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Unsouled by Will Wight
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A foundational start to a series that feels like the beginning of shonen anime in prose form.

I’ve promised many readers—my impatient co-bloggers included—that I’m going to read Cradle as soon as 2020 starts, and so here I am. I’ve been eyeing this series for quite a while now, it also has been recommended to me more than thirty times by more than thirty different readers. That number is not an exaggeration; I’ve received that many messages and recommendations from readers around the world telling me to read this series because they knew I’m going to love this series, and they weren’t wrong. I enjoyed reading Unsouled, and I know I’ll be binge-reading this series.

Unsouled is the first book out of—if I’m not mistaken, please correct me if I’m wrong—twelve planned books in Will Wight’s highly acclaimed Cradle series. The story follows Wei Shi Lindon, an Unsouled who’s not allowed to learn the sacred arts of his clan due to his deficiency. Due to his misfortune, Lindon has to use and scheme whatever possible means to gain victories over his obstacles. It’s a book that’s filled with resonating themes such as paving your own path, and the willingness to pour in extraordinary hard work to fight against all odds.

“When a traveler cannot find a path, sometimes he must make his own.�


I love underdog stories; there’s always something satisfying about seeing a character who’s practically shunned by everyone becomes a respected individual. Unsouled—and most likely the entire series—depicts Lindon’s relatively slow but gradual rise to a higher level of power, rising from an underdog and, maybe, eventually becomes the strongest in the world through the progression of the series. Many shonen anime/mangas have utilized this simple premise and expand the premise into something much larger and complex; Naruto by Masashi Kishimoto is a great example of this, and it would be quite difficult for me to believe that Will Wight isn’t inspired by Naruto in the creation of this series.

The first book alone already has so many noticeable inspirations from Naruto, and I’m not speaking exclusively about the premise or the similarity in Lindon’s personality—especially his perseverance and determination—that resembles Naruto and many other shonen anime protagonists, the magic and the Asian-inspired world-building also felt like a homage to it. I mean, it has an intricate magic system that revolves around madra (pretty much chakra in Naruto); Elder that reminded me of the Kages in Naruto; the existence of numbered tailed-beasts (in a form of fox, too!) and also sacred art villages that reminded me of the ninja villages in Naruto. So many aspects, to me, felt like a great homage to the manga/anime and I loved reading about it. Plus, Will Wight has an accessible writing style that flows nicely, felt clean and well-polished.

“Fate is not fair, but it is just. Hard work is never in vain…even when it does not achieve what you wished.�


Admittedly, there were plenty of sections—particularly in the first half of the book—that felt very info-dumpy to read, and this hurts the pacing considerably. Also, Lindon’s characterizations still require more introspection and internalization in order for me to feel more invested in his journey. If you find yourself struggling through the first half of the book, I strongly recommend you to give the book a chance, at least until the 50% mark. The second half, in my opinion, was better than the first half, and it showed the potential of awesome things to come in the sequels.

Despite a few hiccups on the quality of the book as an installment, the good thing about all this is that Unsouled felt like a prelude to greatness, a necessary setup for the rest of the series to shine. When I read manga, there’s an incredibly high chance that the first volume won’t spark my interest in the series yet; I usually allow five—in some worse cases, ten to twenty—volumes before I finalized the decision to continue reading the manga series or not. I find this notion to be aptly applicable to Unsouled. If Unsouled signified the weakest installment of the series, then I know I’m going to have a blast reading Cradle.

“The disciple follows the master, but the genius blazes their own trail.�


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Reading Progress

May 30, 2019 – Shelved
January 1, 2020 – Started Reading
January 1, 2020 – Finished Reading

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Brian Interested to read your review. I DNF this book early. Wondering if I should give it another go


Czepta Gold Definitely keen to read your review on this. Currently reading book 2.


