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The Dark Unwinding by Sharon Cameron
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bookshelves: young-adult, historical, 2012

What an exciting debut! However, I feel the need to point out immediately that fans of steampunk may be disappointed by The Dark Unwinding which to me belongs firmly in the historical fiction genre. I would define steampunk as a kind of Victorian science fiction and wouldn't count merely having an inventor who creates a few wacky machines - you're likely to believe this novel is steampunk if you believe Frankenstein is steampunk. But whatever, this was an incredibly enjoyable story that gets better and better as the book progresses so I would suggest you persist a little longer than usual if you are not gripped straight away. Upon finishing it, I was absolutely delighted to discover that there will be a sequel.

Frankenstein, by the way, is a terribly inappropriate comparison. I would say this book reminds me in many ways of The Wicked and the Just: historical setting, somewhat bratty protagonist (but not as much), large portion of the novel held up by the extremely charismatic set of characters, main plot line kicks off in the latter half of the book, etc. The story starts off fairly simplistic and the stakes seem relatively low to the reader. Katherine Tulson is sent by her inheritance-greedy aunt to have her uncle committed to a lunatic asylum and, by doing so, release the family fortune to her aunt. What she finds at her uncle's estate is not a lunatic, but a genius inventor who I believe - though it is never stated - to be autistic. Not only that, but her uncle also employs more than nine hundred people from workhouses who would have nowhere else to go otherwise. So, Katherine becomes torn between protecting her inheritance and protecting this strange community.

When the plot starts to really get going in the second half, it packs a punch. There is a mystery complete with twists and tension, perhaps more astute readers will fail to be fooled by this book but I was surprised numerous times. There is also a little romance going on but it comes second to the bigger issues and doesn't swamp the story - my favourite kind. The novel is not without faults; for example, some events were a little rough around the edges and perhaps could have been explained better, but the good most definitely outweighed the bad. For me, anyway.

But you might be thinking "if the plot doesn't really start to happen until the second half, then what keeps you reading during the first half?" And the answer is quite simply: the characters. I will use The Wicked and the Just as an example again because that book had me wildly entertained even when very little was happening. The Dark Unwinding is the same. You can't help but be charmed by all the different, weird, not always nice characters floating around in here and the way they interact with one another.

The best character has to be Uncle Tully, I'm straining my mind to think of a character in something else to compare him to but he's pretty unique. I imagine him as a kind of autistic Santa Claus, one of those sweet, harmless and brilliantly intelligent old men that you can't stand anything bad happening to. So, naturally, you hate Katherine's aunt for even daring to threaten this man's peaceful existence. Mary, Katherine's maid, is another delightful character and I like the way the friendship develops between her and Katherine with the latter being a "lady" of a higher social class but Mary frequently has to scold her for being tipsy and roller-skating with guys. Hehe.

And, of course, the friendly and cheerful Ben Aldridge. And the dark, brooding Lane Moreau. Smell a love triangle? I did too, but you have nothing to worry about.

I was really pleased with this book that I nearly almost didn't read! If you like young adult historical fiction then don't make that mistake, there's much to love here and Cameron seems like an author we need to watch out for. I only hope the sequel is as entertaining.

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October 26, 2012 – Started Reading
October 26, 2012 – Shelved
October 27, 2012 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Kyle (new)

Kyle Good to see that this one is good! :D Was sort of on the fence about this one.


Emily May I just posted a review, Kyle, I really enjoyed it!


jesse oohh! sounds wildly entertaining!


The Sleeping Pooh wss


message 5: by Maggie (new)

Maggie Ahhh, I love your new picture ratings! :)


Emily May Haha, thanks Maggie! I was just messing about at a wedding when those were taken but I thought I'd try them out on the reviews. Glad you like them :)


Ariel You've gotten me again, Emily! This is next in my reading list. The description of Uncle Tully made me more interested; I've seen this plot (or a similar one) done where the characters weren't particularly compelling.

Also, no love triangle? LET US ALL REJOICE. I've had to put aside otherwise perfectly solid books because love triangles start seeping in.

No. Just no.


Ariel Another lovely read that Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ reviews (yours specifically) showed me that I would've otherwise passed over.

I have a hard time with steampunk so I'm glad that wasn't present - wish the cover weren't misleading, but maybe it'll make people pick it up anyway - it's pretty, anyway. ;)

I'm really glad to be reading more historical fiction, and I think a number of those are due to you. The more of I read of the genre the more I like it - though that's been exclusively YA for me.

