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Eleven Minutes by Paulo Coelho
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did not like it
bookshelves: rubbish

So while living in Switzerland, I had this book recommended, nay practically forced upon me by a male acquaintance (the book was put into my hands at a party and he told me that I should borrow it). Not having read anything by Coelho previously, though with a vague remembrance of my high school teacher violently hating the guy, I set about politely reading it.

Imagine my surprise when I found out that the book was about an immigrant sex worker in Switzerland. It made me more than a little uncomfortable, not because I have anything against sex workers, but because I was also an immigrant living in Switzerland and I was in fact looking for a new job at the moment, and this guy knew that, and well, it wasn't really what I had in mind.

I'm guessing (or hoping) that my friend's intrigue was with Coelho's general pseudo-philosophy and that's why he recommended it. I'm hoping that he wasn't really fascinated and wanting to discuss the plot. The lovely plot of how Maria, the sex worker, has to choose between two of her millionaire clients; one who's a sadistic bad boy and one who is more into delayed sexual gratification (or even abstinence if I remember correctly) but kind of complicated and hard to get close.

The reason for posting this review now, besides being reminded of it while I was reviewing a streak of horrible books, is that I suddenly realised that there was actually already a BDSM-story from a very popular author way before Fifty Shades of Grey. Or rather, from what I've read about Fifty Shades, it's about BDSM only while suggesting that anyone who's into it is really a depraved lunatic.

In the end of this book (spoiler!) Maria denounces her previous wicked BDSM-ways and chooses the right man! Yay! (Urgh.) I'm actually thinking about writing an analysis on the whole phenomenon of writing detailed descriptions about BDSM, while at the same time denouncing it. It is really about trying to have the cake and eating it at the same time.

I might include Cosmopolis by Don DeLillo in that analysis as well after reading a bit about it and seeing the following quote from that book :

"My mood shifts and bends. But when I'm alive and heightened, I'm super-acute. Do you know what I see when I look at you? I see a woman who wants to live shamelessly in her body. Tell me this is not the truth. You want to follow your body into idleness and fleshiness. That's why you have to run, to escape the drift of your basic nature. ...What do I see? Something lazy, sexy and insatiable."

They "[reach] completion more or less together, touching neither each other nor themselves."


First of all the writing style remind me of the previous two authors. But also: what is it with these people (Coelho, James and DeLillo) and writing about young millionaires with a 'depraved' badly written sex lives? Seriously, why are people buying into this? Is this the ultimate wish fullfillment for both genders: the men can imagine they are rich young millionaires having sex with willing sex dolls and the women that they get the bad boy with an unlimited credit card? I really think better of people in general, but of course with the way mainstream media looks, these types of fantasies are only the logical conclusion of more subtle versions on the same theme.

One last thing. The most enjoyable experience when reviewing this book came when reading the five star reviews of it and read this:

“How can he articulate so many nuggets of wisdom, often through characters the writing of which expresses the irony and profundity of their insights, and yet packaged in stories with such cliche outcomes?!?!�


If even your biggest fans think your writing is cliché, maybe you might want to reconsider your writing style.
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Leajk Ah, yes The Alchemist was better than this one, but personally I can't really handle his style of, what I find to be, quasi-philosophy. Thanks for your comment though :)


message 2: by Kuldeep (new)

Kuldeep Sharma Define pseudo-philosophy


Leajk Quasi-philosophy: def. Paulo Coelho


Hala Alnahas well thank you :) I'm not a "super fan" of Coelho's but perhaps the cliche here is indicating our messed up reality , I know he's a big deal of an Idealistic writer , he seeks the brightest side of the darkest faces that humanity has ,, but still if you have a hard time with his style (as you're totally entitled to) -and for me I hate when he goes through 'this subject' in particular ; sexuality ,,, my advise is take what suits you best and leave the rest for analysis -while you keep protesting- ;) thank you again and forgive me for not being so 'one phrase and cut to the chase !' but I'm really excited about this book , just bought it ,, having read The Alchemist and Veronika decides to die , , Paulo's sometimes repulsive illusions of greatness and imperfections doesn't take away that he is one of the good ones , again for me , maybe not for you , thank you and respect


Leajk Hala wrote: "well thank you :) I'm not a "super fan" of Coelho's but perhaps the cliche here is indicating our messed up reality , I know he's a big deal of an Idealistic writer , he seeks the brightest side of..."