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TS Chan Impatient co-blogger approves 🧐👍


Petrik TS wrote: "Impatient co-blogger approves 🧐👍"

Thank you, impatient co-blogger! xD


Petrik Brian wrote: "Interested to read your review. I DNF this book early. Wondering if I should give it another go"

I think it's worth pursuing to the first book's completion, I'm on the third book and it gets really good and fun now. The first two books are pretty much foundational beginning to the series! :D


Petrik Czepta wrote: "Definitely keen to read your review on this. Currently reading book 2."

Enjoy! I'm on book 3 atm and it gets better and better! :)


Deniz Sezer Nearly every book is an improvement over the previous ones. Will Wight is also the underdog in this literature world :D


message 8: by Petrik (last edited Jan 04, 2020 05:39AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Petrik Deniz wrote: "Nearly every book is an improvement over the previous ones. Will Wight is also the underdog in this literature world :D"

I'm on Blackflame right now and I certainly agree with that! I don't think Will Wight is an underdog though now... he WAS an underdog, but right now his sales on Amazon are freaking insane! His Cradle have sales and ratings more than many traditionally published SFF authors! :O


Thomas You are right when you say that the first book is like a prelude introducing you to the world and it's laws. The rest of the books are much more broad and introduce a ton of new stuff. I'm sure you will enjoy them more than unsouled!


Petrik Thomas wrote: "You are right when you say that the first book is like a prelude introducing you to the world and it's laws. The rest of the books are much more broad and introduce a ton of new stuff. I'm sure you..."

Yes yes! I've finished Soulsmith and it's a great improvement. This book was seriously just an introduction, I'm making my way through Blackflame right now and it's so good! :)


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Audrey I already had planned to read this saga this year and your review confirm my will. Great review like always Petrik


Petrik Audrey wrote: "I already had planned to read this saga this year and your review confirm my will. Great review like always Petrik"

Thank you, Audrey! I think you're going to have a great time with this one! :)


Thomas Petrik wrote: "Thomas wrote: "You are right when you say that the first book is like a prelude introducing you to the world and it's laws. The rest of the books are much more broad and introduce a ton of new stuf..."

Cool, i'll be waiting for the rest of your reviews :)


Petrik Thomas wrote: "Petrik wrote: "Thomas wrote: "You are right when you say that the first book is like a prelude introducing you to the world and it's laws. The rest of the books are much more broad and introduce a ..."

Cheers! I'm writing my review of Soulsmith as we speak! :D


Thomas Tsunami I read this last year as I was intrigued by the author stating that he was inspired by Hunter x Hunter....it was not that. :(


Petrik Thomas wrote: "I read this last year as I was intrigued by the author stating that he was inspired by Hunter x Hunter....it was not that. :("

Hunter x Hunter? Hmm that's odd, I guess if we think about it, we can kinda compare the two together, but Naruto is definitely the first thing that comes to my mind!


Rinaldo Agree that it's quite patchy but Cradle gets better (and more addictive) with every new book (or should I say iteration, pun intended).


Petrik Rinaldo wrote: "Agree that it's quite patchy but Cradle gets better (and more addictive) with every new book (or should I say iteration, pun intended)."

Oh definitely, it hasn't reached mindblowing level, but it advance (pun intended) to entertain more and more. I should be done with Blackflame tomorrow! :)


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Travis Awesome review Petrik.


Terin Tom Hey... You finally read it... Awesome!... I liked how you drew parallels to Naruto... Keep reading, it keeps getting better... Glad you liked it... Ahhh, the sweet feeling of satisfaction... I just finished ninth rain by Jen Williams BTW... Brilliant stuff, thanks for the review and the comments on the book...


Petrik Travis wrote: "Awesome review Petrik."

Thanks, Travis! :D


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Petrik Terin wrote: "Hey... You finally read it... Awesome!... I liked how you drew parallels to Naruto... Keep reading, it keeps getting better... Glad you liked it... Ahhh, the sweet feeling of satisfaction... I just..."

