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Eleven Minutes
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So while living in Switzerland, I had this book recommended, nay practically forced upon me by a male acquaintance (the book was put into my hands at a party and he told me that I should borrow it). Not having read anything by Coelho previously, though with a vague remembrance of my high school teacher violently hating the guy, I set about politely reading it.
Imagine my surprise when I found out that the book was about an immigrant sex worker in Switzerland. It made me more than a little uncomfortable, not because I have anything against sex workers, but because I was also an immigrant living in Switzerland and I was in fact looking for a new job at the moment, and this guy knew that, and well, it wasn't really what I had in mind.
I'm guessing (or hoping) that my friend's intrigue was with Coelho's general pseudo-philosophy and that's why he recommended it. I'm hoping that he wasn't really fascinated and wanting to discuss the plot. The lovely plot of how Maria, the sex worker, has to choose between two of her millionaire clients; one who's a sadistic bad boy and one who is more into delayed sexual gratification (or even abstinence if I remember correctly) but kind of complicated and hard to get close.
The reason for posting this review now, besides being reminded of it while I was reviewing a streak of horrible books, is that I suddenly realised that there was actually already a BDSM-story from a very popular author way before Fifty Shades of Grey. Or rather, from what I've read about Fifty Shades, it's about BDSM only while suggesting that anyone who's into it is really a depraved lunatic.
In the end of this book (spoiler!) Maria denounces her previous wicked BDSM-ways and chooses the right man! Yay! (Urgh.) I'm actually thinking about writing an analysis on the whole phenomenon of writing detailed descriptions about BDSM, while at the same time denouncing it. It is really about trying to have the cake and eating it at the same time.
I might include Cosmopolis by Don DeLillo in that analysis as well after reading a bit about it and seeing the following quote from that book :
First of all the writing style remind me of the previous two authors. But also: what is it with these people (Coelho, James and DeLillo) and writing about young millionaires with a 'depraved' badly written sex lives? Seriously, why are people buying into this? Is this the ultimate wish fullfillment for both genders: the men can imagine they are rich young millionaires having sex with willing sex dolls and the women that they get the bad boy with an unlimited credit card? I really think better of people in general, but of course with the way mainstream media looks, these types of fantasies are only the logical conclusion of more subtle versions on the same theme.
One last thing. The most enjoyable experience when reviewing this book came when reading the five star reviews of it and read this:
If even your biggest fans think your writing is cliché, maybe you might want to reconsider your writing style.
Imagine my surprise when I found out that the book was about an immigrant sex worker in Switzerland. It made me more than a little uncomfortable, not because I have anything against sex workers, but because I was also an immigrant living in Switzerland and I was in fact looking for a new job at the moment, and this guy knew that, and well, it wasn't really what I had in mind.
I'm guessing (or hoping) that my friend's intrigue was with Coelho's general pseudo-philosophy and that's why he recommended it. I'm hoping that he wasn't really fascinated and wanting to discuss the plot. The lovely plot of how Maria, the sex worker, has to choose between two of her millionaire clients; one who's a sadistic bad boy and one who is more into delayed sexual gratification (or even abstinence if I remember correctly) but kind of complicated and hard to get close.
The reason for posting this review now, besides being reminded of it while I was reviewing a streak of horrible books, is that I suddenly realised that there was actually already a BDSM-story from a very popular author way before Fifty Shades of Grey. Or rather, from what I've read about Fifty Shades, it's about BDSM only while suggesting that anyone who's into it is really a depraved lunatic.
In the end of this book (spoiler!) Maria denounces her previous wicked BDSM-ways and chooses the right man! Yay! (Urgh.) I'm actually thinking about writing an analysis on the whole phenomenon of writing detailed descriptions about BDSM, while at the same time denouncing it. It is really about trying to have the cake and eating it at the same time.
I might include Cosmopolis by Don DeLillo in that analysis as well after reading a bit about it and seeing the following quote from that book :
"My mood shifts and bends. But when I'm alive and heightened, I'm super-acute. Do you know what I see when I look at you? I see a woman who wants to live shamelessly in her body. Tell me this is not the truth. You want to follow your body into idleness and fleshiness. That's why you have to run, to escape the drift of your basic nature. ...What do I see? Something lazy, sexy and insatiable."
They "[reach] completion more or less together, touching neither each other nor themselves."
First of all the writing style remind me of the previous two authors. But also: what is it with these people (Coelho, James and DeLillo) and writing about young millionaires with a 'depraved' badly written sex lives? Seriously, why are people buying into this? Is this the ultimate wish fullfillment for both genders: the men can imagine they are rich young millionaires having sex with willing sex dolls and the women that they get the bad boy with an unlimited credit card? I really think better of people in general, but of course with the way mainstream media looks, these types of fantasies are only the logical conclusion of more subtle versions on the same theme.
One last thing. The most enjoyable experience when reviewing this book came when reading the five star reviews of it and read this:
“How can he articulate so many nuggets of wisdom, often through characters the writing of which expresses the irony and profundity of their insights, and yet packaged in stories with such cliche outcomes?!?!�
If even your biggest fans think your writing is cliché, maybe you might want to reconsider your writing style.
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Hope you enjoy the book! :)
And you're right not all books are for everyone, that's why it's so much fun to discuss them and compare views.