Hope you enjoy the book! :)

And you're right not all books are for everyone, that's why it's so much fun to discuss them and compare views.


Hala Alnahas Very much apreciated :)
Ya I really enjoy the discussions even if the views are in opposite directions or close to each other ..
That brings out the best part of reading


Magda I agree with you: quasi philosophical, more maybe quasi-magical realism a la Marquez et al.
I love Marquez and generally this kind of literature, but Coelho's books seem to be like Chinese version of a branded product. Yes, it looks alike.


Leajk Ah, glad to hear someone agrees. I'd say it's rather like a Westernized version of say Mexican or Vietnamese food: it's taking something exciting, full with tradition and layers, and instead making it into a bland tasteless mess fit for the average consumer.


message 9: by Valentina (new)

Valentina Olivo I can't agree more with this review


message 10: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Thank you Kavita! Yes I guess I should have taken my teacher's warnings more seriously...


message 11: by Magda (new) - rated it 1 star

Magda Kavita wrote: "I truly don't understand why he is so famous! "

I am not a fan of him, but I understand why many people like his writing: it fulfils some emotional needs.
I've been reading books in a great quantity since childhood and developed a pretty sophisticated taste. I think that most of the people who like Coelho's books belong to category of those who like reading but didnt reach the heights of literature.
On the other hand my best friend likes Coelho very much despite being an avid reader herself. So, it may not be that easy....
I tried reading his books three times and every time it looks to me like something fake, like imitation of something better (the comparison with food suits here very well, indeed); maybe like cheap, red wine: it's still wine and it's still cheap but it certainly lacks this "something"


message 12: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Magda wrote: "Kavita wrote: "I truly don't understand why he is so famous! "

I am not a fan of him, but I understand why many people like his writing: it fulfils some emotional needs.
I've been reading books i..."


Yeah, I can totally respect that people need other types of books than me or even that intelligent people like this book. I don't think being a avid reader necessarily makes you more immune to sentimental things like this. Challenging yourself constantly, as you did, is probably a better recipe.


message 13: by Qamar (new)

Qamar Nisa idk about the book but i loved your review :D ,


message 14: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Qamar wrote: "idk about the book but i loved your review :D ,"

Thank you! :)


message 15: by Astria (new)

Astria Thanks so much! You just saved me a couple of bucks. Nothing in the blurb even hinted at sex-work or BDSM, two subjects I try to avoid.


detaneila I really like the book. I don't think that the book is about what you said. The top is about love and sex. That's all. Terense, the sadistic boy is not outstanding in the whole book, he only appears to show the "freedom throught the pain" but it's something you can be agree or not. But the book adress others points and experiences.
Please let me know if something is wrong, I speak Spanish so I'm not a good english speaker


message 17: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk detaneila wrote: "I really like the book. I don't think that the book is about what you said. The top is about love and sex. That's all. Terense, the sadistic boy is not outstanding in the whole book, he only appear..."

It's fine English is not my first language either. I think what you're trying to say is that love and sex is just the surface themes, and there are many other underlying deeper (perhaps even philosophical) themes?

Well first of all I think a good book works on both levels - both on surface and in depth. The surface story should still be interesting and I didn't find it very interesting, I found it very predictable and a bit cringeworthy. That's somewhat subjective though.

Secondly the problem with the Coelho books I've read is that I don't really see the point with all the underlying themes. I find the philosophy of them akin to something you'd find on a refrigerator magnet. The sentiments aren't necessarily untrue, but they're often extremely simplified answers to complex questions and stacking them on top of each other doesn't make for a satisfying book.

If you liked the book good for you! All literature critique is more or less subjective anyways.


detaneila Oh. Now I understand why you didn't like the book. Thanks


message 19: by Paz (new) - rated it 5 stars

Paz Margalit The best book i ever read! And i read lots of books.


message 20: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Paz wrote: "The best book i ever read! And i read lots of books."

Good for you Paz!


Yamen I admire your sophisticated review.. but I can't help but to comment on that comparison with 50 shades of grey .. come on !! Eleven Minutes might be overly sexualized, but it seemed that it had a purpose to serve unlike that junk literature.. I read few books to Coelho and I wasn't impressed by any, but this one is somehow special when it comes to the protagonist perspective..
About what you said here:

"why are people buying into this? Is this the ultimate wish fullfillment for both genders: the men can imagine they are rich young millionaires having sex with willing sex dolls and the women that they get the bad boy with an unlimited credit card?"