Yes! I'm almost done with Blackflame! I will continue with the series for sure! It continues to get better and better, and it makes me happy to hear you enjoyed reading The Ninth Rain! There was minor pacing issue in the second book (imo), but the first and third book of that series was amazing! Enjoy!


Petrik David S wrote: "So I am LOVING this. I honestly didnt even notice the info dumps and stuff like that. Maybe because I'm reading it via audiobook and the narrator is fantastic. I think Will Wight knew exactly what ..."

Wow, if you're already that in love just from the first book, I can't imagine what the third book and beyond will do to you! Hahaha!
I think regarding the info dumps, it's because I'm soooo much more used to the pacing in manga/anime; I personally believe this is a series that would've worked better if you haven't read that much manga.


Thomas Tsunami David S, Hunter x Hunter (2011) is the be all/end all/peak of existence. If you thought this book was “so much fun�, watch it. You’ll be scrambling to find something similar! Thank me later


Petrik David S wrote: "I'll thank you now haha. Thanks for the rec! I will definitely check it out!"

Hunter X Hunter is amazing, it makes Cradle (which I enjoyed) looked like a bunch of kids playing around... Ironically, Hunter X Hunter main character are seriously bunch of kids! xD


Thomas Tsunami Ugh I miss it so much :(


Petrik Thomas wrote: "Ugh I miss it so much :("

I will never forget Chimera Arc... I miss it too. :/


Thomas Tsunami The first 3 seasons are on Netflix too if you happen to have it


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Petrik David S wrote: "My sister has Crunchyroll so I'm definitely gonna check it out.thanks guys!"

Awesome!! Enjoy! Watch them all, experience all the awesomeness, then be sad like us that it's over. xD


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Mariana Totally agree with the Naruto comparison. And if it's true this is a planned 12 book series may stop, too much time investment and I did it already with Naruto (and now Boruto). Appreciate the review.


Petrik Mariana wrote: "Totally agree with the Naruto comparison. And if it's true this is a planned 12 book series may stop, too much time investment and I did it already with Naruto (and now Boruto). Appreciate the review."

Thank you, Mariana! Yeah, I think it's really going to be a twelve books series. As for Naruto, I've pretty much given up on Boruto, tbh, they're milking the series so much now. I'm satisfied with what I got from Naruto! :)


Thomas Tsunami Naruto is still going on? WTH!


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Bookworm Petrik wrote: "Mariana wrote: "Totally agree with the Naruto comparison. And if it's true this is a planned 12 book series may stop, too much time investment and I did it already with Naruto (and now Boruto). App..."

I also tried Boruto but I feel like the character designs are not as good, neither the story - the first chapter has Boruto fighting a god, and that is canon - that is what actually happened in the first chapter (not a flash forward later in the story).


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Mariana Petrik wrote: "Mariana wrote: "Totally agree with the Naruto comparison. And if it's true this is a planned 12 book series may stop, too much time investment and I did it already with Naruto (and now Boruto). App..."

I've not given up completely on Boruto, I've watched about 68 episodes, but I'm with you, about to give up on it as well. It's moving too slow.


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Mariana Celine wrote: "Petrik wrote: "Mariana wrote: "Totally agree with the Naruto comparison. And if it's true this is a planned 12 book series may stop, too much time investment and I did it already with Naruto (and n..."

I agree about the character designs aren't as good. I find Boruto not as appealing or engaging as Naruto. I have quite a bit of trouble rooting for him.


Petrik Thomas wrote: "Naruto is still going on? WTH!"

WTH indeed, but it's true. Boruto is still going on.


Petrik Celine wrote: "Petrik wrote: "Mariana wrote: "Totally agree with the Naruto comparison. And if it's true this is a planned 12 book series may stop, too much time investment and I did it already with Naruto (and n..."