Ya I really enjoy the discussions even if the views are in opposite directions or close to each other ..
That brings out the best part of reading

I love Marquez and generally this kind of literature, but Coelho's books seem to be like Chinese version of a branded product. Yes, it looks alike.


I am not a fan of him, but I understand why many people like his writing: it fulfils some emotional needs.
I've been reading books in a great quantity since childhood and developed a pretty sophisticated taste. I think that most of the people who like Coelho's books belong to category of those who like reading but didnt reach the heights of literature.
On the other hand my best friend likes Coelho very much despite being an avid reader herself. So, it may not be that easy....
I tried reading his books three times and every time it looks to me like something fake, like imitation of something better (the comparison with food suits here very well, indeed); maybe like cheap, red wine: it's still wine and it's still cheap but it certainly lacks this "something"

I am not a fan of him, but I understand why many people like his writing: it fulfils some emotional needs.
I've been reading books i..."
Yeah, I can totally respect that people need other types of books than me or even that intelligent people like this book. I don't think being a avid reader necessarily makes you more immune to sentimental things like this. Challenging yourself constantly, as you did, is probably a better recipe.


Please let me know if something is wrong, I speak Spanish so I'm not a good english speaker

It's fine English is not my first language either. I think what you're trying to say is that love and sex is just the surface themes, and there are many other underlying deeper (perhaps even philosophical) themes?
Well first of all I think a good book works on both levels - both on surface and in depth. The surface story should still be interesting and I didn't find it very interesting, I found it very predictable and a bit cringeworthy. That's somewhat subjective though.
Secondly the problem with the Coelho books I've read is that I don't really see the point with all the underlying themes. I find the philosophy of them akin to something you'd find on a refrigerator magnet. The sentiments aren't necessarily untrue, but they're often extremely simplified answers to complex questions and stacking them on top of each other doesn't make for a satisfying book.
If you liked the book good for you! All literature critique is more or less subjective anyways.

About what you said here:
"why are people buying into this? Is this the ultimate wish fullfillment for both genders: the men can imagine they are rich young millionaires having sex with willing sex dolls and the women that they get the bad boy with an unlimited credit card?"
How did the novel reflected such an idea to u ?

Thank you for your comment. What part of the protagonist perspective did you enjoy? I remember finding her completely unrelatable and void of any personality, so it would be very interesting with another perspective!
"How did the novel reflected such an idea to u ?"
I think it the novel gave me that idea by telling the story about a millionaire playboy having an intense sexual relationships with a younger and much poorer woman. But it's just speculation on my part, I don't know why people buy and like these books.

I like how she didn't let herself go. Even though her job was nasty, she didn't think so of herself. Instead she clanged her spirit onto the dream of going back to Brazil and starting a farm.
If you recall a conversation she had with the artist about the history of prostitution. She was fascinated by the "the goddess Ishtar" side of it, which presented prostitution as a divine profession. The character made a choice due to a certain circumstances filled with disappointment and despair, and survived with it without losing herself.
�I think it the novel gave me that idea by telling the story about a millionaire playboy having an intense sexual relationships with a younger and much poorer woman�
I think you might have missed the point that such a rich/successful/young man could have picked million other girls. But he picked a Brazilian poor prostitute because of her “light�.
Although I found his reason a bit “fairy-talic�, it matured somehow when he talked more about his life and how it has been taking a nihilistic approach because of his constant un-satisfaction.
Maybe for him, she was the distraction he needed from his dull life, the hope he required to carry on. While she found in him the love she deserves but never had.
�I don't know why people buy and like these books.�
Because most of the girls like to believe such stupid fantasies, and most of guys need to have enough reason to bust their asses to become rich and successful.

You confirmed my sceptical suspicion about the book. Thank you. And yes, it's weird for a guy to recommend a book with a female protagonist choosing "sacred sex" with love over sex without love. Even if that's obviously the best choice for her. Coelho seems to have a bit of culturing following for his philosophy. it sounds too heavy handed for� me.


I didn’t like the book because I didn’t like Coelho’s version of 50 Shades of Grey. Different strokes etc.



