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A Swim in a Pond in the Rain by George Saunders
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it was amazing
bookshelves: lit-fiction, non-fiction, short-story-collections

Suffice it to say that I have 177 highlights on this book.

“This is a resistance literature, written by progressive reformers in a repressive culture, under constant threat of censorship� The resistance in the stories is quiet, at a slant, and comes from perhaps the most radical idea of all: that every human being is worthy of attention and that the origins of every good and evil capability of the universe may be found by observing a single, even very humble, person and the turnings of his or her mind.�

I have almost no interest in literary fiction. But this attracted me in a friend’s feed because of it being short stories; the stories are from the greats in Russian fiction; Russia being what it is, I thought her literature might give me more insight into her people; and while I seem to do a lot of reviewing, sometimes I feel like I lack the tools to be as specific as I would like. Saunders has even more insight on why we (I) study the way we (I) read:

“To study the way we read is to study the way the mind works: the way it evaluates a statement for truth, the way it behaves in relation to another mind (i.e., the writer’s) across space and time.�

There are seven short stories here: In the Cart by Anton Chekov, The Darling by Chekov, Master and Man by Leo Tolstoy, Nose by Nikolai Gogol, Gooseberries by Chekov, Alyosha the Pot by Tolstoy and Singers by Ivan Turgenev.

‘In the Cart� is the only that he walks through like a professor, page by page. Saunders acknowledges the reader must be fretting with impatience, and notes that the better the story, the more annoying the exercise is. I’ll be honest; this part was the most tedious and was one of my stopping points before the library recalled the ebook. But the value of what he does here is makes the reader think what words have been chosen that carry the reader forward? What has been written that makes us want to continue reading?

“We might imagine structure as a form of call-and-response. A question arises organically from the story and then the story, very considerately, answers it. If we want to make good structure, we just have to be aware of what question we are causing reader to ask, then answer that question.�

In contrast to the stories, he speaks very colloquially and, at times, playfully. He knows his audience is not just students of literary fiction, but also writers and ordinary readers. Throughout the analyses, he will drop various bon mots; one of the lessons in the first is:

“Earlier, we asked if there might exist certain “laws� in fiction. Are there things that our reading mind just responds to? Physical descriptions seem to be one such thing. Who knows why? We like hearing our world described. And we like hearing it described specifically.�

'The Darling' proceeds faster, but along similar analysis, showing a more dialed-out view of the rhythm of a story. Saunders notes callbacks and parallels, and the way reader expectations are set up from this structure and then changed to create greater interest.

“This complicates things; our first-order inclination to want to understand a character as “good� or “bad� gets challenged. The result is an uptick in our attentiveness; subtly rebuffed by the story, we get, we might say, a new respect for its truthfulness.�

Saunders continues through the stories, vacillating from a literary-analysis viewpoint of ‘what could this mean.� But he understands that some of his audience are writers and so he speaks often to this aspect as well:

“I feel qualified to say that there are two things that separate writers who go on to publish from those who don’t. First, a willingness to revise. Second, the extent to which the writer has learned to make causality.�

‘The Nose� is the story that feels most uncharacteristic in the collection, perhaps because as satire, it takes everything less seriously. In a book of Very Serious Narrators, it allows Saunders to introduce the dual ideas of consensual reality and narrative bias–important concepts, to be sure, but interestingly at odds with what I’d call the social realism of the other six stories. However, it also allows Saunders to digress a bit on following one’s own inner style/voice for trueness.

“Every story is narrated by someone, and since everyone has a viewpoint, every story is misnarrated (is narrated subjectively). Since all narration is misnarration, Gogol says, let us misnarrate joyfully.�

The stories themselves were� curious. Since I haven’t read literary fiction since high school, I can’t speak to their representation for their class or culture, but Saunders does share some of his thoughts on each as well. He’ll note what Chekov may have thought about his own works, particularly comparing them to Tolstoy, or how Tolstoy’s changing religious beliefs, as documented in personal journals, came to impact how Saunders interpreted 'Alyosha the Pot.' That story actually is the one that undergoes the most detailed literary analysis, as he shares different translations of phrases from the original Russian.

What I ended up doing after laboriously working through the first three stories, is reading Saunder’s analysis and then going back and reading the stories. Somehow it worked much better for me. Unfortunately, it gave me a bit of bias to interpretation, but I think it allowed me to actually finish the book in a more timely manner when there was so much I wanted to ponder (ebooks being subject to a two-week loan).

