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I try very hard not to be the kind of person who says that white people should not write from the POV of POC, but really, if this is the best you can do, white people should not write from the POV of POC.
"Horse" is a pretty mediocre novel that I would normally give three stars. There is nothing in this book that stands out as particularly excellent except maybe the research that went into it. Characters are bland, the plot is predictable, pacing is slow and dull. There is nothing particularly offensive about it, but there is nothing all that amazing about it either. This book is far more of a horse book than it is about race issues.
Then we get to the interactions between Jess and Theo and I wanted to drink myself into oblivion for how poorly they were written. The initial meeting between the two starts with a mix up because the two of them own the same bike. Jess overreacts, Theo handles himself like an adult and the two briefly go their separate ways. Then Jess spends literal chapters obsessing over how traumatized and embarassed she is by her own racism. Yes, because SHE is the person we should be focusing on in this incident. Afterwards she spends her time being hyper aware that Theo is a *gasp* Black man.
I feel like I could point to this book as a manual for all the things racist white liberals do that irritate me short of that white savior nonesense. Fortunately there were few white savior incidents to be found in this book.
In short this is a book about race written by a white woman for other white women. Take that as you will.
"Horse" is a pretty mediocre novel that I would normally give three stars. There is nothing in this book that stands out as particularly excellent except maybe the research that went into it. Characters are bland, the plot is predictable, pacing is slow and dull. There is nothing particularly offensive about it, but there is nothing all that amazing about it either. This book is far more of a horse book than it is about race issues.
Then we get to the interactions between Jess and Theo and I wanted to drink myself into oblivion for how poorly they were written. The initial meeting between the two starts with a mix up because the two of them own the same bike. Jess overreacts, Theo handles himself like an adult and the two briefly go their separate ways. Then Jess spends literal chapters obsessing over how traumatized and embarassed she is by her own racism. Yes, because SHE is the person we should be focusing on in this incident. Afterwards she spends her time being hyper aware that Theo is a *gasp* Black man.
I feel like I could point to this book as a manual for all the things racist white liberals do that irritate me short of that white savior nonesense. Fortunately there were few white savior incidents to be found in this book.
In short this is a book about race written by a white woman for other white women. Take that as you will.
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That aside, I completely agree with your paragraph about Jess and Theo.

Just wait until you get around to reading "Catcher in the Rye." It is, in fact, not about a baseball game in a wheat field.
This book was marketed as an exploration of race relations which is why I made the comment. There will be people who pick this up thinking it has something interesting to say about race in the US.


Your comment of “this is a book about race written by a white woman for other white women� is 100% correct.

My thoughts on this-Brooks wrote beautifully for her target audience. If this had remained just a horse book there wouldn't have been any issues.
The problem comes from the ham handed way she addressed the popular social issues of the day. These sections were painful to read and felt like they were tacked on to make the book more marketable. Brooks was absolutely not qualified to write about race or interracial relationships in any meaningful way.
The positive reviews are coming from the people for whom this book was written.



Now I’m cackling in delight at your review. Thanks for affirming my choice!


I think some of the reviews above have got all hot and bothered about the race element ignoring the greatness of the book as a whole. Yes I agree the Theo and Tess relationship part did become very cliched and a bit icky in its approach particularly towards as it progressed but it did highlight the issues which are still very real!
Overall I took a lot away from this book and I am glad I read it.
Great author.

I have an issue with some (read most) of book club historical fiction. The writing is lazy, cliched, overly romanticized or dramatized. I am sometimes baffled by their success. Oh well, I am not the target audience, it seems.



Its been long enough since I've read this book that I don't actually remember all that much about it other than the deep desire I felt to feed Jess feet first through a wood chipper. Does this happen in the book? If it does I will gladly go back and read the last 100ish pages just to experience that glorious moment.

She really is just mediocre. I am trying to figure out why she is so popular. I have read Sonic the Hedgehog fanfiction that was better written and more thoughtful.

I have not. I think its on my ever growing list of TBR. I also hope for your sake this is the worst book you read this year. Happy reading!

I middle-aged white woman offended and appalled by having their own racist tendencies pointed out . . . color me shocked and surprised. Im glad you could take a break from your pearl clutching to leave this comment. It is honestly the funniest thing I have read this week.

If find this books popularity disappointing but not surprising. Maybe some day in the distant future long after I am dead white readers and writers will learn how to recognize racist character tropes.




Maybe this wasn't the best way to do that, but I've heard that Black people don't want to ALWAYS be the ones explaining all this. Maybe it's good to keep it coming from many different sources, including white-lady-literary-fiction. When Jess messes up and feels so terrible about it, and Theo is thinking, "Why does she have to make this about HER feelings?", white people think, "OMG, I do that all the time. I need to get a grip and quit making this all about me...", etc. Yeah, it's a sad state of affairs, but I'm sure these parts in the book were eye-opening for many white readers. I understand how POC would find this tedious to read--who live with this all the time/know all this already ad infinitum.
I, too, am nervous when white authors are writing outside their culture, but how much do we discourage allyship?
It sure is complicated. I hope we can learn from each other.
