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The Prisoner of Heaven (The Cemetery of Forgotten Books, #3)
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Sep 20, 2012
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Read 2 times. Last read February 24, 2025 to March 1, 2025.
This book is a perfect example of what is wrong with the publishing world. Zafon's first book, The Shadow of the Wind is one of my all time favorites. Ever. The second book The Angel's Game is well up there on my list, so when I saw The Prisoner of Heaven on display, I was ecstatic. Unfortunately, it is very clear that Zafon was under time pressure from the publisher on this book, enough so that the story was irreversibly ruined.
You see, Zafon is a master of prose, character, and theme. Indeed I would just say that Carlos Ruiz Zafon is a master storyteller in general, but he is also one that needs time to polish and work his product. The only problem is that because of the HUGE success of his other two books, the publisher (who's biggest concern is for money and not story) wanted a third book yesterday, not tomorrow, not next week, out with it! Some authors fight this or have a brilliant agent and publishing team behind them that believes in story rather than speed, not so with Zafon. Don't get me wrong, this book is still well written and at times brilliant, but in the end it is unfinished. This book is short, a mere 279 pages, compared to a solid 587 pages for The Shadow of the Wind and 531 pages in The Angels Game. What this tells me as a reader is that Zafon wasn't even close to done and it shows. Where this book ends feels like the mid point of a longer book, it isn't really a conclusion, things aren't really tied together, but it was close enough to cut it off and call it "done".
I did enjoy The Prisoner of Heaven, but the rushed style, short story, and at times sloppy writing tells me that this once great author has been screwed by his publisher. Had this book had another year or even six months of work it would have been another shining example from one of the best writers of the 21st century. Instead we are left with a deep sense of betrayal at an incomplete story put out merely to make as much money as possible. Hopefully in the future Zafon is given the time necessary to produce books to his full potential and not merely for the quick cash. We will see I suppose.
You see, Zafon is a master of prose, character, and theme. Indeed I would just say that Carlos Ruiz Zafon is a master storyteller in general, but he is also one that needs time to polish and work his product. The only problem is that because of the HUGE success of his other two books, the publisher (who's biggest concern is for money and not story) wanted a third book yesterday, not tomorrow, not next week, out with it! Some authors fight this or have a brilliant agent and publishing team behind them that believes in story rather than speed, not so with Zafon. Don't get me wrong, this book is still well written and at times brilliant, but in the end it is unfinished. This book is short, a mere 279 pages, compared to a solid 587 pages for The Shadow of the Wind and 531 pages in The Angels Game. What this tells me as a reader is that Zafon wasn't even close to done and it shows. Where this book ends feels like the mid point of a longer book, it isn't really a conclusion, things aren't really tied together, but it was close enough to cut it off and call it "done".
I did enjoy The Prisoner of Heaven, but the rushed style, short story, and at times sloppy writing tells me that this once great author has been screwed by his publisher. Had this book had another year or even six months of work it would have been another shining example from one of the best writers of the 21st century. Instead we are left with a deep sense of betrayal at an incomplete story put out merely to make as much money as possible. Hopefully in the future Zafon is given the time necessary to produce books to his full potential and not merely for the quick cash. We will see I suppose.
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With how amazing The Shadow of the Wind was, I know I will certainly read the fourth installment, but if it's another money grab book without any real meat on it I may give up on him.
For now, though, I'll keep my fingers crossed and pick up book four when it comes out in English!


I'm not confident that it was a publishers deadline. Usually when someone becomes as popular as Zafon, the publishers let them write the book in their own time.

Clever, took me a minute to catch, but I got it!
I dunno, I've worked in the book industry for years now and I've seen it go both ways. I mentioned it being a publisher deadline because the book didn't feel finished and you could tell Zafon had more to say.
I would much prefer it to be a publishing issue rather than an author issue, because if you're correct, then Zafon has gone down the slippery slope of greed and speed and his prose are too beautiful to be rushed.




Overall, I did enjoy this book, though not as much as the first two. Too many things seemed rushed and unpolished.
I'm too invested not to read the fourth when it comes out, but I'm sure I'll be treating it like the missing second half of this one rather than a fourth installment in the series.



Maybe part two is in progress?

Rushed, swept along, at such a pace it all felt too hurried ... There were also a few errors in narrative authenticity that, I think, given time, Zafon would have corrected.
I can only hope that it is the first instalment of a bigger story than the one contained in this novel.
Thanks for your review.






Chandra wrote: "Personally, I did not feel any disappointment reading this book. I loved all 3 of the series."


Gail wrote: "Fernando There's a fourth one now, Chandra. And it's fabulous!!!
What is it called?"

The third book in my opinion is really good, But yes, maybe you right... I was thinking and the end could be finished like the others two.

Gail wrote: "Fernando- has it been translated?"