How did the novel reflected such an idea to u ?


message 22: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Yamen wrote: "I admire your sophisticated review.. but I can't help but to comment on that comparison with 50 shades of grey .. come on !! Eleven Minutes might be overly sexualized, but it seemed that it had a p..."

Thank you for your comment. What part of the protagonist perspective did you enjoy? I remember finding her completely unrelatable and void of any personality, so it would be very interesting with another perspective!

"How did the novel reflected such an idea to u ?"

I think it the novel gave me that idea by telling the story about a millionaire playboy having an intense sexual relationships with a younger and much poorer woman. But it's just speculation on my part, I don't know why people buy and like these books.


Yamen "What part of the protagonist perspective did you enjoy? "


I like how she didn't let herself go. Even though her job was nasty, she didn't think so of herself. Instead she clanged her spirit onto the dream of going back to Brazil and starting a farm.
If you recall a conversation she had with the artist about the history of prostitution. She was fascinated by the "the goddess Ishtar" side of it, which presented prostitution as a divine profession. The character made a choice due to a certain circumstances filled with disappointment and despair, and survived with it without losing herself.

�I think it the novel gave me that idea by telling the story about a millionaire playboy having an intense sexual relationships with a younger and much poorer woman�

I think you might have missed the point that such a rich/successful/young man could have picked million other girls. But he picked a Brazilian poor prostitute because of her “light�.
Although I found his reason a bit “fairy-talic�, it matured somehow when he talked more about his life and how it has been taking a nihilistic approach because of his constant un-satisfaction.
Maybe for him, she was the distraction he needed from his dull life, the hope he required to carry on. While she found in him the love she deserves but never had.

�I don't know why people buy and like these books.�


Because most of the girls like to believe such stupid fantasies, and most of guys need to have enough reason to bust their asses to become rich and successful.


message 24: by Constance (new)

Constance Bookbub today: "From the international bestselling and award-winning author of The Alchemist: In search of fame and fortune, heartbroken Maria leaves her Brazilian village for Geneva. There, she discovers true love â€� and the different sides of sex and desireâ€� With over 31,000 five-star ratings on Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ!"
You confirmed my sceptical suspicion about the book. Thank you. And yes, it's weird for a guy to recommend a book with a female protagonist choosing "sacred sex" with love over sex without love. Even if that's obviously the best choice for her. Coelho seems to have a bit of culturing following for his philosophy. it sounds too heavy handed for� me.


message 25: by Constance (new)

Constance *cult, not culturing. Autocorrect fail.


message 26: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Thank you Constance, always happy to know this review is of any help to others. Heavy handed is a very good way to describe Coelho!


message 27: by Tammy (new) - rated it 1 star

Tammy So that Swiss guy forced you at gunpoint to read it and now you hate it. Makes perfect sense.


message 28: by Leajk (new) - rated it 1 star

Leajk Obviously no one forced me (the guy wasn’t Swiss either). However the whole thing gave me the same icky feeling that I felt while reading the book. A kind of irl foreshadowing.

I didn’t like the book because I didn’t like Coelho’s version of 50 Shades of Grey. Different strokes etc.


detaneila I feel a little weird with this book. Last year I really liked this book but now, I don't know what to think about it. Specially because I´m becoming a radfem (radical feminist) and this book is competely fantasy compared to the real life of sex workers. Omg last year Iwas totally insane.


Angela Seminara This wasn’t a book about a love triangle. She had 2 encounters with the client into BDSM. This book is about rediscovering sexual desire and the meaning behind intimacy.


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M Thiviya I didn't quite enjoy this book as much as I had expected. As much I tried to be non-judgemental throughout the book, I found myself questioning the decisions that Maria took and could not agree with the philosophical explanations behind it. The book, however, is more than just BDSM. It talks about love and how sex is merely a part of it. Still, I felt that there was too much unnecessary information thus making it draggy.


Ettenigore I had to force my self to finish this book. I love his previous works but this just came out as average. Nothing unique or thought provoking in my opinion.


message 33: by Aditya (new)

Aditya / Thanks for making it clear what a disgusting book this is. I will not read it.


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