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It Starts with Us (It Ends with Us, #2)
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I don't dislike It Starts with Us per se, but it does feel more like a long and unnecessary epilogue to It Ends with Us rather than the separate, worthwhile story it should've been.
I remember vividly the experience of reading It Ends with Us, how every page felt riveting and every moment essential. There were so many memorable scenes, so much emotion embedded in the pages. I sobbed my way through it, especially that ending that completely gutted me. To prep for this book, I reread the ending, and sure enough, it walloped me again.
So it's rather disappointing that this story didn't do anything for me. There was no emotional punch, no compelling conflict. It took me days longer to read this than I anticipated because I didn't feel any pull to keep going. And now having finished this, I'm already unable to point to a single memorable moment because there honestly weren't any.
But then, that's always the fear when an author gives in to fans and writes a sequel or prequel they originally had no intention of writing, isn't it? That the result would be mundane, at best an unnecessary add-on, at worst ruining the legacy of a previously amazing work. (I'm looking at you, Harry Potter and The Hunger Games.)
More spelled out isn't always better. Whatever I had imagined in my head for Lily's future, it was more interesting than what I got. And in fact, to spell out Lily's future in the way that this sequel did took something away from the difficulty of Lily's decision at the end of the first book. Part of what I loved about that book was the nuanced and flawed characters, while this book distilled everyone down to either just a good guy or a bad guy.
The other issue is that there is no real conflict or surprises in here. Sure, I enjoy reading a happy ending as much as the next person, but not for 300+ pages. It's clear without having read a single page of this book what will happen and who will end up happy. And sure enough, the story progresses and ends exactly the way you'd expect. And that just does not make for an enthralling read.
This all sounds rather harsh, but it's really not that bad. It was an alright way to pass a few hours if you're not quite ready to leave the world of Lily and Atlas. This pleasant and unexciting story won't leave you breathless, but it shouldn't offend either. Just be ready to forget about it almost as soon as you're done.
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See also, my thoughts on:
It Ends with Us
Verity
Reminders of Him
Regretting You
Ugly Love
Layla
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I remember vividly the experience of reading It Ends with Us, how every page felt riveting and every moment essential. There were so many memorable scenes, so much emotion embedded in the pages. I sobbed my way through it, especially that ending that completely gutted me. To prep for this book, I reread the ending, and sure enough, it walloped me again.
So it's rather disappointing that this story didn't do anything for me. There was no emotional punch, no compelling conflict. It took me days longer to read this than I anticipated because I didn't feel any pull to keep going. And now having finished this, I'm already unable to point to a single memorable moment because there honestly weren't any.
But then, that's always the fear when an author gives in to fans and writes a sequel or prequel they originally had no intention of writing, isn't it? That the result would be mundane, at best an unnecessary add-on, at worst ruining the legacy of a previously amazing work. (I'm looking at you, Harry Potter and The Hunger Games.)
More spelled out isn't always better. Whatever I had imagined in my head for Lily's future, it was more interesting than what I got. And in fact, to spell out Lily's future in the way that this sequel did took something away from the difficulty of Lily's decision at the end of the first book. Part of what I loved about that book was the nuanced and flawed characters, while this book distilled everyone down to either just a good guy or a bad guy.
The other issue is that there is no real conflict or surprises in here. Sure, I enjoy reading a happy ending as much as the next person, but not for 300+ pages. It's clear without having read a single page of this book what will happen and who will end up happy. And sure enough, the story progresses and ends exactly the way you'd expect. And that just does not make for an enthralling read.
This all sounds rather harsh, but it's really not that bad. It was an alright way to pass a few hours if you're not quite ready to leave the world of Lily and Atlas. This pleasant and unexciting story won't leave you breathless, but it shouldn't offend either. Just be ready to forget about it almost as soon as you're done.
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See also, my thoughts on:
It Ends with Us
Verity
Reminders of Him
Regretting You
Ugly Love
Layla
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Nov 06, 2022 11:47AM
Splendid review, Yun. It's amazing how many sequels should have been left to our imagination....
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Totally agree! Thanks, Bob!

Thanks, Taina! I don't think you're missing anything by skipping this book. It brings nothing new to the table, unfortunately. 😕






Thanks, Nilguen! 💖 I suspect if you keep your expectations low, it might be okay? But it definitely doesn't hold a candle to the original book.

Thanks, Beth! Honestly, I've never given a book a second chance and had it end up with a different result. I'm of the opinion that life is too short to read a book you don't connect with twice! 🤗

Thanks, Georgia! Glad it's not just me that felt lukewarm. 😕

Thanks, Katerina! Ha, I hope you're getting some good recommendations off of me, and I'm not leading you astray! 🤗 With CoHo, she's a hit or miss author for me, though her books that I love, they are among my all-time favs! But I know she isn't for everyone, and after 7 books, I think you gave it a good shot lol!

Thanks, Jonathan! I totally agree about film sequels. I don't remember that last good one I saw.

Thanks, Margaret! 💖

Thanks, Jen! Yeah, you won't miss anything by skipping this one! Just imagine a happily ever after and that should suffice lol. :)

Thanks, Rachel! 💖 Always a bummer when that happens, though I should've seen this coming!

Thanks, Meredith! I hope so too! :)


Great review Yun!

Thanks, Tanya! I'm glad you enjoyed it a bit more than me, at least! 🤗

Thanks, Wendy! Eh, maybe I expected too much... no way does lightning strike twice in the same spot/series lol.

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Thanks, Barbara! If I remember correctly, she's one of the few (only?) authors to self publish and make it big! If you ever do give her a try, I'd be curious to see your thoughts! :)




That's a good question! Or maybe giving in to fan-mania pressure without a solid story.

Thanks, Kay! I hope you enjoy more than I did! Will be curious to see your thoughts! 🤗

Thanks, Tina! For sure. Maybe my expectations were just too high!

Thanks, Shey! Ha, it should be illegal lol! When you get to IEWU, I hope you love it! Will be curious to see your thoughts! 🤗

Thanks, Gillian! I suppose now I don't have to have FOMO lol. :)

Thanks, Angela! Maybe my expectations were just too high after book 1. It's just too much to expect lightning to strike twice in one series.

Yes exactly! Can't think of a single time when a sequel or prequel has come later, that it has worked out well.

Yes exactly! Can't think of a single time when a sequel or prequel has come later, that it has worked out well."
The Testaments by Margaret Atwood wasn't too bad, but some readers would probably disagree with me.