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The Incredible Origins of the Onyx Sun by Christopher Mahoney
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I read the advance readers� unedited copy, a paperback edition. It has significantly fewer pages (265) than does the hardcover edition (31 4 pages) due out on 2/2/09. I wonder what, if anything, I missed. I’m tempted to read “the whole book� if, in fact, there are significant differences/additions. I did notice some typos, although I also often notice those in final copy published books.

I really liked the writing style of this author. This is an engaging story with likeable characters. It’s a rollicking good time that many kids will enjoy. I see it for 9-13 year olds, both boys and girls, and as an adult who enjoys children’s and young adult books, I liked this book, which is geared to middle school readers. The villain was a bit over the top evil, but it worked ok for me, given the whole story. The kids were empowered, but the adults were not relegated to a back seat either. The reader must be willing to suspend disbelief in order to be entertained by this story, something that I found easy to do.

There’s a companion web site where readers can write alternate text, which apparently the author checks, or will be checking when the book is officially published. This makes this book even more appealing to reluctant readers, and reluctant writers too. It could also spark an interest in the sciences, even though it’s science fiction extremely heavy on the fiction.

Oh, and it’s obvious that sequels are planned, and I’m looking forward to any that get published.
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Reading Progress

November 17, 2008 – Shelved
December 8, 2008 –
page 1
0.38%
December 9, 2008 –
page 17
6.42% "I've just started this. I am enjoying the writing style very much, and the story is interesting so far. I'll have to see where it goes."
December 10, 2008 –
page 94
35.47% "My advance paperback copy has only 265 pages. So far it's a fun kids' SF book with interesting characters."
December 11, 2008 –
page 145
54.72%
December 11, 2008 –
page 215
81.13% "I'm enjoying this and wondering how much I'm missing with this unedited paperback; the hardcover with more pages is coming out in early 2009"
Started Reading
December 12, 2008 – Finished Reading

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Lisa Vegan I actually just received an advance un-edited review paperback copy of this book, and I'm not yet quite currently reading. There are 2 to 5 books ahead of this one, but I'm eager to read it.


Christopher Thanks for the great review Lisa!

RE: the differences between the hardcover and advance review copy...the main difference is that the review copy was printed in advance of the final grammatical edits, of which indeed there are several needed. However, I am confident the final version will be on par with other books as the advance review copy was my 8th revision, and the final manuscript I sent to my printer was the 12th! I don't think I've ever read a book so many times. :)

Beyond grammar, there are a couple of minor changes. The Prologue and Chapter 2 were tweaked. Chapter 1 was completely re-written. As well, there is a new epilogue that previews the action in the second book. Lastly, and perhaps most exciting, the final hardcover will have 36 original pieces of artwork inside the book, one image at the top of each chapter start, and one detailed image of the Citadel Spire on the title page.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing my book!


Lisa Vegan Chris, Well, now I'm going to have to read the hardcover edition too! Thanks for all the information.


Christopher Hehehe. I hope so. :) I'll let you know when it's out!


Lisa Vegan I didn't want duplicates in my books so I just took off the hardcover edition from my to-read list, but I do plan to read it, and then edit/explain my review.


Christopher Sounds good. Thanks for letting me know. I'll let you know when I have a firm date from the printer for the hardcover release.


Lisa Vegan Thanks Chris.


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