Did I read it for a class? No. But it was an excellent exercise in both thinking and reading.

For an excellent review discussing more about the individual stories and Saunder's approach, read Katia's thoughts: /review/show...

The story is not there to tell us what to think about happiness. It is there to help us think about it. It is, we might say, a structure to help us think.
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May 16, 2022 – Shelved
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message 1: by Thibault (new)

Thibault Busschots That's a whole lot of highlights. Also quite an interesting choice of book. Good review, Carol!


marta the book slayer This was one of my all time favorite books! So happy to see you enjoyed it just as much as I did :)


message 3: by Scott (new) - added it

Scott Firestone I got this for Christmas. Looking forward to diving in!


carol. Thank you, Thibault! So much to chew on here. :)

marta, I can see why you love it!

Scott--devote some time to it 😉


message 5: by Paolo (new) - added it

Paolo Great book, still plowing through it. At one point I even tried having ChatGPT doing a sentence by sentence analysis of In the Cart. Fun times� Great review and highlights Carol!


Daniel Oh, maybe I should do that, read the analysis first. His analysis is really good, but I have not enjoyed the stories and am horrified to see I have 3 left, not 2 as I thought. At least they all look shorter than "Master and Man", which perhaps had one of the most sympathetic characters so far for me, but was still such a slog. I am not big on short stories in general, and these in particular are not hitting it for me. And omg, his "meh, whatever" attitude to the translations is like a knife in my heart.


carol. Daniel- I think it helped me a great deal. I was able to keep my eye out for things he had pointed out and notice some of what he said, making the story more meaningful to me (This especially worked for The Nose and The Pot).


message 8: by Nataliya (new)

Nataliya Surprised to see you having tackled this book. But glad to see you liked it.


message 9: by Fionnuala (new)

Fionnuala it was an excellent exercise in both thinking and reading

Even for those of us who've only read your review, carol.


carol. Nataliya wrote: "Surprised to see you having tackled this book. But glad to see you liked it."

Me too! But it was a nice combination of short stories, analysis, language use and current events. I think you'd find it very interesting!


carol. Fionnuala wrote: "Even for those of us who've only read your review, carol."

What a great compliment, that I could convey so much! I know you would love it, but would be able to have more of an active dialogue with Saunders about interpretation 😊


message 12: by Negin (new)

Negin Fabulous review, Carol. This looks interesting, and I may add it to my list.


carol. Thanks, Negin. I appreciate your compliment!


message 14: by Peter (new)

Peter Someone actually read this!!?


Persephone's Pomegranate Great review Carol. Glad this was a winner for you!


carol. Thank you, Persephone's P.! I appreciate it. :)


Daniel Ended up reading the analysis first for "The Nose" and I think it helped in that case, though I just ended up reading the story first for the final 2. (Helped that they were shorter.) So glad to be done with it finally.


message 18: by carol. (last edited Mar 11, 2023 06:53PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

carol. Congratulations! Yes, the page-at-a-time he leads with is a pretty tedious technique. I understand why, but it's long. Maybe if he had used one of the shorter ones.


Left Coast Justin Glad you got something out of this, Carol. I have always found you to be a pretty incisive critic so I assumed you approached books much like Saunders describes here -- paying attention to the author's intent, how the structure serves the intent and how the language does (or does not) pull the reader in.

I'm not surprised you five-starred this, in other words.


message 20: by Sherry (new) - added it

Sherry This is an excellent review itself. This is how I wish I could write a review. Mine are basically ‘hey I really liked this or oi! This was shit�.
I have this on my kindle and have yet to get to it. It’s curious there’s no Dostoevsky in the collection. I wonder why.


carol. Sherry, you are so kind! To be honest, your kind of reviews also serve a purpose--with the bonus of not eating up so much of your personal time!
I can't speak to your Dostoevsky insight. I feel like I might have waved at him in high school, but can't speculate.


carol. Left Coast Justin wrote: "Glad you got something out of this, Carol. I have always found you to be a pretty incisive critic so I assumed you approached books much like Saunders describes here."

LCJ, that is a great compliment! I perhaps do so with a great deal of intuitiveness, honed by a very diligent writing emphasis at Occidental. This was very systematic and gave me even more to think about.


message 23: by TXGAL1 (new)

TXGAL1 Stellar review!😀


carol. Thank you, TXGAL1!


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