Agreed on both account. I was super happy and satisfied (despite my issue with Kaguya) when Naruto was finished. But then Boruto appeared, I checked the first few chapters and noped out. xD


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Paul Great review! I mainly decided to eventually read this series because it reminded me a lot of the xianxia and wuxia novels I used to read a lot a few year ago. (Unsouled definitely felt like the beginning of one for sure.) A couple of examples would be "I Shall Seal the Heavens" and "Coiling Dragon". Anyways, I basically feel like I will really enjoy these novels and I enjoyed reading your review as I usually do. :)


Petrik Paul wrote: "Great review! I mainly decided to eventually read this series because it reminded me a lot of the xianxia and wuxia novels I used to read a lot a few year ago. (Unsouled definitely felt like the be..."

Thank you, Paul! Yeah it does, the more you read through the series the more you'll realize just how evident it is. Oh I've heard of those two, I'll look em up! :)


TheGreatConst WTF, Naruto? The story is inspired by the whole genre of fiction. Chakra isn't something first appared in Naruto, lol. Chakra and Qi are energies from eastern medicine that are often considered as a type of energy to use superpowers in eastern fantasy instead of Mana in western fantasy. This is a story inspired by xianxia genre and didn't invent anything, definitely not inspired by Naruto.


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Petrik TheGreatConst wrote: "WTF, Naruto? The story is inspired by the whole genre of fiction. Chakra isn't something first appared in Naruto, lol. Chakra and Qi are energies from eastern medicine that are often considered as ..."

I know that... I'm an Asian who grew up learning about Chakra and Qi from other stories before Naruto was even invented. However, the author himself has mentioned that he loved Naruto and Cradle is inspired by Xianxia, Naruto, and other Shonen mangas, too. Not saying that Naruto created Chakra at all, I mean if the author himself mentioned that it's inspired by Naruto, what am I supposed to say to that!? xD

I assume you've just read the first book? For example, the seventh book literally copied a storyline and structure from Naruto completely and the author admitted it. :) Btw the rest of the series gets so much better after the third book, don't give up!


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A.R Hey Petrik, I just recently finished what is available of this series and loved it so much. Was wondering if you know of any other series like this that you would recommend? Not manga, but book series. Thanks!


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Devin Just picked this up. Was planning on starting it end of this month. Now I'm a little more skeptical.


Petrik A.R wrote: "Hey Petrik, I just recently finished what is available of this series and loved it so much. Was wondering if you know of any other series like this that you would recommend? Not manga, but book ser..."

None that I can really recommend yet, but I've heard great things about this one: /book/show/4...

Also, The Brightest Shadow by Sarah Lin is a mix of epic fantasy and Xianxia! My co-blogger has read it and she think it's great! :)


Petrik Devin wrote: "Just picked this up. Was planning on starting it end of this month. Now I'm a little more skeptical."

Just expect the first two books to be weak, Devin. The third book is where the series starts to shine so much! :)


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A.R Petrik wrote: "A.R wrote: "Hey Petrik, I just recently finished what is available of this series and loved it so much. Was wondering if you know of any other series like this that you would recommend? Not manga, ..."

So I just recently bought The First Step, and was thinking of reading it when I finished the Ash and Sand trilogy (Another series I started from your recommendation)! If TS Chan says its great, I think I can trust her! You and your co-bloggers seem to never lead me wrong!


Petrik A.R wrote: "Petrik wrote: "A.R wrote: "Hey Petrik, I just recently finished what is available of this series and loved it so much. Was wondering if you know of any other series like this that you would recomme..."

Awesome! Glad that we could help! Ash and Sand trilogy is a superb trilogy. I still need to get to The Brightest Shadow, too, one day. It's a massive book! xD


Mike's Book Reviews I get numerous recommendations per day for this series and viewers have even combined to send me the first 8 books. Looks like I have no choice now.


Petrik Mike's Book Reviews wrote: "I get numerous recommendations per day for this series and viewers have even combined to send me the first 8 books. Looks like I have no choice now."

They're doing you a favor, Mike. Give it a read until Blackflame, then you won't be able to put down the series. Plus, the series is ending this year at the 12th installment! :D


FantasyBookNerd Just started this as my monthly read! Next month book 3 - can't wait!


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