The story was really fantastic, I have a huge TBR pile and this one made me forget all about it, and all about the rest of the world as well. I liked the character building parts as well as the action - and yay, no love triangle!

As much as I wish there were more standalone novels of excellent quality, a sequel makes sense - there's definitely more to the story. I do hope it just ends up being a sequel and not a series - I love the book, but series are so risky/unreliable. (Especially in YA.)

I'm glad I was late to this book, because that means that I only have to wait a few months instead of an entire year to get my hands on it.

I look forward to seeing what you have to say when you get your hands on it - you're one of the reviewers I "follow" most, so I'm sure you'll see more of me. ;) Thanks again! Now, to work on that TBR pile..


message 9: by Jen (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jen Steampunk IS about the inventions. Steampunk is not JUST a Victorian science fiction. Steampunk is a mash-up of other genres. The most frequent aspects we see of steampunk are: Victorian England, because it is a rather romantic era and also because London is rather foggy and is the perfect Gothic aspect of any novel, and a psuedo past (a.k.a. alternative history). Yes, it falls under the umbrella of historical fiction, but it is mostly filed under the major heading of Fantasy. This book might be the most normal considering the fantasy genre, but it is most certainly a steampunk novel.


Emily May Steampunk is defined by both goodreads and wikipedia as having "prominent elements of either science fiction or fantasy" - neither of which this novel has. So that's what I'm going by.


message 11: by Jen (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jen My point exactly. Machines are science, are they not? Perhaps, and I'm not saying that Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ and WikiPedia are unreliable, you should broaden your horizons for sources.


Emily May So... what you're saying is that every novel with a machine is science fiction? Because computers, phones, ipods and cars are all machines. By your definition, every book I can think of must be science fiction. And you also recommend I should try different sources but don't state any of your own?


message 13: by Jen (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jen That's not what I'm saying at all. Those tiny machines may be science but they are far too insignificant to be labeled as such. It is the machines that you do grander things with--ex. Mythbusters (and I'm not saying that they are steampunk, though they certainly could qualify).

I'm not recommending anything. I'm suggesting that you go out and look. Do research. Read more steampunk novels. And if you're trying to stump me on why I didn't state my own source, it won't work. I didn't because I don't have to. Though, it's probably the right thing to do, and you'll probably say that, but in reality, I'm not siting this for an essay for school. It's merely a conversation. And I am also busy writing out my novel, so half of my mind is elsewhere at the moment.

But if you MUST know, my source is the book WRITING STEAMPUNK by Beth Daniels. After all, I'm a writer. I see things differently than the average reader. Now, if you don't mind, I have writing to get back to. Happy reading!


Emily May No disrespect to the author, but WRITING STEAMPUNK is a self-published ebook with hardly any reviews. I could write a book called "HOW TO WRITE STEAMPUNK" and self-publish it - would that automatically make me a credible source? Sitting down and tapping out words may make someone a writer, but it doesn't make them able to "see things differently than the average reader".

And, as it happens, I have read many popular steampunk novels that have earned (through reviews and awards) their place at the top of the genre. Perdido Street Station, The Golden Compass, Stormdancer, Mortal Engines, The Native Star, Steampunk! An Anthology of Fantastically Rich and Strange Stories... to name a few. This book is not steampunk by the definition of the vast majority of people. Maybe it is to Ms Daniels and her ebook, maybe it is to you, but you both belong to a small club.


message 15: by Jen (last edited Aug 17, 2013 09:46PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Jen Very well. We will agree to disagree.

P.S. Writing is the craft that you read. Writing takes years to master. It isn't just simply putting words together to make sense, it's painting a picture and creating a world to escape to. It's not those silly essays in high school and college. It's informational guides to help people along in their endeavors.

And believe what you will, but I truly do see things on a different level than others. I end my debate here, because you clearly don't understand what it means to be a writer. Have a nice day.


message 16: by Jaye (new) - rated it 4 stars

Jaye i agree, certainly not steampunk...


message 17: by Casey (new)

Casey Jen wrote: "Very well. We will agree to disagree.

P.S. Writing is the craft that you read. Writing takes years to master. It isn't just simply putting words together to make sense, it's painting a picture and..."


Yea you know you're the reason why people don't like selfpublished authors. your so full of yourselves and so easily offended and have the biggest self glorified heads out there.


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