he said “I –�
“It’s 4502,� a cute blond nurse said, coming up to the nurse’s station. “Are you looking for Joanna Lander?�
“Yes,� he said gratefully. “Do you know where she is?�
“No,� she said, looking at him through her lashes. “but I know where she might me. In Pediatrics…�
“Thanks," he said, hanging up the phone. “Can you tell me how to get to Peds? I’m new here.�
“I know,� she said, smiling coyly. “You’re Dr Wright, right? I’m Tish.�
I thought I was suddenly reading

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January 21, 2019
– Shelved
January 21, 2019
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to-read-sf-novels
February 5, 2024
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Started Reading
February 6, 2024
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abandoned
February 6, 2024
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sf-novels-aaargh
February 6, 2024
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