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The narrator is a millennial, a successful writer, a valetudinarian. There’s no plot. The novel’s character and verbiage driven. He likes multisyllabic words but don’t we all? He drives around Brooklyn and Manhattan. He takes the subway. He walks to a bar in DUMBO to see vaguely realized friends. He lends an activist the use of his shower and cooks a meal for him. He fucks a woman who immediately rejects him. He has heart problems. He sees the need for reform of capitalism, and praises the Park Slope Food Coop. There are a few unfortunate sentences:
“Is that why you’ve exchanged a modernist valorization of difficulty as a mode of resistance to the market for the fantasy of coeval readership?� (p. 93)
Another show-stopper: “Only an urban experience of the sublime was available to me because only then was the greatness beyond calculation the intuition of community.� (p. 108)
These are what I think of as dream killers if, indeed, as John Gardner said, the narrative is the dream. But ultimately in a text so brilliant they’re momentary untowardnesses. Like a growling stomach at a wedding. What I especially like is Lerner’s ability to take relatively recent news events—like the New York Times’s story that Park Avenue Co-op members were sending their nannies to do their monthly labor (2011)—and fearlessly incorporate them into the story. And I thought Ali Smith was rushing things.
“It was the kind of exchange, although exchange isn’t really the word, with which I‘d grown familiar, a new bio-political vocabulary for expressing racial and class anxiety: instead of claiming brown and black people were biologically inferior, you claimed they were � for reasons you sympathized with, reasons that weren’t really their fault � compromised by the food and drink they ingested; all those artificial dyes had darkened them on the inside. Your child, who had never so much as sipped a high fructose carbonated beverage containing phosphoric acid and E150d, was a more sensitive instrument: purer, smarter, free of violence. This way of thinking allowed one to deploy the vocabularies of sixties radicalism � ecological awareness, anticorporate agitation, etc. � in order to justify the reproduction of social inequality. It allowed you to redescribe the caring for your own genetic material � feeding Lucas the latest in coagulated soy juice � as altruism: it’s not just good for Lucas, it’s good for the planet. But from those who out of ignorance or desperation have allowed their children’s digestive tracts to know deep-fried, chemically processed chicken, those who happen to be, in Brooklyn, disproportionately black and Latino, Lucas must be protected at whatever cost.� (p. 98)
There’s much more here I’m not touching on. Climate Change—Hurricane Sandy; to become or not to become a father; a writer’s residency in Marfa, etc. It’s highly autobiographical. There’s too much post modernist hoodoo but the satire is brilliant. I think it an excellent novel of New York literary life. Others that spring to mind include Sigrid Nunez’s recent The Friend and Edmund White’s harrowing The Farewell Symphony.
“Is that why you’ve exchanged a modernist valorization of difficulty as a mode of resistance to the market for the fantasy of coeval readership?� (p. 93)
Another show-stopper: “Only an urban experience of the sublime was available to me because only then was the greatness beyond calculation the intuition of community.� (p. 108)
These are what I think of as dream killers if, indeed, as John Gardner said, the narrative is the dream. But ultimately in a text so brilliant they’re momentary untowardnesses. Like a growling stomach at a wedding. What I especially like is Lerner’s ability to take relatively recent news events—like the New York Times’s story that Park Avenue Co-op members were sending their nannies to do their monthly labor (2011)—and fearlessly incorporate them into the story. And I thought Ali Smith was rushing things.
“It was the kind of exchange, although exchange isn’t really the word, with which I‘d grown familiar, a new bio-political vocabulary for expressing racial and class anxiety: instead of claiming brown and black people were biologically inferior, you claimed they were � for reasons you sympathized with, reasons that weren’t really their fault � compromised by the food and drink they ingested; all those artificial dyes had darkened them on the inside. Your child, who had never so much as sipped a high fructose carbonated beverage containing phosphoric acid and E150d, was a more sensitive instrument: purer, smarter, free of violence. This way of thinking allowed one to deploy the vocabularies of sixties radicalism � ecological awareness, anticorporate agitation, etc. � in order to justify the reproduction of social inequality. It allowed you to redescribe the caring for your own genetic material � feeding Lucas the latest in coagulated soy juice � as altruism: it’s not just good for Lucas, it’s good for the planet. But from those who out of ignorance or desperation have allowed their children’s digestive tracts to know deep-fried, chemically processed chicken, those who happen to be, in Brooklyn, disproportionately black and Latino, Lucas must be protected at whatever cost.� (p. 98)
There’s much more here I’m not touching on. Climate Change—Hurricane Sandy; to become or not to become a father; a writer’s residency in Marfa, etc. It’s highly autobiographical. There’s too much post modernist hoodoo but the satire is brilliant. I think it an excellent novel of New York literary life. Others that spring to mind include Sigrid Nunez’s recent The Friend and Edmund White’s harrowing The Farewell Symphony.
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